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Ceromax
01-14-2011, 08:25 AM
Hi everyone, ive been spriting for about a year now (im still not to good either) I will Occasionally be posting new things as i make them Please use Cc(constructive criticism) Dont just look and be like "Oh your art sucks you should quit spriting!"
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/5459/pikaphlosion.pnghttp://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7745/glowsquirtle.pnghttp://img841.imageshack.us/img841/4323/snorlaxdark.png
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/9287/shadelessekans.pnghttp://img535.imageshack.us/img535/2581/espeonx.pnghttp://img268.imageshack.us/img268/415/octilleryrecolor.pnghttp://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4952/vapochar.pnghttp://img72.imageshack.us/img72/1240/gastmite.png

Team Razor
01-14-2011, 01:00 PM
Pikaphlosion is good but the back looks a bit too straight, maybe try to curve it a bit?

I'm not good at cc:S

Masami
01-14-2011, 01:18 PM
Save the sprites as .png and not .jpg, better quality.

PureGoober
01-14-2011, 01:38 PM
Pikaphlosion is good but the back looks a bit too straight, maybe try to curve it a bit?

I'm not good at cc:S

Double this. Also, try to do a little more. And don't make a thread with only one sprite.

Ceromax
01-15-2011, 06:20 AM
Double this. Also, try to do a little more. And don't make a thread with only one sprite.
As i said i will add more as i make more.

Rago
01-15-2011, 02:47 PM
Save the sprites as .png and not .jpg, better quality.

It is saved as .png. ;P

Pikaphlosion is good but the back looks a bit too straight, maybe try to curve it a bit?

I'm not good at cc:S

I think Typhlosion's actual sprite is like that, and I personally that looks fine.

Now, for CC: I don't love it, only because it's very basic, even for a first fusion. I think it MIGHT (not guaranteeing anything) look better as Pikachu's colors. It would add more Pikachu to the sprite them just the ears and tail. For a first, at least you got the idea right. :)
.:.:Rago:.:.

Team Razor
01-15-2011, 04:59 PM
I think Typhlosion's actual sprite is like that, and I personally that looks fine.


You're right, sorry. I thought it looked a bit weird though. :)

Ceromax
01-21-2011, 01:44 AM
What does everybody think of my new sprites?

PureGoober
01-21-2011, 03:08 PM
Octillery recolor is beautiful.

Eun Min
01-22-2011, 05:12 AM
Yeah, I agree - the Octillery recolor looks pretty. ^^
How about trying to make the fins on Vapochar smoother on his head, so that it looks a bit more "natural" and joined?

Ceromax
01-22-2011, 05:29 AM
Yeah, I agree - the Octillery recolor looks pretty. ^^
How about trying to make the fins on Vapochar smoother on his head, so that it looks a bit more "natural" and joined?

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/1480/chaporeon.png is this better? at the time i made it i was occupied watching tv so i didnt really pay attention

Eun Min
01-22-2011, 03:58 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/1480/chaporeon.png is this better? at the time i made it i was occupied watching tv so i didnt really pay attention

Yep, it looks better now - the fins on its head looks less choppy. ^ ^
May I add that something still seems a bit off on Vapochar?
'Cause the fins are the only blue-green color on it, and no where else. (I'm not sure if it's only me who thinks this or what...)

Ceromax
01-22-2011, 10:18 PM
Yep, it looks better now - the fins on its head looks less choppy. ^ ^
May I add that something still seems a bit off on Vapochar?
'Cause the fins are the only blue-green color on it, and no where else. (I'm not sure if it's only me who thinks this or what...)
What do you mean i dont understand?

Eun Min
01-23-2011, 06:42 AM
The green-blue stands out. You can choose to just leave it as it is, or try adding the green-blue on its tail or something..
Sorry, I guess it must be my perfectionist self. =P
So you can just leave Vapochar as it is (since it already looks good.) It's your art afterall. ^.^

Ceromax
01-23-2011, 07:12 AM
The green-blue stands out. You can choose to just leave it as it is, or try adding the green-blue on its tail or something..
Sorry, I guess it must be my perfectionist self. =P
So you can just leave Vapochar as it is (since it already looks good.) It's your art afterall. ^.^
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4952/vapochar.png i may have fixed it?

Eun Min
01-24-2011, 03:29 AM
Chyeah. Keep up the great spiriting work you have going on~!
'Noticed you placed an entry for the SOTW contest. ^^

Ceromax
01-24-2011, 05:05 AM
Chyeah. Keep up the great spiriting work you have going on~!
'Noticed you placed an entry for the SOTW contest. ^^
Thanks! And the Sotw One i made is not that good i didnt put that much effort in becuase it was like 11:30 at night i was tired

Ant2011
02-02-2011, 08:55 PM
The Magnemite with Gastly's "cloud" is kinda creepy. lol. I would love that on my team. All your sprites are cool, I just love the Gastmite. (Can I call it that? It sounds kinda cool)

Quiet Camerupt
02-02-2011, 09:59 PM
The Magnemite with Gastly's "cloud" is kinda creepy. lol. I would love that on my team. All your sprites are cool, I just love the Gastmite. (Can I call it that? It sounds kinda cool)

I agree with this about the Gastmite. It's simple but effective.

Ceromax
02-07-2011, 08:52 AM
@ant2011 thats what is originally is and i dont put the names here because i like to give the people who ae viewing the fun of naming them themselves
also thanks for compliment

@quiet camerupt Ha thats what i thought, at first i thought people would hate it

Ceromax
06-30-2011, 07:28 AM
Thank you for your comments everyone, i am done spriting for a long time now, i may start someday we'll see. :)

Elecii
06-30-2011, 08:02 AM
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/5459/pikaphlosion.png

This is starting to become a good fusion, but maybe add more Pikachu parts, such as the cheeks, and you could change the colour to Pikachu's colours, since at the moment it looks a bit like a Typhlosion with just a few Pikachu parts added on.

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7745/glowsquirtle.png

Perfectly fine - good one.

http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/4323/snorlaxdark.png

I like the idea for this, but all the outlines are black. You need to change them to make the outline darker than the colour, just look at a regular Snorlax outline.

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/9287/shadelessekans.png

This isn't really a lineless, more of a 'falt drawing'. A lineless is where you only change the outlines to match the body colouring. Here (http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/315/linelesstutuw1.gif)'s a tutorial to help (not made by me).

http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/2581/espeonx.png

The Espeon is pretty cool, but again there are black outlines.

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/415/octilleryrecolor.png

That is beautiful, like others have said, but the outline is all one colour again.

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4952/vapochar.png

This is a good start, but the fin in the middle of the head looks like it's sitting behind the head, not joined to the top of it. Also, the tail is joined to the leg. You should add an outline to separate the leg and tail, and it would also look like the tail was joined to the back of the body, not the side.

http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/1240/gastmite.png

This is a nice, good idea. But like I've said before, the outline is all one colour, it should be shaded just like the rest of the sprite.

I hope this helps you. I'm not trying to sound mean, so sorr if I do, I just want to help you improve your spriting, as you seem to have some good potential.

VictoriasHoundoom
07-03-2011, 02:48 PM
I LOVE the charporeon. Or Vapormander. Or whatever. It's ADOREABLE. <3
And the Gastmite scares me, if that was a real pokemon it would be pretty close to the creepiest one!

Ceromax
07-06-2011, 09:35 PM
I LOVE the charporeon. Or Vapormander. Or whatever. It's ADOREABLE. <3
And the Gastmite scares me, if that was a real pokemon it would be pretty close to the creepiest one!

Thanks lol

Ceromax
07-07-2011, 03:41 AM
This is starting to become a good fusion, but maybe add more Pikachu parts, such as the cheeks, and you could change the colour to Pikachu's colours, since at the moment it looks a bit like a Typhlosion with just a few Pikachu parts added on.



Perfectly fine - good one.



I like the idea for this, but all the outlines are black. You need to change them to make the outline darker than the colour, just look at a regular Snorlax outline.



This isn't really a lineless, more of a 'falt drawing'. A lineless is where you only change the outlines to match the body colouring. Here (http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/315/linelesstutuw1.gif)'s a tutorial to help (not made by me).



The Espeon is pretty cool, but again there are black outlines.



That is beautiful, like others have said, but the outline is all one colour again.



This is a good start, but the fin in the middle of the head looks like it's sitting behind the head, not joined to the top of it. Also, the tail is joined to the leg. You should add an outline to separate the leg and tail, and it would also look like the tail was joined to the back of the body, not the side.



This is a nice, good idea. But like I've said before, the outline is all one colour, it should be shaded just like the rest of the sprite.

I hope this helps you. I'm not trying to sound mean, so sorr if I do, I just want to help you improve your spriting, as you seem to have some good potential.

That Ekans is a shadeless not a lineless

Elecii
07-07-2011, 03:24 PM
That Ekans is a shadeless not a lineless

Oh, ok. Ignore what I said then. I just though it was since the name in the URL said lineless, I think.

Ceromax
07-08-2011, 08:51 AM
Oh, ok. Ignore what I said then. I just though it was since the name in the URL said lineless, I think.
No its "http:// img163 . imageshack . us/img163/9287/ ""shadeless"" ekans .png"