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01-28-2012, 05:59 PM
Hey fellows!

Here's my first sprite comic ever, based on a fan-fic I made some years ago. I ought to warn you that this is just a prelude, so don't expect the entire comic to be this short.

Enjoy your reading and we'll see again next week, with a whole and full chapter (finally :razz:).

Episode 1

Part I


Part II


Prelude (http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb172/MikaelO_2007/prologue-1.png) [28.01.12]
Episode 1 - Part I (http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb172/MikaelO_2007/final_ep11-17.png) | Part II (http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb172/MikaelO_2007/final_ep118-35.png) [04.02.12]

01-29-2012, 11:32 PM
I have a few things to complain about; the first is that your sprites are fuzzy. The house is constantly blurry (except in the very first panel) because you resized the sprites. The text is also a little difficult to read, so I hope that the font changes during speech and whatnot. xD

I can't really say much else other than I'll follow this and comment as you update. ^^ Good luck. :P


01-30-2012, 08:31 AM
All the handwritten have the same problem lolz they're kinda difficult to read. But yeah, the font will change during the speeches. This was just a fancy experience I wanted to do haha.

Blurry is a lot better than pixelated, imo. Comics like Pokemon X are a lot pixelated when resized. Here I tried to keep the structure, resizing and not letting the program pixelate the sprites.

Thanks for stopping by!

01-30-2012, 08:35 AM
I don't mind the blurry images too much. They look good to me.

But I do agree that the font is hard to read.

Also, I look forward to seeing your next update.

01-31-2012, 08:29 AM
I had to re-upload the prelude, due to some problem in Photobucket. The link has changed.

02-04-2012, 09:13 AM
Double-post to post a new episode, like I've promised last week. It's kinda big and soo it has two parts. Check them out!

I hope you enjoy!

P.S: I realized that some "soo's" are written with a single "o". I apologize for that :oops:. And it's better if if follow the links to the images. The spoiler makes them a little more difficult to read...

Episode 1

Part I - LINK (http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb172/MikaelO_2007/final_ep11-17.png)


Part II - LINK (http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb172/MikaelO_2007/final_ep118-35.png)