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Tamer San
10-19-2005, 11:35 AM
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by Tamer

Somewhere in my dreams I hear your voice
Whispering gently....into thin air
At the edge of the mountain I close my eyes
Sensing your breathing...feeling you appear there

On the edge of my dreams I see your face
A twin soul......when we share eyes
At the edge of the mountain I catch my breath
Touching our finger tips...mouth goes dry

In the shadows of my dreams I taste your lips
So soft against mine like a warm rain
At the edge of the mountain my heart slows
Sharing our every breath....two hearts don't refrain

In the deepest part of my dreams I feel your touch
Breathless....from the warmth of your skin
At the edge of the mountain I open my eyes
Seeing only clouds....feeling.... within

On the edge of my dreams is where I want to stay
It's there...I'm forever in your arms...safe...sound
At the edge of the mountain I'll remain breathless
For me.....no greater love will ever be found

Will you always be there on the edge of my dreams?
Will you always meet me to the edge of the mountain?

I will wait for you...be there for you....always.

Pokemon Trainer Sarah
10-19-2005, 11:54 AM
You must out-do me, musn't you!? This is so beautiful! I envy your poem writing skills. Keep up the fantastic work! ^_^

DarkGardevoir
10-21-2005, 09:44 AM
Very good,i like it.....you're skilled at writing

Angelic Kitsune
10-21-2005, 09:46 AM
Weeee! A poem that actually rhymes! =D
Anywho, I really like the descriptiveness of this poem. Your work is truely a thing of beauty.

Grimdour the Rampager
10-21-2005, 10:04 AM
Well done! Pi/10!