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sasunaru130
06-29-2012, 06:21 PM
A little girl was playing with some Pokemon when an old man came in. He had a lab coat on, and he looked to be about 50. He looked to the little girl. "Yuki, can you be a dear and go get me some groceries in town?" Yuki looked up hearing him and nodded. "Sure thing Granpa." She smiles. "Come on Yumi." She said as she looked to a little Eevee that was sitting infront of her. Yumi nodded and both of them ran off out of the lab and down the street to town.

Another little girl was in her room getting ready. A lady came in. "Sarah, are you finished yet?" Sarah looked to her. "Almost." She put her blonde hair up in pig tails, with two black ribbons. "Now I am." "Good good." THe lady smirks. "Now let's go." The lady said. She walked off out ofhe room, with Sarah following.

camarokid
06-29-2012, 06:27 PM
A little baby pikachu ran out in front of yuki tripping her on accident. Renegade looked over at them hearing his pikachu yelp.

sasunaru130
06-29-2012, 06:29 PM
Yuki tripped over the Pikachu and fell onto the ground. She sat up and looked to the Pikachu. "I'm so sorry! Are you ok?"

camarokid
06-29-2012, 06:36 PM
The pikachu only whimpered holding his side. "Are you okay?" Renegade asked Yuki as he walked over to her and the pikachu. He was about the same age as her.

sasunaru130
06-29-2012, 06:41 PM
"I'm ok. But I don't think your Pikachu is." Yuki said as she looked over to the Pikachu. "Can you lift your paw please?"

camarokid
06-29-2012, 06:51 PM
The pikachu nodded and lifted his paw. He was curious why she asked for him to lift his paw when his side was hurt.

sasunaru130
06-29-2012, 06:54 PM
Yuki examined his side. "Hm...we can take him back to my granpa's place."

camarokid
06-29-2012, 07:01 PM
"Okay. Thank you." Renegade smiled at Yuki as he gently picked Snyper up.

sasunaru130
06-29-2012, 07:28 PM
Yuki smiles back. "Guess he's gonna have to wait on his groceries huh Yumi?" She giggles. Yumi nods. Yuki and Yumi ran off.

camarokid
06-29-2012, 07:31 PM
Renegade followed them.

sasunaru130
06-29-2012, 07:35 PM
Yuki ran inside the lab. "Granpa! We have an injured Pokemon!" The old man came out and looked to them. "Who is it?" Yuki pointed to the Pikachu. The old man walked over and examined the Pikachu. "May I see him?"

camarokid
06-29-2012, 07:39 PM
"Of course." Renegade said. He gently handed Snyper to him.

sasunaru130
06-29-2012, 08:00 PM
The old man walked off with the Pokemon. Yuki looked to Renegade. "I never formally introduced myself. Hello, my name is Yuki." She smiles. "You?"

camarokid
06-29-2012, 08:32 PM
"i'm Renegade. nice to meet you." Renegade smiled.

sasunaru130
06-29-2012, 08:33 PM
Yuki smiles. "Nice to meet you too." Yumi looked up at Renegade and smiled. "This is Yumi. My Eeevee." Yuki explains.

camarokid
06-29-2012, 08:39 PM
"hello." Renegade smiled at Yumi. he rubbed one of her big furry ears. "My pikachu that you tripped on was Snyper."

sasunaru130
06-29-2012, 08:42 PM
Yumi purrs. Yuki nods. "I'm still sorry about that."

Saraibre Ryu
06-29-2012, 08:43 PM
Hi there, welcome to the forums! ^^

Just so you know, the RP boards here try to deter from one liner posts and usually have a Sign Up and or Disscussion for them, as well as a laid out plot line, even for role plays just consisting of two people. ^^'

If you haven't already, please check out this (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118042) guide to role playing that we have here on PE2K. ^^ Also try looking around at the other board to get a feel for what the forum is like so you can post RP's without gettin' into too much trouble. Don't worry you're not in any trouble this time. XD

Again, normally I'd lock the thread immediately, but I'll give you guys a chance to edit your stuff. ^^ If you have any questions, feel free to PM me!

sasunaru130
06-29-2012, 08:52 PM
Thank you for letting us know. I'm sorry about that ^^', and thank you again. I'll try to be more literate in the future. I'll tell camarokid this as well.

camarokid
06-29-2012, 09:01 PM
This is as literate as I can get. I'll be sure to refrain from joining rps if thats going to be a problem.

Winter
06-29-2012, 09:17 PM
I think you misunderstand Sabi's point here, guys. She isn't telling you to be more literate--actually, you guys seem to be more literate than some of the people we get posting issue with in here. The problem is that you guys don't seem to understand how RPs work here. Firstly, when you want to make an RP, you create a plot/story for people to RP around and share this plot on the RP Sign Ups board, where you get peple to put in sign ups for your RP. Once you get what you deem to be enough people, you start the RP based around that plot. However, you guys had no plot and were posting simple one-line posts, which we discourage here because it gives people less to respond to. What Sabi's suggesting is simply that you guys look around the boards here and see how we RP here and give that a shot, but if you'd rather continue on with something like this, you are advised to please keep it to PMs.

Sight of the Stars
06-29-2012, 09:22 PM
Just popping in here to say that that's not an approach you should take to it, camaro, if length is a problem as well. ^^; We'd love for you to be able to RP here, but there are plenty of ways you can do to add a bit of length to your writing. Reading through your thread, I can't even imagine where you characters are at right now. Try describing your surroundings and your characters! :) Is it hot outside? Cold? Is it sunny? Cloudy? Raining? What does Renegade look like?

And what about the lab? Is it futuristic with self-opening doors and shiny steel walls? Or is it more like a prison with sturdy, locking doors and a dull, sad look to it? Is it a mix of both? None of the above? Is the floor metal or tile? There are plenty of things you can do to increase the length and quality of your writing! :)

Sorry, Sabi/Winter, just had to throw that out there. <3 Don't mean to seem like a minimod, just thought I should at least give them a tip or two, especially if one-liners would refrain from Camaro making an attempt to RP.

Winter
06-29-2012, 09:29 PM
Lol, I'm not a mod, either, Sight. You're just trying to be helpful, same as everyone else--and it's not like Sabi or I mentioned that, so I'd count that as helpful advice.

Saraibre Ryu
06-30-2012, 04:35 AM
This is as literate as I can get. I'll be sure to refrain from joining rps if thats going to be a problem.

As Winter and Sights have said, I mean more to the context of the post rather than the literacy. I should have been more clear. ^^'

Your literacy seems to be great from what I can understand from the few sentences, but here on PE2K, we encourage at least small paragraph posts. We aren't asking for essays of a post, just at least a small paragraph like the first post was. The first post was great for minimum length! Try to stick to that length and you'll be just perfect. ^^

We have a bit of an RP system here on PE2K as was mentioned with a Sign Up and Discussion thread. At the very least a summary of the plot, something to start the story off with, is put in the first post so people know what they're reading about.