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Fistodragon
06-30-2012, 10:43 AM
Chapaz NEWS
Will take spots for Guest Stars soon. (Send your application through PM)

PLOT
Fisto and Silver are on a journey through the Chapaz region. There will be some tough times and tough challenges along the way. The evil organization, Team Metal, are trying to capture the legendary pokemon Kyurem! Our heroes have much to learn on this long journey through the Chapaz region.

Credits

credit goes to Ant2011 for the whole comic format. ^_^
credit goes to Gamefreak for the sprites used in this comic!

By reading Ant2011's pokemon comic, it inspired me on making this comic:)
Sorry for not adding graphics to the attacks, i am just a lazy guy D:

Credit goes to Ant2011 for making Team Metal's sprites:)!!

Updates:
6-27-12: In Chapter 3, i messed up on the battling thing D: Will fix further on in the story!
7-25-12: Comics 5 and beyond will be PNG files.
10-22-12: Will no longer add the levels to pokemon.


Comics
Prologue (http://i47.tinypic.com/atkmls.jpg)
Chapter 1 (http://i46.tinypic.com/10yjsdy.jpg)
Chapter 2 (http://i48.tinypic.com/2128z1h.jpg)
Chapter 3 (http://i49.tinypic.com/mkycxx.jpg)
Chapter 4 (http://i45.tinypic.com/2qbbur5.jpg)
Chapter 5 (http://i47.tinypic.com/343snm8.png)
Chapter 6 (http://i47.tinypic.com/2v0o9xv.png)
Chapter 7 (http://i50.tinypic.com/2w4k6lt.png)
Chapter 8 (http://i45.tinypic.com/xljech.png)
Chapter 9 (http://i46.tinypic.com/esl2rs.png)
Chapter 10 (http://i47.tinypic.com/34ep8bc.png)
Chapter 11 (http://i49.tinypic.com/2r6f9rt.png)
Chapter 12 (http://i49.tinypic.com/fekvv5.png)
Chapter 13 (http://i47.tinypic.com/2vu0y82.png)
Chapter 14 (http://i48.tinypic.com/91ewd5.png)
Chapter 15 (http://i49.tinypic.com/281u7bm.png)

Fistodragon
06-30-2012, 01:42 PM
Reserved, because I'm most likely to have too many comics for the above post.

Fistodragon
06-30-2012, 01:50 PM
Characters:


=Main Characters=
=Protagonists=

http://i50.tinypic.com/10oky0k.png

Name: Fisto
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Badges from Chapaz: 1
Trainer Title: Pokemon Trainer
Pokemon 1: Bulbasaur, Male
Pokemon 2: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 3: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)

http://i49.tinypic.com/2s8o4mb.png

Name: Silver
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Badges from Chapz: 0
Trainer Title: Pokemon Trainer
Pokemon 1: Treecko, Male
Pokemon 2: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 3: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)

=Antagonists=

http://i50.tinypic.com/2bnnf4.png

Name: Zol
Age: ??
Gender: Male
Badges from Chapaz: 8
Trainer Title: Team Metal's Elite Member
Pokemon 1: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 2: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 3: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)

Cheerful Cherubi
07-01-2012, 02:04 AM
I think that it's a little early to truly critique this right now, but I will say that you should learn how to use the correct use of "your." "Your" is possessive, as in, "I like your Treecko.", while "you're" is a contraction of you and are, as in, "You're a really great trainer." Okay? Great. :smile:

Fistodragon
07-01-2012, 08:42 AM
I think that it's a little early to truly critique this right now, but I will say that you should learn how to use the correct use of "your." "Your" is possessive, as in, "I like your Treecko.", while "you're" is a contraction of you and are, as in, "You're a really great trainer." Okay? Great. :smile:

Oh, thanks! I knew i had an error somewhere. I'll be sure to fix and upload that comic again.

Fistodragon
07-01-2012, 10:03 AM
Chapter 4 is out.

Cheerful Cherubi
07-01-2012, 03:53 PM
Oh, thanks! I knew i had an error somewhere. I'll be sure to fix and upload that comic again.

That's actually in every comic. If you'd like, you could send them to me for revisions before you post them. Just PM me.

SuperUltraZekrom
07-02-2012, 05:33 PM
Good so far, but remember to save as PNG instead of JPG or JPEG.

Ant2011
07-02-2012, 07:04 PM
Good so far, but remember to save as PNG instead of JPG or JPEG.

I don't really think filetype is a big deal with comics. While it does deter from the sprite colors, it helps avoid sprite theft. Besides, people read comics for the story I think.

Anyway, this is coming along well! I'll keep checking up on it to see where it goes!

Pokemon Trainer Sarah
07-03-2012, 12:17 PM
Hey, nice comic so far. Extra points cos one of the main characters has Bulbasaur! :D I look forward to seeing what happens next!

Fistodragon
07-04-2012, 05:13 AM
Hey, nice comic so far. Extra points cos one of the main characters has Bulbasaur! :D I look forward to seeing what happens next!

Thanks:D

Anyway, this is coming along well! I'll keep checking up on it to see where it goes !

Thank you:)

Chapter 5 will be coming soon!

Fistodragon
07-04-2012, 05:29 AM
I'm looking for some guest stars to star in my next comic. It may be the next upcoming comic or it may be a few issues down. I will find a spot for you^_^ Please post registrations here!

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Preference: (battles or contests)
Trainer Title: (i.e. trainer sprite. ex: bug catcher. nothing before d/p or after hg/ss)
Pokemon 1: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 2: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 3: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)

SuperUltraZekrom
07-05-2012, 02:13 PM
Name: Axel
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Personality: Quiet, Shy, but loves to battle, even if he loses.
Preference: Battles (battles or contests)
Trainer Title: PkMn Trainer(i.e. trainer sprite. ex: bug catcher. nothing before d/p or after hg/ss)
Pokemon 1: Shiny Charmander, Blaze, male(species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 2: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 3: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)

For the sprites just use the Ace trainer sprites with red hair and dark clothing.

Here is Shiny Charmanders overworld sprites, just in case you need them.

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/525/rainbowryperior.png

Cheerful Cherubi
07-08-2012, 01:08 AM
You have a typo. It's Treecko, not Treeko.

Fistodragon
07-08-2012, 08:39 AM
You have a typo. It's Treecko, not Treeko.

Eh, thanks. I just did my best on pronouncing the name.

Sorry for the delay of the next comic, just busy.

Fistodragon
07-26-2012, 04:41 AM
@ Ultra Zekrom.

So i just got the Ace trainer sprite. (It's HG/SL Sprite)

The head is tiny for the sprites I'm using in the comic :p (Which is B/W icons)

So umm i did my best on your description. Which one do you prefer?

http://i47.tinypic.com/6pyvlu.png

Starting now, Comics 5 and beyond will be PNG. JPEG aka JPG has horrible quality, I know. Just letting you guys know:)

Fistodragon
07-26-2012, 05:36 AM
Chapter 5 is now out!!

SuperUltraZekrom
07-26-2012, 06:19 PM
I like the second one better. Thanks! :biggrin: This comic is good, i'll make sure to check up on it every day. XD

Fistodragon
07-27-2012, 12:27 AM
I like the second one better. Thanks! :biggrin: This comic is good, i'll make sure to check up on it every day. XD


Haha thanks:) Also, yeah i figured you would like the second one:p Looks more like something you would wear in the 50's lol. Which is pretty cool. I'll experiment on your sprite a little more and either show it to ya or just use the old one.

Fistodragon
07-27-2012, 08:47 AM
Chapter 6 is now out!

SuperUltraZekrom
07-27-2012, 02:20 PM
Looks more like something you would wear in the 50's lol. Which is pretty cool. I'll experiment on your sprite a little more and either show it to ya or just use the old one.

Lol yeah, it does. Ok, ill remember to check the comic everyday!

Fistodragon
07-28-2012, 02:01 AM
Chapter 7 is now out!

Fistodragon
07-28-2012, 09:28 AM
Chapter 8 is now out!

Fistodragon
07-29-2012, 08:08 AM
If you love my comics, please post below^_^

Pokemon Trainer Sarah
07-29-2012, 09:11 AM
Ooh I wonder what Mew has to do with the story. I liked the cute Nidoran in Chapter 6, too. Your comics keep getting better =)

Here's my guest star ap!

Name: Sarah
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Personality: Sort of hyper, she loves Pokemon, especially Grass types and anything unevolved. She thinks unevolved Pokemon can be just as strong as evolved ones and works hard to prove it. She is generally cheerful and tries to get along with everyone, but she is very impatient. If someone tries to argue with her or pushes her patience she can be pretty fiery and is quick to let her Pokemon do the talking.
Preference: Battles, but she's more interested in raising Pokemon than battling
Trainer Title: Lass (Lass sprite from HGSS if possible!)
Pokemon 1: Bulbasaur, Female, named Flora
Pokemon 2: NidoranM, Male, named Quake

(If you don't want another character with a Bulbasaur, you can swap Bulbasaur for Deerling!)

Fistodragon
07-29-2012, 09:17 AM
Ooh I wonder what Mew has to do with the story. I liked the cute Nidoran in Chapter 6, too. Your comics keep getting better =)

Here's my guest star ap!

Name: Sarah
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Personality: Sort of hyper, she loves Pokemon, especially Grass types and anything unevolved. She thinks unevolved Pokemon can be just as strong as evolved ones and works hard to prove it. She is generally cheerful and tries to get along with everyone, but she is very impatient. If someone tries to argue with her or pushes her patience she can be pretty fiery and is quick to let her Pokemon do the talking.
Preference: Battles, but she's more interested in raising Pokemon than battling
Trainer Title: Lass (Lass sprite from HGSS if possible!)
Pokemon 1: Bulbasaur, Female, named Flora
Pokemon 2: NidoranM, Male, named Quake

(If you don't want another character with a Bulbasaur, you can swap Bulbasaur for Deerling!)

Haha you'll see ;) and thanks for applying!

SuperUltraZekrom
08-05-2012, 01:28 AM
I love your comics so i will keep checking!

Fistodragon
08-29-2012, 05:33 AM
I'm sad to say this but due to school,homework,etc. I can no longer make my comic go any further as of this moment. I apologize to you all and will keep making them as soon as possible.

Fistodragon
09-17-2012, 12:46 AM
I will start on the next few chapters! Thanks for being patient!:)

Neku Sakuraba
09-17-2012, 12:52 AM
I like your comics. They are amazing! ^^ Hopefully, soon...What do you have planned for this? *Holds microphone to mouth*

Fistodragon
09-17-2012, 01:04 AM
I like your comics. They are amazing! ^^ Hopefully, soon...What do you have planned for this? *Holds microphone to mouth*

Thanks! i have planned that-

*commercial rolls*

Fistodragon
10-21-2012, 07:31 PM
Sorry this took so long but Chapter 9 is now out!!

I realized i misspelled "everyday" by putting everday. xD

Pokemon Trainer Sarah
10-22-2012, 05:28 AM
Haha, nice filler! Are you going to be working on this more now? :D *waits for next chapter*

Fistodragon
10-22-2012, 01:30 PM
Haha, nice filler! Are you going to be working on this more now? :D *waits for next chapter*

Yeah and thanks haha:)

Fistodragon
10-22-2012, 02:27 PM
Chapter 10 is finally out!

Fistodragon
10-24-2012, 03:00 AM
Chapter 11 is out!

Pokemon Trainer Sarah
10-24-2012, 03:12 AM
Ooh a new evil team. What is with them and stealing Pokemon? xD I look forward to seeing what you do with Team Metal and how they differ from the usual bad guys!

Fistodragon
10-24-2012, 05:14 AM
Chapter 12 is now out^_^

Fistodragon
11-25-2012, 10:20 PM
Been busy and now I'm somewhat back. I will make my next comic soon(sometime this week). In the meantime, post your thoughts about my comic so far ^_^

Fistodragon
01-26-2013, 08:25 PM
Sorry for the long wait >.<

I give you, Chapter 13!

http://i47.tinypic.com/2vu0y82.png

vegetunks937
01-27-2013, 04:07 AM
I loved it. The story is good

Fistodragon
01-27-2013, 05:38 AM
I loved it. The story is good

Thanks^_^

vegetunks937
01-27-2013, 09:50 AM
When will be the chapter 14 be out.
I want to check it out.

Fistodragon
01-27-2013, 01:54 PM
When will be the chapter 14 be out.
I want to check it out.

Um, I almost finished it last night but I got tired and fell asleep xD Should be done today and possibly a few more.

Fistodragon
01-28-2013, 05:10 AM
Chapter 14!


http://i48.tinypic.com/91ewd5.png

vegetunks937
01-28-2013, 08:41 AM
Chapter 14!


http://i48.tinypic.com/91ewd5.png

chapter 14 and one more battle comes. I always love pokemon battles more than the story.

Fistodragon
02-22-2013, 06:05 AM
Sorry to say but I won't be really active anymore on here. I really enjoyed my time here (: You guys welcomed me and after awhile, I felt like I was a part of PE2 lol. I just don't have the time to make comics anymore because I'm sick and I have school. I'll try to ATLEAST do 1 comic every week(Most likely Saturdays/Sundays). Until then, see you later guys

EDIT: I'll miss hitting on Sarah (;

Fistodragon
03-22-2013, 06:45 PM
chapter 15 is now out :D Sorry for the wait