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Neku Sakuraba
10-19-2012, 04:50 PM
LATEST CHAPTER (http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/293/2/7/pokemon__oracles_of_legend___chapter_1_by_perfect_ unperfection-d5idey5.png)

In the region of Hinto, there is a place called the Forest Sanctuary, where Grass-types are favored and/or worshiped. It used to be inhabited by many people, until something came...It destroyed all but two homes, so people moved out into Kibou City by boat. Only one person remained. His name is Nniuq. Now, a professor has finally moved in, allowing Nniuq to get his own Pokemon and find who destroyed the Forest Sanctuary. Along the way, he will meet new friends and foes in his own quest.

So, this is my very first comic I've ever made. ^^ I put in 2 mornings, 1 day, and 1 night's work worth into it. I hope you all enjoy it and I want to see how long I can get this to be. xD So, yeah, here it is! Maps will come soon! ...I hope.

Characters:
http://i1219.photobucket.com/albums/dd438/VelocityQ/th_Nniuq.png
Name: Nniuq
Age: 16
Personality: Usually tries to keep to himself, imaginative.
History: Forest Sanctuary was destroyed two years ago, when Nniuq was 14. When escaping, he attempted to get on the last boat with his parents, but there wasn't enough time. The boat sailed off before he could get on it. Luckily, his home wasn't destroyed, so he lives alone, getting everything he needs by himself.
Pokemon: Snivy, Male, Price

http://i1219.photobucket.com/albums/dd438/VelocityQ/th_Professor2.png
Name: Professor Dylan
Age: 26
Personality: Inventive, researching
History: Unknown
Pokemon: ???, ???, ???

Chapter 1 (http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/293/2/7/pokemon__oracles_of_legend___chapter_1_by_perfect_ unperfection-d5idey5.png)

(BTW, I'm Perfect-Unperfection on dA)

Neku Sakuraba
10-19-2012, 04:52 PM
I'm planning on having guest stars! This is a reservation for them and the forms.

Name:
Age: (10-35)
Gender: (Male or Female?)
Pokemon (Max. 6): (Species, Gender, Nickname; if they have one)
(Species, Gender, Nickname; if they have one)
(Species, Gender, Nickname; if they have one)
(Species, Gender, Nickname; if they have one)
(Species, Gender, Nickname; if they have one)
(Species, Gender, Nickname; if they have one)

Guest Stars:
Name: Tabitha
Age: 19
Gender: female
Pokemon (Max. 6): (Gigalith, male, Jasper)
(Rapidash, female)
(Leafeon, female)
(Girafarig, female)
(Pansear, male)
(Quagsire, male)

Name: Fisto
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Pokemon (Max. 6):
(Umbreon, Male)
(Serperior, Male)
(Skarmory, Male)
(Zebstrika, Female)

Name: Meghan
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Pokemon (Max. 6):
(Honchkrow, Male, Nacht)
(Cofagrigus, Male, Osiris
(Skarmory, Female, Chrome)
(Zweilous, Male, Vei)
(Krookodile, Female, Victoria)
(Bisharp, Male, Katta)


Name: Corey
Age: 15
Gender: male
Pokemon:
(Typhlosion, Male, Volcano)
(Ampharos, Female, Statica)
(Jolteon, Male, Voltage)
(Leafeon, Female, Leafia)
(Togekiss, Female, Gracie)
(Dragonite, Male, Draco)

Neku Sakuraba
10-19-2012, 04:53 PM
Reserve 1

Neku Sakuraba
10-19-2012, 04:53 PM
Reserve 2

You may now start posting!

5TailedDemonLizard
10-19-2012, 11:54 PM
Wow...those sprites...WOW THAT IS SO COOOOOOL *totally gonna keep reading this*

Neku Sakuraba
10-20-2012, 12:00 AM
D'aww, you're just saying that, Honchkrow Meg! Thanks, anyways, for I'll try to keep making them. ^^

Ant2011
10-20-2012, 01:03 AM
This looks interesting! I'll be keeping my eye on this! :happy:

Starbom
10-20-2012, 01:46 AM
VS scene on last section shows Nnuiq with a green pokeball, even though the only pokeball he has is the one the professor gave him (Which is red!).. Lolwut?

Nniuq's trainer sprite also looks very choppy. Its too light on some of the outlined areas. Its also too obvious the sprites are Cress head+Hugh body and Cheren head + Colress's body. Try doing what Ant does and try and hide the fusion materials more. :P

But I'm just raging about the sprite stuff, not the comic. The comic does look promising, I like the natural feel scene 10 has.

Neku Sakuraba
10-20-2012, 03:41 AM
FINALLY. SOMEONE WHO GIVES MEH ADVICE. xD Green Poke Ball? Painted like that. *Snap* Like that! I haven't really done Trainers, as much as Pokemon, so that's the explanation for dat. I promise I will, WITH THESE HANDS OF MINE, I'LL MAKE IT BETTER.

Pokemon Trainer Sarah
10-20-2012, 11:33 AM
I really like the premise of the story! Everyone else has already given you good advice, so I'm just gonna say... keep going, I look forward to the next chapter! :D

Typhlosion Explosion
10-20-2012, 03:01 PM
Name: Corey
Age: 15
Gender: male
Pokemon:
(Typhlosion, Male, Volcano)
(Ampharos, Female, Statica)
(Jolteon, Male, Voltage)
(Leafeon, Female, Leafia)
(Togekiss, Female, Gracie)
(Dragonite, Male, Draco)

I knew you wanted me in this. :cool:

Anyways, yes, your comic isn't crappy! I really love it! Seriously!

My advice is to fix the hair on Dylan. Also, for new characters, feel free to give them some new hair colors and what not!

Fistodragon
10-21-2012, 05:19 PM
Name: Fisto
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Pokemon (Max. 6): (Species, Gender, Nickname; if they have one)
(Umbreon, Male, Nickname; if they have one)
(Serperior, Male, Nickname; if they have one)
(Skarmory, Male, Nickname; if they have one)
(Zebstrika, Female, Nickname; if they have one)
(Species, Gender, Nickname; if they have one)

If you can't get the Serperior and Zebstrika sprite, Lemme know. I have them somewhere :P

Ant2011
10-21-2012, 06:08 PM
I'll fill out a guest form, if you don't mind :)

Name: Tabitha
Age: 19
Gender: female
Pokemon (Max. 6): Gigalith, male, Jasper
Rapidash, female
Leafeon, female
Girafarig, female
Pansear, male
Quagsire, male

You can use any stage evolution you need to in order to make her fit. The Pokemon listed are just the final stage Pokemon she'll own. (The only one being Pansear. lol)

If you'd like, I could make her sprites for you? I love doing trainer sprites!

5TailedDemonLizard
10-26-2012, 12:37 AM
Just filling out a form for ya ;) Special plans. EVIL PLAAAAANS. WE LOVE MAKING EEEVIL PLAAAANS (cookie to those who get the reference)

Name: Meghan
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Pokemon (Max. 6):
- Honchkrow, Male, Nacht
- Cofagrigus, Male, Osiris
- Skarmory, Female, Chrome
- Zweilous, Male, Vei
- Krookodile, Female, Victoria
- Bisharp, Male, Kattar

Neku Sakuraba
10-26-2012, 01:05 AM
So...many...GUESTS...! All accepted! I'll plan to use a lot of you in later ones! Except Tabitha, I have a feeling she'll come real soon...

Ant2011
10-27-2012, 12:15 AM
So...many...GUESTS...! All accepted! I'll plan to use a lot of you in later ones! Except Tabitha, I have a feeling she'll come real soon...

Yay! :3 Do you want me to make her sprites to take some of the load off of you with the others?

Neku Sakuraba
10-27-2012, 03:28 AM
Yay! :3 Do you want me to make her sprites to take some of the load off of you with the others?

Actually, you could help by telling me what sprites you want me to fuse! ^^ I imagine the female rocker for the head for her, no?

Ant2011
10-27-2012, 04:51 AM
Female rocker's head sounds good! Maybe Hilda's body?

Neku Sakuraba
10-27-2012, 03:27 PM
Female rocker's head sounds good! Maybe Hilda's body?

Well, I'm screwed with the OW sprite. That might take a little while. So, why not PM/VM me what sprites you want me to use?