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PainKiller
12-17-2005, 07:06 PM
Our Untiled love
By: Zach N
When we both set our eyes on eachother
we both knew it would end up this way
I would be me and you would be you thats all i can say
When I look at your face my heart fills up with light
I really don't like it when we fight
When you laugh i hear the angels from above
They're talking and chatting about our untitled love
Not many people can feel this way
Im one of the lucky ones who can call you his today
Though i hope we never shall part
If we do I would know we had Untitled love from the start.
Tell me whatcha think? I might really give this to a girl who i currently like
Thefireyoukaipaige
12-18-2005, 02:05 PM
Our Untiled love
By: Zach N
When we both set our eyes on eachother
we both knew it would end up this way
I would be me and you would be you thats all i can say
When I look at your face my heart fills up with light
I really don't like it when we fight
When you laugh i hear the angels from above
They're talking and chatting about our untitled love
Not many people can feel this way
Im one of the lucky ones who can call you his today
Though i hope we never shall part
If we do I would know we had Untitled love from the start.
Tell me whatcha think? I might really give this to a girl who i currently like
awwwwwwwww..........
i love it!
its beautiful! a real work of art!
you have talent Mr. Boogeyman!
Nasty Plasty
12-18-2005, 02:20 PM
Imagine that. The Boogeyman... writing a love poem.
PainKiller
12-18-2005, 03:15 PM
Yes all shall now refer to me as Mr.Boogeyman! Thanks for the feedback you guys. I still need somemore reaction though i'm not sure yet
Thefireyoukaipaige
12-18-2005, 09:58 PM
Yes all shall now refer to me as Mr.Boogeyman! Thanks for the feedback you guys. I still need somemore reaction though i'm not sure yet
well here a thought:
GO GET HER TIGER!
im sure she would love it. trust me, im a girl. and for things like these, sometimes you need a girls opinion. right?
PainKiller
12-19-2005, 12:49 AM
ok thanks, it'll be good to give it to her with the xmas gift i got her
Thefireyoukaipaige
12-19-2005, 10:05 PM
ok thanks, it'll be good to give it to her with the xmas gift i got her
a boogyman in love .... WHAT WILL THIS TWISTED WORLD COME UP WITH NEXT!
PainKiller
12-27-2005, 03:39 AM
Another Poem sequal to this from me MMMMMMMMMMIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSTTTTTEEEEEERRR
BOOOOGEYMAN!(pause, pause) Boogeyman!
Title, Together is Found
While Together is found
From this loving bound
I yet wonder
How long we can keep this under sound
Secrets are evil, but secrets help
When their is know one to turn to, when you feel like you must yelp
You keep your mouth shut, lock it up tight
While you dream of Together, in the silent dark night
I'll always be here alive and well
Because you made my heart jump, from the ashes of hell
No longer am I angry, nor am I sad
You've made me better, and turn good from bad
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