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Nasty Plasty
02-04-2006, 03:50 AM
This is just a longer version of a story I wrote for our writing class. Basically you had to write a story involving the people you knew at school. I thought of an idea of having this huge conflict that meand my buddies have to fix. I will try to add a new entry each day. Well here goes nothing.


What Have I Become?

Friday, 2/3/06

Daniel woke up with a pounding headache. He had been partying all night and was in a fight. He was drunk and could only remember slight details. He was in a fight and had to have one of his friends drive him home. He took and aspirin, combed his short brown hair, and fixed up some breakfast. His phone rang so he went to answer it.

"Hi Daniel," Alton said.

"How's it been?" Daniel asked.

"Good, I heard you were out partying last night," Alton said.

"Yeah, I guess I had a few too many," Daniel said.

"I'll say, from what I heard you challenged Monty to a fight," Alton said.

"Yeah, barely a few bruises though," Daniel said.

"Good because you wouldn't want to look too messed up when we go visit Yessenia," Alton said.

"Right she said she'd meet us by Dairy Queen," Daniel said.

He hung up and got dressed. When Daniel was in 6th grade he met Alton. Alton was kind of short and had a huge afro. Yessenia is this girl Daniel liked in the 6th grade and they were going out. He walked into Dairy Queen and found Alton and Yessenia waiting for him. After a few minutes Daniel found out he did something seriously wrong last night and Yessenia was mad at him. She wanted him to change his ways before he became a total monster. So this is the beginning to the story that will have Daniel face his demons. He rested up for a huge start tomorrow.

Nasty Plasty
02-05-2006, 01:09 AM
Saturday, 2/4/06


That morning, Daniel woke up early and went to the park to meet up with Alton. Anthony was there too. Anthony was a bit hyper so he has to take some sort of pill each day but Daniel didn't really care. The three of them were going to help Daniel fix his life. They decided to start by going to apologize to Monty. When Daniel got there to apologize Monty punched him in the lip.

"Hey I came to apologize you fat turd," Daniel said.

"Shut your mouth *****," Monty said.

Daniel got his butt whipped. He went home upset about not being able to apologize to Monty yet. Daniel just stayed home for the rest of the day.

"Changing my ways is going to be tough," Daniel thought as he fell asleep.

OOC:I'll be taking tomorrow off for Super Bowl XL.

Nasty Plasty
02-07-2006, 03:06 AM
2/6/06

Daniel woke up really mad that Steelers won the Super Bowl. He now owed Alton money. He decided to hit the books that day. He found an interesting one about a cave by his town. He got dressed, packed lunch, and set of to the cave. The cave was dark and cold. Nothing seemed interesting until he found a strange opening. He squeezed through it. He was in a room full of ancient writings. The book said that Indians lived in these caves. Daniel decided to camp out and wait til it was sunny to try and read them.