View Full Version : Evolutionary Sprite Challenge 2!
Surly Professor
02-23-2006, 10:47 PM
Yes! It's time again for the Evolutionary Sprite Challenge!
This is a sprite contest where we will invent a new evolution for Dunsparce.
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/ani206.gif
Dunsparce is a chubby little snake with a drill on the tip of it's tail that it uses to burrow into the ground backwards where it lives in a complex network of tunnels.
And you can see what appear to be immature wings on Dunsparce's back, so the sky's the limit with him.
I expect great things of Dunsparce. Like the dopey Magikarp evolves into the might Gyarados. I wanna see a truely magnificent monster manifest from this pathetic pokemon.
You have until Sunday night the 5th, at midnight to turn in your entries.
That gives you two full weekends. So, no rush jobs. Do your very best, and take your time putting a nice polish on your final sprite.
Good luck,
It will be a single round contest this time. In which your sprite will be graded by our panel of judges as outlined below. As well as put up for the popular vote, where every vote your sprite receives will add 3 points to your total score.
In this contest you may use existing sprites to "Frankenstein" an entry. But I would encourage you to scratch as much of it as you can. As that will be more original and net you more points ultimately.
Sprites will be judged on a 1 to 10 scale in the following 3 categories.
Color: Which covers how well the colors chosen work with the sprite & the shading of the sprite.
Composition: In the case of Frankenstiened or Semi-frankenstiened sprites this category will judge how cohesive the constituate parts are (how well it's put together) & how difficult we think it was to make the monster.
And... in the case of scratch this category covers: line art, construction (which includes: pose, anatomy, & proportion), & difficulty.
Originality: How inventive and interesting the sprite is as a whole.
Naturally scratched sprites will garner more points in this category than entries made from existing sprites, but if your entry is inventive enough it can still do very well here.
*The Master*
02-23-2006, 11:22 PM
Okay, if i'm allowed to enter here's my entry:
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b371/themaster921/Pokemon%20Sprites/Dunrose.png
I call it Dunrose!!
Its 100% scratch, wich is not one of my strong points
Surly Professor
02-23-2006, 11:48 PM
I think it's flipping me off. :neutral:
Anyone who wants to is allowed to enter, but...
no rush jobs.
Please, take your time. You have until March 5th.
*The Master*
02-23-2006, 11:53 PM
I think it's flipping me off. :neutral:
Anyone who wants to is allowed to enter, but...
Please, take your time. You have until March 5th.
I didn't rush, i just finished when i finished...
Sleepy Sheep
02-24-2006, 12:06 AM
I'm going to attempt this challenge. I've always imagined dunsparce's evlution so I can finally produce it.
I do agree. He does have an amazing potential to turn into a great thing, so my entry is going to be an incredible one, not to brag.
I will edit with my sprite in a few seconds! >:3
EDIT: Here it is! I present... Zeefly! (Yes, I stole the colors from Dunsparce. Go sue me.)
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b70/Gun6/Zeefly.png
Zeefly is a fly (obviously), because Dunsparce looks like a grub or maggot... The closed eyes on Dunsparce (suited for being underground, as dirt might get in them and stuff), open up, to allow Zeefly to see when it is flying. Because it has wings now, it has outgrown its drill tail (which was Dunsparce's way of escaping predators) for a spiked tail to skewer prey with. It now has pinchers on its head (like Pinsir), to help it eat food.
Umbreon Shadow
02-24-2006, 02:56 AM
That's very good but you should add a drill of some sort unless you had a readon for that.
Seawolf
02-24-2006, 02:57 AM
I will edit with my sprite in a few seconds! >:3
EDIT: Here it is! I present... Zeefly! (Yes, I stole the colors from Dunsparce. Go sue me.)
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b70/Gun6/Zeefly.png
:eek:
All I have to say is...
Amazing! That's a solid evolution for Dunsparce. I can't wait to see what everyone else will come up with.
Almost makes me want to learn how to scratch sprites...
That's very good but you should add a drill of some sort unless you had a readon for that.
Well, a drill wouldn't be very efficient for flying and hunting, right? Plus, it doesn't need to live underground.
RocketMeowth
02-24-2006, 04:01 AM
I never liked the fact that Dunsparce is supposed to be this snake thing and yet, it looks nothing like a snake. This is my entry for the contest.
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/2540/dexki9hf.png
Name: Dexki
Data: Due to its lack of opening its eyes when Dunsparce it has gained no need for them anymore. It now sees by detecting the heat signatures of the things around it by flicking its toungue. Its drill has changed into a rattle since it cant express through its eyes. It uses it like a rattle snake does and rapidly shakes it back and forth to tell others around it how angry it is. The small horns on its lower jaw when a Dunsparce have changed into outter fangs that can extract poison at will. This way Dexki can latch those onto its prey and kill it that way so it can smell the air for any creatures around it.
I will edit with my sprite in a few seconds! >:3
EDIT: Here it is! I present... Zeefly! (Yes, I stole the colors from Dunsparce. Go sue me.)
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b70/Gun6/Zeefly.png
Zeefly is a fly (obviously), because Dunsparce looks like a grub or maggot... The closed eyes on Dunsparce (suited for being underground, as dirt might get in them and stuff), open up, to allow Zeefly to see when it is flying. Because it has wings now, it has outgrown its drill tail (which was Dunsparce's way of escaping predators) for a spiked tail to skewer prey with. It now has pinchers on its head (like Pinsir), to help it eat food.
That is awesome, GUN! Its the best one here so far! Im working on mine... Looks like I have some solid competition. >:3
TVTMaster
02-24-2006, 10:30 PM
I'm entering. I know I decided to last time, but I didn't. This time, I have a solid idea that has new colors and a Magikarp-Gyarados theme. Think fangs.
Kylee the Larvitar
02-24-2006, 10:44 PM
I never liked the fact that Dunsparce is supposed to be this snake thing and yet, it looks nothing like a snake. This is my entry for the contest.
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/1899/dexki8yo.png
Name: Dexki
I might edit his sprite so dont be suprised if it changes a bit.
Awesome sprite RM. Almost makes me want to enter and see how I go against compeititers(sp?).
Tabbloza
02-24-2006, 11:41 PM
Save a spot for me, I just finished the outline of my entry. n_n
Umbreon Shadow
02-24-2006, 11:53 PM
You don't really need to save an entry, just get it in on time and it'll be judged.
*The Master*
02-24-2006, 11:58 PM
I doubt i'll even get a one in the Judging...:confused:
Tabbloza
02-25-2006, 12:25 AM
Oh, okay, well I'm done anyway...
http://www.tabbloza.com/lazepine2.gif
Dunsparce evolves into Lazepine, the lazy flying worm thing. Still as sleepy-looking as it's pre-evo. I'm not super proud of this thing, but I'm happy with the wings. xD
I bet Gun6 will win, that fly is awesome. xD Everyone else's are cool looking too.
That sprite is amazing, Tabbloza! I think that you're going to win. I like the wings, light coloring, and the head! (Snouts are the best thing... ever.)
Surly Professor
02-25-2006, 12:41 AM
I'm not super proud of this thing, but I'm happy with the wings. xD
Good entries everybody. And you still have until March 5th to tinker with 'em.
I know I always have to keep working on something until I'm really happy with it.
So, if you're not completely satisfied with your stuff; no worries, there's still plenty of time to get it just the way you want it. :biggrin:
TVTMaster
02-25-2006, 12:46 AM
Here's my first version of Dormiper, the dormant viper. The wings grew to be more of a blanket than things to fly. It still burrows. I'm going to tinker with the wings, because they look like nothing I've ever seen.
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/675/dormiper7aw.png
Tabbloza
02-25-2006, 12:50 AM
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/675/dormiper7aw.png
Woaaaahh. Absolutely awesome, TVT! o_o
Sleepy Sheep
02-25-2006, 01:11 AM
Well, here's mine... I can't say I'm proud of the build but I think the color will destract that.
Iespent, which is either a cross between eye and serpent, or a parody to I spy.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v241/neofan/Iespent.png
Yay, dnsparce is a full-fledged flying freak, but no one is perfect. See, that's why he has no eyes on his face. During evolution, they lose all eye sight in the upper body, but that's where the tail comes in. For a while the tail is responsible for all ability to see until its senses devolep. Then it becomes a drill again. But until the it can;t go under ground because the dirt causes the eyes to go bloodshot and it has no eyelids.
I may mess with it over time. I think it's fine enough for me, but it may not get many votes.
I still can't believe that this was the finished product on day 1:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v241/neofan/untitled.png
Everyone's entries are so good, im afraid to put mine up. XD
Dunsparce --> Dwellrisk
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/pkrs349.gif---Lv34--->http://h1.ripway.com/omis1123/SCratchDunsparceEvocolor423455.PNG
The colors are actually all mine! :D
Still needs a lot of touch-ups. I'll fix it up alittle more, everyday.
Nefarious
02-25-2006, 03:14 AM
Wow, only two days and there's a bunch of entries already. Glad to see this contest is going so well. Awesome entries so far. Can't wait to see the outcome. ;D
Pika57
02-25-2006, 03:30 AM
Everyone's entries are so good, im afraid to put mine up. XD
Dunsparce --> Dwellrisk
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/pkrs349.gif---Lv34--->http://h1.ripway.com/omis1123/SCratchDunsparceEvocolor3.PNG
The colors are actually all mine! :D
Still needs a lot of touch-ups. I'll fix it up alittle more, everyday.
Nice Omis... of course being a judge I can't just base it on first impressions, i mean secodn impressions can change a lot, like slipping money to me, etc....
Tsukiyo Kuma
02-25-2006, 03:47 AM
Omis, out of all the entries posted, yours is my favorite, and for a few reasons.
First, I think it fits with the Pokemon style of monsters. I can actually see this evolution in the game, and the style matches the Pokemon feel. The shading style, and color styles matches the Advance Generation sprites well, as for TVTMaster's evolution, it looks like something I would see in Digimon.
TVTMaster's shading doesn't really fit with the Advance Generation style as much as Omis's. Plus, I think it's too dark, and too large of a sprite. (Pokemon wise)
Tabbloza's evolution is alright, but it doesn't have that Pokemon feel either. It's also a monster that I could see in Digimon. I really like the wings though, the wings look great.
RocketMeowth's evolution doesn't fit the Pokemon style that well, even though I like the shading. It looks like a monster I would see in a different anime other than Pokemon or Digimon.
gun6's evolution also fits that Pokemon style just like Omis's though, I don't like the shading that much. In my opinion, the shading could have been made more better, and just a little bit brighter. I like the pose, and the wings look alright, though the remind me of a bug's wings.
I think I'll enter once I get a solid idea in my head. ^_^;
Sleepy Sheep
02-25-2006, 02:46 PM
I agree with you. Even mine doesen't look like a pokemon, but, hey, some people only focus on the quality of the sprite, but unlike them I use common sense to decide on the winner.
Slightly off topic: Well...I don't think I'll get to tweak mine today. I'm going to a Girl Scout awards ceromny which will last all day. (Bring on the french crepes!) So...I might be gone for the rest of the day,
Tabbloza
02-25-2006, 03:51 PM
Everyone's entries are so good, im afraid to put mine up. XD
Dunsparce --> Dwellrisk
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/pkrs349.gif---Lv34--->http://h1.ripway.com/omis1123/SCratchDunsparceEvocolor3.PNG
The colors are actually all mine! :D
Still needs a lot of touch-ups. I'll fix it up alittle more, everyday.
Great sprite Omis! Well you are the spriting god, and pretty much everyone's spriting role model. xD Yours and Gun6's are probably the best ones put up yet.
RocketMeowth
02-25-2006, 08:50 PM
I editted my sprite a bit. Eh, Omis is deffinatly gonna win this. I might make an entirely new sprite cause the more I look at mine the more I dislike it.
Sleepy Sheep
02-26-2006, 01:50 PM
Well I like all of them, no matter if they win or not. It isn't really if I win or lose, it's the thrill of making a new sprite. I don't need to win, I just participate because these contests get me motivated.
Tabbloza
02-26-2006, 02:45 PM
Well I like all of them, no matter if they win or not. It isn't really if I win or lose, it's the thrill of making a new sprite. I don't need to win, I just participate because these contests get me motivated.
I like contests because it's really fun to see what people come up with. :D And these are some awesome Dunsparce evo's.
I use contest to see how I fair against other spriters. Of corse its fun, but my main purpose is to see if I'm getting any better. :tongue:
*The Master*
02-26-2006, 03:05 PM
I enter them to see how Pwnd i can get
:susp:
Lol. You shouldn't think about yourself that way. You wont improve if you dont have confidence in yourself.
Your Dunsparce evo is really good. It intimidated me. XD I had to change my design.
Ruiizu-bozu
02-26-2006, 03:46 PM
Surly, if you don't have enough, may I be a judge?
*The Master*
02-26-2006, 03:52 PM
Lol. You shouldn't think about yourself that way. You wont improve if you dont have confidence in yourself.
Your Dunsparce evo is really good. It intimidated me. XD I had to change my design.
Thanks Omis...It took an hour to make my Evo
Umbreon Shadow
02-26-2006, 03:58 PM
Surly PMed me about being a judge, I want to. I guess the other spot is open?
Sleepy Sheep
02-26-2006, 10:12 PM
I like contests because it's really fun to see what people come up with. :D And these are some awesome Dunsparce evo's.
Yeah, everyone of them! But truthfully, yours is my favorite.
And Omis, those are my exact fellings on the contests. Judging in comparison I can see that I'm not the worst but I could do better.
Neptune's Disciple
02-27-2006, 08:33 AM
Well here's my crappy entry. I tried to make it better but just gave up in the end. I didn't even think of a name for it...
http://h1.ripway.com/tomb2202/originals/dunsparceevo4.bmp
I might edit it before the competition closes, but I dunno...
**Edited entry
Tabbloza
02-27-2006, 12:50 PM
Well here's my crappy entry. I tried to make it better but just gave up in the end. I didn't even think of a name for it...
http://h1.ripway.com/tomb2202/originals/dunsparceevo2.bmp
I might edit it before the competition closes, but I dunno...
Woah. That is awesome. o_o So many great entries! <3
Surly Professor
02-27-2006, 02:59 PM
Surly, if you don't have enough, may I be a judge?
Well, I've already got judges, but if they decide to pull out I'll let ya know.
Well here's my crappy entry. I tried to make it better but just gave up in the end. I didn't even think of a name for it...
http://h1.ripway.com/tomb2202/originals/dunsparceevo2.bmp
I might edit it before the competition closes, but I dunno...
Thats not crappy. :surp: Its very clean!
You might want to fix the wing positioning, though. IMO, it's left wing isn't exactly where it should be.
Sleepy Sheep
02-27-2006, 09:19 PM
I agree. It looks just a tad lower than it should be, but other than that its fine!
RocketMeowth
02-27-2006, 09:43 PM
Well here's my crappy entry. I tried to make it better but just gave up in the end. I didn't even think of a name for it...
http://h1.ripway.com/tomb2202/originals/dunsparceevo2.bmp
I might edit it before the competition closes, but I dunno...
HOLY!!! That entry is magnificent! My favorite part is its head. It looks so much more like a dragon then any pokemon I have seen. You entry is my favorite out of them all for the head of the sprite.
How long did you spend on that? It looks like it must have taken a while to do seeing as how complex and small it is.
Ruiizu-bozu
02-27-2006, 09:48 PM
Well here's my crappy entry. I tried to make it better but just gave up in the end. I didn't even think of a name for it...
http://h1.ripway.com/tomb2202/originals/dunsparceevo2.bmp
I might edit it before the competition closes, but I dunno...
The head looks like seadramon.
Umbreon Shadow
02-27-2006, 09:58 PM
Well here's my crappy entry. I tried to make it better but just gave up in the end. I didn't even think of a name for it...
http://h1.ripway.com/tomb2202/originals/dunsparceevo2.bmp
I might edit it before the competition closes, but I dunno...
It's great though I can't really see any shading on the blue part of the head.
It's a great sprite, but the connection of it's right wing (if you were the creature), is a bit awkward (maybe a bit too low and too close to the head), and the body seems to take a sharp turn when it goes up to connect it to the drill.
RocketMeowth
02-27-2006, 11:57 PM
Here is my new entry:
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/3783/dunsparceevo2wq.png
Name: Dexki
Evolution process: Dunsparce ----Lv. 38, King's Rock-----> Dexki
Since it becomes top heavy during evolution its wings change into massive spikes that stick out of its back for protection. Two front legs appear so it can move slightly faster and still dig under the earth. Its drill becomes a large thick flap of skin it uses to make earthquakes and hit its opponent.
Kylee the Larvitar
02-28-2006, 12:21 AM
Okay...................its not great nor is it to good but I made a different evolution. Here it is:
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/3783/dunsparceevo2wq.png
Since it becomes top heavy during evolution its wings change into massive spikes that stick out of its back for protection. Two front legs appear so it can move slightly faster and still dig under the earth. Its drill becomes a large thick flap of skin it uses to make earthquakes and hit its opponent.
It is great! I can actually see the shading, which is good.
Surly Professor
03-05-2006, 08:00 PM
Last day folks.
T-minus 10 hours & counting.
Surly Professor
03-07-2006, 03:00 AM
The Judging is in!
With more soon to come.
Look for the public opinion poll shortly.
*The Master*
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b371/themaster921/Pokemon%20Sprites/Dunrose.png
Dunrose
Color: 3/10, I really don't like the checkerboard shading method. I've seen it used successfully, but this isn't one of those times.
Composition: 2/10, Sorry, but your linework is really choppy, the color of the lines are inconsistant with the shading, and it's head & eyes are pretty misshapen.
Originality: 7/10, flying flatworm with a devil tail.
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gun6
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b70/Gun6/Zeefly.png
Zeefly
Color: 9/10, The colors & shading are great. Transparent wings ftw.
Composition: 8/10, Interesting pose, I like the squinty eyes.
Originality: 7/10, lop-eared fairy grubworm.
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Tabbloza
http://www.tabbloza.com/lazepine2.gif
Lazepine
Color: 8/10, Everything looks pretty good, but the shading kinda confuses me. The light comes from above on the head but then from below by the time you get to the back of the body.
Composition: 7/10, everything looks decent.
Originality: 10/10, very original design.
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TVTMaster
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/675/dormiper7aw.png
Dormiper
Color: 7/10, The shading on the lower part of the face & eyes, and the spots on the wings look a little weird, but other than that it looks ok. And I think the colors are a bit over saturated, but I won't deduct a point because you are the only one to experiment with the color a little.
Composition: 7/10, decent.
Originality: 7/10, I like the idea of the wings that make a little cape or blanket, but it just needs a little refinement.
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Grumpiguno
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v241/neofan/Iespent.png
Iespent
Color: 6/10, It's only hightlighted in spots, but other than that it's decent.
Composition: 6/10, Linework is a bit too straight & choppy in places, making him look a bit lumpy.
Originality: 9/10, Really interesting design.
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Omis
http://h1.ripway.com/omis1123/SCratchDunsparceEvocolor423455.PNG
Dwellrisk
Color: 9/10, Great color & shading.
Composition: 9/10, well done.
Originality: 9/10, Very inventive, cool stilt legs
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Neptune's Disciple
http://h1.ripway.com/tomb2202/originals/dunsparceevo4.bmp
Color: 9/10, Very nice color & shading, the transparent wings are killer.
Composition: 8/10, the pose is a bit stale, but other than that it's fantastic.
Originality: 8/10, great new dragon design.
___________
RocketMeowth
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/3783/dunsparceevo2wq.png
Dexki
Color: 6/10, The colors look good, but the shading is not quite right in places.
Composition: 7/10, decent
Originality: 9/10, Interesting, I never foresaw a design like this coming.
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RocketMeowth
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/2540/dexki9hf.png
Dexki
Color: 7.5/10, The shading is better on this one. I like how the wings & head cast shadow on the body.
Composition: 7/10, The wings are nice, they could have used more shading though. And I don't like how the lines turn black in the shadows, should have just used a darker color, but it's not too bad.
Originality: 7/10, Very nice, but it seems a little plain for some undefinable reason.
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Chaos
http://ourworld.cs.com/SuperiorChaos/Denrok.png
Denrok
Color: 7/10, There is some blocky shading, but it's nothing to bad.
Composition: 6/10, The outlines are too stiff & straight in places, and black is a bit dark for the highlighted side, its mandibles are a bit misshapen, but other than that it looks pretty cool.
Originality: 7/10, I'm sorry, the 'winged scorpion of doom' position has already been filled by Gligar, but this design is pretty cool.
...I'm psychic, Surly. I can send my thoughts of posting here directly to your brain. But anyways, I hope that there are a lot of voters! Everybody's sprites are so good! ^_^
squirtle
03-07-2006, 03:20 AM
the first rocket meowths looks like it would kill you. that one is the best.
Crossfire Chaos
03-08-2006, 02:24 AM
Can I still enter? I've only missed the deadline by a smigen...
Surly Professor
03-08-2006, 02:33 AM
Can I still enter? I've only missed the deadline by a smigen...
Since I don't think I'll manage to judge tonight either, I suppose so.
I promise to judge sometime tomorrow night though, cross my heart.
RocketMeowth
03-08-2006, 03:32 AM
^^ geeze Surly your killing me over here with the waiting.
lol
jk
I can wait longer. ^^ It only makes me more excited to see what the results are.
Crossfire Chaos
03-08-2006, 03:40 AM
Thanks, I really apreciate it.
NOW GLORY BEFORE THE WRATH OF....
DENROK
http://ourworld.cs.com/SuperiorChaos/Denrok.png
-Denrok lives in solitary and travels a lot, rarely staying long enough to claim a territory as its own. The poison-tipped end of it's barbed tail is lethal enough to weaken a foe so much that it can fall over and wretch in pain for weeks. The wings that have developed and now the creature enjoys real flight and from the air it can dive for a dedly effect. The pincers have also developed and they can tear into flesh well. Despite this Denrok are usualy docile and try to avoid other creatures. Dunsparse evolves into Denrok at level 32. Denrok is Normal/Poison. (BTW, it might be hard to notice, but it's basicaly a scorpion with wings.)
Sleepy Sheep
03-09-2006, 01:55 AM
Congratulations. You gave me nightmares.
Umbreon Shadow
03-09-2006, 02:04 AM
It's really good but I only see a lighter shade on the parts you added, I see no shadow on them.
Surly Professor
03-09-2006, 02:12 AM
^ The judging is in! ^
Sorry for the delay, but this was a tough contest to judge.
Please excuse my absent mindedness, but I can't remember who my other judges are, and I deleted those PMs. You know who you are, so please get yo judge on.
Umbreon Shadow
03-09-2006, 03:40 AM
*The Master*
Dunrose
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b371/themaster921/Pokemon%20Sprites/Dunrose.png
Color: 2/10, I really dislike checkered shading, it only works sometimes in big sprites.
Composition: 2/10, The head looks mutated and most of the linework is very choppy.
Originality: 6/10, I can't find out what it is but it is pretty original.
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gun6
Zeefly
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b70/Gun6/Zeefly.png
Color: 9/10, I like the shading, on one of it's ear things, the lines go from the seocnd darkest colour to black.
Composition: 8/10, I like the way it posed, not straight but not at it's side.
Originality: 8/10, I thought this one was one of the most original.
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Tabbloza
Lazepine
http://www.tabbloza.com/lazepine2.gif
Color: 9/10, As Surly siad, the shading is wrong on some parts but it's great overall.
Composition: 8/10, Great job, the lines really curve but I think it's wierd ow the tail like twists into a drill thing.
Originality: 10/10, I just loved this sprite, I could never think of it.
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TVTMaster
Dormiper
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/675/dormiper7aw.png
Color: 7/10, Well I see some dots here and there which really throw it off. I don't really like the colours but I think you were the only one who actually changed them.
Composition: 8/10, Good though the wings don't strike me as cape thing.
Originality: 7/10, Meh, it just looks like a bug with with wings.
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Grumpiguno
Iespent
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v241/neofan/Iespent.png
Color: 6/10, Pretty good but I only see a few highlights.
Composition: 5/10, Linework was too staright, looks like you used the line tool and I would've liked to see some outline shading instead of it being just one colour.
Originality: 7/10, Good but I think the snake/Dunsparce=Snake thing has been done a little too much.
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Omis
Dwellrisk
http://h1.ripway.com/omis1123/SCratchDunsparceEvocolor423455.PNG
Color: 9/10, I love the shading and outlines on this.
Composition: 10/10, Great job Omis!
Originality: 10/10, I love the front legs and it's expression, it's so darn cute!
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Neptune's Disciple
http://h1.ripway.com/tomb2202/originals/dunsparceevo4.bmp
Color: 9/10, Really good, the transparent are really cool.
Composition: 8/10, It's seems like it's jsut hovering somewhere.
Originality: 7/10, Good but I think dragon's a bit overdone.
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RocketMeowth
Dexki
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/3783/dunsparceevo2wq.png
Color: 7/10, THe shading is weird because there's highlights on the inside but not the outside.
Composition: 7/10, Meh.
Originality: 10/10, I like the dino/earthquake motif.
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RocketMeowth
Dexki
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/2540/dexki9hf.png
Color: 8/10, This one's shading is much better than the other.
Composition: 7/10, The wings seem like a cool idea, they could use more shading and I don't like how in the shadows, the outline turns really dark.
Originality: 7/10, Good but I say again, the dragon thing is a bit overdone.
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Chaos
Denrok
http://ourworld.cs.com/SuperiorChaos/Denrok.png
Color: 6/10, I really cannot see any shadow in the sprite, except for the back 3 legs.
Composition: 7/10, Some of the lines are messed up anad I don't like all black outlines.
Originality: 7/10, It seems like a Dunsparce/Ariados/Gligar fusion, I can't really see why Dunsparce would need to grow 8 legs.
Sleepy Sheep
03-09-2006, 10:40 PM
I'm nervous. My sprite wasn't the greatest, and based on the scores even if I make it to round two, I might lose then.
Grumpiguno
Iespent
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v241/neofan/Iespent.png
Color: 6/10, Pretty good but I only see a few highlights.
Composition: 5/10, Linework was too staright, looks like you used the line tool and I would've liked to see some outline shading instead of it being just one colour.
Originality: 7/10, Good but I think the snake/Dunsparce=Snake thing has been done a little too much.
I see what you mean.
I always use the line tool. Its the best way to get smooth, even lines. The key is shorter segments. ^_^
I'm nervous. My sprite wasn't the greatest, and based on the scores even if I make it to round two, I might lose then.
There's not going to be a second round:
"It will be a single round contest this time." --From first Post.
Pika57
03-09-2006, 11:40 PM
I'll have my judging up today or tommorrow.
Pika57
03-10-2006, 11:51 PM
*The Master*
Dunrose
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b371/themaster921/Pokemon%20Sprites/Dunrose.png
Color: 3/10, Its too dark and too choppy.
Composition: 1/10, I can't really see where you were going with this.. its too akward...
Originality: 4/10, Snakelike, with winds... not that creative...
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gun6
Zeefly
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b70/Gun6/Zeefly.png
Color: 8/10, It's pretty good, but ti's a little sketchy on top of the head. Its also a bit dark.
Composition: 9/10, Excellent... all hunched over and sneaky...
Originality: 9/10, Very good.. there was one other similar but only one.
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Tabbloza
Lazepine
http://www.tabbloza.com/lazepine2.gif
Color: 8/10, As the others have said, shading was a tad off. However, i liekd how the colors seemd to be closer to Dunsparces than the other participants.
Composition: 7/10, The main body is excellent but the tail is very awkward.
Originality: 10/10, Nothing else like it...
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TVTMaster
Dormiper
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/675/dormiper7aw.png
Color: 8/10, I like what you did. Sort of a Kakuna like thing. In my opinion the stray dots enhance the look.
Composition: 6/10, The tail is quite off, and it seems flat
Originality: 5/10, Looks to much like Kakuna...
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Grumpiguno
Iespent
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v241/neofan/Iespent.png
Color: 5/10, Eh.. the colors look off, and the shading looks awkward...
Composition: 5/10, Its body is jointed awkwardly...
Originality: 5/10, Not really that much...
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Omis
Dwellrisk
http://h1.ripway.com/omis1123/SCratchDunsparceEvocolor423455.PNG
Color: 10/10, I can see no flaw with the shading or colors.
Composition: 10/10, Excellent pose... I love it...
Originality: 10/10, A very intresting concept
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Neptune's Disciple
http://h1.ripway.com/tomb2202/originals/dunsparceevo4.bmp
Color: 8/10, the tail seems to dark compared to the rest of the body. Also its outline is a little to glaring
Composition: 7/10, Nothing special, but alright... the tail is sort of odd...
Originality: 7/10, As before, Dragon, overdone
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RocketMeowth
Dexki
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/3783/dunsparceevo2wq.png
Color: 6/10, The shading doesn't look like actual sprite shading...
Composition: 6/10, Sort of lumpish.. but that is what you had in mind, also the tial is flat
Originality: 9/10, Not much else like it though it has a slight dragonish look.
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RocketMeowth
Dexki
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/2540/dexki9hf.png
Color: 7/10, Shading is to dark in the creases.., it also doesn't look like game shading...
Composition: 7/10, Looks a little uncomfortable...
Originality: 7/10, Dragon. Nuff Said
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Chaos
Denrok
http://ourworld.cs.com/SuperiorChaos/Denrok.png
Color: 5/10, I can barely seen any shading...
Composition: 6/10, Looks uncomfortable, even for a spider...
Originality: 7/10, too fusion like.
Here they are...
Surly Professor
03-11-2006, 03:31 PM
The scores have been calculated,
+ the public oppinion results.
*The Master*
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b371/themaster921/Pokemon%20Sprites/Dunrose.png
Dunrose
30
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gun6
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b70/Gun6/Zeefly.png
Zeefly
75 +15
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Tabbloza
http://www.tabbloza.com/lazepine2.gif
Lazepine
77 +12
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TVTMaster
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/675/dormiper7aw.png
Dormiper
62
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Grumpiguno
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v241/neofan/Iespent.png
Iespent
54
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Omis
http://h1.ripway.com/omis1123/SCratchDunsparceEvocolor423455.PNG
Dwellrisk
86 +27
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Neptune's Disciple
http://h1.ripway.com/tomb2202/originals/dunsparceevo4.bmp
71 +9
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RocketMeowth
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/3783/dunsparceevo2wq.png
Dexki
66 +6
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RocketMeowth
http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/2540/dexki9hf.png
Dexki
64.5 +3
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Chaos
http://ourworld.cs.com/SuperiorChaos/Denrok.png
Denrok
58 +6
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Congratulations Tabbloza, you got 77 points from the judges, but gun6 pulled ahead by one point in the public oppinion poll. You placed 3rd in the Evolutionary Challenge, and won a Small Sprite.
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y26/NinjaLawyer/Ssprite.png
Congratulations gun6, Zeefly was a real upset in the public oppinion poll, and eeked out a 2nd place finish to win a Large Sprite.
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y26/NinjaLawyer/sprite.jpg
Congratulations Omis, you got a nearly perfect score of 86 from the judges, and really ran away with the public oppinion poll. Clear off another place on the mantle for your second Golden Monkey.
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y26/NinjaLawyer/GoldenMonkey.png
Good job everyone. Even if you didn't place you all did very well, and I hope to see you in the next Evolutionary Sprite Challenge coming up real soon.
Sleepy Sheep
03-11-2006, 03:49 PM
Even though I wasn't first, or anywhere near it, I had a good time and hope the rest of you did as well. Can't wait till next time!
Lol. Cool! Another golden monkey award.
Lovely contest, it was...
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Now... to go and improve on my drawing skills. :P
Tabbloza
03-11-2006, 07:56 PM
Woah, I got third with my ugly sprite? After I made that thing I started practicing, so right now I hate that Dunsparce evo and think I could do better. xD But thanks! And small Sprite, yum. :D
Great job Omis and Gun6, congrats!
Whoo! Congratulations Omis, and everyone else! I will now retreat back into MSPaint with my Sprite.
Sleepy Sheep
03-11-2006, 10:56 PM
Ohh, don't rub it in!
Pidgeot79
03-11-2006, 10:57 PM
I like the trophies.
Matthew
03-12-2006, 07:14 AM
Lol. Cool! Another golden monkey award.
Lovely contest, it was...
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Now... to go and improve on my drawing skills. :P
Like that needs to happen... lol.
You just need to make more sprites for us to be awestruck by!
Seawolf
03-12-2006, 08:05 AM
When is the next competition? I love seeing all of the entries.
And congratulations to the winners of this round. :D
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