View Full Version : The Coordinator Grand Challenge
Suicune's Child
04-22-2006, 05:48 AM
Everyone seems to hate cliche RPs so I decided to post something a little different. It's still nothing special and could be considered cliche but hopefully it won't get too much hard critism. (AKA, flaming.)
All your life you’ve heard about all the trainers that have entered the Pokemon League and challenged the Elite Four. After a while, you become bored with all this. Unlike most kids in your town, you don’t want to become a Pokemon master or a member of the Elite Four or anything like that. You want to try something different. But what can you do?
One day you see a trainer on the news. Oh yay. But there’s something different about this trainer. They’re not holding a badge, they’re holding a ribbon. You stare at the TV as the reporter talks about the trainer. The reporter calls them a coordinator. It’s nothing new. You’ve heard of Pokemon contests before. However, they aren’t very big news so you really don’t know much about them. But as you watch the report about the coordinator, you suddenly realize you’ve found something you want to do. It’s a different kind of training. And according to the reporter and the coordinator there’s a huge contest coming up soon. It’s still a year away but every town is preparing. New contest halls are popping up all over the place. This is your chance. Contests are increasing in popularity as people begin to become interested in the Coordinator Grand Challenge. To enter you need a minimum of ten ribbons. Are you ready to take on the challenge?
You will start by heading out with your Pokemon. The contests are still held solely in Hoenn so if you don’t live in Hoenn you need to start out on a boat, plane, Pokemon, etc. You can have up to three Pokemon. Just because you don’t want to become a Pokemon Master doesn’t mean you can’t already be a trainer. Now you’re on your way to get your first ribbon and start your journey to the Coordinator Grand Challenge.
Rules:
1. No godmodding (Don't make your character or Pokemon super powerful)
2. No power playing (Do not control another players character without their consent)
3. Try to be at least a little bit literate
4. Have fun
Form
Name:
Age: Between 10 and 17
Gender:
Pokemon:
Description: Pictures are allowed but if you don’t have one please use at least three lines to describe your character.
Personality: A couple lines here too. I won’t accept you if you just put a list of adjectives. However, if you want to reveal your characters personality during the actual RPG you can. Just put “To be revealed.”
History: It doesn’t have to be very long but don’t put, “I was born in LittleRoot and got my first Pokemon from Prof. Birch then saw the report and decided to become a coordinator.”
Other:
RP Sample: This is required of everyone no matter how many RPGs I’ve seen you in.
Mine
Name: Corona Taji
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Pokemon: Quilava(Fire Paws), Pidgeotto(Ace), and Dewgong(Ocean Rider)
Description: http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d46/BlueWind2K/alanatrainer2cr.gif She has six Pokeballs on her belt and the Japanese symbol for dragon in gold on the back of her tank-top. She also wears a jacket from time to time with the same symbol in black on the back and a red backpack with the symbol in gold on the back.
Personality: To be revealed.
History: Corona is a fiery spirited girl from NewBark Town. She had a fairly normal life but often got into trouble because of her love of adventure. She was always wondering around the forest looking for Pokemon and new hangouts. Often she would climb a tall tree that rose just slightly above the others. Then she would sit on a large branch near the top and stare over the horizon.
When she was ten she went to Prof. Elm's lab to get her first Pokemon. There she met a perky little Cyndaquil who she instantly became friends with. With a smile and a wave she set off on an adventure. She never wanted to become a Pokemon master. She wanted to try something different.
The best part about her journey, in her opinion anyway, was all the traveling she got to do. In the four years she spent on the road she did capture two other Pokemon and battled a couple of gyms. Eventually her Cyndaquil, whom she had nicknamed Fire Paws, evolved into a Quilava. Her journey took her to Kanto then to the Orange Islands. She was back in NewBark Town about to set out for Hoenn when she saw the news report about the Coordinator Grand Challenge. She was drawn to the idea of becoming a coordinator and immediately decided to give it a go. She boarded the ferry to Hoenn a week earlier than expected and set off towards a new adventure.
Other: None
RP Sample: The dark forest was eerily silent as Okita walked along the well known path. The light of the setting sun drifted through the trees and cast strange shadows across the ground. But Okita wasn't worried. She had traveled this path many times before.
The last rays of sun vanished and the mystical glow of the bright moon appeared. But even so Okita didn't stop. She had to get home soon. But, as she continued on, a cold chill crept down her spine. She looked around casually and quickened her pace. Anything could be hiding in the dense thicket of trees on either side of her. Her hand moved to the hilt of her sword and her gold eyes darted here and there.
All at once, she heard a low moaning sound. Okita stopped, every sense on alert. The sound came again, but louder. Goosebumps crept up her arms as she turned. Though she couldn't see anything, she knew that something was standing on the path a few feet from her. Her sharp eyes scanned the darkness trying to catch sight of what was there. But it was too dark. The minutes slipped by. Okita's hand never left the hilt of her sword.
Then, without warning, the creature bolted. Okita only had enough time to draw her sword before the creature was upon her. A razor sharp claw as long as a dagger ripped through the air. The sound of metal hitting metal rang through the night as Okita swung her sword to block. The creature leapt backward then attacked again. It swiped with its murderous claw again and again and each time Okita blocked and countered with her sword.
The ferocity of the battle increased until both Okita and the creature were exhausted. The creature leapt backwards into a pool of moonlight. Okita's eyes widened as she saw what it was who had attacked her. Her sword fell to the ground with a clang and she stepped backwards in horror. "Senora?" She whispered in a shaky voice.
InvertrevnI
04-22-2006, 05:57 AM
~Reserved Space~ I guess ths is cool, slightly out of the box. But still based on the anime/game.
sonickid01
04-22-2006, 01:42 PM
Not half bad. I was thinking of this too.
Name: Sonickid
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Pokemon: Growlithe, Wailmer, Tailow-- Thanks to Night Rider for pointing that out to me. EDITED.
Description: Lazy and don't have much time, so see my avatar.
Personality: To be revealed. I might edit this when I have more time
History: Sonickid lived in Fortree City all his life. When he went out one day, he saw a trainer of about 40. The idiot was whipping four Pokemon with a stick, trying to train them by battling against each other. Sonic climbed a tree, with some difficulty, and brought some rocks up.
"CHUNCK!"
Sonic threw the rock at the moron, but it missed him. He shot again.
"Chunk!"
He threw his second rock and nailed the abuser in the head. The trainer looked up and saw the kid. "Get that freak!" the trainer yelled, but none of the Pokemon would obey. They just stared.
The trainer stamped the floor, threw some Pokeballs at the Pokemon, and ran off. Sonic jumped down and picked up the Pokeballs.
Other: Has a datalyzer he built in his rear pocket. It's sorta like a PalmPilot and Pokedex combined.
RP Sample: It's a solution to a T100C challenge. It was like, a giant switch is in the air but impossible to reach. A spring with some soil is right below, but anything except the soil touching it will instantly stiffen the switch.
"Alright," called Sonic. "Manectric, Sableye, I need you guys, 'K?" He said, sending out his two steeds. "Alright," He began again, "First, guys, Manectric, I want you to concentrate with Secret Power on that dirt as hard as you can and think of plants." Manectric nodded, then stared at the dirt and trembled. "Keep going!" Suddenly, seeds popped out of the sky. Sonic placed them inot the dirt that lay on the spring. Manectric stumbled, clearly needing a rest. "Thanks, buddy," Sonic said as he zapped his blue hound into its Pokeball. He quickly threw out Absol. "Now, guys, I want you to use Rain Dance and Sunny day at the same time on those seeds." He commanded. They complied, and soon it was bright and rainy, an odd combination. The seeds twitched, then stopped. "Now, Absol, I want you to use Future Sight on those seeds." Absol stared at the seeds, and suddenly, the seeds looked as if they were on a VCR which was being fastforwarded. The seeds bloomed into flowers, and the spring stiffened. "Sableye, jump onto the spring." Sonic ordered. Sableye climbed onto the spring with help from Absol, and waited. "Now, Sableye, Absol, here's the tricky part. Sableye, jump up and Absol, slice off the flowers. You need to land as soon as the flowers come off. Understand?" The Pokemon nodded, then braced themselves. Sableye lept up as Absol used it's blade to whip the flowers off the spring, loosening the spring, and when the spring loosened, Sableye hit it, flying into the box. "Hit the switch, hit the switch!" yelled Sonic. Sableye headbutted the switch as he neared it, and the door swung open. Sableye landed on the imobilized spring, and Sonic called his two trusty Pokemon back. "Good work, you two!" Sonic coached as his Pokemon zapped into their respective Pokeballs. He hurried through the door and waited for his next challenge eagerly.
Night Rider
04-26-2006, 05:54 PM
Here I am to revive this RP. ): Too original to let it die.
(sonickid, you have four Pokemon)
Name: Artemis Hellsing
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Pokemon: Torkoal, male. Tentacruel, female. Misdreavus, female.
Description:http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b31/Artemis_Hellsing/Sprites/Street_Artemis.png He sometimes wheres a fedora. (Not often though) And usually has a menacing grin on his face.
Personality: Sadistic and coldhearted when only talking to one-Yet is silent, calm and kind of nice when in public or with a group. He dislikes large social events, and never once has he needed to raise his voice in an arguement. He doesn't take anything very seriously, and is rash and outspoken-Which makes coming to an agreement with him near impossible.
History:
He was once actually quite nice once upon a time. He loved to be with his friends and hang around outside a lot. He often was found near the beach just a little ways from Rustboro.
He was casually just there one day, driftiing in and out from daydreams until a messenger from Devon approached him. With him he carried an important message on his tongue, and that message changed Artemis forever. He was no longer the easygoing guy everyone once knew; He was now cold and heartless and he only had one intention: Leaving Rustboro, and pursuing something more, though he didn't know what.
He left Rustboro the following morning with his three Pokemon, in hopes of finding... Something more. Something to work for.
RP Sample:
Artemis looked ghostly as he walked along the sidewalk, expressionless and shoving out of the way pedestrians who dare not move out of his path. He was staring at the ground and moving fast, as if trying to get somewhere or he was being chased- But really had nowhere to be or someone to meet. He was just going along hoping he'd end up somewhere. The sun hung low, casting a sooting orange glow across the small city he was passing through.
He was bounding along carelessly when a young, 'school girl' ran up to him, gasping for breath. Her light blonde hair fell over her face, which was now drenched in sweat, for she had to bend down slightly to get a bit more air. He just glanced down at her. She had chased him through three towns, getting bashed aside by rude hikers along the way, for she was not like him- Unable to just step on people to get what she wanted. Her feet were blistered and her nose was sun-burnt. He didn't even bother apologising for ignorning the whole time. But she didn't care, because she knew he wouldn't now.
"Artemis! Jeeze! Will you slow down for a second?!" She said, gasping for breath.
"What do you want, Neka? I'm busy, can't you see." He said, his voice laced with sarcasm and annoyance.
"Your... Pant... Pokèballs. You... Gasp... Forgot them at the bus stop." She said, holding out three Pokèballs in a small satchel.
He took them reluctantly and uttered a silent "Thanks."
He tied the satchel to his belt and continued on his way, leaving behind Neka, his old friend from The Pokèmon Academy in Rustboro. He kept on tossing others aside to get wherever he was going now. The sun was setting more, and less and less people populated the streets, allowing Artemis to move much more freely. He took a ball from the bag and opened it, releasing his first Pokemon, Misdreavus. It floated by his shoulder as he walked.
"Much more pleasant company than Neka could ever hope to be." He thought to himself as he disappeared from Neka's view.
"Sigh... He's changed so much." Neka muttered under her breath and turned around and walked away.
... Ok, I'm done.
Grass King
04-26-2006, 09:22 PM
Name: Grassy McLeaf
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Pokemon:
Species: Sceptile
Nickname: Leaf
Gender: Male
Species: Numel
Nickname: Melanie (usually Mel)
Gender: Female
Species: Vibrava
Nickname: Love-bug
Gender: Female
Description: http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a148/GrassKing/Grassy-emerald.jpg
Personality:To be revealed
History: From a very early age Grassy had been fairly intelligent. More intelligent, however, than other children of the same age were. Due to this he always received more attention than his twin brother, John. When they both received a laptop for their birthdays, Grassy used his to its fullest extent while, John hardly used his own. Grassy grew up loving all the types of pokemon, but mainly grass types. His twin brother however, simply adored dark types, however he also had a soft spot for fire types. Meaning that he grew up loving houndour and houndoom. After they had picked their starters, when they were about to set off on their journey, John told Grassy that the next time they saw each other eye to eye it would be on the battle field. The next moment a black helicopter descended and John climbed in. On the side of the copter was a red R. He couldn’t believe it his twin had joined Team Rocket. He then journeyed alone with only his pokemon for company.
Other: Has asthma
RP Sample:
Before his very eyes Grassy saw his favorite pokemon, the legendary pokemon named Celebi. Why had it appeared to him he had not made it to the forest. "Celebi, i am sorry, but this nidoran needed assistance she may have died if i had ignored her," Grassy told the wise one. Grassy, who said i was here to take the chance of ever helping me away from you. You helped this pokemon even when you knew you would not complete your quest. That pokemon agreeded to assist me as she too wants to stop this war. That in my eyes is proof enough that you are the one chosen by me, to help stop this war. You care about pokemon and help them gaining their respect, like that of your pokemon. With that all of his pokemon released themselves. Grassy you have passed my test and to help you in your newest journey here i give you this, a weapon formed from my own energy and power. Celebi held out it's hand to reveal a single seed. "Celebi not to question you but how is this supposed to help me?" Grassy asked. Quiet easally Grassy believe in your pokemon focus on your need to end the war. Grassy closed his eyes and imagined what he had been told to. He imagined his need to stop this war. While that was happening the seed began to sprout into a long, wooden, handle, with roots that wrapped around Grassy's arm. At the tip of tjhe handle a large vine erupted, a vine the size of Grassy from head to toe. This is what will help you Grassy. "But Celebi, how am i ment to do this alone?" Grassy questioned. You wil not be alone every legendary has chosen a human teenager to take the weapons they have created. So you are not alone and remember you will always have your pokemon beside you old and young. Then Celebi dissappeared within a flash of light. Then Grassy went along with al his pokemon. When he next touched the ground Celebi told him This is the place where the legendaries will bring their chosen humans when they have recieved their weapons.
Suicune's Child
04-26-2006, 09:39 PM
You're all accepted but sonickid, you can only have three Pokemon. Fix it and you're good. I'll go ahead and start this.:happy:
InvertrevnI
04-26-2006, 09:52 PM
Wait, I drop out. Forget the reserved space, i'm too busy.
Sceptile Frost
05-09-2006, 02:10 AM
*crosses fingers* hopefully this rp won't close like all the other rps I've signed up for. So, here I go...
Name: Andrew Eric McNash
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Pokemon: Drake, a Charizard
Description: When first set out on my journey three years ago, I wore the standard trainer uniform – a blue vest over a white tee with a pokeball at the chest and on the ball cap, as well as light blue jeans. When I arrived in Cerulean City, however, I swapped them for a light orange long-sleeved shirt and a black sweat band, as well as a golden chain that was slung over my neck. I am tall and wide, though not fatty, but very muscular. On my feet are normal sneakers that I sometimes swap for beach sandals.
Personality: To be revealed
History: I am a champion, a winner of the Indigo Tournament. It started when I was seven, Professor Samuel Oak gave me a Charmander and I was on my way. Soon, I had collected all eight badges and it was time for the tournament. With hard fought battles, and just a wee bit of luck, I managed to top the other sixty some competitors. However, the life of a Champion soon became boring. I spent my days at my small house, surfing the net and watching tv for any other challenges I could take. The Army didn’t appeal to me, nor did the job of a policeman. Heck, even joining Team Rocket was not right for me. That was until the report on the coordinator. It seemed so grand, traveling the exotic island of Houen, displaying my pokemon’s beauty, grace, intelligence, toughness, and coolness. That report had gotten me hooked, and now I am setting out upon the S. S. Anne to the small town of Little Roote, with my first friend pokemon, Drake.
Other: Indigo League Champion,
RP Sample:
-Sunset Village-
Fog enveloped the cozy little hut. Jordan cautiously slipped out of bed. He was startled by a soft coo. That was Dad’s Pidgeot again.
“Rose and Poseidon, Pokenav and Dex, I think I’m ready”, he whispered. The two pokeballs were in order, laid neatly on a woven green rug. One contained Rose, a Charmander. The other held Poseidon, his Mudkip.
He stepped out of the small hut.
“Let’s get this journey started!”
(My only RP entry- the dozen some I’ve signed up for have closed or never started)
By the way, this rp sounds like a great idea.
Suicune's Child
05-09-2006, 03:16 AM
Accepted. You may start whenever you like. ^_^
Volvagia Master
05-10-2006, 04:18 AM
Name: Lyoko Code
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Pokemon: Blue Pikachu, Typhlosion, Feraligatr, Meganium, Noctowl and Furret.
Description: Trainer in sig
Personality: To Be Revealed
History: He has finished his Asta Cource of Contests and Pokemon league. Now he is setting off to Hoenn for the Grand Festival.
Other: His Pikachu is blue basically. He stays out of its Poke' Ball
RP Sample:
Lyoko looked out at the horizon. He had left Asta a few minutes ago. Now he was off to Hoenn. He remembered a song that he had sung to his girlfriend. She didnt want him to leave.
To Know The Unown
"I wonder how Aelita is. She seemed happy to my singing." Lyoko sighed
"Pikachu!"
"I know. Our final test. It comes in Hoenn. The Grand Festival is my final stop."
A kid walked up to Lyoko.
"Let's battle! I heard of you. You are Lyoko! A battler and co-ordinator huh? Well, I'll beat you."
Lyoko grabbed a Poke'Ball.
"Lets do this."
"Lyoko, I am not losing!"
"Luckily for you Im distracted." Lyoko said.
"Thinking about Aelita?" Someone said.
"Daniel!"
Suicune's Child
05-10-2006, 10:18 PM
Work on your grammar a bit, make your Pikachu regular, and finish your profile and you're accepted.
Volvagia Master
05-13-2006, 02:15 AM
Please let him be blue. Its my trademark.
Suicune's Child
05-13-2006, 03:01 AM
All right but you have to work on everything else ok?
Volvagia Master
05-13-2006, 03:03 AM
Which is? This is my first Co-ordinator RP ive ever been in.
Suicune's Child
05-14-2006, 12:10 AM
Mainly grammar and length.
Volvagia Master
05-14-2006, 12:14 AM
There you go. I cant think of much
Suicune's Child
05-14-2006, 12:19 AM
Just add a bit of description to help with length. You can go ahead and start.
Volvagia Master
05-14-2006, 12:21 AM
I took another shot at it. Really and honestly.
Suicune's Child
05-14-2006, 12:28 AM
Ok, you can still start anytime you want.
Volvagia Master
05-14-2006, 12:31 AM
OK. Lets do this.
tropicaldolphin51
05-19-2006, 01:06 AM
i'll join and heres mine.
Name: Maria
Age: 15
Gender: Girl
Pokemon: Blaziken, Kirlia, Flygon
Description: http://members.shaw.ca/shinygeodude/icons/pokemon_EmeraldMayFanArt.gif
Personality: To be revealed
History: she got separated from her family. But she was found by an adopted family. Later she finds out that she has a brother named max and a sister named May and that they live in a small town in Hoenn called Littleroot. she traveled to Hoenn and was reunited with her whole Family.
Other: she was separated from her family and got adopted by another family. When she turned 10 she was old enough to go out on her own. She traveled to the Hoenn region hoping to find her real family. She found out that her real mother gave birth to a girl and a boy. In other words she had a brother and sister. Now she is reunited with her family and is now on a journey to enter not only the Pokemon League but also the coordinator grand challenge too along with her sister May.
RP Sample: Maria and her sister May are heading to the woods to do some training for the Pokemon contest.
“This so exciting May,” said Maria excitedly.
“I know Maria and the best thing is we’re going together,” Said May.
Suicune's Child
05-19-2006, 01:09 AM
Sorry, not accepted. You can't have legendaries and you can't be friends of legends either. You also need to work on your history and personality.
tropicaldolphin51
05-19-2006, 01:16 AM
i edit my profile.
Suicune's Child
05-19-2006, 01:24 AM
I'll accept you but please work on your grammar some. You can start now.
xoxkris
05-19-2006, 02:12 PM
Name: Hanada Mikan
Age: 13-14
Gender: ♀ Female
Pokemon: Pikachu[Female]Chuchu , Skitty[Female] , Clampearl [Female]
Description: Has long thigh-length hair which curls and often tied in the old Japanese way with a ribbon-bell . Her hair is pink and she sometimes decorate it with small , shiny star hair ornaments . She wears a short white miniskirt made of sequin and vevlet that shows off her long tanned legs . Mikan has dangling earrings and a crystal clear locket necklace . Usually a ahndpatch will be on.
Personality: Sweet and humble , Mikan is an optimist right from the start of her coordinator journey . She possesses a cheerful personality and will retort bluntly if anybody is to offend her . Her passion is her skill of being able to communicate deeply through vision with Pokemon[Meaning she understand msot Pokemon's feelings] , since she was borned in a hosue full of them.
History: Borned in Pallet Town , her family moved to Johto when she was only 9 . After being kidnapped from Violet City,she was rescued in Ecruteak and sent to Hoenn.Her original family in Pallet Town was beside the lake.Her parents were famous,known as PokeTrainers Shawn and Leigh.Borned around Pokemon,her first Pokemon was a Pichu in Kanto,which had evolved into a Pikachu,a skitty in Hoenn and a Cleffa{which had evolved to clefable} in Johto.Her twin sister May and herself were tested by the three professors respectively and all agreed they have talents as a coordinator.Thus begisn their journey to become the champion.
Other:Mikan actually wears a different school uniform from May.It can be seen here:http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y121/cutelittlesakura/mahoraba00f.jpg
RP Sample: Mikan glanced sideways at her twin sister , May ,then slowly , fatigue wieghed down her eyelids . Yawning , the beauty and clear vision of her sister begin to fade as she took fourty winks , drowning into a deep slumber . . .
` Miiii~mi ! We are reaching there ! Come on ! `
A familiar clear voice rang into her dainty head . Shuffling her long thigh length pink hair , Mikan curled her long legs up to her stomach like a feline . ' Just a while more , Mayy-i . . . W A I T ! '
' Mimi here we are ! ' May pointed to a small island . "Mimi" was Mikan 's nickname while " Mayi" was hers . Her legs were as long as Mikan 's and every part of beauty she had was also 100% like Mikan . The only difference is their hair colour.Mikan had pink hair-she sometiems decorates it with small ,shining stars-while May had ebony black hair , naturally straight .
Mikan did a cheerleading sprint , double turn in the air and landed with split . ` YAY ! ` She hollered like an excited child in spite of her tiredness and bordedom on the ship . May did exactly the same , and landed giggling . ` First Contest , here we come !
Suicune's Child
05-20-2006, 12:30 AM
Accepted. You may start whenever you wish.
Grass King
06-01-2006, 02:51 PM
Pokemon: Blue Pikachu, Typhlosion, Feraligatr, Meganium, Noctowl and Furret.
He has 6 pokemon istead of 3. Sorry to have t point this out.
Suicune's Child
06-09-2006, 06:10 PM
Actually you're only allowed to have three. ^^' Sorry, I think I forgot my own rule for a while. :silly:
Is this still on?Cuz I want to join
Name:Cris Martin
Age: 10
Gender:Male
Pokemon:Lily(F-Treecko), Chip(M-Lapras), Trixie(F-Milotic)
Description: http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a298/shadowcris/Cris.png
Personality:He's really determinated to do what he most loves,he's very calm and nice.
History:He was born in Petalburg,his father died before he was born,at the age of six he got his first pokemon,Treecko,one day while,playing with Treecko,he found a box with contest ribbons with his dad's name on them,since that day he has always wanted to follow his dad's path and become the greates coordinator ever.
Other:none
RP Sample:
"Hey, mom do you think I would become a great coordinator?"Cris asked his mother.
"Of course, sweety, thats what your dad always wanted for you."His mom replied with a smile.
Suddenly a ring was heard.
"It must be my Pokegear."Cris said as he reached his pocket picking out his Pokegear."Hello, cris speaking!"
"It's me, Diego, how are you Cris?"His friend Diego said through the Pokegear.
"I'm fine."Cris replied.
"Have you heard the news?"Diego asked.
"Why?What happened?"Cris asked excited.
"The Coordinator Grand Challenge is comming here to Hoeen!"Diego answered.
"Really?!"Cris said with a glow on his eyes.
"Sure!And you better get ready if you want to enter."Diego said."See ya later!"
"Mom, I'm ready!"Cris said in an excited.
"Ready for what?"His mom asked .
"Ready for The Coordinator Grand Challenge!"Cris said.
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The best I came up with.
Suicune's Child
06-18-2006, 04:47 PM
You can still join but I'm afraid you're not accepted Cris. You need a better personality and your history and sample could use some work. You need to put spaces after every punctuation mark. See if you can fix up your profile and try again.
xoxkris
06-20-2006, 09:30 AM
Cris, I think your personality could be better? We seriosuly need Frost and Grassy, SC. The RP is dying!
wanlingnic
06-22-2006, 09:40 AM
Umm...are sign-up still open?:oops:
Judith Andersen (aka - Jade)
Pokemon - Dragonair
Age - 13
Height - 1.39m
Description/Personality -
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c339/wanlingnic/crystal.jpg
(No stealing! I recoloured this myself! And it took two days to revamp this sprite!)
Jade's a pokedex holder -- she captures pokemon to fill up the pokedex Professor Elm gave her, she has no interest in gyms and doesn't keep the pokemon she catches. But she does keep one, her little dratini that turned into a dragonair in her care of over a year.
When she finds out about the contests, she (well...um...) forgets about catching pokemon and immediately takes a boat over to the advanced world of Hoen to prove herself and Daggie (the dragonair)!
Jade has bluish-black hair and a love for beautiful things, she has a rather low IQ but knows very well how to capture each and every kind of pokemon she comes across. She's happy-go-lucky but tends to break down and cry when she's traumatized.
Sample r.p:
The sun shone brightly over the SS. Anne as the captain call out a warning to his crew about approaching pelliper. Jade opened her mouth in awe as the flock squawked and dashed across the sky.
The SS. Anne was a ferry that specialized in Kanto and Jhoto transportation but the captain had made an exception today. Yes, today was one of the busiest days in the ship’s life, Hoen would be having a pokemon coordinator’s contest soon, and that was the reason why Jade was onboard. To show Hoen what she and Daggie, her Dragonair, could master besides mindless battling.
Jade smiled as a second flock of birds –wingulls this time- sky danced across the big blue. It was amazing how the pokemon differed from here and Jhoto and the scenery, becoming less overtaking as the ship roared towards the Slateport harbor…
Suicune's Child
06-22-2006, 05:30 PM
They're still open and you can join. ^_^ Nice profile. You can go ahead and start posting in the RP.
wanlingnic
06-23-2006, 02:10 AM
They're still open and you can join. ^_^ Nice profile. You can go ahead and start posting in the RP.
Thanksies! :D
*hurries over to rp*
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