Deck rating

[XVIIVX]

This is my unlimited deck:

21 Energies:
1 Double Colorless (Base set)
2 Darkness energy(To get some moer dmg, quick)
4 Grass energy
6 Lightning energy
8 Pshychic energy

16 Pokemon:
4 Clefairy (Base set)
3 Clefable (Jungle)
3 Scyther (Jungle)
3 Electabuzz (Base set)
3 Mewtwo(Promo # 14) Energy abs. & Psyburn

23 Trainers
4 Super energy removal(base set)
3 energy removal(Base set)
2 Computer search(Base set)
4 Prof. Oak(Base set)
4 Scoop up(Base set)
2 Moo-Moo Milk(Neo discovery "I think")
1 Potion(Base set)
1 Gold berry(Neo disc. "I think")
1 Plus power(Base set)
1 Defender(Base set)

And this is one of my friends deck: (He's VERY lucky with the flip...)

25 Energies
25 water energy

18 pokemon
1 Articuno(Promo #22) "Diamond Dust"
2 Squirtle(Team Rocket)
1 Squirtle(Base set)
1 Dark Wartortle(Team Rocket)
1 Dark Blastoise(Team Rocket)
4 Seel(Base set)
3 Dewgong(Base set)
2 Magikarp(Base set)
1 Magikarp(Team Rocket)
2 Gyarados(Base set)

17 Trainers
1 Super energy removal(Base set)
4 Energy Removal(Base set)
1 The Rockets trap(Team Rocket)
1 Full Heal(Base set)
2 Gold berry(Neo genesis) "I think"
1 Moo-Moo Milk(Neo Genesis)
1 Pokemon Breeder(Base set)
2 Pokeball(Jungle)
1 Blaines Quiz #3(Gym Heroes)
1 Bills Teleporter(Neo genesis)
2 Gust of wind(Base set)

Someone have a thought about what I/he should change?

[Absolution]

-1 Plus power
-1 Defender
-2 Moo-Moo Milk
-1 Potion
-4 Super energy removal
-3 energy removal
-2 Darkness energy (why were these here?)
-4 Grass Energy (why?)
-2 Psychic Energy

+3 Cleffa
+2 Tyrogue
+2 Professor Elm
+4 Focus Band
+3 Gold Berry
+2 Computer Search
+2 Double Colorless Energy
+2 Recycle Energy

This isn't much of a fix, but tis a start. I'm not much for unlimited these days, but it's clear you don't have the drawing power you need. Cleffa/Elm will help get you this, CS for the search power. The Darkness/Grass are really not necessary here at all, adding more DCE's will help Clefable and Scyther. I took out the ER's and SER's because people like to play No Removal Gym a lot, some cases Ecogym, so I'd stay away from those cards w/the Energy count you have. The point of this deck is hit hard, hit fast, so Tyrogue helps there too. I've always loved Gold Berry and Focus Band, chances are with the Scoop Ups you have in there you don't need Gold Berry, but I'd run them just because. If you don't want to then add 4 Plus Powers or somethin, those can come in handy for Haymakers like this. Good luck with this deck.

[Tonu]

maybe this helps...

Pokemon: 15
3 Clefairy (Expedition? that Shining Finger one)
3 Clefable (Jungle)
3 Magmar (Fossil)
3 Electabuzz (Base Set)
3 Mewtwo (Promo #14)

Energies: 17

3 Fire
3 Lightning
3 Pshychic
4 Rainbow (TR)
4 Recycle (NG)

Trainers: 28

4 Energy Removal (Base Set)
3 Super Energy Removal (Base Set)
4 Oak (Base Set)
4 Computer Search (Base Set)
4 Item Finder (Base Set)
3 Healing Field (Neo Revolution?)
4 Plus power (Base Set)
2 Strength Charm / Gold Berry (TAvsTM / NG)

[Necrobat]

I only have one real suggestion: limit your deck to a maximum of two types. Makes sure you get the cards you need easier.