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Danyelle
07-11-2006, 10:39 PM
My RPG is about a land filled with umbreon and one pack of six, must go on a journey to save both they`re valley, and the legendaries! Each Umbreon will get a leading legendary to help them when needed most. Anyways, here is the story of the RPG!

Long ago, way down in the middle of a dark forest, lay a pack of umbreon. The umbreon were dieing out of starvation and preditorial reasons. The main thing to say was, they needed help.

But as they lay there under the tall trees, they did not know that help was on the way. This is because in that very same forest, lives a pokemon with great power that seems to brighten up everyone`s day. This pokemon is the one we call Myuu.(Myuu is Mew in japinese I beleive)

Myuu was out flying through the forest happily when all of a sudden, she heard some heavy breathing, and some crying behind a bush. When she looked, she saw the pack of umbreon.

Myuu felt very sorry for the poor pack. She knew how hard it was to survive out in the forest. Especially if your an umbreon because it is to hard to hide from hunters as they`re rings glow in the dark, showing up fairly easily.

Myuu decided she could care for these helpless beings, and created a valley. This valley was a safe place that only she and the umbreon could cross because it was invisible to all but umbreon and legendary eyes.

The valley had streams filled with magicarp, caves for all the umbreon families and lots of eevee who would evolve at the first step out of the cave when they could see. The umbreon felt very safe in the valley, and decided to stay here forever.

Ten years later, the valley was peaceful. Umbreon were hopping around all over the valley and mother umbreon were taking care of they`re eevee in the caves. Myuu was outside garding the cave in invisibility. Then all of a sudden, an umbreon who was just coming back from hunting for food, came running and yelling.

"POACHERS! THE POACHERS ARE COMING!" the umbreon yelled. All of the umbreon ran around frantically. They ran to their caves for protection. Myuu was the only one who didn`t run. She floated in the air puzzled at the way they acted. They had been so peaceful. Who would want to break the peace from a propably mere prank?

Myuu turned invisible and floated along from the path the yelling umbreon had come. When she indeed saw poachers, she cried out and floated as fast as she could back to the valley.

Then Myuu thought. They can`t get in! This is foolish of me. She floated back slowly to the valley. The umbreon were still in they`re caves. Myuu sent a telepathetic message to them that it was okay and the poachers were coming, but they couldn`t see the valley unless the had a pack of umbreon.

What Myuu didn`t know, was that they did have a pack of umbreon. The umbreon could see the valley clearer than ever and worse than that, they could see Myuu. The pack ran faster as the jeeps with poachers revved up and went faster as well.

Soon, the poachers were using the umbreon to get in and capture more umbreon.
"We will finally have the perfect pack of pokemon! We`ll make MILLIONS!" said a poacher raising his arms with excitement. One by one, umbreon were being search and destroyed.
Even Myuu was getting pummled by the dozen umbreon attacking her. She was finally taken down with a shadowball and put in a small cage. No matter how hard she tried, she couldn`t escape. So, she watched as one buy one the umbreon were taken.

Soon, only eight were left.
They were all quite young, but had a powerful ability inside them from mutation sources of the valley when they were first born because they got out of the caves to quickly. Myuu, realising there were some umbreon left, contacted them and told them to go to the secret cave to hide. All agreeing, they each ran to the cave.

This is where the RPG starts. You create your umbreon sprite,(It may be a picture)
Fill the form at the bottom, read the rules of the RPG and then soon we can start!

Name:
Gender:
Age(Human years):
Sprite/Picture:
Difference of the other umbreon(Type, colour, accessory, etc.):
Personality:
Other:

Example/My form:

Name: Danyelle
Gender: Female
Age: 11
Sprite/picture:http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/9422/lotuumbreon6oc.png
Difference: Has the type change of fire, a red and orange body and can turn into a giant ball of fire.(When angered into it.)
Personality: Hot headed at times but mostly a charming young umbreon who LOVES the boys and is flirtatious!
Other: Has wings of a dragon.


Now, for rules and regulations!

1) NO SPAM! I`m not going to tolerate it!
2)You must use at least four sentences for a post.
3)If you become unactive for a long time, I may replace you with someone else who wants to join.
4)Please use your best grammar.
5) If I reject you at first DON`T FLAME ME. The only reason you were rejected is a propable thing: You didn`t fully complete the form.


People in the RPG so far(You must have completed the form INCLUDING the picture showing what your character looks like.):
Me(Danyelle)(Female)
RocketMeowth(Alkatrez)(Male)
Grumpiguno(Sikono)(Female)
ChronoPika(Nudori)(Male)
Joltechu(Seven)(Female)
Lonewolf(Saukii)(Male)
Wanlingnic(Ludo)(Male)
Crystal_wolf(Wolfess)(Female)
The people who only need a few more things to join:(Mostly Pics)
pkmn trainer Vincent
Lotad

PLease lock this topic someone, we have all of our people. If you are in the RPG, please go to the thread and start your rpging!

RocketMeowth
07-11-2006, 11:15 PM
^^ Since I am a good friend of your I will be the first to join up.

Name: Alkatrez (Al for short)
Gender: Male
Age(Human years): 12
[B]Sprite/Picture: Alkatrez (http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/881/alkatrez20064va.png)
Difference of the other umbreon(Type, colour, accessory, etc.): He is a Dark/Psychic Pokemon (look at the picture for the rest of his differences)
Other: He can use his psychic powers on the fluff cuffs on his front feet and fly. But it takes complete consentration and it takes a lot of energy out of him.

Personality: Alkatrez isn't a very happy Umbreon. He always has his ears down and he's always is on his own. He feels like an outcast all the time. After watching his mother get taken away he has forced himself to no longr speak. Once he gets to know those around him though, he may actually say something.

Danyelle
07-11-2006, 11:29 PM
Okay! Only four more to join and we can start!

pkmn trainer Vincent
07-12-2006, 04:29 AM
Ok I'll Join

Name:Saujak
pkmn name: Slythe
Gender:Male
Age(Human years): 18
Sprite/Picture: (No Pic atm)
Difference of the other umbreon(Type, colour, accessory, etc.): The Green composition of This Umbreon was composed by his surroundings of the Hidden Forest. The Green Umbreons special feats include the ability to Jump incredibly high, and the ability to run like the wind. (Speed+Def Up)
Personality:Slythe is the speediest nad most defensive Umbron of the group. He is usually calm and collected, but when his friends are in danger, there is no better friend to have by your side than Slythe.
Other:Slythe Has 5 small leaves around it's neck, which allow it to blend with it's surroundings.

(can someone please PM me a pick of a green Umbreon so i can post it here?)

Danyelle
07-21-2006, 07:00 PM
Accepted! Now we only need three! Oh, and I`ll send you an umbreon sprite to edit in paint pkmn trainer Vincent. Or, you could just go to the sprite resource on the PE2k site and find the umbreon sprite you want.

Sleepy Sheep
07-21-2006, 07:36 PM
Name: Sikono
Gender: Female
Age(Human years): 11
Sprite/Picture: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v241/neofan/Abreon.png
Difference of the other umbreon(Type, colour, accessory, etc.): She is a pure dark type, but looks strikingly like an Absol. Oddly, the mix looks...natural.
Personality: Sikono was created by the shadows of hatred, with no family or friends to call her own. Cast aside because she was part Absol, she hates the world. Her only goal is to make all other creatures appreciate her for her being.
Other: She's an orphan.

Lotad
07-21-2006, 08:00 PM
Name: Hitoro
Gender: Male
Age(Human): 9
Sprite: None atm.
Differences: It's fur is an extremely dark shade of purple while noticeably its yellow markings were dark green, making it a Poison/Ghost Type. It has obtained the ability to Poison whenever it is touched. He wears a torn green scarf around his neck, a memento from his friend.
Personality: Utterly silent. His facial expressions are hard to pick apart, making his attitude hard to tell. The only way you can find out is if you actually listen to his voice.
Other: Hitoro was "abandoned" by his only owner when he was 2 and was able to master his facial expression by the time he was 4.

Danyelle
07-26-2006, 10:09 PM
Okay! Lets see so far(Out of everyone because I like using the green and red for accepted and not. :P Oh and nots don`t worry, most nots just don`t have a pic of they`re umbreon.)

RocketMeowth: ACCEPTED You were first to join, have the form done and have an adorable picture of Al up!

pkmn trainer Vincent: REJECTED You need to get the
picture up there man!

Grumpiguno: ACCEPTED You have a good form all filled out and an awesome sprite up!

Lotad: REJECTED You still need the picture up but when you have it up, I`ll accept you.

So, for the two who were rejected, no hard feelings I just think it would be better if everyone knew exactly what your character looks like!

theEND
07-26-2006, 10:27 PM
I guess I will join.


Name: Nudori (Nuu - Door - ee)

Gender: Male

Age(Human years): 15

Sprite/Picture: http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/8982/shedinjaumbreontg9.png

Difference of the other umbreon(Type, colour, accessory, etc.): Nudori has an excelled amount of intellect that made him capable of disabling traps and finding ways quickly around obstacles that really get annoying. Nudori was also blessed with Shedinja powers, but no better than a Shedinja and no worse. He is able to hover an inch over the ground and can use a Solar Beam from his halo. His halo can also be thrown at something like a boomerang and come back over his head.

Personality: Nudori is the kind that have a scary tone and personality. He is however very devoted to his job and unfortunately feared by many that hears of his achievements, how he completed them, and the results of what happened. Despite this fact, Nudori just wants people to like him but will agree on doing some good deeds with a reason that sounds like a "Nudori reason".

Other: At the ends of some sentences or being some sentences, Nudori usually says "ku ku ku" in an evil and scary tone.

Joltechu
07-26-2006, 10:43 PM
Name:Seven
Gender:female
Age(Human years):13
Sprite/Picture:http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/7249/01seveneq1.png (http://imageshack.us)
Difference of the other umbreon(Type, colour, accessory, etc.):She has beautiful purple rings instead of yellow,and her pink eyes show excellently in the dark,she also seems to be part Zangoose......
Personality:Seven is very kind-hearted and uaually only fights when she needs to.She sometimes gets lonely but is still a good Pokemon to have around due to her jolly personality.
Other:Seven can stand on her hind legs,but has to hunch over for balance,she is much faster when her claws are withdrawn when she's on all fours,and she runs relativly fast on two legs.Being able to stand on two legs,this lets Seven use her odd second type-fighting.Her claws help her excellently with most of her attacks.

Danyelle
07-26-2006, 10:45 PM
ChronoPika:ACCEPTED

Jolechu:Accepted(Catch) If you get that picture in before someone else does!

If the three without pictures put up so far, put up a picture before any other two join, they are accepted and we can start the RPG. But if someone else comes and completes the form before them, they shall be on a waiting list incase someone becomes completley inactive and you still want to join.

theEND
07-26-2006, 10:48 PM
So we're still waiting for other people, right? I can wait, ufu.

Joltechu
07-26-2006, 10:56 PM
oh!I got it in!just in time.:crackup:
srry I'm good now,just I'm a little..WHEE!
Your very good at making up legends and stuff Danyelle.
I would never be able to write something like that.*points waaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyy up to the legend thingy*
That's amazing.:biggrin:

Danyelle
07-26-2006, 10:59 PM
Okay, Joltechu, now your accepted. Just one more person and we roleplay!

theEND
07-26-2006, 11:01 PM
3 without pictures. Do you mean one of them is me? I have my picture in! It's this (http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/8982/shedinjaumbreontg9.png).

And no offense Joltechu, but it doesn't look like you put too much time into your Umbreon sprite, but I like it, ufu.

EDIT: Wait, nevermind. I didn't see and I am very very very sorry.

Joltechu
07-26-2006, 11:05 PM
I did,I just did'nt want her to look to....how should I put it?umm....busy!
I did'nt want her to have a tonn of stuff on her and the Zangoose markings were a little hard to copy..so..that's it.

Danyelle
07-26-2006, 11:13 PM
No, now there is only two. Lotad and pkmn trainer Vincent. The first one to it, wins!

Joltechu
07-26-2006, 11:16 PM
That's okay ChronoPika,you did'nt really say notin' bad.
Just 2 left?Ohh!The pressure's on!:devious: lol

charmeleonblaze
07-26-2006, 11:17 PM
Name:blue
Gender:male
Age:(human years)10
Sprite:An umbreon with blue rings
Difference:it has blue rings, its also type water
Personality:brave, isnt afraid of anything, never backs down from a challenge no matter what
Other:Its the fastest Umbreon.

Danyelle
07-26-2006, 11:20 PM
Name:red
Gender:male
Age:(human years)10
Sprite:A red umbreon(Currently working on)
Difference:its red, can blow fire
Personality:brave, isnt afraid of anything, never backs down from a challenge no matter what
Other:Its the fastest Umbreon.
I`m sorry, but fire is already taken by me, but you can have him as the fastest umbreon.

Joltechu
07-26-2006, 11:23 PM
hey?did'nt they post sometin' here?srry for this post ignore it. ^///^
and I want to add a second type to my Umbreon quickly,kk?

Danyelle
07-26-2006, 11:27 PM
hey?did'nt they post sometin' here?srry for this post ignore it. ^///^
and I want to add a second type to my Umbreon quickly,kk?
Before the last person anyone can make adjustments

Joltechu
07-26-2006, 11:30 PM
ok,I got it done,It's just one little sentence on "other" that tells you that she is part fighting type.

charmeleonblaze
07-26-2006, 11:33 PM
Ok, I'm not doing this. Too much confusion going on.

Joltechu
07-26-2006, 11:36 PM
why?nothing has happened!I can easily make you that sprite if I'm allowed to!(just in case Danyelle)

theEND
07-26-2006, 11:36 PM
Ok, I'm not doing this. Too much confusion going on.
It's more like you don't know how to fill out a form right. You also need to put spaces between colons and the word right after it. It's not like you have much experience with RPs, am I not right, ufu?

charmeleonblaze
07-26-2006, 11:40 PM
It's more like you don't know how to fill out a form right. You also need to put spaces between colons and the word right after it. It's not like you have much experience with RPs, am I not right, ufu?

Yes, you are right, to tell the truth.

Joltechu
07-26-2006, 11:43 PM
:susp: oh brother...then why sign-up?
Then again,I thought there was an rpg guide somewhere on this forum?
Am I right?

charmeleonblaze
07-26-2006, 11:46 PM
I only signed up because umbreons like my favorite pokemon, besides charmeleon.

Joltechu
07-26-2006, 11:49 PM
well,that's no excuse.I'm not going to pick a fight but if you don't know what it is,you should'nt sign-up.I'm done talking to this guy,where's my substitute?:eh:
*giggle*Anyway,I'll let Danyelle talk to you now...I can't think of anything else to say.

theEND
07-26-2006, 11:53 PM
well,that's no excuse.I'm not going to pick a fight but if you don't know what it is,you should'nt sign-up.I'm done talking to this guy,where's my substitute?:eh:
*giggle*Anyway,I'll let Danyelle talk to you now...I can't think of anything else to say.
I thought you were a guy.....and put spaces between the period and letter after the period.

Joltechu
07-26-2006, 11:55 PM
oops,srry ChronoPika.
You thought I was a guy?:eek:
that's wierd...well,I'm not!lol

RocketMeowth
07-27-2006, 12:30 AM
^^ I can't wait to start. I haven't role played with Al for a while now.

Joltechu
07-27-2006, 05:00 PM
ya, I can't wait either.:biggrin:

Danyelle
07-28-2006, 10:21 PM
I need to check to see whats happening so far, going to the fair today has made me completley confused, and I need to look at all the forms seeing if they are complete or not, and make sure we have enough people before I put up the real RPG in the regular RPG section.(Plus, no offense to some people but this Sign Up topic is getting a bit spammy O_o;)

Edit: We STILL need one more person! C`mon people, can`t you see a decent pokemon RPG when you go past it?! xD If no one else joins by August, I`m not going to keep this roleplay, and one of the mods can close this topic.

Joltechu
07-29-2006, 01:52 PM
I've PMed someone about it asking them if they wanted to join, but I hav'nt got an answer.....

Danyelle
07-29-2006, 05:30 PM
I've PMed someone about it asking them if they wanted to join, but I hav'nt got an answer.....
I hope they come before time is up because others have said this is a great RPG when I tried it on other forums.

Joltechu
07-29-2006, 07:23 PM
Okey dokes,I'm just still waiting for an answer, ><
ooo, hope they can join, I really wanna play this rpg!:biggrin:

Sleepy Sheep
07-29-2006, 10:15 PM
Name: Saukii (SAY-oo-key)
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Sprite/Picture: http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/8516/umbricunocu8.png
Difference of the other umbreon: Saukii can use Ice and Flying attacks along with the normal Dark ones. Also he is colored light blue and has beautiful wings.
Personality: A loner most of the time but when he needs to he works very well in a team. Saukii sees himself a little bit better than everyone else never tries to be mean.
Other: (nothing yet)

I've seen that sprite somewhere...I have reason to believe you stole it.

Joltechu
07-29-2006, 10:35 PM
That's a nice sprite. I might agree with Grumpiguno, It looks a little too great.:confused:

theEND
07-29-2006, 10:38 PM
Unfortunately, I forgot where I've seen that. The file URL is too complicated for a mere person like this new guy(he's new and has only posted in RP threads).

Joltechu
07-29-2006, 10:40 PM
So is it his ChronoPika?:eh:

theEND
07-29-2006, 10:43 PM
Doesn't look so, but if we don't have any proof then well he wins. The wings are nicely connected and it doesn't distrupt the ears or anything. It might be his, but we need zeh proof.

Joltechu
07-29-2006, 10:50 PM
Interogation time! XD
So, mr....umm,Dude! Did you honestly make that sprite??
Then again, he's not gonna tell us right off the bat is he?
lol

wanlingnic
07-30-2006, 04:58 AM
Name: Ludo Bishopfish

Gender: male

Age : 21

Sprite/Picture: http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c339/wanlingnic/manbreon.jpg (I can assure you I made this myself!)

Difference of the other umbreon:

He’s a water/flying type with the ability to soar over the waves. He has lost all his 'Dark' powers, but continues to be a help everywhere.

His likeness to a Mantine came when he was christened. The Mantines and Umbreons were at war before she was born, as the Umbreons hunted the Mantines in the river, and the Mantines struck back with fatal raids. This started the Mantine Umbreon wars in the river valley.

As a child he was weak and fragile, Manum, the Mantine God who lived in the valley gave him the power of his people and act as an ambassador to both sides and species. Now the two species have settled their differences with his intervention.

His divine intervention has given rise to her nickname 'Bishop Fish'. Like the mythical creature who predicted the end of wars and who made the sign of the cross, Ludo is respected but not revered.

But a second problem terrorizes the valley and Ludo is helpless against the poachers...

Personality: Ludo's lightly eccentric and loves to fly and sing, but he's a horrible introvert. But ever he was declared a hero by stopping the Mantine Umbreon wars, he's been slightly more open and enjoys the recognition given to him.

He does wish to help all he can and follows the teachings of Manum closely. Trustworthy and caring, Ludo is a great friend to have in times of trouble.

Other: If you're nice towards Ludo, he'll eventually drop his harsh facade and be the most warm and wonderful friend one can find.

Joltechu
07-30-2006, 05:45 AM
wow, that's good Jade.
The sprite is pretty good too, I hope Danyelle accepts you buddy!:crackup:
Because I still think that other guy didn't actually make his sprite..

Danyelle
07-30-2006, 09:31 PM
Okay, I have to make the decicion. Since we have two, I will have to even out the whole group of people who filled out the WHOLE form.

I have to consider the fact that we need an even amount of each gender. If there are to many female or two many male, it might get a little weird as I found out on other forums.(WAY TO MANY BOYS O_o;)

So, by tonight, I will have the results.

EDIT: I have decided that instead of choosing out of the female people, I`ll let one more MALE character in. It will make no one (Except the non complete form filler outers) gets left out of my RPG.

theEND
07-30-2006, 11:11 PM
Danyelle, you sound like the kind of person to like the theme of romance more since we need more girls....I'm beginning to like that part of ya.

wanlingnic
07-31-2006, 01:31 PM
I'll change my character's gender, If you really want a equality of the sexes so badly! (Anything to start this rp!)

I agree with Chrono, it seems that umbreon romance is definetly the theme for this rp! :)

Joltechu
07-31-2006, 05:03 PM
Awww, how cute! That's a great idea! Umbreon Romance.. I hope you can join Jade! :crackup:

Danyelle
07-31-2006, 08:12 PM
I'll change my character's gender, If you really want a equality of the sexes so badly!
Even if you changed your gender, we have seven members. (Including me)
We need one more female umbreon and yes, I fiind that people in my old LOTU RPG on PC, people happened to get away with romance without me even realising it because I was away xD

Joltechu
07-31-2006, 08:25 PM
But, hmmm, I don't ge this.. we have 3 girl Umbreon, and 2 guy Umbreon that have already been approved, so if we add another girl Umby, we're definatly messed up with 2 dudes and 4 dudettes. lol

Danyelle
07-31-2006, 08:56 PM
Actually, we have 4 male and 3 female. We need one female to start.

theEND
07-31-2006, 09:33 PM
Maybe with less dudes and more dudettes it'll be even more cuter. xD 2-3 guys and then girls fighting over them. At least 1 girl will be left guyless. xD

Oh yeah, if you want to hear how Nudori's voice sounds kind of like, watch this video. His voice is the yellow guy with swirl glasses in this video (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bopmG50Msds). There's also his Ku ku ku sound there.

Here's a cooler video (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GI7IZOTJyIg) of the voice.

crystal_wolf
08-01-2006, 04:18 PM
*shrug* guess ill join then, but idk if i can post images at this many posts yet:oops:

Name- Wolfess
Gender- Female
Age- 12
Sprite- http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h242/__suicune__/umbreonRPsprite.png *yes, her tail is hidden behind the wings><*
Difference- She's a Grass/Flying type with the ablility to heal forests if needed. Her moth-like wings allow her to patrol forest-lines and detect if a forest is in need of healing.
Personality- Wolfess is very kind, very calm, and is willing to help other Umbreon if they're in need.

Danyelle
08-01-2006, 09:17 PM
*shrug* guess ill join then, but idk if i can post images at this many posts yet:oops:

Name- Wolfess
Gender- Female
Age- 12
Sprite- http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h242/__suicune__/umbreonRPsprite.png *yes, her tail is hidden behind the wings><*
Difference- She's a Grass/Flying type with the ablility to heal forests if needed. Her moth-like wings allow her to patrol forest-lines and detect if a forest is in need of healing.
Personality- Wolfess is very kind, very calm, and is willing to help other Umbreon if they're in need.
Accepted! Okay, I`ll make the real thread so we can start!

wanlingnic
08-02-2006, 10:28 AM
Accepted! Okay, I`ll make the real thread so we can start!
Finally!

Where do we start?!