rate my saphire team

[Sent Reglay]

1.
Crobat @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Inner Focus
Nature:Calm

Double Team
Toxic
Mean Look
Fly

2.
Kingdra @ Salac Berry
Ability: Swift Swim
Nature: Naughty

Rain Dance
Dragonbreath
Ice Beam
Surf

3.
Camerupt @ Petaya Berry
Ability: Magma Armor
Nature: Jolly

Eruption
Rock Slide
Flamethrower
Earthquake

4.
Machamp @ Lansat Berry
Ability: Guts
Nature: Bashful

Flamethrower (what should I replace this with?)
Vital Throw
Cross Chop
Earthquake

5.
Metagross @ Leppa Berry
Ability: Clear Body
Nature: Calm

Meteor Mash
Psychic
Earthquake
Sludge Bomb

6.
Slamamence @ Starf Berry
Ability: Intimidate
Nature: Naughty

Dragon Claw
Earthquake
Aerial Ace
Crunch


Well thats my team please give rates and fixes. especially for equip items.

[celebi]

All fine but Salamence and meta would be better if:

Meta
EQ
Meteor Mash
Agility
Psychic

Sala
DD
EQ
Rock slide
AA

[Alienshroom]

Its pretty good i would teach cobat one more move that inflicts dameage

[celebi]

Its pretty good i would teach cobat one more move that inflicts dameage

Yes a sludge bomb or air cutter might be helpfull instead of double team.

[TehD00de]

Hey dude

Crobat should have Shadow Ball so it can stand a chance by picking off fragile psychic types, since it's already fast enough. (P.S. what are the statistics on Air Cutter?)
I'd also lose Fly so Sludge Bomb can still get stab, but it's more accurate and ends up a little more powerful.

I'd actually pick a different item for Kingdra if it's gonna have Swift Swim, because its speed is already super high in the rain, it just seems redundant to me. A good way to go is Leftovers with Double Team on this guy because he's only got one weakness (which is pretty tough to find) and plenty good defenses.

Try to see if you can get Rock Slide for Machamp, 'cuz flamethrower's only going to beat Steel types at this point, and you still have Earthquake; flying types are scarier.

Camerupt's solid.

Pretty much every Metagross needs Meteor Mash, Earthquake, and Shadow Ball. The last one's basically a filler; yes, I would've picked Psychic.

And it's a physical Salamence eh? Dragon Dance and Double-edge is a killer, and try to get over the fact that it hits yourself, because it's just SO powerful. Then the rest is all on taste; pick between Aerial Ace, Brick Break, and Earthquake.
A special Salamence usually goes with Fire Blast and Hydro Pump to fit weather bonuses, with Dragon Claw for stab and Crunch to eat up Shedinja.

Your team's great. All I'd do is find a few back-ups in case you change your mind, like a Hyper Beam Slaking, or a Wobbuffet; but I won't impose or anything.
Try to get your hands on some of this:
Blaziken / Hasty
@ Salac Berry
Endure, Reversal, Overheat, Rock Slide

Sceptile / Modest
@ Scope Lens
Leaf Blade, Dragon Claw, Crunch, Hidden Power (pick one)

Ninjask / Jolly
@ Bright Powder or Focus Band
Swords Dance, Silver Wind, Protect, Baton Pass

Umbreon / Bold
@ Leftovers
Mean Look, Toxic/Confuse Ray, Moonlight, Baton Pass

Peace / out

[celebi]

Hey dude

Pretty much every Metagross needs Meteor Mash, Earthquake, and Shadow Ball. The last one's basically a filler; yes, I would've picked Psychic.

And it's a physical Salamence eh? Dragon Dance and Double-edge is a killer, and try to get over the fact that it hits yourself, because it's just SO powerful. Then the rest is all on taste; pick between Aerial Ace, Brick Break, and Earthquake.
A special Salamence usually goes with Fire Blast and Hydro Pump to fit weather bonuses, with Dragon Claw for stab and Crunch to eat up Shedinja.

Your team's great. All I'd do is find a few back-ups in case you change your mind, like a Hyper Beam Slaking, or a Wobbuffet; but I won't impose or anything.
Try to get your hands on some of this:
Blaziken / Hasty
@ Salac Berry
Endure, Reversal, Overheat, Rock Slide

Sceptile / Modest
@ Leftovers
Hidden Power (water)/leaf blade/leech seed/ substitute
Ninjask / Jolly
@ Leftovers
Swords Dance, substitute, Protect, Baton Pass

Umbreon / Bold
@ Lum berry
Mean Look, Toxic, Wish, Baton Pass

Peace / out

Shadow ball on meta??? no way.Agility is a must on it for me.Double edge on Salamance??? are you insane.It will kill itself instead of the enemies.Speacial Salamance is not a good Spc. sweeper BTW.

[pokemidget]

Shadow ball on meta??? no way.Agility is a must on it for me.Double edge on Salamance??? are you insane.It will kill itself instead of the enemies.Speacial Salamance is not a good Spc. sweeper BTW.
its a good team. what levels are they?