Torn Reality Sign- Up Thread

[Lotad]

Here is the story: Torn Reality (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=20439)

Rules
1.) No flaming or bashing.
2.) No bunnying for others.
3.) No god-modding.
4.) Stay Active!
5.) All "IC:" posts are to be at least two paragraphs or eight sentences.

Information
Use "OOC:" and "IC:" to signify which you are talking in. It is helpful that the beginning of an "IC:" Post to give where you are currently located. Also, I've heard that typing a character's voice and thought's in a color different than regular stuff can be helpful. All character's must start in either Celedon, Ceurlian, Saffron, Vermillion, or Fuschia City.

Your grammar must be good. If you have to, type up your posts in Microsoft Word so you can keep your grammar and spelling right.

Character Sheet
Name: (First and Last Name)
Age: (10 to 18 please)
Gender: (Male or Female)
Appearance*: (Describe what you would skin tone, height, and the like)
Apparel*: (Clothes that you wear)
Personality*: (What is your character like? View on life?)
History*: (Give us an idea of your characters life)

Pokemon Team(Up to two Pokemon)
Species:
Name: (If different from the species)
Personality*: (What is this Pokemon like?)
History*: (Tell us about your Pokemons past.)

All *'s mean that they should contain at least five sentences.

[I'll post my character profile once there are four others up that I like.]

[MewsoBlue]

Character Sheet
Name: Isilwen Seregon
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Appearance: Isilwen has long brown hair that reaches nearly down to her waist. She never ties its back, but lets it do whatever, except when it gets in her face. Her eyes are blue, and have a tendency to stare right through people. She lightly tanned skin from long hours wandering in the outdoors. She is of medium height, somewhere around five feet, not to tall, but not short ether.
Apparel: Isilwen is usually found wearing a black T-Shirt with a lightning blue pokeball symbol on front. Below she wears her usually pair of blue jean, rarely is she found in any other kind of pants, and never shorts. On her head she wears a floppy white hat with a blue stripe around the base. She wears a green backpack stuffed with items on her back at all times, except when sleeping. Around her left wrist she wears a wide band of leather to protect it.
Personality: Isilwen has a rather interesting view of life. It’s almost as if something doesn't affect her directly, it doesn't matter. She has a great deal of trouble making friends, and even holding a decent conversation. She looks out for herself above nearly everyone else, and can be seen as selfish. However, she can make a very loyal friend once you gain her trust, not an easy feat. (Although trusting her with your life might go a little to far). She is ever so slightly superstitious, as she was taught to believe pokemon mythology.
History: Isilwen lived most of her life in Ecruteak city studying pokemon mythology and training methods from the gym leader. At the age of twelve, she left home to become a trainer, traveling through the Johto region. She defeated many gym leaders, and got all the way up to the league tournament. However, she failed in the second round, and decided to go to Kanto to work her way into the Kanto league, bringing over only two of her pokemon. She has just arrived in vermillion and couldn’t help but hears rumors of strange events in Lavander Town.

Pokemon Team
Species: Ninetales
Name: Kitsune
Personality: Kitsune is a very loyal Ninetales, and very wise. She adores Isilwen, and will ignore everyone else at times and only pay attention to her. She is as intelligent as most people, of course, if you ask Isilwen, she’s more intelligent then some. She has a tendancy to look over the situation when sent out into battle, trying to build a strategy. She’s so good at it that Isilwen rarely has to give her commands. She seems to have no problems at all with dealing with her silver coat.
History: Kitsune was the first pokemon Isilwen caught. She found her just outside Ecruteak, a small bright yellow shiny vulpix. Isilwen, having no other pokemon at the time couldn’t battle her to capture her. Instead, she worked to gain her friendship and loyalty. Her work paid off when Kitsune joined her team. She got more then a pokemon, she got a friend. Isilwen secretly believes that as a now shiny Ninetales, Kistune has more abilities then just those she uses to battle with.

Species: Espeon
Personality: Where Kitsune adores Isilwen openly, her Espeon is nearly the exact opposite. True, it is immensely loyal to her, but she seldom shows it. She remains aloof and proud, rarely openly showing adoration. She loves intimidating her opponents, staring them in the eye, a tactic she often uses on trainers as well. She is also rather obsessed with her appearance, always grooming herself.
History: The second pokemon Isilwen received, Espeon was found as an Eevee, locked in a small cage for sale in a street bazaar. Isilwen had to pay a rather high price for her, but she never regretted it. Espeon remained an Eevee for quit a while, until finally evolving at the Johto League Championships. She won the battle she evoled during, but lost in the next one to a Sneasel. Ever since that day, she has kept a hatred of Sneasels. Isilwen believes she has the power to see the future.

[Lotad]

Character Sheet
Name: Isilwen Seregon
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Appearance: Isilwen has long brown hair that reaches nearly down to her waist. She never ties its back, but lets it do whatever, except when it gets in her face. Her eyes are blue, and have a tendency to stare right through people. She has light toned skin, tanned from long hours wandering in the outdoors. She is of medium height, somewhere around five feet, not to tall, but not short ether.
Apparel: Isilwen is usually found wearing a black T-Shirt with a lightning blue pokeball symbol on front. Below she wears her usually pair of blue jean, rarely is she found in any other kind of pants, and never shorts. On her head she wears a floppy white hat with a blue stripe around the base. She wears a green backpack stuffed with items on her back at all times, except when sleeping. Around her left wrist she wears a wide band of leather to protect it.
Personality: Isilwen has a rather interesting view of life. It’s almost as if something doesn't affect her directly, it doesn't matter. She has a great deal of trouble making friends, and even holding a decent conversation. She looks out for herself above nearly everyone else, and can be seen as selfish. However, she makes a very loyal friend once you gain her trust, not an easy feat. She is ever so slightly superstitious, as she was taught to believe pokemon mythology.
History: Isilwen lived most of her life in Ecruteak city studying pokemon mythology and training methods from the gym leader. At the age of twelve, she left home to become a trainer, traveling through the Jhoto region. She defeated many gym leaders, and got all the way up to the league tournament. However, she failed in the second round, and decided to go to Kanto to work her way into the Kanto league, bringing over only two of her pokemon. She has just arrived in vermillion and couldn’t help but hears rumors of strange events in Lavander Town.

Pokemon Team
Species: Ninetales
Name: Kitsune
Personality: Kitsune is a very loyal Ninetales, and very wise. She adores Isilwen, and will ignore everyone else at times and only pay attention to her. She is as intelligent as most people, of course, if you ask Isilwen, she’s more intelligent then some. She has a tendancy to look over the situation when sent out into battle, trying to build a strategy. She’s so good at it that Isilwen rarely has to give her commands. She seems to have no problems at all with dealing with her silver coat.
History: Kitsune was the first pokemon Isilwen caught. She found her just outside Ecruteak, a small bright yellow shiny vulpix. Isilwen, having no other pokemon at the time couldn’t battle her to capture her. Instead, she worked to gain her friendship and loyalty. Her work paid off when Kitsune joined her team. She got more then a pokemon, she got a friend. Isilwen secretly believes that as a now shiny Ninetales, Kistune has more abilities then just those she uses to battle with.

Species: Espeon
Personality: Where Kitsune adores Isilwen openly, her Espeon is nearly the exact opposite. True, it is immensely loyal to her, but she seldom shows it. She remains aloof and proud, rarely openly showing adoration. She loves intimidating her opponents, staring them in the eye, a tactic she often uses on trainers as well. She is also rather obsessed with her appearance, always grooming herself.
History: The second pokemon Isilwen received, Espeon was found as an Evee, locked in a small cage for sale in a street bazaar. Isilwen had to pay a rather high price for her, but she never regretted it. Espeon remained an Evee for quit a while, until finally evolving at the Jhoto League Championships. She won the battle she evoled during, but lost in the next one to a Sneasle. Ever since that day, she has kept a hatred of Sneasles. Isilwen believes she has the power to see the future.

Okay, there are two things in red. To me, it's like your saying one thing, then you switch off to the opposite of that thing. Is her skin sullen? Lightly tanned? Tanned? Is she selfish ordoes she care for everyone else?
Now, you may notice some text in green, these are all minor spelling errors. I think I did mention in the first post that I wanted good grammar and spelling. Make sure you fix each of the mistakes before you I offically accept you.

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[MewsoBlue]

Ok, I fixed the spelling and her skin tone. Her personality's a little difficult to explain. She looks out for her own interests before most other peoples, but once you get her to trust you and accept you for a friend, she can be incredibly loyal. Haven't you met people like that?

[Barret]

Character Sheet
Name:
Barret Shino

Age:
15

Gender:
Male

Appearance:
Barret has a medium skin tone. Not tanned exactly, but not pale either. He has short brownish hair that goes to his ears. He was dark blue eyes. He is roughly 5’8”.

Apparel:
Barret wears a plain blue shirt under a brownish sweatshirt. The sweatshirt has a pocket on the front and no writing or pictures whatsoever. He wears blue jeans with a pokemon belt on it. The pokebelt has six spots for pokeballs to attach to it. For shoes, he wears white ones that are slightly dirty from use.

Personality:
Barret is quiet, usually keeping to himself. Under stress, he usually remains calm. He has an open mind about pokemon and about battling. He is a more strategic battler, one of those kids considered a ‘geek’. He is constantly being pushed to be a Pokemon Master by his dad.

History:
Barret was born in Sootopolis City. While living there, he became fascinated with water pokemon. He watched the Gym Leader battle a lot. While watching him he saw his two favorite pokemon, Milotic and Luvdisc. He knew one day he’d have those two, and he does.

Pokemon Team

http://www.serebii.net/emerald/pokemon/350.png
Species:
Milotic

Name:
Milly or Milotic.

Personality:
Being a Milotic, Milly thinks very high of herself, causing her to come off as a little snobbish. She is very calm when battling, even when loosing. She trusts Barret completely, as they’ve been together for a very long time.

History:
Milotic started out as a small Feebas. She grew up south of Sootopolis City. Barret went swimming one day when he was twelve and dove down a little ways. Milly had been playing ‘Catch the Mantine’ and was lost from her two friends. She saw Barret and got very scared, but didn’t move. Barret looked at her for a bit before swimming back up to the surface and grabbing a pokeball. He swam back down but the Feebas had left. Milly watched from a nearby patch of seaweed. Barret started swimming back up to the surface, sadly. Milly rushed out and chased him, deciding she’d like to go with him. Getting a trainer was every Feebas’s dream. Barret broke the surface of the water. He looked over and there was Feebas. ‘Do you want to come with me?’ Barret had then asked. Feebas nodded and they had been inseparable since. One day after training, Barret had given Feebas a Pokeblock he had gotten from a friend. Feebas had then begun to glow, and evolved to Milotic.

http://www.serebii.net/emerald/pokemon/370.png
Species:
Luvdisc

Name:
None other than Luvdisc.

Personality:
Luvdisc is very hyper. Because of his agility, he is also very impatient. He always has to have things happen NOW. But when the situation gets serious, so does he.

History:
Barret and his parents went on a vacation to Mossdeep City when he was 13. They stayed at a hotel by the beach, and enjoyed the scenery. On their third day there, he told my parents he wanted to go fishing. So they rented a fishing rod and he was good to go. After fishing for awhile his rod began to shake. He pulled up on it and out shot the end of his fishing rod and a Luvdisc attached. He released Milly, who was still a Feebas then, and was about to attack, when a girl nearby with an Oddish offered to assist. She had her Oddish use Sleep Powder on the Luvdisc. It immediately fell asleep. Barret took out a pokeball and opened it. The Luvdisc went inside and he caught it. Luvdisc and Barret became close friends after that, though Luvdisc’s hyper, impatient nature clashed with Barret’s calm, quiet one.

[Lotad]

Ok, I fixed the spelling and her skin tone. Her personality's a little difficult to explain. She looks out for her own interests before most other peoples, but once you get her to trust you and accept you for a friend, she can be incredibly loyal. Haven't you met people like that?
Not too many people I've met are like that, that's why I made that a error. Now that you explained, the error is dropped

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[Barret]

Edited. That was such a bad bio. ;__;

Sorry, I was too tired to write a better one.

[Lotad]

Edited. That was such a bad bio. ;__;

Sorry, I was too tired to write a better one.

It's okay. Fix it up tomorrow though. Nothing is wrong with what is there currently (besides the bio).

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