Ironshell Blastoise
05-27-2004, 01:35 PM
Post stories/poems/whatnot that you wrote about the above topic. Here are a couple I wrote last night/this morning =\
The Moon
You have been gone for so many days
I’m missing you in too many ways
Happiness gone, the loneliness stays
I watch the moon as its weeping with me
I need you now, girl why can’t you see?
When you’re not around, I feel so empty
The moon doesn’t help me, and neither does the beer
Cuz I’m having a breakdown without you here
I’m so used to turning to you when you’re near
You’re probably out where the moon doesn’t roam
I have no idea when you’re coming home
But please come back quickly, I feel so alone
Watching the moon eating bittersweet delights
Suddenly, something doesn’t feel quite right
Feels like I’m sitting in the blackest of nights
I don’t know what to believe anymore
The moon just tells me to see what’s in store
It seems I’ll be walking out the back door
Asking
I sit down and think about all that we had
I really don’t think I treated you bad
Made some mistakes, I’ll openly admit
But never did something to deserve all this ****
Smashing the memories, or trying to at least
Sitting in silence, hiding the beast
Asking myself questions I’ll probably never know
This pressure inside of me continues to grow
Things were great when we first started out
I could just hold you if you had to shout
But one day you suddenly seemed so distant
Maybe I should have just taken the hint
Was there something I couldn’t give you?
Something about me that didn’t fit you?
Was it something that I didn’t do?
Or did you get bored and need something new?
Could you not tell me that your feelings had changed?
But what’s the point in asking, you’re not listening anyway
The way you looked into my eyes
I knew you didn’t have a disguise
Somewhere down that line you met a thing deceit
Something I didn’t know that you’d happily greet
So I’m leaving you now, I’m saying goodbye
This betrayal hurts bad, I think I might cry
Maybe before if I hadn’t screwed up
Then this time I’d have better luck
But that’s no excuse for the things that you’ve done
I’m giving up now, you did it, you won
But one day you’ll miss me, when your life’s full of lies
And regret turning on me, your greatest demise
Was there something I couldn’t give you?
Something about me that didn’t fit you?
You broke my heart, you broke it in two
Broke all my trust lines when I had so few
So you go on now, leave with that guy
I wonder if you’ll know when he’s telling a lie
What can he give you that I do not have?
He’ll never be as good at making you laugh
Can he give you shivers like I do?
I know you must tell him things I already knew
Is he like me, can brighten your day?
What is it about me that turned you away?
What’s the point in asking, you’re not listening anyway
Was there something I couldn’t give you?
Something about me that didn’t fit you?
Was it something that I didn’t do?
Or did you get bored and need something new?
Could you not tell me that your feelings had changed?
But what’s the point in asking, you’re not listening anyway
The Moon
You have been gone for so many days
I’m missing you in too many ways
Happiness gone, the loneliness stays
I watch the moon as its weeping with me
I need you now, girl why can’t you see?
When you’re not around, I feel so empty
The moon doesn’t help me, and neither does the beer
Cuz I’m having a breakdown without you here
I’m so used to turning to you when you’re near
You’re probably out where the moon doesn’t roam
I have no idea when you’re coming home
But please come back quickly, I feel so alone
Watching the moon eating bittersweet delights
Suddenly, something doesn’t feel quite right
Feels like I’m sitting in the blackest of nights
I don’t know what to believe anymore
The moon just tells me to see what’s in store
It seems I’ll be walking out the back door
Asking
I sit down and think about all that we had
I really don’t think I treated you bad
Made some mistakes, I’ll openly admit
But never did something to deserve all this ****
Smashing the memories, or trying to at least
Sitting in silence, hiding the beast
Asking myself questions I’ll probably never know
This pressure inside of me continues to grow
Things were great when we first started out
I could just hold you if you had to shout
But one day you suddenly seemed so distant
Maybe I should have just taken the hint
Was there something I couldn’t give you?
Something about me that didn’t fit you?
Was it something that I didn’t do?
Or did you get bored and need something new?
Could you not tell me that your feelings had changed?
But what’s the point in asking, you’re not listening anyway
The way you looked into my eyes
I knew you didn’t have a disguise
Somewhere down that line you met a thing deceit
Something I didn’t know that you’d happily greet
So I’m leaving you now, I’m saying goodbye
This betrayal hurts bad, I think I might cry
Maybe before if I hadn’t screwed up
Then this time I’d have better luck
But that’s no excuse for the things that you’ve done
I’m giving up now, you did it, you won
But one day you’ll miss me, when your life’s full of lies
And regret turning on me, your greatest demise
Was there something I couldn’t give you?
Something about me that didn’t fit you?
You broke my heart, you broke it in two
Broke all my trust lines when I had so few
So you go on now, leave with that guy
I wonder if you’ll know when he’s telling a lie
What can he give you that I do not have?
He’ll never be as good at making you laugh
Can he give you shivers like I do?
I know you must tell him things I already knew
Is he like me, can brighten your day?
What is it about me that turned you away?
What’s the point in asking, you’re not listening anyway
Was there something I couldn’t give you?
Something about me that didn’t fit you?
Was it something that I didn’t do?
Or did you get bored and need something new?
Could you not tell me that your feelings had changed?
But what’s the point in asking, you’re not listening anyway