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Half a Dollar
07-04-2004, 04:18 AM
1. What is CW?

It is a basis of writing material. Each week, I pick a topic. A team member of one team writes something about the topic I put.

2.How do you win?

There are 2 winners. The 2 poems that I feel are greatly made, they win.

3.How much points?

2 points each week.The two winners get 2 points. The team points will be calculated, to see how much points a team got.

So, do your best. Remember, be prepared for what topic I'll have.

07-04-2004, 01:26 PM
So you pick the winner by the amount of writing they sent you or how well it was written?
Do we PM it to you?

Neo Emolga
07-04-2004, 02:55 PM
So you pick the winner by the amount of writing they sent you or how well it was written?
Do we PM it to you?

Actually, the way it worked last time was the poems and essays were posted here. Best one that week wins according to creativity, spelling/grammar and orginality. That's basically how it works.

Half a Dollar
07-04-2004, 03:02 PM


Alrighty,do your best.

Agent Orange
07-04-2004, 03:31 PM
The Song of Destruction.

Blood in pools spread around on the ground.
Bullets soaring though the town.
Awful sounds screaming in the night.
The wind tells of a deadly plight.
Screams of terror, explosions and more.


A shrieking whistling sound is heard
Everything stops, there is not a word.


A death-head soars towards the battle,
The only sound now is the noise of nearby cattle.


The mother of all explosions exclaims,
All die without a trace of pain.


War is a terrible thing,
Its the song of death, hear it sing.


Matt & Vulpix
07-04-2004, 05:34 PM
Team Trainer

The Grass will Still be Green

When all the trees have pulled their roots
When all the flowers withered like fruits
The grass will still be green

When all the skies have burned red
And all the clouds have come to shed
The grass will still be green

When mothers and daughters have screamed terrible cries
When the mother of bees is killed by little flies
The grass will still be green

When the sun will burn out
And the moon decomposes
The grass will still be green

When rainbows have shortened
The rains, they have stopped
And sugar lost its sweetness
The grass will still be green

Because if there is one thing I've learnt
It's that there is one thing you really can't hurt
The chaos ensued by the world's sickness
Will never touch this green little wickedness

The grass will always be green

07-04-2004, 06:37 PM
Well, I have attempted to write a poem about chaos. I'm not sure how well I did but thats up to you to decide.


It moves and slithers like a snake through water,
Waiting to destroy the peace and tranquility.

Full of laughter and fun,
Thinking only of itself

Ruining events and occasions,
Never stopping to think about what its done.

Full of evil fun,
Scattering, destroying.

Everyone’s worst nightmare,
Pulling the fun out of everything.

07-04-2004, 07:09 PM
Chaos' Glimpse

The Chaos shares it's destruction with everyone
It's evilness and destruction allows no fun
Love and tranquility go away
While hate and turmoil will stay

Why does Chaos have to stay this near?
I want everything nice to be dear
I don't want all of this Chaos stuff
I might look like it but I'm not that tough

Right now my purpouse is as clear as mud
It seems like my life is one big dud
There is no purpouse for the light anymore
The light had a purpouse...... before

But now there is nothing we can do or try
Chaos will come, and light will die....

07-04-2004, 07:47 PM
At the begining...there was nothing.
Only disorder existed... craving.
Each mind is a universe...
Mine is full of chaos.

Why do you insist
to wrench my mind in mist,
your darkness surrounds my face...
I'm starting to lose the pace.

Help me! Lend me a hand!
For chaos is eating my mind.
I feel it coming for me...
Are you ready to defeat it?

There's nothing that can save me now
just end with this infernal pain somehow.
Maybe one day I'll understand why
Chaos keeps destroying all my mind.

Marth..jejje, can't I write in spanish?

Neo Emolga
07-05-2004, 03:21 AM
Team Nox

Lost and Far Away Minds

I lost my two best friends today.
The pain and hatred never goes away.
They would have spent their time in a better way
If they knew there was something left that day.
My God, after all we’ve endured we’re still so behind
We’ve abandoned our brotherhood and we’ve lost our minds.

James is in the hospital now, and Freddy is out cold.
Nathan died in his sleep is what I was always told…
Craig fell and died just before the machine gun nest.
And today we laid another fifty good boys to rest…

I see the sky grow gray and the clouds shroud the sun.
I look at the fallen bodies and realize no one ever won.
I’ve seen young men buried by the digger.
All because we pointed and pulled a trigger.
We watched with our eyes as the young boys fell,
As we embarked on the one great crusade to Hell.

Dear God, where on Earth are we?
I’ve seen nothing but fire as far as I can see.
I’m one battle short of losing my humanity,
In this one vast, endless field of such futility.

Home. Home. I want to see my wife.
Before the enemy decides to take my life.
What I wouldn’t do to give her one last kiss?
What did I ever do to deserve this?

07-05-2004, 04:30 AM

It was a blur.
The heart beats again.
Music pauses on the slur.
It was the bane.

The radio ran with the beats,
with the heart racing again.
Hummings within the brain
allows one to see strange feats.

I would like to sigh again,
while my heart stops again.
It is another try,
for me to leave and die.

I cannot sleep.
My mind is in chaos.
I am now in deep,
deep within the recesses of chaos.

Who am I?
No answer.

07-05-2004, 06:07 AM
Judge Nick has been replaced by Judge Matt. I would like to ask that Matt create a new thread and write the rules in the first post. For the first week, he will be doing the same topic that Nick posted for this week. After he creates a new topic, I'll lock this thread.

Matt & Vulpix
07-05-2004, 03:04 PM
Yay, I'm the judge =) Continue posting in this thread your entries, and come next will there will be a brand new topic =)

07-05-2004, 03:18 PM

Gina pinched Tim,
And Tim pinched Sarah,
Sarah hit Lynn,
Who screamed, “Rutabaga!”

Lynn punched Mike,
Who then kicked Foss.
Foss scratched Ike,
Who yelled, “Chaos!”

Ike yelled at Matt,
Who screamed right back.
Lori ran over,
And trampled him flat.

Lori flicked Jennifer,
And Jennifer hit Sam,
Who told he was a cougher,
And didn’t like SPAM.

Nora complained,
Loud above the group,
That chaos was plain
So go jump a hoop!

Then above the din,
Came a knock on the door,
And who should come in,
But Mr. Shulor!

The children all yelled
And ran to their seats.,
‘Cause Mr. Shulor held
The teacher’s receipts!

“What’s going on here?”
He asked with a scowl.
“You all look so queer,
With eyes like owls!”

So he turned and he left,
And all the children, with sauce,
Grinned at the theft,
Of mere chaos.

Half a Dollar
07-05-2004, 04:40 PM
OOC: Matt,forget about the there,don't know why they are there....

[I]Death is singing..

Death has sung, oh
what is there to so?
We are in turmoil as we speak,
that Death shall come soon!

Chaos will spring,
Flames will surface,
oh what is there to do,
....wait till Death has come?

We separate from eachother,
we almost get killed,
oh what is there to do,
just run away? [I]

[I]Does it matter now,
does anything matter in this world,
Death has come,
we are already dead

07-05-2004, 09:36 PM
What is this, the poetry corner? o_O

07-05-2004, 10:13 PM
Chaos, prison of the damned.

Land where fire has its homes
Darkened pads where evil roams
Scorching eyes seen everywhere
Do nothing more then just stare
Land of waste, doom and cries
Full of delusion and much lies
No more hope, has this land
Where great and good simply can’t
Behold the thrown of the evil gods
Where growth of live only rots
Is this the place we awakened in
Telling us we must now win
Is this our future, our destined path
Are we meant to defeat evils wrath…

- Ruben V.