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Wario
12-25-2006, 09:26 PM
This is based off of an old comic, Raquazav69's world, with a few major changes.

1) Ray has been taken out, bringing the group down to 4
2) The first 10 or so issues differ from the original plot

Anyways, the comic is about a gang traveling through the Jhokan region, each with their own goals. Josh wants to find love, Sakura is a Coordinator, and Sani is training to save her town from the evil team storm.

Without further ado, I present, Gama's World!

-Season 1-
Issue 1: Stalker, Much? (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/untitled-3.png)
Issue 2: My name is... (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/untitled1.png)
Issue 3: Why don't I get any lines? (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/untitled2.png)
PS. Yes, I know they're very, very short. This is to try to stay closer to the original. If I feel I nned more than four panels, I will use more.

For anyone wondering about the evil campers, check out the second best comic on pe2k, Chronicles of the Hat theives by Azuamo.

Wario
12-25-2006, 09:39 PM
Cast List:

Josh: The main character, and a huge pervert.
Sakura: Josh has been stalking her for two months. She wants to be a good coordinator and looks up to Drew
Sani: A girl with a very troubling past but covers it up with a relaxed, happy-go lucky attitude.
Team Storm: What starts out as a street gang evolves into a huge, multi-billion dollar crime orginization. They seem to be after Sani
Officer Joe: Only appearing once, but he's too cool not to put on the list
Serenity: Josh's ex-girlfriend with a huge vengance. In fact she founded--no, that would be a huge spoiler

Shadow Eevee
12-25-2006, 09:45 PM
Nice comic! I love it.

Wario
12-25-2006, 09:48 PM
you shouldn't be saying that for the first issue, but I take credit where I get it.

Since its Christmas, I'm giving you a double dose, by adding two issues today!

Legendary Wolf
12-25-2006, 09:52 PM
Nice comic I liked it

Wario
12-25-2006, 09:56 PM
not to be rude or anything, but I would appreciate some constructive criticism.

Thanks anyways though.

Shadow Eevee
12-25-2006, 09:56 PM
you shouldn't be saying that for the first issue, but I take credit where I get it.

Since its Christmas, I'm giving you a double dose, by adding two issues today!

Ok, fine. I liked it.

Wario
12-26-2006, 02:40 PM
read above post

I'll be accepting guest stars, so just post your apps here(no form)

expect the third issue tomorow.

TVTMaster
12-26-2006, 02:53 PM
Hey, Gama. Nice comic, but I can't send you sprites for a while. My net's down because this stupid USB port got wrecked. I'm typing on my NEW WII's Internet Channel, but there's no Imageshack, so spriting's down. I'll work and update you later.

Wario
12-26-2006, 03:00 PM
thanks for the comment, and don't worry. Your character isn't needed until the 6th episode.

Wario
12-26-2006, 05:18 PM
I present issue, three!

Yes, it was supposed to be dry on the humor, it all comes together at the end.

Shadow Eevee
12-26-2006, 05:26 PM
I present issue, three!

Yes, it was supposed to be dry on the humor, it all comes together at the end.

I like your comic because they don't have the dream to become a pokemon master. It's new and original(the plot) dispite the fact that it's kind of short.. FOR YOU! I mean you did shops and I bet atleast a few scratches and only 4 panels? Other then that all good though.

Wario
12-26-2006, 05:44 PM
Thanks:oops:

I'll try to make them longer, how about 6-8 panels?

Shadow Eevee
12-26-2006, 05:48 PM
Thanks:oops:

I'll try to make them longer, how about 6-8 panels?

Eh good enough. I'll have to adapt to your comics because Azumao is sorda in a slump(No offense). Not to mention, you are the only one who has good comics.

Kiko
12-27-2006, 01:09 AM
Nice comic. I think it's pretty funny...Josh is like Brock gone wrong. Lol. :D

Wario
12-27-2006, 01:28 AM
Eh good enough. I'll have to adapt to your comics because Azumao is sorda in a slump(No offense). Not to mention, you are the only one who has good comics.

Nah, I still think Azuamo is better than me

TVTMaster
12-27-2006, 01:54 AM
Yay! My dad started downloading alternate USB approach routes and installation software until my wireless internet cable was recognized. Expect some sprites soon! I'll make overworlds to go with.

Wario
12-27-2006, 02:05 PM
great! It will be awesome to have you on the team again.

Calypso
12-27-2006, 02:58 PM
These are intresting, lol. I like how it is simple, though but it is a little short. Can't wait for the next issues ^^

Shadow Eevee
12-27-2006, 03:44 PM
Nah, I still think Azuamo is better than me
Yeah, you're right. Even if she is an a slump.

Wario
12-27-2006, 03:45 PM
Do you know how stupid you just sounded(no offense, hopefully)?

You just said I was better than Jenvy, and then that Jenvy is better than me:tongue:

Shadow Eevee
12-27-2006, 04:01 PM
Do you know how stupid you just sounded(no offense, hopefully)?

You just said I was better than Jenvy, and then that Jenvy is better than me:tongue:

:oops:People change. Anyway, when is the next issue comicng out?

Wario
12-27-2006, 04:02 PM
I don't know I'm a little tired from dishing out 3 issues in 1 day.

Maybe by thursday?