Nohman
07-16-2004, 04:42 AM
Hey, a while back I made this fanfic. I posted it on the old proboards pe2k and it became an instant hit, so I'll just post what I have so far in this thread. Just read it and youll follow along. I'll post a new chapter every few days. :twisted:
THE ALAQUENYA: ONSET, PART ONE
Prologue:
In the beginning, there was nothing. All was dark and black like an interminable night. Nothing stirred, and everything was an ill quiet for an unknown amount of time. Then, like an explosion in the night, a rift broke open in the darkness. Out of the void came the Turgwath. Eight of them there were. They had no physical form and were the first spirits to ever come. The first of the Turgwath was the leader and the most powerful, and the next ones out of the void became the next in rank. They were nameless for a time, until the most powerful of them named each of them in accordance to what they were basically. The most powerful deemed himself Valthaur, which meant "God Great and Terrible". The next was Eru, the next in line for power, whose name meant "Holy One". After came Galf, which meant "Great Beast". Then came Khazar, which meant "Mysterious Lord". After him came Satan, which meant "Spirit of High Rank". Ta-Jin came after Satan, which meant "Commander". Takon, who was equal in power with Ta-Jin and could've been considered Ta-Jin's twin, meant "Angelic Magnificence". Last was Pan-Kuara, which meant "Life Giver".
After they were named they took physical form. Valthaur took the form of a mighty man with sharp, long silver hair, calm blue eyes, fair skin, and two thin black wing-like protrusions from the back. Valthaur was, as before said, the leader of the Turgwath. He always made the final word in decisions. Eru took physical form next. He took the form of a man robed in white with a holy aura surrounding him. Galf took the form a great beast like something found in a fairy tale or a centaur: his mane flew golden, his eyes burned with a holy fire. After him Khazar took physical form, and became a man in a dark cloak with white, gazing eyes and blue decorative hair. When Satan took form, it wasn't as high and mighty looking as the others. Something was wrong. He was very tall, but looked angry and tired, and was bald with a grey beard. He was robed in grey and black. Then Ta-Jin and Takon transformed. Each became what looked like mutated men with thin wing skeletons and many scars on their bodies. Ta-Jin had black, spiky hair and yellow eyes. Takon had reddish-brown hair that spiked and hung down; and he had blue eyes. Pan-Kuara changed last. He became a hairy ogre-like creature in tattered clothes, but his eyes were full of kindness and wisdom. After the Turgwath took physicality, they changed their united name to Valamarth: the Master Spirits.
'Now let us make a place for life to dwell,' said Valthaur. Then a shape took form among the darkness, and became a sphere of land and fire.
'Now let us fill it with light,' said Eru. And so the sun was made, and the darkness disappeared, and the earth was set in light.
'Now let us cover it with water,' said Galf. And a great rain came and flooded the earth with water, and reflected the great light.
'Now let there be flora to cover the earth in beauty,' said Khazar. And green sprouted from the land, and the earth became beautiful.
'Now let there be spirits, life, to dwell on Earth,' said Satan. But something went wrong. The spirits were not pure; there was taint in their souls, but only a little. None of them knew what happened, but they figured that life other than the Valamarth's was not meant to be pure.
'Now let the kindreds come forth to create bodies for the spirits,' said Pan-Kuara. He, Ta-Jin, and Takon made the kindreds: birds, beasts, elves, men, dwarves, and many others. And then the Valamarth looked on their world and governed it, and the life on Earth worshipped the Valamarth.
All went well for many years, and then the strange things began. The Valamarth began to quarrel. Satan became even bitterer. Ta-Jin and Takon began to share opposite views, which lead to anger. And worst of all, the Valamarth found that Pan-Kuara had been giving holy power to mortals.
'This is not meant to be. The mortals have no means to use it!' proclaimed Ta-Jin. And Eru stated:
'So a decision must me made. Shall Pan-Kuara be given a second chance, or shall he be banished to dwell on Earth?' The Valamarth thought about this, and decided to vote. Pan-Kuara could not vote. Eru, Khazar, and Takon voted for Pan-Kuara's second chance. Valthaur, Galf, Satan, and Ta-Jin voted for his banishment.
'By the order of the Valamarth not including you, we hereby banish you from the Council of the Valamarth.'
And so the remaining seven stripped his godly power and sent him to dwell on Earth for eternity.
Then the strange became stranger. Galf began to lose his luster, and Valthaur seemed colder than usual. Eru became suspicious. He examined their spirits individually while in conversation. He found that himself, Khazar, and Takon had pure spirits. Valthaur, Galf, Satan, and Ta-Jin had an odd clouding in their souls. Satan's was strongest, and it was feeding the souls of the other three.
'So Satan is the cause of this.'
Eru rose and questioned Satan about the things that have been going on.
'What is this darkness in your soul? Either my senses are deceiving me, or there is sorcery going on here.'
And Satan answered:
'There is nothing wrong...maybe it is you that is wrong.' Eru saw a glint in Satan's eye as he said this. Eru's temper got out of control and he grabbed Satan and shook him like a wild man.
'YOU ARE THE CAUSE OF THIS! I have seen you whispering the others, trying to corrupt them with your lies! By what means are you deceiving your own kind?! Answer me, or I will show you the meaning of vengeance!'
Eru was illuminated in a bright light as flashes of lightning struck down near his feet. Satan fell and tried to crawl away from Eru's wrath. Eru's hand shot out and grabbed a bolt of lightning, and was about to smite Satan with it when Valthaur, Galf, and Ta-Jin stood in his way. Khazar and Takon backed up Eru. The three corrupted ones spoke in unison.
'It is you that is wrong, Eru. Satan has been doing nothing but helping. The Valamarth are split because of your actions. This alliance is henceforth broken.'
Satan and the three corrupted ones stepped back and vanished.
Eru spoke.
'So it is happened. The Valamarth are split because of Satan, the Traitorous Lucifer's, deception. We will have to run Earth on our own, my friends. This force that Satan is using...it is evil.'
The three pure ones then filled the dark emptiness with light and named it Heaven.
'All that are pure of heart will come to this place when death has taken them, to live in the Halls of the Good Valamarth.'
Meanwhile, the four Evil Valamarth made their own resides among the cosmos. Satan went to the center of Earth and created Gehenna, the place of evil and fire, Hell. Galf went with him. Ta-Jin went to Earth's surface in an unknown area and started to create many evil things. Valthaur made a place of voices, shadows, and death even worse than Hell which none dared to name for fear of being cursed. The four Evil Valamarth then combined their power and shut out the light on Earth, but only by half. The light was day, and the new darkness was night. The day and night clashed and one gained control over the other every twelve hours.
Galf and Valthaur had changed. Galf had lost his majesty and had turned into a terrible beast; smoke streamed from his eyes. He had become something so evil and beastly that it cannot be described. As for Valthaur, he was still the most powerful Valamarth, but he was Satan's puppet. And a minor change, his eyes had gone from blue to red.
Things went quietly but eerily on for a good spell of years. Then the killings began. Demons were sighted, mutated spirits of evil coming out of Hell. Eru said that he had predicted it...
'The war for Earth has begun.'
To be continued...
THE ALAQUENYA: ONSET, PART ONE
Prologue:
In the beginning, there was nothing. All was dark and black like an interminable night. Nothing stirred, and everything was an ill quiet for an unknown amount of time. Then, like an explosion in the night, a rift broke open in the darkness. Out of the void came the Turgwath. Eight of them there were. They had no physical form and were the first spirits to ever come. The first of the Turgwath was the leader and the most powerful, and the next ones out of the void became the next in rank. They were nameless for a time, until the most powerful of them named each of them in accordance to what they were basically. The most powerful deemed himself Valthaur, which meant "God Great and Terrible". The next was Eru, the next in line for power, whose name meant "Holy One". After came Galf, which meant "Great Beast". Then came Khazar, which meant "Mysterious Lord". After him came Satan, which meant "Spirit of High Rank". Ta-Jin came after Satan, which meant "Commander". Takon, who was equal in power with Ta-Jin and could've been considered Ta-Jin's twin, meant "Angelic Magnificence". Last was Pan-Kuara, which meant "Life Giver".
After they were named they took physical form. Valthaur took the form of a mighty man with sharp, long silver hair, calm blue eyes, fair skin, and two thin black wing-like protrusions from the back. Valthaur was, as before said, the leader of the Turgwath. He always made the final word in decisions. Eru took physical form next. He took the form of a man robed in white with a holy aura surrounding him. Galf took the form a great beast like something found in a fairy tale or a centaur: his mane flew golden, his eyes burned with a holy fire. After him Khazar took physical form, and became a man in a dark cloak with white, gazing eyes and blue decorative hair. When Satan took form, it wasn't as high and mighty looking as the others. Something was wrong. He was very tall, but looked angry and tired, and was bald with a grey beard. He was robed in grey and black. Then Ta-Jin and Takon transformed. Each became what looked like mutated men with thin wing skeletons and many scars on their bodies. Ta-Jin had black, spiky hair and yellow eyes. Takon had reddish-brown hair that spiked and hung down; and he had blue eyes. Pan-Kuara changed last. He became a hairy ogre-like creature in tattered clothes, but his eyes were full of kindness and wisdom. After the Turgwath took physicality, they changed their united name to Valamarth: the Master Spirits.
'Now let us make a place for life to dwell,' said Valthaur. Then a shape took form among the darkness, and became a sphere of land and fire.
'Now let us fill it with light,' said Eru. And so the sun was made, and the darkness disappeared, and the earth was set in light.
'Now let us cover it with water,' said Galf. And a great rain came and flooded the earth with water, and reflected the great light.
'Now let there be flora to cover the earth in beauty,' said Khazar. And green sprouted from the land, and the earth became beautiful.
'Now let there be spirits, life, to dwell on Earth,' said Satan. But something went wrong. The spirits were not pure; there was taint in their souls, but only a little. None of them knew what happened, but they figured that life other than the Valamarth's was not meant to be pure.
'Now let the kindreds come forth to create bodies for the spirits,' said Pan-Kuara. He, Ta-Jin, and Takon made the kindreds: birds, beasts, elves, men, dwarves, and many others. And then the Valamarth looked on their world and governed it, and the life on Earth worshipped the Valamarth.
All went well for many years, and then the strange things began. The Valamarth began to quarrel. Satan became even bitterer. Ta-Jin and Takon began to share opposite views, which lead to anger. And worst of all, the Valamarth found that Pan-Kuara had been giving holy power to mortals.
'This is not meant to be. The mortals have no means to use it!' proclaimed Ta-Jin. And Eru stated:
'So a decision must me made. Shall Pan-Kuara be given a second chance, or shall he be banished to dwell on Earth?' The Valamarth thought about this, and decided to vote. Pan-Kuara could not vote. Eru, Khazar, and Takon voted for Pan-Kuara's second chance. Valthaur, Galf, Satan, and Ta-Jin voted for his banishment.
'By the order of the Valamarth not including you, we hereby banish you from the Council of the Valamarth.'
And so the remaining seven stripped his godly power and sent him to dwell on Earth for eternity.
Then the strange became stranger. Galf began to lose his luster, and Valthaur seemed colder than usual. Eru became suspicious. He examined their spirits individually while in conversation. He found that himself, Khazar, and Takon had pure spirits. Valthaur, Galf, Satan, and Ta-Jin had an odd clouding in their souls. Satan's was strongest, and it was feeding the souls of the other three.
'So Satan is the cause of this.'
Eru rose and questioned Satan about the things that have been going on.
'What is this darkness in your soul? Either my senses are deceiving me, or there is sorcery going on here.'
And Satan answered:
'There is nothing wrong...maybe it is you that is wrong.' Eru saw a glint in Satan's eye as he said this. Eru's temper got out of control and he grabbed Satan and shook him like a wild man.
'YOU ARE THE CAUSE OF THIS! I have seen you whispering the others, trying to corrupt them with your lies! By what means are you deceiving your own kind?! Answer me, or I will show you the meaning of vengeance!'
Eru was illuminated in a bright light as flashes of lightning struck down near his feet. Satan fell and tried to crawl away from Eru's wrath. Eru's hand shot out and grabbed a bolt of lightning, and was about to smite Satan with it when Valthaur, Galf, and Ta-Jin stood in his way. Khazar and Takon backed up Eru. The three corrupted ones spoke in unison.
'It is you that is wrong, Eru. Satan has been doing nothing but helping. The Valamarth are split because of your actions. This alliance is henceforth broken.'
Satan and the three corrupted ones stepped back and vanished.
Eru spoke.
'So it is happened. The Valamarth are split because of Satan, the Traitorous Lucifer's, deception. We will have to run Earth on our own, my friends. This force that Satan is using...it is evil.'
The three pure ones then filled the dark emptiness with light and named it Heaven.
'All that are pure of heart will come to this place when death has taken them, to live in the Halls of the Good Valamarth.'
Meanwhile, the four Evil Valamarth made their own resides among the cosmos. Satan went to the center of Earth and created Gehenna, the place of evil and fire, Hell. Galf went with him. Ta-Jin went to Earth's surface in an unknown area and started to create many evil things. Valthaur made a place of voices, shadows, and death even worse than Hell which none dared to name for fear of being cursed. The four Evil Valamarth then combined their power and shut out the light on Earth, but only by half. The light was day, and the new darkness was night. The day and night clashed and one gained control over the other every twelve hours.
Galf and Valthaur had changed. Galf had lost his majesty and had turned into a terrible beast; smoke streamed from his eyes. He had become something so evil and beastly that it cannot be described. As for Valthaur, he was still the most powerful Valamarth, but he was Satan's puppet. And a minor change, his eyes had gone from blue to red.
Things went quietly but eerily on for a good spell of years. Then the killings began. Demons were sighted, mutated spirits of evil coming out of Hell. Eru said that he had predicted it...
'The war for Earth has begun.'
To be continued...