Ideas and Premises

[Jack of Clovers]

Share your ideas for possible Fanfic stories here. We'll let you know if it's a good idea, an overused idea, or simply a bad idea.

Before you commit to a thread, post your Fanfic Premise here for some helpful feedback on the idea. Perhaps you'll even draw in a reader or two.

[Blue-]

Heres my idea, don't steal it. ._. It's copyrighted. ©Kelly or Snowball Sunday.

It's about a girl who was born into a rich and beautiful family. The family is very vain and arrogant. Anyway, the head of the family and his wife had many children, mostly daughters, and they were starting to get too old to have more. So they decided to have one more, the very last of the line. They have high expectations for her, but when she is born, she turns out to be ugly. But, she is very smart and kind. Unfortunately, the family doesn't care for these aspects of her personality, and shun her. Even the village she lives in shuns her. The girl's only escape is a small meadow outside of the village, filled with wildlife, plants, and magic.



I'll post more later, but I'm tired. This is a Pokemon fan-fiction, but it has little to do with Pokemon in the begginning. (Ack! Spelling!)

[Sceptile Frost]

Snowball, you can't really copyright ideas. Mind you, if someone is blatantly copying...

Anyway...

Here's my idea that I'm executing during school, stealing minutes of time every class:


It has been nearly three hundred years since the Hackley Empire, then under the banner of Team Nebula fell the giant nation of the United States at the Battle of Cheyenne, May 21st, 2059. The years have passed quickly, and the arms of the Hackley Empire have stretched throughout the reaches of the solar system. Cities line the coast and reach towards orbiting space stations. The moon is now inhabited with 68 lunar complexes.

Enter Horizon Complex, consisting of fifteen wards, the sixteenth upon its way. Enter Adam Jefferson Young, apprentice to Gravitational Transistions Specialist Doctor James W. Allen. Allen is, in fact, a recruiter for the rebellion and has just proposed Adam traveling to the Farside Rebel Base near Borealis Complex. Adam takes the opportunity, meets Rebel Operative Lindsey O'Brien (alias Jessica Dorado) and arrives at Borealis. After the meeting, he is thrust into a revolution spanning the system, its fingerings even clutching the nearest system such as Alpha Centauri.

Enter 'Revolution'. Coming July 4th, 2007.

THE REVOLUTION.

IT BEGINS.

[ze_gobou]

Is it a Pokémon fanfic or not ?

[Deathspector]

Snowball – Well, since this thread is made for giving advice, I'm just warning you that I have seen plenty of Fanfictions about a child of a rich family, who is shuned because of how he/she looks, or thinks. However, I also think that it's one of the better of the "overused" ideas, and therefore say go for it. But remember, write it as originally as possible. With stories about themes that are common, it's always best not to even take ideas from another writer. But some people (like me) gain more expereince from doing so, so I can't say much on that subject. Anyway, I'll be looking forward for that Fiction. You may have a reader already.

Frosty – You do like your Science-Fiction, don't you? And you do like putting Pokémon into the real world (litterly)? But you're an expert at both of those fields, so I hope to see yet another story from the great Frosty...

Ze Gobou – I'm guessing so, but I'm not one hundred percent sure. But as my comment shows, I certain believe so.



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Now for my own story idea. I hope to get a lot of feedback on this, so even if you don't intend on reading this, I'd like it a lot if you'd pop in a comment; I'll give you cookies!

Anyway, those of you who have read my previous works, know that I focus very much on my description, and consider it as one of the most important aspects of my writing. But I've decided to give another style a go, and see how it works. A sudden remembrance of Neo's MD Fanfiction made me want to write something about a Pokémon, and all form the Pokémon's point of view. But I didn't want to do anything to do with MD, so I decided to do something about a Pokémon who is captured, and what he feels. But I didn't want the cliched evil or unnaturaly good Trainer. And so, I decided to use a Trainer who tried to be good, but had many faults.

Now, Azack, the Mightyena is captured when he goes to find his sister, Alyam in Viridian Forest, but never actually finds Alyam. He is captured, and travels around the world with Arthur Fieldhouse, and becomes a rather strong Pokémon (all this part is not explained in the story in any way except references to "that battle in Cerulean").

And that's as far as I've gone so far. I till need to work in some sort of dillema, and have Azack solve it. Now, as I've mentioned before, this will not be descriptive, but very character driven. While it will delve deep into the thoughts of a Mightyena, and may get dark and emotional, I hope for this to be a lot more light-hearted than Betrayal, Mithrial, Dicovery, or any of my One-shots.

Comments? Crits? Say what you think.

Azeon

[Sceptile Frost]

Is it a Pokémon fanfic or not ?

Well, some what. Adam used to live in Terran Lowell, a portion of Mars that is terraformed, and there was a league there. But, it got shut down...

As for the real world... it makes so much sense with the regions all very close versions of Japan. Plus, there aren't really any science fiction things at all...

DS: Nice idea. Not sure what I can do to help, but... the PPOV is sort of dead now, minus MD, which really shouldn't count because its different.

[Deathspector]

Well that's the whole point. I want to bring it back in my own special way. I don't really need help (though any help would be appreciated, especially a banner *gets killed for obvious hint*), but comments on whether it's good or bad...

DS

[Kaze]

That sounds like an interesting fic, but I'm unsure of how I could help as of yet. Not all Pokemon POV stories are dead. *pokes Shadow Mist and Shadow Sky with a scowl* Then again, I've probably been forgotten or never heard of, but I'm fine with that since I'm used to it. ^_^;;

I'm in a Latiosful (it's a word now) mood. I don't know... I thought up some kind of a story involving dragon Pokemon, namely the Lati's. Here's the basis of the plot, kinda:

Her brother died long ago, but Latias learns to move on, joining a rag-tack group of Dragon-type Pokemon in order to survive. There, she meets several interesting creatures, including Storm the reserved Flygon, Ray the outspoken Shelgon, and Zephyros, a Latios that reminds her so much of her brother... She knows that her brother is watching over her every day, keeping her safe and giving her hope in order for her to stay alive.

However, Latios realizes that he has his own battles to fight in the spiritual realm. He must turn his attention to the problems at hand, leaving his sister to fend for herself...

I have a ton of crap I need to add to this; anyone who wants to help out can PM me.

[Draconic_Espeon]

Sceptile Frost: Not exactly my cup of tea, so to speak, but it definitely looks as though it'd be interesting. I might read it, anyway. ^^

Deathspecter: I like that idea. I really don't think I've seen it used before, but it'd make for a good fanfic. I can't really say that I have any ideas for it, though.

Kaze: Yay, dragons... And the return of Ray. XD I'll help in any way I can, and I definitely want to read it. I loved that movie.

M'kay, a couple ideas of my own. None of them are very far in production, but I want to see what people think. Two total.

1) Unnamed as of yet: An 'inserting Pokemon into the real world' fic. It's about a boy living in a sleepy town in Wyoming that uncovers a scientific research facility doing testing on children. Basically, they're trying to find out what defines personality, a person's soul, if you will. They discover a way to seperate a portion of the soul from the body itself, in the shape of a Pokemon. The basic idea comes from His Dark Materials by Phillip Pullman, although I intend upon changing it quite a bit from that.

2) Dainen: Land of Dragons: Thirty years ago, a new region was founded, named Dainen. It is simply a continent of two main islands, but holds new Pokemon unseen before now, many of them draconic in their looks. A Pokemon League has just been established, and four young trainers in the small town of Minivy are ready to be among the first to traverse the region and battle this new league. A journey fic, basically. New region, with some new Pokemon, and a new evil Team as well. I haven't gotten very far on the plot yet, but I've got the whole region plotted and some new Pokemon created. A lot of the new Pokemon, as suggested above, are dragon in either type or features.

Opinions are appreciated. ^^

[Kaze]

Kaze: Yay, dragons... And the return of Ray. XD I'll help in any way I can, and I definitely want to read it. I loved that movie.

Yeah... He doesn't die in the second page for this one. XD

1) Unnamed as of yet: An 'inserting Pokemon into the real world' fic. It's about a boy living in a sleepy town in Wyoming that uncovers a scientific research facility doing testing on children. Basically, they're trying to find out what defines personality, a person's soul, if you will. They discover a way to seperate a portion of the soul from the body itself, in the shape of a Pokemon. The basic idea comes from His Dark Materials by Phillip Pullman, although I intend upon changing it quite a bit from that.

So, the Pokemon are incarnations of the children's souls? Wow. o_O That looks like it'll be awesome.

2) Dainen: Land of Dragons: Thirty years ago, a new region was founded, named Dainen. It is simply a continent of two main islands, but holds new Pokemon unseen before now, many of them draconic in their looks. A Pokemon League has just been established, and four young trainers in the small town of Minivy are ready to be among the first to traverse the region and battle this new league. A journey fic, basically. New region, with some new Pokemon, and a new evil Team as well. I haven't gotten very far on the plot yet, but I've got the whole region plotted and some new Pokemon created. A lot of the new Pokemon, as suggested above, are dragon in either type or features.

Draaaagooonnns! XD You're obviously fond of them. :tongue: Anyway, this could be nice, if you added enough twists and crap into it other than the new region. Otherwise it would be just like someone writing the storyline of a game, only without the game. I'm sure you wouldn't do that, though; you're great with ideas.

[ze_gobou]

1) Unnamed as of yet: An 'inserting Pokemon into the real world' fic. It's about a boy living in a sleepy town in Wyoming that uncovers a scientific research facility doing testing on children. Basically, they're trying to find out what defines personality, a person's soul, if you will. They discover a way to seperate a portion of the soul from the body itself, in the shape of a Pokemon. The basic idea comes from His Dark Materials by Phillip Pullman, although I intend upon changing it quite a bit from that.

Pokemon daemons ? I find this kinda far fetched. But why not ?

I personnally had a more clichéd idea. A few days ago I posted it on another thread but it seems like I should have posted it here ^^ And my idea changed a little.

It would be a story about Kyogre, Groudon and Rayquaza.
The first part takes place in the past, with no humans, only Pokemon. Kyogre and Groudon are battling, and Rayquaza stops the battle and saves the world. To make the fic deeper, I'll try to involve non-legendary Pokemon who are not powerful enough to do anything, they can just watch the world being destroyed by the titans. The reason why I haven't started writing yet is that I can't imagine these Pokemon characters.

The second part takes place in the present (present of the anime and games). It is, of course, about Kyogre and Groudon battling again, but this time it's Team Rocket who tries to catch them in order to rule the world, but they fail, and the titans "wake up", and they fight again, and they unintentionally begin to destroy cities... and at the end, Rayquaza comes and beats the titans, but Team Rocket tries to catch Rayquaza. I think I'll involve human characters (I thought about GymLeader Winona). Of course, the story would take place in Hoenn.

The third part would take place in the future, in a future where there wouldn't be many wild pokemon left (and almost no wild places), there would be many towns etc.
Kyogre and Groudon battle again (do I need to say it ?), but this time it's because of a wild Pokemon (he wakes them up unintentionally but I don't really know how, for the moment). The humans easily manage to catch the titans with Master Balls, but it would be too easy to finish the story like that... so i got the idea of some wild pokemon stealing the balls, and setting the titans free in order to have the human civilisation destroyed... Kyogre and Groudon, of course, go out of control, and that's when Rayquaza comes... to save the world (how did you guess what I was gonna say ?). Rayquaza beats the titans, but then he realises the wild Pokemon are really threatened by the humans, and he starts destroying towns as well, until... well, I don't know how it would happen... until humans understand that it was a mistake to build everywhere, destroying the nature where pokemon live.

*sigh* It was long to type it all... Sorry for the mistakes I must have made, English's not my mother tongue.

In my fic, Kyogre and Groudon aren't sentient, they are like machines (but they obey nobody whereas a machines does) but Rayquaza is sentient.

Could you please comment on this idea, tell me if it's clichéd, what I should change, or help me with the things I said I didn't know ? Thank you in advance.

[Deathspector]

Unnamed as of yet: An 'inserting Pokemon into the real world' fic. It's about a boy living in a sleepy town in Wyoming that uncovers a scientific research facility doing testing on children. Basically, they're trying to find out what defines personality, a person's soul, if you will. They discover a way to seperate a portion of the soul from the body itself, in the shape of a Pokemon. The basic idea comes from His Dark Materials by Phillip Pullman, although I intend upon changing it quite a bit from that.

I like it. Probably becaue I like His Dark Materials, and Phillip Pullman on the whole. But you could face some serious problems, because merging ideas is sometimes dificult. I once attempted to make a Hary Potter-Pokémon fic, but it failed miserably. Why? Well, because you have to follow the rules of both ideas, and that will seriously limit your imagination. In the end you will find something that is almost exactly like one of the two ideas. But if you're going no further than the idea of the daemons, then you have a very good fic in process.

I'd comment on your other fic, but Trainer fics aren't really my kind of thing, and I don't want to say something that will make you chaneg your idea abpout writing it.

Her brother died long ago, but Latias learns to move on, joining a rag-tack group of Dragon-type Pokemon in order to survive. There, she meets several interesting creatures, including Storm the reserved Flygon, Ray the outspoken Shelgon, and Zephyros, a Latios that reminds her so much of her brother... She knows that her brother is watching over her every day, keeping her safe and giving her hope in order for her to stay alive.

However, Latios realizes that he has his own battles to fight in the spiritual realm. He must turn his attention to the problems at hand, leaving his sister to fend for herself...

Yay, a fello Pokémon point of view fiction. yeah, I forgot about Shadow Mist and Shadw Sky...XD. But what I see for my fic is somewhat different. Anyway, I like your idea, but make sure you mae the Latis less powerful than they actually are, or else they could completely raze down anything they wanted. Good luck.

Ze_Gobou...meh, I've lost my inspiration. I'll comment on yours a little later.

DS

[Draconic_Espeon]

Yes, they are Pokemon Daemons, which I interpretted from the books as being incarnations of the children's souls. Only, unlike Phillip Pullman's books, when they are young, it's form doesn't change at all. They stay the same, but have the capacity to evolve as the child ages, depending upo how they mature. In example, just because you are born with a Charmander doesn't mean it will evolve into a Charizard, but it can. Of course, no stones, happiness, ect. is required to evolve. They just do spontaneously, if at all.

Also, there are other differences from the books. They can use various moves, but they only work against other Pokemon. You also can't touch them. Only other Pokemon, or their owner, can. Really, though, it's more a Pokemon fanfic than anything, with some basic ideas thrown in from His Dark Materials and Maximum Ride. (The whole scientific laboratory thing... There's no difference in the children other than that they have Pokemon daemons.) I'll be putting in Pokeballs too, but they work very differently from the ones we know of, and have a somewhat more malignant purpose.

About the other one... I've only done basic work on it. I've got a map and several Pokemon made, but next to nothing plot-wise. -.-

@ ze_gobou: It may be a little... Much. Your best bet, in my opinion, would be sticking with the idea of the three you can best do and put the most effort into, and do it alone. It'd get boring for readers, with basically the same thing happening one after another. I'd suggest the last one. Still, the idea's not too cliched. It'd be an interesting work, that's for sure.

[Professor Geoffrey]

After my first official fanfic (my first one stunk:tongue:), PokeWar Episode I Shadow vs. Mirage, RP -> Fanfic, Redux/Remix, I will make another one called PokeWars Episode II Rowan's Army Redux/Remix RP -> Fanfic. For the rest of the series, I'm thinking of these:

PokeWars Episode III Revenge of the Rocket
PokeWars Episode IV A new Professor
PokeWars Episode V The Rockets Strike back
PokeWars Episode VI The Return of the Professor

PokeWars I (still working on) is sorta like Star Wars. The first one is about the Shadow Pokemon Army and the Mirage Pokemon Army.
PokeWars II is the story of Rowan's turn to the dark side, and secretly makes a Raichu army.
PokeWars III+ are stories that are yet to be confirmed.


I'm thinking of past PokeWars VI, these titles:

Fyre Spin
Fyre Blast
Sacred Fyre

Fyre Spin: Basically, Fyre is darkness and Watyr is light. But in this story, Lapras and co. learn to trust Fyre.
Fyre Blast: Lapras and co. have been kicked out of the Fyre realm. What will happen next?
Sacred Fyre: *Unconfirmed*

Beyond the Fyre and Watyr stories, I will think about after episode VI of PokeWars.

[ze_gobou]

@ ze_gobou: It may be a little... Much. Your best bet, in my opinion, would be sticking with the idea of the three you can best do and put the most effort into, and do it alone. It'd get boring for readers, with basically the same thing happening one after another. I'd suggest the last one. Still, the idea's not too cliched. It'd be an interesting work, that's for sure.


I agree with you, I thought about it just after having posted that message : only write the third part. I got writer's block about the characters of the first part and I can't get rid of that block. I would like to give it up but with only two parts it would make no sense (don't ask me why I think so, I just do). The third part is the best idea of the three, but the second part is the basic idea I had more than a year ago, and I had built everything on it in order not to make it too clichéd. I don't wanna give it up, but I tried to plan the plot and I cannot. I already wrote this second part, a year ago, and I threw it in the bin cause I found it too clichéd, at the time it looked like the Emerald version plot (with team Rocket instead of the two teams) and it was awfully written. Now I wish I hadn't thrown it because it would have been useful (in order to start with something instead of nothing). I just don't know what I'm gonna do.

But thank you for your help ^^

[Ryouseiken]

Nothing too exciting on my part. Just two fanfic ideas going through and/or going to be attempted at. One is simply a Grovyle/Combusken fanfic which takes place..hm..I couldn't figure out where when I started to randomly write it, it takes place on their way to the Battle Palace in the 'Battle Frontier' Arc. I honestly don't know how I started writing this, but heh...*shrugs*

As for the second idea, it was kind of turning my whole URPG Stories into one big fanfic, as in the travels of my character Miles Fallar, along with his trusty Treecko. XP Ya see, in the future if he WAS in the anime, I imagined him sort of like Steven, a champion, and has one of the strongest teams around. Of course, he has to start somewhere, but eventually he'll have his signature three Pokemon. (Grovyle, and there's a HUGE hint for who the other two are in my sig..XP) No worries, I won't be uber powerful in this fanfic, my character that is, he will lose to Ash...ironic much? XD

[Blue-]

Nothing too exciting on my part. Just two fanfic ideas going through and/or going to be attempted at. One is simply a Grovyle/Combusken fanfic which takes place..hm..I couldn't figure out where when I started to randomly write it, it takes place on their way to the Battle Palace in the 'Battle Frontier' Arc. I honestly don't know how I started writing this, but heh...*shrugs*

As for the second idea, it was kind of turning my whole URPG Stories into one big fanfic, as in the travels of my character Miles Fallar, along with his trusty Treecko. XP Ya see, in the future if he WAS in the anime, I imagined him sort of like Steven, a champion, and has one of the strongest teams around. Of course, he has to start somewhere, but eventually he'll have his signature three Pokemon. (Grovyle, and there's a HUGE hint for who the other two are in my sig..XP) No worries, I won't be uber powerful in this fanfic, my character that is, he will lose to Ash...ironic much? XD
Yay! Ryou, it's been forever since you've wrote a story! :3 Glad to see you back.

I'd also enjoy reading about Miles again. I think this is a great idea. ^^

[Ryouseiken]

Yeah, I'm sorry for leaving so abruptly. Somehow this keeps happening to me. =( But I'll try and be on more often, my Poke-Fandom is back and stronger then evaaa. :cool:

[Blue-]

Yeah, I'm sorry for leaving so abruptly. Somehow this keeps happening to me. =( But I'll try and be on more often, my Poke-Fandom is back and stronger then evaaa. :cool:
Yay! That means more fan fiction to read... :D

[Orange_Flaaffy]

I would like to give writing a Choose Your Own Adventure pokemon fic a try if anyone would be intrested it reading one by me :). It may take a little while becuase I would like to finish most of the endings before I would post any of it but..When I was little I read alot of them, my favorites were the Goosebumps ones. I'd like to try one as a comdey fic :)

[PokéJungle]

Right now I thought up a new idea. Ok, ready?

It's like Bram Stroker on DRUGS! Zubat takes the place of dracula, then there's Chikorita for the whip-weilding Bellmount clan member. With maybe a Butterfree for Frankenstien's bride.

Haha, kidding folks.

*********

But honestly, I would actually like to write a new fic based on shiny Pokemon. Trainers always love to get them (IRL in the games), but I want to focus on the social implications between Pokemon. Obviously skin color has made social differences in humans, so what's not to say that Pokemon wouldn't have similar thoughts.

Outcast and alone, I could document the life of a shiny Pokemon who was never wanted by his own species. And if he was captured, it's all too obvious that he'd be held up as just a trophy for whoever caught him. Always judged by his differences, and not who he was.

****

There's a sappy plot line I could get around to fleshing out if I had time.

[Orange_Flaaffy]

Right now I thought up a new idea. Ok, ready?

It's like Bram Stroker on DRUGS! Zubat takes the place of dracula, then there's Chikorita for the whip-weilding Bellmount clan member. With maybe a Butterfree for Frankenstien's bride.

Haha, kidding folks.

Um..I hope so, becuase the whole Zubat=vampire race thing has been *coughFablecough* done just a little *coughmystoryI havebeenputtingtogetherforthelastfouryears* bit:wink:
Not counting all the half done really bad Ash becomes a vampire stories with Zubat details in them:rolleyes:

[PokéJungle]

Um..I hope so, becuase the whole Zubat=vampire race thing has been *coughFablecough* done just a little *coughmystoryI havebeenputtingtogetherforthelastfouryears* bit:wink:
Not counting all the half done really bad Ash becomes a vampire stories with Zubat details in them:rolleyes:
Any vampire story with Pokemon is bound to phail and just seem silly. That's my opinion. Take it or leave it.

[Orange_Flaaffy]

Any vampire story with Pokemon is bound to phail and just seem silly. That's my opinion. Take it or leave it.
Not all of them, it's all in how it is written :wink:
So I'll leave it, thank you :happy: .
Besides, even some of the best pure vampire stories may seem silly to someone who does not like vampires at all so it is all just a matter of taste a think :wink: . I love vampires, but not Rice's verison of them for example:dazed: ...

[PokéJungle]

Then I will review your story when it comes out.

And yeah, hope you surprise me.

[Deathspector]

Any vampire story with Pokemon is bound to phail and just seem silly. That's my opinion. Take it or leave it.

Careful what you say to OF about vampires. She is the number one person when it comes to Pokémon vampires. Read Fable before you start complaining...

Deathspector

[PokéJungle]

Careful what you say to OF about vampires. She is the number one person when it comes to Pokémon vampires. Read Fable before you start complaining...

Deathspector
I will when I have time I guess.

It all seems cheesy to me though.

[Shiny Loser]

someone could also do a story about the end of the pokemon world. like armageddon or the day after tomorrow or something.
kinda lame, but it could work. unless it's been done before.. which it probably is

[PokéJungle]

someone could also do a story about the end of the pokemon world. like armageddon or the day after tomorrow or something.
kinda lame, but it could work. unless it's been done before.. which it probably is
Well, you kind of already know how it would end if it was the End of the World.

[Ryouseiken]

I would like to give writing a Choose Your Own Adventure pokemon fic a try if anyone would be intrested it reading one by me :). It may take a little while becuase I would like to finish most of the endings before I would post any of it but..When I was little I read alot of them, my favorites were the Goosebumps ones. I'd like to try one as a comdey fic :)

I like the sound of this. I remember, like a LONNNNNNNG time ago, like when I was 8 or 9, there WAS a 'Choose-Your-Own-Adventure' book for Pokemon. I remember the various endings had something to do with Ash fighting Gary with a new Pokemon he obtained on his trip, or ending up coming empty. There were also a few things that led to 'Nightmares'. I can't remember what it was called, and I doubt it even EXISTS anymore...

But anyways, yeah, this sounds good. And heh, you read Goosebumps too? It gave me exactly what the book is called, goosebumps..XD.

[Deathspector]

someone could also do a story about the end of the pokemon world. like armageddon or the day after tomorrow or something.
kinda lame, but it could work. unless it's been done before.. which it probably is

Mate, ever read Pokémon Master (http://members.iinet.net.au/~aceywacey/pokemon.htm) by Ace? That's basically what it's all about. And it's one of the best ever written Pokémon Fanfictions ever.

I like the sound of this. I remember, like a LONNNNNNNG time ago, like when I was 8 or 9, there WAS a 'Choose-Your-Own-Adventure' book for Pokemon. I remember the various endings had something to do with Ash fighting Gary with a new Pokemon he obtained on his trip, or ending up coming empty. There were also a few things that led to 'Nightmares'. I can't remember what it was called, and I doubt it even EXISTS anymore...

But anyways, yeah, this sounds good. And heh, you read Goosebumps too? It gave me exactly what the book is called, goosebumps..XD.

Lol...I remember those...they were fun.

Deathspector

[Orange_Flaaffy]

Mate, ever read Pokémon Master (http://members.iinet.net.au/~aceywacey/pokemon.htm) by Ace? That's basically what it's all about. And it's one of the best ever written Pokémon Fanfictions ever.
Deathspector

I've never really cared for the way Pokemon Master was written :P. I think it was a little wooden...
I say if anyone has an idea for an end of the world fic they should go for it :). Pokemon Master might have been the first but I don't think it was the best really :P

Then I will review your story when it comes out.

And yeah, hope you surprise me.

It is out, in fact it is up to five chapters now, just click the Fable banner :smile:

Careful what you say to OF about vampires. She is the number one person when it comes to Pokémon vampires. Read Fable before you start complaining...

Awww, thank you *hugs* I try to do my best and really have true 1st pov. In the past vampires have ether been used in comdey fics in the fandom or in overly dramaic 'everyone in the world gets turned into vampires, even Ash' fics. And who can forget the 'Ash in the role of Buffy' crossover mixes :tongue:
I hope to change all that, at least with a single story:happy:

I like the sound of this. I remember, like a LONNNNNNNG time ago, like when I was 8 or 9, there WAS a 'Choose-Your-Own-Adventure' book for Pokemon. I remember the various endings had something to do with Ash fighting Gary with a new Pokemon he obtained on his trip, or ending up coming empty. There were also a few things that led to 'Nightmares'. I can't remember what it was called, and I doubt it even EXISTS anymore...

But anyways, yeah, this sounds good. And heh, you read Goosebumps too? It gave me exactly what the book is called, goosebumps..XD.

Thank you :). I see someone is already starting one, but it seemed to fall a little short and not be edited etc.
I hope to copy the CYOA books simple style so even the younger members can enjoy it here :).
I don't think I will use the anime characters, but the game characters is an idea. If it all goes well maybe I can make a series of them :).

The Goosebumbs ones were called 'Give Yourself Goosebumps', I loved them, most of all the vampire one ;)...
Edit: I was just researching them, and most of the books had fourteen endings, so that is what I will aim for...
Edit 2: How does 'Choose Your Own Journey' sound? *grins* *runs off with tons of ideas*

[Seviper Blood]

I have a story idea; I've written out the plot, yet I need to know what specific events will happen in the story. It's a fantasy about wolves that have special abilities (compare to Pokemon only more limited). Sure, doesn't sound like the best idea, but I'm trying to work on it. I need the help and support of some of the good writers on the forum, 'cause this idea needs a lot of work. :crackup:

xXx

Old and experienced elders often enjoy relating stories to young ones. In the same way, storytellers have been formed. Nearly every large wolf pack has a storyteller to pass on the famous legends in order to keep them alive. Lately, however, such tales have begun to fade away. What cubs grasped as fact was thrown away and claimed to be fiction, no more than a bedtime story. What the wolves do not know is that the legends are filled with truth...

This is where Hazumiko Windfalcon comes in. No more than a couple of years old, this she-wolf has long ago abandoned her family and now lives on as a lone wolf. She searches for tales and legends, starting up her own collection of magical stories in order to separate made-up theories from the truth. Eventually, she will head back to her small pack, when an especially interesting legend catches her ear.

Long ago, grand abilities were bestowed upon the wolves. The Great Deity took the magic of the Northern Lights, filling three chosen wolves with the colors of the sky, of the forest, and of the flame. Other wolves are given the strength to conjure up their Shadows into a solid form; they often live in the darkness where they are most powerful.

Hazumiko suddenly turns and runs south, her powerful spirit urging her to meet up with the pack. This group consists of four wolves: Ryo Shadecaster, a reserved orphan yearling; Sayuri Riverspell, his close friend; Masaru Windfalcon, Hazumiko's young brother; and Aiko Lightlotus, Masaru's cousin and constant companion. These four wolves live in reasonable harmony, unaware that they themselves are a part of the legend of the Northern Lights.

xXx

This is possibly a part of a trilogy; the first may be called the Legends' Lights, and the second the Legends' Heart; I have the second partially planned out, but not as much as the first. There are a few problems that I'm running into while I keep planning this story.

How to explain the legends/begin the journey: My extremely vague idea: Hazumiko meets up with them and rattles off the story of the Northern Lights and instantly drags them off with hopes that one of them may be one of the Light Wolves. However, the abruptness of it bothers me... I guess having one of them, probably Aiko, the young cub, interested in it could help it along, though. I need an exact reason why she comes to find them, but I don't know how to work it out without giving TOO much away.

The actual legends: The story revolves around the idea of...well...stories and how they are told. My thought first of all was to turn Hazumiko into somewhat of a storyteller who is very mature for her age. It's not extremely believable, though. If I had to have more than the Northern Lights legend, it would be one that had to do with the Shadow Wolves (which, believe it or not, aren't mortal enemies of the Light Wolves at all). I need to know how much is enough or too much, which also brings me to my next point.

The powers: As of now, there are two abilities: Light and Shadow. The Light Wolves are able to form seperate bodies made of light, as well as bending it into fiery or icy beams or waves. The Shadow Wolves can do much the same thing, but with Shadows, and their powers are more limited. I was going to have two Shadow Wolves, and three Light ones (as the legend states). I was wondering if I should add more unique abilities. As of now, four out of the seven main-ish characters have some power or another (Light or Shadow). This may be too much, but it's vital to the storyline that there are three Light Wolves, and the Shadow Wolves are an added bonus.

Confusing genres/too much romance: When I started to plan Legends' Light, it was going to be an action/adventure fanfic in which truth and power is sought out (that sounded weird). However, much of the plot relies on romance, meaning most of the tensions and explanation of certain rivalries. It brings in a character and ties everything together, as well as affecting the growth of a young wolf's mind. It's important, but I didn't want to go overboard. I also didn't want anything seem cliched.

Any PMs or anything helpful would be...well...helpful. I'll love you forever if you look at this for more than a second and actually help out. ...Unless you're a guy; then I'll be your friend forever if you look at this for more than a second and actually help out. :tongue:

[TVTMaster]

Okay... I'm working on a new fic. Pretty standard comedy. I've got an annoyed director, a quirky janitor, an overexcitable schoolteacher, and her class, including the mischievous Jake and Owen Harls and nerdy Charlie Pensen. The class is participating in an immersion program, in which the class stays in a faraway town for a year... and the Pokémon and Human Recreation and Training Complex is going to lodge them. (It's like a pokémon YMCA) The director is Professor June Rewarde, and she hates the guts of the Harls. (Harls is same plural) Janitor's Pete Scaffold, who seems out of it and appreciative of the students. And there's Ms. Marina Yee, the giddy little schoolteacher. Who screams and faints from excitement a lot. I've already sort of started it, the unfinished first chapter is in the Pokemon: Fan Fiction section.

[Kaze]

I have a story idea; I've written out the plot, yet I need to know what specific events will happen in the story. It's a fantasy about wolves that have special abilities (compare to Pokemon only more limited). Sure, doesn't sound like the best idea, but I'm trying to work on it. I need the help and support of some of the good writers on the forum, 'cause this idea needs a lot of work. :crackup:

Holy crap, Ray... o_O Anyway, I luff wolfiness and pretty abilities-ness. XD I'll help you out however I can.

How to explain the legends/begin the journey: My extremely vague idea: Hazumiko meets up with them and rattles off the story of the Northern Lights and instantly drags them off with hopes that one of them may be one of the Light Wolves. However, the abruptness of it bothers me... I guess having one of them, probably Aiko, the young cub, interested in it could help it along, though. I need an exact reason why she comes to find them, but I don't know how to work it out without giving TOO much away.

Hm. If there were descriptions of the chosen ones (perhaps in personalitiy, at least...?) then Hazumiko could assume that one of the descriptions matches one of the wolves. Also, you should probably explain how her brother and cousin met up with Ryo and Sayuri, okay? ^_^ Anyway, as far as whisking them off to figure things out...Aiko could be interested. It sounds right. :ermm: It's the finding them part that has me confused. You could even go as far as, after the reunion, having Hazumiko lie about where they were going and why. She could fess up later after hot Ryo bites her. XD

The actual legends: The story revolves around the idea of...well...stories and how they are told. My thought first of all was to turn Hazumiko into somewhat of a storyteller who is very mature for her age. It's not extremely believable, though. If I had to have more than the Northern Lights legend, it would be one that had to do with the Shadow Wolves (which, believe it or not, aren't mortal enemies of the Light Wolves at all). I need to know how much is enough or too much, which also brings me to my next point.

If you go along with the lying bit I mentioned before, the story could be related when Hazumiko feels guilty. It'd be easier if it was told form Hazumiko's point of view, but you already explained part of it at school. :ermm: Anyway, the Shadow Wolves' and Light Wolves' legends could cross over somehow, I guess. Maybe some anti-Northern Light power thingy? XP

The powers: As of now, there are two abilities: Light and Shadow. The Light Wolves are able to form seperate bodies made of light, as well as bending it into fiery or icy beams or waves. The Shadow Wolves can do much the same thing, but with Shadows, and their powers are more limited. I was going to have two Shadow Wolves, and three Light ones (as the legend states). I was wondering if I should add more unique abilities. As of now, four out of the seven main-ish characters have some power or another (Light or Shadow). This may be too much, but it's vital to the storyline that there are three Light Wolves, and the Shadow Wolves are an added bonus.

You're kind of confusing me here. :tongue: You're saying that you already have two powers and a certain number of wolves who will have that power (three Light Wolves from the legend and two Shadow Wolves as a part of some side-plot), but you want to know if you should throw in another...? I'd say, probably not. Your readers will have to grasp the abilities you've thrown in already, first. Maybe you could introduce a second/third legend in (one of) the sequel(s)?

Confusing genres/too much romance: When I started to plan Legends' Light, it was going to be an action/adventure fanfic in which truth and power is sought out (that sounded weird). However, much of the plot relies on romance, meaning most of the tensions and explanation of certain rivalries. It brings in a character and ties everything together, as well as affecting the growth of a young wolf's mind. It's important, but I didn't want to go overboard. I also didn't want anything seem cliched.

Avoiding cliches is always kind of hard unless you're a creative freak. XD At least, it's hard for me, but I usually don't care if I think I wrote it well...which is never, but... If you make the legend thing major, then you can have the romance-type conflicts/events screw everything up. XD I sort of did that in Shadow Mist/Sky with the Odd-Marigold-Nakkura thingy. I'm guessing Ryo and Sayuri...? Then again, you're a very ironic writer like I am, so something should go horribly wrong and prove me wrong. :devious:

Any PMs or anything helpful would be...well...helpful. I'll love you forever if you look at this for more than a second and actually help out. ...Unless you're a guy; then I'll be your friend forever if you look at this for more than a second and actually help out. :tongue:

I'll try to help you out at school, but you must love me forever. :tongue: Hazumiko sounds almost like me. I'll try and help, 'kay, Ray? ('kay Ray...heh) *hugs*

[TVTMaster]

Err, chapter one finished. Any comments? Like, on the idea?

[Suicune's Child]

Meh, I have an idea for a fic I already started posting but stopped after chapter one because no one seems interested. I'll post the plot to see if there's anything I can do to improve it.

Broken Wings: Twelve year old Jodi Colins is on her way back to Kanto after visiting a relative in Johto when her plane comes down on a mountain. She, along with the handful of other survivors, must escape the burning wreckage and wait for help to come.

Days pass with no sign of rescue. Hunger sets in and many of the survivors are driven to extremes in an attempt to survive. Jodi, along with fifteen year old Rikka Anderson, sixteen year old Julian Parr, and four year old Miami Owens, decides to leave the group and set out on their own in search of civilization. Together they struggle against wild Pokemon who have never seen humans before, face hunger like none of them have ever known, discover distrust between each other, and find a baby Pidgey who has fallen from its nest called Hope. Trials and hardship press from all sides but they must get through them if they're to survive.

Meh, not a very good plot summary but you get the gist. ^^;

[TVTMaster]

Nice... reminds me of Lord of the Flies. The Pidgey wil be a nice twist, though.

[Ryouseiken]

Well, I'm taking my sweet time with my Pokemon Ex: Hoenn fic, considering well...I want it to be good. But I had another idea too, one I'm going to try and do, involving Mystery Dungeon. Its pretty much a short and sweet, one chapter fanfic. Its like, Treecko or Snubbel finds Mile's (the name of the protagonist) journal, that has his thoughts and records of his journeys, as well as his feelings and admiration towards the others. I'm still unsure if I'm going to make the main pairing slash or not...eh...unsure. lol I might make two versions. XD

[Dog of Hellsing]

Geh, I've really been wanting to get back to it, but I was wondering here actually like my fic Keepers of the Legends. Crossing Pokemon and One Piece over in a believable fashion ain't easy lol...

Also, I've been thinking about starting a Hellsing/Resident Evil crossover fic that's like a sister-thing to my RP of the same name, "From Out of the Shadows." I can't go into a deep plot right now, because of the fact that some who join might read this or the other way around, but basically, here it is (note that in some ways it'll be different from the RP, obviously):

Many years ago, the Umbrella Corporation had something stolen from them. A new type of bio weapon, one that would be the most powerful of them all, one to replace them all. Now, they want their creation back, and they'll stop at nothing to do it...

Enter the Hellsing Organization. For the past few weeks, floods of reports have come in about strange attacks and ever stranger creatures. What were once thought to be ghouls are now known to be mindless, shambling zombies. The monsters...well, who knows what they are? As things heat up and this strange "plague" spreads across the world, the Organization recieves word from an unknown source claiming to be a friend. This source tells them that in the States, they'll find someone who can help them. A young woman, who's fighting a one-woman battle against an entire country of zombies and demons as she tries to find her Mother.

However, it isn't just the Hellsing Organization that recieves this word, but also the secret service of the Vatican, Section XIII. The two send out their strongest members in a race against time to find the young woman, the Vampire Alucard and the Regenerator Priest Alexander Anderson. Neither of the know that the other is hot on the trail of this young woman, or that others will be joining them.

Enter one Leon Keneedy. He's already seen what Umbrella can do, and knows right away that what's going on is connected to them. However, when he runs into the target of Alucard and Anderson, he has no idea that he's about to get thrown right into the middle of things. Others, some who has borne witness to the horrors of Umbrella, and those who haven't, will also join this rag-tag group of beings struggling to save the world from certain doom...

[Shiny Loser]

Geh, I've really been wanting to get back to it, but I was wondering here actually like my fic Keepers of the Legends. Crossing Pokemon and One Piece over in a believable fashion ain't easy lol...

Also, I've been thinking about starting a Hellsing/Resident Evil crossover fic that's like a sister-thing to my RP of the same name, "From Out of the Shadows." I can't go into a deep plot right now, because of the fact that some who join might read this or the other way around, but basically, here it is (note that in some ways it'll be different from the RP, obviously):

Many years ago, the Umbrella Corporation had something stolen from them. A new type of bio weapon, one that would be the most powerful of them all, one to replace them all. Now, they want their creation back, and they'll stop at nothing to do it...

Enter the Hellsing Organization. For the past few weeks, floods of reports have come in about strange attacks and ever stranger creatures. What were once thought to be ghouls are now known to be mindless, shambling zombies. The monsters...well, who knows what they are? As things heat up and this strange "plague" spreads across the world, the Organization recieves word from an unknown source claiming to be a friend. This source tells them that in the States, they'll find someone who can help them. A young woman, who's fighting a one-woman battle against an entire country of zombies and demons as she tries to find her Mother.

However, it isn't just the Hellsing Organization that recieves this word, but also the secret service of the Vatican, Section XIII. The two send out their strongest members in a race against time to find the young woman, the Vampire Alucard and the Regenerator Priest Alexander Anderson. Neither of the know that the other is hot on the trail of this young woman, or that others will be joining them.

Enter one Leon Keneedy. He's already seen what Umbrella can do, and knows right away that what's going on is connected to them. However, when he runs into the target of Alucard and Anderson, he has no idea that he's about to get thrown right into the middle of things. Others, some who has borne witness to the horrors of Umbrella, and those who haven't, will also join this rag-tag group of beings struggling to save the world from certain doom...

Followup of resident evil. Sounds good...

Though I didn't really like the original Resident evil... Zombies aren't that fun.

[Dog of Hellsing]

Followup of resident evil. Sounds good...

Though I didn't really like the original Resident evil... Zombies aren't that fun.

Mwuahaha, I'll be bringing in Crimson Heads for sure, since this is an AU fic/RP. *Pictures blood-red zombies with huge claws charging at Alucard with screaming noises, and him blowing them to bits with his Jackal while Leon flames them with a Flamethower...* :drool: OMFG that'd be freaking sweet...Anyways, it won't be a follow-up, but a cross of RE and Hellsing, set in an AU (since, of course, neither Helling nor Umbrella exist in the other's respective world).

[ze_gobou]

Hello !

Did I ever talk about my fic idea that would involve Kyogre, Groudon and Rayquaza ?

Well... my idea has changed once more. It should have taken place in the future, it will take place in a IRL-like Hoenn (towns and cities as big as ours, for example). One may think it's the future, of course.
The plot didn't change very much. let's find it back and paste it...

The third part would take place in the future, in a future where there wouldn't be many wild pokemon left (and almost no wild places), there would be many towns etc.
Kyogre and Groudon battle again (do I need to say it ?), but this time it's because of a wild Pokemon (he wakes them up unintentionally but I don't really know how, for the moment). The humans easily manage to catch the titans with Master Balls, but it would be too easy to finish the story like that... so i got the idea of some wild pokemon stealing the balls, and setting the titans free in order to have the human civilisation destroyed... Kyogre and Groudon, of course, go out of control, and that's when Rayquaza comes... to save the world (how did you guess what I was gonna say ?). Rayquaza beats the titans, but then he realises the wild Pokemon are really threatened by the humans, and he starts destroying towns as well, until... well, I don't know how it would happen... until humans understand that it was a mistake to build everywhere, destroying the nature where pokemon live.


I posted it on page 1. I said about the setting, now let's talk about the other changes.
I finally got the idea about the Pokemon that wakes up the legendaries by accident, so that's not what I'm gonna talk about. My problem is... characters. As I recently got the idea of a realistic Pokemon world, I'd like to make teen characters who attend a school for Pokemon trainers, because you can't become a trainer at just 10, without knowing anything. But I don't manage to link the different plot points and... well, I need help.

[Light Manaphy]

here's my idea:

Jigglypuff and Ganondorf are members of an alliance called the Super Star Brothers. The plot takes place in random Super Smash Brothers worlds and many characters are from Super Smash Brothers. Ganondorf is the leader and Jigglypuff is just the servant. Later in the series, Jigglypuff gets a beam sword, a mask, and a gangster outfit and is called Luke by Ganondorf. The two guys are really a tough alliance. There's just one problem...




...they're both idiots xD. Yep. Both of them. Mainly Ganondorf for some unknown reason. I also made the Jiggster a real tyrant, lemme tell ya. Sometimes, they have a few problems and end up having horrible life experiences such as a terrible bond with Ganondorf and a computer and Jigglypuff and some enchiladas. The whole story is just not understandable sometimes, but there's alot of action involved.

rate and comment. And read it by clicking the link in my sig.

[ze_gobou]

Well... hope you like criticism ^^

[Shiny Loser]

I was just wondering, has anybody written about Zowayix and his life with a glitchy pokemon? You know, the Skeleton Missingno that shows up when you have Zowayix as a name? It was just an idea i got recently..

[Deathspector]

I was just wondering, has anybody written about Zowayix and his life with a glitchy pokemon? You know, the Skeleton Missingno that shows up when you have Zowayix as a name? It was just an idea i got recently..

There have been MissingNo stories. Infact, there was a barrage of them sometime back, none of which really got off to a start. But if you do it well without using the cliched capture if MissingNo (you know, the same one as they way you had to capture it in the game – people usually used a Charizard here) then I'm sure you'll do well

Deathspector

[pixlepix]

i got a idia for a story in wich tom of fortee city gets sucked in to misterous regon my a abra but the regon has all sort of gliches will he be able to become the champion of the leage and discover the power hidden in the 2 orbs

[Shiny Loser]

what a ripoff of my Unown idea...

[pixlepix]

what a ripoff of my Unown idea...

this does not have anything to do with unknowns

[Neo Pikachu]

this does not have anything to do with unknowns

It's still very similar...

And I recommend improving your writing before trying to take on another story...

[LordZangoose]

*gasps*, but Neo, why would anyone want to accept good advice and actually improve? The mere thought is ridiculous. I mean, that's something only a good author would do.

[Shiny Loser]

*gasps*, but Neo, why would anyone want to accept good advice and actually improve? The mere thought is ridiculous. I mean, that's something only a good author would do.

Not only that, that's only something someone with a school record of over kindergarten would do!! :eek:

[pixlepix]

It's still very similar...

And I recommend improving your writing before trying to take on another story...

it is digla and pilga that are causeing the trouble (first i thought it would be missingo)

[Deathspector]

it is digla and pilga that are causeing the trouble (first i thought it would be missingo)

And, LZ, whoever did that would have to actually read the advice, wouldn't they?

Deathspector

[pixlepix]

And, LZ, whoever did that would have to actually read the advice, wouldn't they?

Deathspector

what advice are you talking about and this is going to end up in a flame war

[Neo Pikachu]

what advice are you talking about and this is going to end up in a flame war

Phew, clear proof he hasn't...

Look at our past posts in your fics and your preview threads. The ones that tell you what's wrong with your story. THAT advice. Read the guide, fix your grammar, your spelling, your layout, the size, detail, and plot. We've told this to you dozens of times, but you keep ignoring it. Sorry, but if you continue making very poor quality fan fictions, I'll just keep locking them until you do heed the advice.

Also, may I ask you what goals you're trying to achieve with your story? Is it to improve your writing, or allow others to enjoy it? I'm interested to know, since if you really want to achieve that goal, you're going to need to improve your writing here and now.

[LordZangoose]

what advice are you talking about and this is going to end up in a flame war

It pretty much is a flame war already since you attempt to argue and make sarcastic comments towards me, and then we respond, although our posts are actually useful. Neo, is there any way for him to have the permission of creating threads in the Fanfiction section taken away?

[pixlepix]

Phew, clear proof he hasn't...

Look at our past posts in your fics and your preview threads. The ones that tell you what's wrong with your story. THAT advice. Read the guide, fix your grammar, your spelling, your layout, the size, detail, and plot. We've told this to you dozens of times, but you keep ignoring it. Sorry, but if you continue making very poor quality fan fictions, I'll just keep locking them until you do heed the advice.

Also, may I ask you what goals you're trying to achieve with your story? Is it to improve your writing, or allow others to enjoy it? I'm interested to know, since if you really want to achieve that goal, you're going to need to improve your writing here and now.

ok my goal is to have something to do well i guess i will just write it on paper the olny fanfic i wanted to do so i quit fanfic

[Scourge of Amaranth]

Err... I'm new here, and I have a fic I've been posting on several sites. It's called 'Administration of a Legend.' http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=35361

It's set quite awhile after the current Pokemon movies/games/series. By that time, Magma, Aqua, and Rocket have migrated to a new continent. Magma and Aqua had long since given up their environmentalist views; now they just use them for cover, so they attract less attention from the authorities. Magma and Aqua participate in more... surreptitious thefts/sabotages/etc, and give Rocket the credit. Rocket happily accepts said credit, and most people focus on them, ignoring Magma and Aqua.

I've implemented quite a few new technologies, such as Vitality Aureoles, which are used to help prevent Pokemon deaths in battle. They're explained in detail in the fic. There are also new types of Pokeballs, etc.

So, we've got several interconnected stories going on at once. On the one hand, we have the Black Lucario, or, Jacob, an ambitious young man who's grown up on the streets. On the other side of the spectrum--or, possibly a different part of the same side--we have Nealan, (Neal) the second in command of Magma.

A businessman has been building a huge luxury hotel. It's an architectural feat; fifty floors, thousands of rooms, brand new battle technology, the works. The businessman is throwing a large, year long tournament at his new hotel, the Chrysafi. Said businessman is really our young friend Jacob, who has a mastermind plan that only started with the hotel. Or, technically, it didn't start with the hotel... but that's for another story. (which I may or may not write)

[Light Manaphy]

I have a new idea!!

In this one, I use japanese names because at the time I was writting part one, Dawn was still known as Hikari. The only japanese names I use are Rukario and Hikari. I might also draw some pictures of the characters in my story. Here's how the first season goes:

Rukario, Manaphy, Takeshi, and Ron are all members of the summer long Japanese arts Camp. They basically live there for the whole summer and are trained to do different forms of Japanese arts. NOTE THAT THESE ARTS ARE NOT REAL JAPANESE ARTS.

anyways, Rukario uses Aura, Manaphy can transform his body into an armored form of himself just by using water. He also uses Water to fight. Takeshi uses Sunlight energy, and Ron uses the earth to fight. Hikari does not fight, as she was sent there as a mistake. Manaphy and Hikari also have a secret love for eachother. Too bad they don't get to be with eachother for the entire series :sad:. Anyways, EVERYONE in this fan fic is a human, some are named after Pokemon, and in the first season, a fiend named Chaos is trying to kill them. Luckilly the team has their defenses.

Tell me if this is a good idea or not because I want this to be one of my fan fics really badly.

[EonMythos]

Hmm, I already have the first chapter of this typed up in a rough draft, but I though I might run the basic premise past a few of you pe2kers. It's set in first person point of view, Sian's, and will most likely be a horror fic.

Note: Not for the faint of heart in the first chapter or two. But shouldn't be more than PG-13ish. If it is in some parts I'll make sure to edit it so it won't frighten the little kiddies. :crackup:


The Stain of a Rose is about Sian, whose life has taken on a most drastic of turns. After running from an unknown threat for nearly a year, she and her sister are attacked. Myrta is brutally murdered, but the thing is Sian doesn't know how she got away from her in the first place. One minute Myrta's standing beside her, holding on with her little hands, and the next she's stained with enough blood for a grown person and Myrta is missing.

She stumbles across Myrta's corpse further in the forest, only to realise she was murdered exactly like their perents were a year ago. Shocked and horrified, as well as unable to breath through the thick scent of blood, Sian crumples into an unconcious trance, her mind viciously trying to tell her that she was dreaming. But it's true, and she can't change it. No matter how hard she tries she can't change the fact that she wasn't there to save her only family.

When she recovers she finds herself in an odd glade, some unknown distance away from where she passed out, and is greated by an Espeon mother who questions her on giving up, until her head spins from the thoughts and she's unable to answer them any more. But just before she's about to go back to sleep, the Espeon states something that confuses her even more.

"Rest your wild mind and soothe your aching soul, allow the glade to do it’s work."

~*~*~*~*~*~


It's only in the first stages of planning though. I just have a basic outline of what's going on, but eventually she will find out what's been killing off her family, and why she has those black outs. >.> And no, the two aren't related as in she kills them.

[Shiny Loser]

Wow, that's a great idea! Sounds dark but with promise.

[Featherdust]

Here's a premise of a multi-chapter story I'm cooking up.

The search for Mewtwo has died down over the years and the legend of his existence faded away as the focus turned to the newly discovered Pokemon. However, several breeders with an eye for the unusual still take up the hunt, curious about the unusual powers of the Pokemon, and Aderyn "Artemis" Blackwood is arguably one of the most determined. Taking up the hunt with her Umbreon and the rest of her highly trained, armed to the teeth Pokemon she has combed the Kanto region for the past three years. Now seventeen, her determination has never faded but she is now questioning whether or not she has the ability to thrash the Legendary and capture it for herself. Even so, she presses onward in her quest.

During training, when she least expects it, she finds Mewtwo in stasis. Trapping him with her Umbreon, she attacks and after a long fight she is down to her last Pokemon, a Houndoom. With Mewtwo trapped and down to her last Pokemon, she takes the chance and throws an Ultra Ball. After five minutes of fierce bursts of energy from inside the PokeBall, it claps shut and her PokeDex is updated. She releases the Mewtwo and heals him, but Mewtwo seems unwilling to listen to her. She allows the Mewtwo to follow her and get used to being captured before spending time inside the PokeBall.

Fearful that someone would attempt to steal Mewtwo, she flies to Sinnoh and spends a period of time in quiet Twinleaf town, renting a room in a small house. Mewtwo seems somewhat less irritable and accepts food from Aderyn, even starting a bit of conversation. Aderyn asks Mewtwo if he would like to have a new name instead of being addressed by his species, but Mewtwo says that he would prefer to keep his old name. Aderyn gives Mewtwo her bed and sleeps on the floor with Umbreon.

Aderyn leaves the next day, heading to the next town with Mewtwo and keeping to the water. Umbreon shoos off wild Pokemon and they eventually reach the next town without problems. However, a group of young thugs leap out of the forest and assault the pair. Mewtwo fends off the thugs and takes the brunt of the beating. Freed from the thugs Aderyn releases the other Pokemon and she soundly thrashes them, knocking both trainers and Pokemon unconscious. Umbreon and Floatzel bound the trainers and Pokemon and hide them in the forest while Aderyn tends to Mewtwo's wounds. As she tends to him, she thinks about how human he is. She falls asleep with her back against a tree and his sleeping body cradled in her lap.

Mewtwo wakes up the following morning to see Aderyn sleeping next to him with her arms around his waist. Mewtwo shys off uncomfortably and goes to eat with the other Pokemon. Aderyn wakes up slightly confused ten minutes later and goes to eat. She sits down to eat and sees that Mewtwo is off by himself tending to his wounds. She goes over the check on him but he shys away from her and refuses to speak. She thanks him for defending her last night and Mewtwo only reponds with a nod. Aderyn accepts this and goes off to train with her other Pokemon. Mewtwo watches alone while they train.

After a while training Aderyn decides to bring the Pokemon to a Pokemon Center for some rest. She asks Mewtwo to stay in the PokeBall for safety and Mewtwo refuses. He instead suggests that he borrow her coat and cap. She agrees and they go to the Pokemon Center with Mewtwo shrouded in a trenchcoat and a baseball cap and getting a few odd looks. They slip in through the back and with a quick word to the watching Nurse Mewtwo and the other Pokemon are attended to. After this Mewtwo is feeling refreshed, and Aderyn comes up with an idea for Mewtwo to easily slip through crowds. She brings Mewtwo to a local store and picks out a purple hooded trench coat (think Kingdom Hearts) for him and cuts a hole for the tail. She explains that if anyone asks, she could say that he was dressing up for a Haunted House. Although Mewtwo thinks it's a silly idea, he agrees to it.

Because of the troubles that they recently went through, Aderyn takes her Pokemon to the lakeshore to fish. Mewtwo attempts to drain the lake, but Aderyn shows him how and soon he racks up a full line of fish. They grill the fish for dinner and settle down for the night...

And that's all I've come up with.

[Hoshika]

I have an idea that's never been used here-- a Sonic the Hedgehog fanfic. It's basically a story about how Sonic and the others try to survive on Earth without the humans killing them, since they've been causing so much trouble. It's canon the games, but doesn't exactly follow the storyline.

I'm just wondering if I should put the fic here, and please, give me some little comments on whether this storyline os over-used or not.

EDIT: Oh yeah, will anybody read this type of fanfic?

EDIT 2: Just to let you all know, I've beaten all the canon games since Sonic Adventure, so it should work. =P

EDIT 3: Except SONIC the Hedgehog for PS3. Yeah.

[Shiny Loser]

I have an idea that's never been used here-- a Sonic the Hedgehog fanfic. It's basically a story about how Sonic and the others try to survive on Earth without the humans killing them, since they've been causing so much trouble. It's canon the games, but doesn't exactly follow the storyline.

I'm just wondering if I should put the fic here, and please, give me some little comments on whether this storyline os over-used or not.

EDIT: Oh yeah, will anybody read this type of fanfic?

EDIT 2: Just to let you all know, I've beaten all the canon games since Sonic Adventure, so it should work. =P

EDIT 3: Except SONIC the Hedgehog for PS3. Yeah.
Let's see, Non-pokemon fics get reviewed less often, but it should work just fine.

Anyway, what do you ppl think about possession? Like, some dude or dudette gets possessed by a spirit or something...

[Hoshika]

Let's see, Non-pokemon fics get reviewed less often, but it should work just fine.

Anyway, what do you ppl think about possession? Like, some dude or dudette gets possessed by a spirit or something...

As long as the character doesn't start hurting themself intentionally, then yes, it's fine.

"WaaaH! POSESSED!!! GET OUT OF MY BODY!! NOO!!! I'M STAYING!!! GET OUT!!!"

Yeah... that would be weird.

[dopeythedwarf]

I have an idea for a journey story. It is kind of stupid, but it is called Mary Sue Blues. Basically it starts out in a world without Pokemon where a popular and ditzy girl (the Mary Sue) stumbles across a pokeball. When she opens it a PIkachu appears and zaps her into Kanto, where she is found by a young trainer who thinks she is deranged. She is taken to Professor Oak who is studying portals to other worlds in secret. There she learns (to her distress) that the only way to get back home is to go to the portal on top of Indigo Mountain. To gain access to this portal she must beat the Indigo League and become a pokemon master! Only problem is that this girl is used to being perfect and getting everything she wants. In this world she isn't. This story is going to be humorous and a light read.

What do you think of this idea?:oops:

[Sceptile Frost]

I have an idea for a journey story. It is kind of stupid, but it is called Mary Sue Blues. Basically it starts out in a world without Pokemon where a popular and ditzy girl (the Mary Sue) stumbles across a pokeball. When she opens it a PIkachu appears and zaps her into Kanto, where she is found by a young trainer who thinks she is deranged. She is taken to Professor Oak who is studying portals to other worlds in secret. There she learns (to her distress) that the only way to get back home is to go to the portal on top of Indigo Mountain. To gain access to this portal she must beat the Indigo League and become a pokemon master! Only problem is that this girl is used to being perfect and getting everything she wants. In this world she isn't. This story is going to be humorous and a light read.

What do you think of this idea?:oops:

It sounds like a good idea, and seems wonderful. If you can pull it off right.

[SBaby]

I decided to post the premise here rather than making a whole new topic over it. I'm sure some people will probably already know what I'm posting. It was on serebii and PC, and is coming here. And it's a Pokemon parody. It should be becoming very evident to people that have read parts of it before, as to exactly what it is...



The Pokemon world...

A world... full of animals... people...

And cliches...


Ash: Whoops. Was I supposed to push the green button, or the red one?

Scene: Brock and Misty are standing with their jaws hitting the floor.


One child...

Holds the key...

To something never before seen...


Ash: <gaping in awe at a pair of opening doors> That's...


...in the history of this Fan Fic...


Voice: You three have been chosen to carry out a mission that will affect the very future of this world.

James: <pointing to himself, Jessie and Meowth are standing near him> Wha... Us?


This summer...


Brock: <looking up> That... must've set the production team back a couple hundred bucks...


No cliche is safe...


Misty: So basically, you want five children to go through this labrynth filled with traps and vicious monsters, just to hit a switch so you can get into a room filled with Poke-Balls?

Nurse Joy: Yeah, why?

Misty: Is this really a children's show?


Max: We've only got until our vaguely alluded to time runs out to capture animals out of the wild, make them fight for Badges, and enter a deadly tournament to win a trophy.

Ash: I know... But at least I don't have to take the rap for losing.


May: Gary quit, Drew walked out, and Shinji released himself for being too weak. We don't even have the budget for a rival!


POKEMON: SPC


Ash: <to May> I COMMANDED YOU TO BE SILENT!!!

Scene: May is just slightly creeped out now.

Ash: <looking around> Puny mortals... You do NOT know who you're dealing with! I'm the main character! Without me, you'd be nothing!!!

Scene: The whole group just looks at Ash, then each other with WTF stares.

Ash: I've been a Trainer for over 5 years now! You fools have no idea what dangers lie out in the world of Z-Re... I mean Pokemon...


Narrator: And hopefully, people will leave me alone!

[Shiny Loser]

Haha, that's funny. I'd be looking forward to it. xD

[Espeon206]

Okay, I have an idea for a fan fiction that may sound a bit confusing in this post, but it'll smooth itself out if I write it in a new thread... I'd really like comments and such though... And, I'm assuming, that we're mature enough that we won't be taking each other's ideas, eh? :razz:

Okay, a girl named Exelia aspires to become a strong trainer just like her idol, a female trainer named --- (name yet to be decided). Somehow (I won't say how), Exelia ends up with her idol's main Pokemon, Umbreon. Then, the Pokemon of the region (I'm thinking of a region) start acting very wierd. At night, she hears a song that nobody else can hear coming from a forest. When she finds the source, a Noctowl named Sorrow, the Noctowl tells her that she is the only one who can save the POkemon from the force that was making them weak. THe song was directed for the owner of the Umbreon, Exelia's idol. But, Exelia must take her place and save the Pokemon.

I know that this descrpition is kind of vague, but It's still in the planning stage... I guess you can say :crackup: I'm trying to make a good plot and steer away from the "Pokemon Journey" type of plots.

[WorkThoseStripes]

Fan fic I've thought of recently, it's in very early stages though. It's set in the Orange Islands, summer time. It's about a girl called Lilly Field who is a Pokemon Rescuer. She owns a rescue base on Mandarin Island where she rescues many Pokemon that are in trouble. She is mostly in charge of rescuing Pokemon in the sea, because of this, the local wild water Pokemon trust her. She is a water type only trainer and wishes she could breathe underwater so she could spend as long as she could with her water friends. It's about how her own Pokemon get stolen and she has to gain the trust of wild Pokemon to help her save them.

What do you think?
Good or bad?
Don't mind which, saves me making a mistake if it's bad.

[Darth Murkrow]

@WorkThoseStripes: I like it, but plan on adding more detail into the actual story. I would read it if it didn't sound like another Pokemon episode, in the sense of "Oh noes, Team Rocket stole all of my Pokemon, I have to save the day and go on to the next adventure!" Not trying to be aggressive, just trying to help a fellow writer.

As far as my ideas go (I'm a little new to this particular thread), I was thinking a sort of The Frog Prince/Pokemon Mystery Dungeon mashup. Basically, it is set in medieval times, and the different regions are home to a set family of monarchs. A long time ago in history, one of these families, the monarchs of the Kanto region, had a feud with the Jhoto monarchs. After the head of the Kanto clan was killed in a duel, the Kanto clan put a curse on the Jhoto clan. To make it very brief, the seventh son of every generation would, upon sundown of the sixteenth anniversary of his birth, be transformed permanently into a Pokemon. In Prince Robert Jhoto's family, he has seven older cousins, but one is female. He is, therefore, the cursed seventh son, and transforms into a Cyndaquil. The rest of the story is basically Robert trying to prevent his kingdom from falling into ruin while simultaneously learning to live the rest of his life as a Pokemon.


Another idea I had was the telling of the Mystery Dungeon series, but from the point of view of the partner. It would be more challenging to think like a Pokemon, and also to not do what everyone else was doing. Yes, I like the theme of losing one's humanity in the literal sense.

[Realityxxx]

@Espeon206: Nice idea. I think it will turn out fantastic.
@Workthosestripes: Not bad, as long as she gets help from a Vaporeon...>:D
@Darth Murkrow: Nice.
This is my first idea:
It is set in Sinnoh, as a girl named Aruora Hansen runs away from her grumpy, unloving parents with her Vulpix. Pretty soon, Vulpix and Aruora run away to a cave, with lots of water. When she is deep in the cave, she and Vulpix fall in the water. Being unable to swim, they fall to the bottom, only to be swam back up by a frendly Lapras. Aruora and Vulpix befriend the pokemon, and Lapras comes with them on Aruora's journey.

[Shiny Loser]

@Espeon206: Nice idea. I think it will turn out fantastic.
@Workthosestripes: Not bad, as long as she gets help from a Vaporeon...>:D
@Darth Murkrow: Nice.
This is my first idea:
It is set in Sinnoh, as a girl named Aruora Hansen runs away from her grumpy, unloving parents with her Vulpix. Pretty soon, Vulpix and Aruora run away to a cave, with lots of water. When she is deep in the cave, she and Vulpix fall in the water. Being unable to swim, they fall to the bottom, only to be swam back up by a frendly Lapras. Aruora and Vulpix befriend the pokemon, and Lapras comes with them on Aruora's journey.
Journey on what? Are they on a Pokemon Master journey?

If you give more information on this, it might just turn out to be a good story. Though I don't recommend the Pokemon Master journey - too cliche. Maybe on the journey there should be more twists and turns, like the parents sending police on the trail to find them and Vulpix flamethrowering them.. Anything of that sort.

[Mitsuzo-kun]

Hey guys!

I've got a new idea for a Fan Fic... Please comment!

Mew is making the world disappear... Being the mirage Pokemon... :oops:

An Absol has to try and stop it... Being the disaster Pokemon...

The plot is quite deep... The Absol has a stronger disaster "detection" because his father abuse him and his mother.

He learnt to detect disaster quickly and earlier than it was coming in an effort to protect him and her.

Absol has a scar on his face where he defended her!

His father is dead now, but he still has nightmares.

Him and his mother aren't very close and don't talk much...

He meets and falls in love with a Ninetails on his journey to stop Mew...

They start out as friends, though... <3 LMAO!

I thought the reason for Mew being so bad is because it was corrupted by a Darkrai...

During the Fan Fic, the pair could meet up with a Psychic Pokemon... Maybe an Espeon... Or a Xatu?

It could tell them about what had happened to Mew!

What do you guys think?

Djax94

[Deathspector]

Well, I do like the idea, but it's weak in several places, and maybe I can help you strengthen it.

I'd suggest having the Absol being forced into stopping the disaster, rather than doing it by his own will; else you will be cracked down upon for a save-the-world-fic. But plenty of good fics are save-the-world fics, so doing that would help. Secondly, give there a reason for the Ninetales to meet with the Absol. And lastly...why would Darkrai want to corrupt Mew's mind in the first place. Fix those up, and you'll do great.

Deathspector

[Mitsuzo-kun]

Thanks for the advice!

Um... Maybe Absol could be forced to by Mew... It could have Absol's mum captive, or something like that... Mew would challenge him to stop him!

Maybe Absol could meet up with the Ninetails on his way, be challenged by a strong Pokemon, work well together (after some arguments and humour), and finally go together.

I thought that Mew could have been killed in a legendary battle between him and Darkrai... Their spirits live on, and Mew's spirit rests in peace. Darkrai's spirit is angry because he cannot rest like the other spirits; for he was so evil.

Darkrai would corrupt Mew's spirit and wake up its body... To destroy the world and watch innocent Pokemon suffer... (Mainly the main character, Absol!)

If you've got any better solutions to the problems listed, then please let me know!

I so badly want to write this Fic, but I want it to be awesome!

Djax94

[Darth Murkrow]

Ok, several things that could make your character Mary/Gary-Sue-ish.

One, he should be forced into it somehow, like Deathsceptor said. And Darkrai... I'm not sure if I like the entire "legendaries-getting-murdered-by-one-another" thing. Maybe Darkrai was corrupted by someone or something that awakened him, and then he took over the ordinarily peaceful Mew.

Also, I was pretty sure that Ho-Oh was the mirage Pokemon, not Mew. Maybe it's just me.

Why does Darkrai want the main character to suffer? Maybe Darkrai has something to do with his father... Darkrai's main target shouldn't be solely the hero. And this Ninetales... maybe she could be a vessel of evil that Darkrai uses, but then changes her mind.

I'm really bad at giving advice... :oops: I'm trying to give you some ideas, though, to help flesh out the plot. Of course, it is your story; it's up to you to breathe life into the characters and tell their stories in a way that's believable.

~Darth

[Mitsuzo-kun]

First off, thanks for the advice!

Does anyone like my idea for Mew having Absol's mother? That could be the reason for Absol being forced...
Or maybe he could be the only Absol with a disaster feeling strong enough? He could unwillingly go!

I'm kinda stuck for what could be the cause of Darkrai's corruption...
I'll brainstorm it today, and then get back to you! If you guys think of anything, then let me know.

I'm now thinking Ho-oh is too... But Mew has more psychic powers and would be more able to destroy the world.

I could change it so that it isn't just mainly Absol... But I could make up a feud of some sort... Or have Darkrai think that Absol are "freaks and pests". (Being able to detect disaster, and all...)

I like the idea about the Ninetails... I think I'd use that!

Your advice is really good! Don't worry if you think it's not!

Thanks, everyone!

Djax94

[Shiny Loser]

I like the Darkrai-Mew part. Make it really dark and violent and it'll be supercool. Try not to make it a vicious cycle though.

[Mitsuzo-kun]

I like the Darkrai-Mew part. Make it really dark and violent and it'll be supercool. Try not to make it a vicious cycle though.

Why, thank you!

How do you mean a vicious cycle?

Djax94

[Brago]

I had an idea for a fan-fic, its where the end is nearing and the omega pokemon known as Flagus [http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s202/Internaldemon2/th1116kyd.gif] is coming to destroy all. Now its up to 3 trainers to catch legendary pokemon and stop the omega pokemon from destroying all.

[Kenny_C.002]

Why, thank you!

How do you mean a vicious cycle?

Djax94
A vicious cycle is a cycle (meaning it never ends) of usually revenge (though anything bad can be considered vicious as well, such as a spiral of bad luck). Like if X kills Y, then Z avenges Y by killing X, but then A avenges X by killing Z. And continuing as such. There is no break in this chain, and thus is called simply a cycle.

[Mitsuzo-kun]

Thanks for the explanation... I wasn't sure how it was a vicious cycle! :oops:

I'm gonna draft it out today and type it up on Word...

I'll put the prologue in a new thread... Tell me what you think of it!

Wish me luck!

Djax94

EDIT: Brainwave for Darkrai's corruption! Darkrai's tomb was dug up and explored... A curse was written on the wall and was read out by the explorers.

The tomb collapsed and killed all inside. Reciting the curse awoke Darkrai... But because he couldn't destroy the world on his own, he corrupted Mew to do it for him!

What do you think?

EDIT2: Darkrai could have been locked away centuries ago (maybe even more than that!) because he was so dangerous and evil.

[Shiny Loser]

I had an idea for a fan-fic, its where the end is nearing and the omega pokemon known as Flagus [http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s202/Internaldemon2/th1116kyd.gif] is coming to destroy all. Now its up to 3 trainers to catch legendary pokemon and stop the omega pokemon from destroying all.
Mmmm. Sounds like Pokemon the Movie 2000. Better make it a bit more original.

[WorkThoseStripes]

I scrapped my old idea, about the water Pokemon girl. Just mainly because it wasn't much os a story and there were parts where I couldn't think what to write. So now I have a new one.
An Eevee fan fic. :D
The story isn't crazily original, but I like it myself.
Seven Eevee's (of course) are raised by a Pidgeot (explained in the fic) and one day there's a big disaster and they get split up. It just looks at how different the lives they lead become and how they decide to try and find each other, obviously with lots of obstacles and side-stories.

You like?

Also, I'm creating my own pictures for it, hand-drawn. :D Yay.

[Mitsuzo-kun]

I like the idea... :biggrin:

People say that we have too many Eevee Fan Fictions... But, quite frankly, I don't see that many of them!

Nice idea, though. Write it well, or I'll be sad... :sad:

Make it awesome! Or I'll be the first one to shove mud down your throat!

Joking! :oops:

But, please make it good... I'll be so happy!

Djax94

[WorkThoseStripes]

I'm posting a preview up here later on today, so look out for it! Hopefully I will get a few more comments on it, so I cen decide whether to definately do it. (: Hopefully I can, because I'm quite into the idea.

[Darth Murkrow]

Eevee are very great Pokemon to do fanfictions on. I have one myself :cool: I find them to be very versatile.

I like the idea, Stripes. It sounds like a thing you could work a lot of emotional impact into. I enjoy stories that tug on the heartstrings (call me a traditionalist, but it's true). I would read that.

I gave up my previous ideas. My latest obsession Pokemon-wise is Rattata and Raticate, as they seem underused. Maybe a PMD fic based around them...?

Gah, I need to finish Chronicles first. *Opens Word and gets typing*

[Shadowzard]

Here's an idea.


One day, there were two siblings, a Riolu and a Lucario. The two were loyal and unseperatable brothers untill the day Lucario was caught. Riolu was hiding in a bush when the event took place and saw everything. The man who caught him was cruel to his team. He yelled at Lucario during the battle, trying to distract him and treated his pokemon like scum everytime they got hit. Right when he caught him he flew away on his Dragonite with a smirk in his face. His little brother Riolu traveled far and wide looking for his his sibling's kidnapper only to be caught himself by a young girl named Hope who was a new trainer getting ready for her journey. Can Riolu reunite with Lucario while traveling with his new trainer.

Please rate and give ideas!

[Realityxxx]

@Shadowzard: Not bad.
How about this:
Pokemon Movie 11: The Legends Rise
"Don't trust the living. For you shall lose all Knowledge, Emotion and Willpower. The Temple Of Orgin shall hold all answers. Purify your heart to See the pokemon of Knowledge, Emotion and Willpower. Do not let them corrupt another war, or many lives will suffer, and beg them to stop. To not awaken the Ultimite pokemon." An aceint book said. It had Unown engraved on it, and was made of rock. Only the chosen ones could read them. One was called Zelina, and had an engraved scar of Mespirit on her left arm. The second was called Arien, and had a scar of Uxie engraved on his left arm. The last was called Alita, and she had an scar of Azelf engraved on her left arm. They were indeed the chosen ones. Now they must save the world From Team Galactic once again. And this time, they wanted the Pokemon of Knowledge, Emotion and Willpower-Uxie, Mespirit and Azelf.
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How do you like it?:oops:

[Shiny Loser]

Meh, there are too many Eevee stories. But this one seems like a good idea, except for the pidgeot part because it's not that practical that seven squirrel-like things are brought up by a huge predator bird..

[WorkThoseStripes]

Thanks. (: Yeah, you do have a point, but I need to think of a mother figure that isn't another Eevee or one of the evolutions for them. Any ideas?

[Mitsuzo-kun]

How about a cat Pokemon of some sort...

A Delcatty or Persian?

You could pick most things... Maybe even a Kangaskhan! (Motherly Figure)

But don't give up on the idea! Or I'll be sad...

Djax94

[WorkThoseStripes]

List of possible mother Pokemon;

Ninetales
Arcanine
Persian
Chansey
Kangaskhan

I probobly want it to be one of the first gen. (:

[Sceptile Frost]

Here's an idea.


One day, there were two siblings, a Riolu and a Lucario. The two were loyal and unseperatable brothers untill the day Lucario was caught. Riolu was hiding in a bush when the event took place and saw everything. The man who caught him was cruel to his team. He yelled at Lucario during the battle, trying to distract him and treated his pokemon like scum everytime they got hit. Right when he caught him he flew away on his Dragonite with a smirk in his face. His little brother Riolu traveled far and wide looking for his his sibling's kidnapper only to be caught himself by a young girl named Hope who was a new trainer getting ready for her journey. Can Riolu reunite with Lucario while traveling with his new trainer.

Please rate and give ideas!

It sounds workable, but try to flesh out Lucario's master's character. Remember that no one is totally evil. Okay, serial killers might be... no... Remember this: serial killers have mothers. Just make sure he's not a flat-out evil "kill you" or just "hate you" character, as jerks like that probably would get targeted by the government for pokemon abuse.


@Shadowzard: Not bad.
How about this:
Pokemon Movie 11: The Legends Rise
"Don't trust the living. For you shall lose all Knowledge, Emotion and Willpower. The Temple Of Orgin shall hold all answers. Purify your heart to See the pokemon of Knowledge, Emotion and Willpower. Do not let them corrupt another war, or many lives will suffer, and beg them to stop. To not awaken the Ultimite pokemon." An aceint book said. It had Unown engraved on it, and was made of rock. Only the chosen ones could read them. One was called Zelina, and had an engraved scar of Mespirit on her left arm. The second was called Arien, and had a scar of Uxie engraved on his left arm. The last was called Alita, and she had an scar of Azelf engraved on her left arm. They were indeed the chosen ones. Now they must save the world From Team Galactic once again. And this time, they wanted the Pokemon of Knowledge, Emotion and Willpower-Uxie, Mespirit and Azelf.
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How do you like it?:oops:

Sounds a bit like Dragonfree's The Quest for the Legends, with a war and everything, if you ask me. But... that's just me.

@WorkThoseStrips: Ninetails seemed really close to Eevee trait-wise, but Kangaskan would be really interesting...


Anyways, here's my idea, and actually a skeleton of a prolgoue...

DARK OCTOBER|||

PROLGOUE
OCTOBER 22, 1962
Jacob Salazar lowered his hand to his gun, checking that his Magnum was still there.

Good, he thought. Now if only I can get in…

Jacob looked back at Guantanamo Bay Naval Base, the evening sun playing across Cactus Curtain.

It was beautiful… and yet so hostile…

Jacob sighed and walked stealthily out towards his target – the headquarters of the nearest Russian rocket terminal.

In our timeline, he was shot shortly before he arrived…

But in this timeline…

He wasn’t.

And what he discovered would ruin the world.

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So basically the US responds by invading Cuba to stop what Jacob discoverd they were planning - an actual nuking of Houston, Texas. In return, Russia sends ICBMs towards the US, and the US retaliates with the missiles towards Moscow.

What this ends up is is the Twelve Day's War, where most of the populations of Russia, Cuba, USA, Canada, Britain, and France are eliminated, as well as there allies. (Thus it is alternate history.)

The story picks up fifty years later as radiation posioning is transforming the animals into powerful, stronger animals able to emit elemental powers... The same thing happened to Hiroshima and Nagasaki in Japan, though the affect was less as the radiation was less due to the fact that that bomb was relatively weak in comparison to the missiles and bombs of the 1960s.

And so the story would deal with a few survivors in a underground base north in the Canadian tundra coming out to find all-out civil war - between humans and pokemon, humans and humans, and pokemon and pokemon...

[Dr Skottie]

So yeah... havent written in a long time. I used to frequent this site on a regular basis. I wrote a trainer fic called "An Adventure of a Lifetime" and it ended up taking after it's name because I never got around to finishing it. the link to the story is in my sig. It's about a guy named Kevin Sun, who is the son of Lance the dragon trainer, and his adventures in the johto league, where he tries to escape his father's shadow and earn a name for himself... i think i got up to just after him getting his 7th badge...

So yeh I don't know whether to continue that story or write another. The idea that came to the me the other day is to right about a trainer who is invited to compete in an international league tournament. You are only eligible to compete if you have at least been a league champion in either kanto, johto, hoenn, or sinnoh. It would start just before his first round in the championship and continue on following his progress. the story would be marked with flashbacks, pertaining to how he got some of the pokemon he uses and other relevent past experiences. So depth to his character would slowly be revealed...

Well that is my idea. Would anyone be interested in reading something like that?

[Redlark]

That's a cool premise. It also allows the possibility of making up regions and possibly Pokemon (if you think you're up to it). The only problem with making up Pokemon is that it's easy to God-mode, I thinks.

Frost - Do it, dawg. It's sounds like it'd turn into something along the lines of a Tom Clancy thing. Which would be very cool to pull off.

[Shiny Loser]

Pokemon Movie 11: The Legends Rise
"Don't trust the living. For you shall lose all Knowledge, Emotion and Willpower. The Temple Of Orgin shall hold all answers. Purify your heart to See the pokemon of Knowledge, Emotion and Willpower. Do not let them corrupt another war, or many lives will suffer, and beg them to stop. To not awaken the Ultimite pokemon." An aceint book said. It had Unown engraved on it, and was made of rock. Only the chosen ones could read them. One was called Zelina, and had an engraved scar of Mespirit on her left arm. The second was called Arien, and had a scar of Uxie engraved on his left arm. The last was called Alita, and she had an scar of Azelf engraved on her left arm. They were indeed the chosen ones. Now they must save the world From Team Galactic once again. And this time, they wanted the Pokemon of Knowledge, Emotion and Willpower-Uxie, Mespirit and Azelf.


Hmmm. Chosen One? We seem to have a lot of "chosen one" fics. And if you don't want it to be another cliched story, you'd better make it extremely exciting and twisting.

[sk8rdratini]

nfics, I am soo tired of looking for a story and only finding aaml; dose any1 wanna write a story w/ the elite 4 or maybe Lance and clair: I want to shair ideas with people so can any1 reply or message Me?

[Shiny Loser]

nfics, I am soo tired of looking for a story and only finding aaml; dose any1 wanna write a story w/ the elite 4 or maybe Lance and clair: I want to shair ideas with people so can any1 reply or message Me?
I don't know, type up something so that I know basically what the story is about, not just the characters.

Well anyway, I need help with this plot. So far I've come up with...

Proz, an evil, ambitious Unown-human, after failing in an attempt to take over the Regions twice, has come up with a new idea. Knowing about Ash Ketchum, from Pallet Town in Kanto, and his success in almost every aspect of Pokemon, Proz decides he should learn the secret of this 16-year old kid through May, Ash's unsteady coordinator girlfriend. Starting a relationship with May, he begins to extract unusual secrets that could be used against Ash if ever revealed.

How can I add more action to this plot?

[Neo Pikachu]

So yeah... havent written in a long time. I used to frequent this site on a regular basis. I wrote a trainer fic called "An Adventure of a Lifetime" and it ended up taking after it's name because I never got around to finishing it. the link to the story is in my sig. It's about a guy named Kevin Sun, who is the son of Lance the dragon trainer, and his adventures in the johto league, where he tries to escape his father's shadow and earn a name for himself... i think i got up to just after him getting his 7th badge...

So yeh I don't know whether to continue that story or write another. The idea that came to the me the other day is to right about a trainer who is invited to compete in an international league tournament. You are only eligible to compete if you have at least been a league champion in either kanto, johto, hoenn, or sinnoh. It would start just before his first round in the championship and continue on following his progress. the story would be marked with flashbacks, pertaining to how he got some of the pokemon he uses and other relevent past experiences. So depth to his character would slowly be revealed...

Well that is my idea. Would anyone be interested in reading something like that?

Yeah, I remember that story. Heck, you started it even before I came to PE2K. :P

Whether to start something new or continue with writing An Adventure of a Lifetime is up to you. But, if I was in your position, I’d maybe try something new and different. Heck, I would love to read something new you created, even though An Adventure of a Lifetime is pretty good and you did do a great job with it.

The new idea sounds pretty good with the international league. Reminds me of what the Pokémon counterpart to the Olympics would probably be. Flashbacks are good every now and then, but I wouldn’t do it too many times from present to past. I recently saw The Good Shepherd on DVD and the way the storyline flip-flopped back and forward really confused me as to the chronological order of events. I found it made it harder to enjoy, and after a while, I kind of gave up and wasn’t interested in trying to understand the movie anymore.

As for the situation itself, it’s a good start, but maybe throwing something else into the mix of things would be a good idea. Maybe this is taking place far out in the future, some political/natural disaster threatens the possibility of the international league championship from taking place, or maybe the main character has a very personal issue that could affect his battling ability, such as a dying family member or having witnessed a very traumatizing event that literally gives him severe insomnia and fear. That’s up to you, but I think it would put a very interesting perspective on the story and make things uniquely different.

Good luck with it.

[Caecity]

I was think'in of doing a Story beginning in the Johto region. But Sinced this is many many many many years after the anime show with Ash.That all the Gym Leader's are replaced, with there Son or Daughter or howveer next in the throne..^^

[Drew_pkmn]

I dnt no if this is the rite place but I need help on pokemon names for my story but original pokemon will b included as well pm me plz if u have ideas

[Caecity]

I dnt no if this is the rite place but I need help on pokemon names for my story but origibnal pokemon will b included as well pm me plz if u have ideas

No offense but I could barely understand you..

[Orange_Flaaffy]

If you are having a hard time making up your own pokemon it would be better for you to use real pokemon :)

[Caecity]

I was think'in of doing a Story beginning in the Johto region. But Sinced this is many many many many years after the anime show with Ash.That all the Gym Leader's are replaced, with there Son or Daughter or howveer next in the throne..^^

Yea just reposting this,

[Orange_Flaaffy]

Yea just reposting this,
That is not much to go on, it could be a very good or very bad story depending on how much effort you put into it :P. As far as I know being a gym leader is something you earn, not just something that is pasted down...
Offspring stories have a habit of just taking the easy road and having their child ether be mini-mes or exactly an anti-verison of their parents. So just make sure you are not doing this to be lazy about coming up with characters ;)

[Caecity]

That is not much to go on, it could be a very good or very bad story depending on how much effort you put into it :P. As far as I know being a gym leader is something you earn, not just something that is pasted down...
Offspring stories have a habit of just taking the easy road and having their child ether be mini-mes or exactly an anti-verison of their parents. So just make sure you are not doing this to be lazy about coming up with characters ;)

Yea, like one of there Gym trainer takes control, I might have like two have them passed down then maybe some there Gym trainer. And then some others just randomly choosen.

Edit:
Making a story from the Gym Leader point of view I know it's gonna be hard but Yea. What would you guys think, Like a Psychic/ Water Gym Leader, Like his not an offisal(Sp) but he earns his way too becoming one. Then he trys to go for the last Elite Four spot.

[Hoshika]

Yea, like one of there Gym trainer takes control, I might have like two have them passed down then maybe some there Gym trainer. And then some others just randomly choosen.

Edit:
Making a story from the Gym Leader point of view I know it's gonna be hard but Yea. What would you guys think, Like a Psychic/ Water Gym Leader, Like his not an offisal(Sp) but he earns his way too becoming one. Then he trys to go for the last Elite Four spot.


Hmm. It seems like it would melt down into a Trainer story instead of a Gym Leader story. Just find some way that the dude doesn't have to go on some journey to get badges. =P

Now, for my idea...

If I were to make a story based off of a comic, would it be better to make it similar to the style in the comic (wavering between comedic and deep) or the fantasy-story style (a story story)? The similar style would make more sense and be much more related to the comic, but wouldn't get a very good review or something, while the other style is going to grab people in but won't make much sense comic-to-story-wise.

Yeah, I rambled.

[Caecity]

Hmm. It seems like it would melt down into a Trainer story instead of a Gym Leader story. Just find some way that the dude doesn't have to go on some journey to get badges. =P

Now, for my idea...

If I were to make a story based off of a comic, would it be better to make it similar to the style in the comic (wavering between comedic and deep) or the fantasy-story style (a story story)? The similar style would make more sense and be much more related to the comic, but wouldn't get a very good review or something, while the other style is going to grab people in but won't make much sense comic-to-story-wise.

Yeah, I rambled.

Yea not get badges, okay gotcha. -thinks of brain power-

[Shiny Loser]

I don't know, type up something so that I know basically what the story is about, not just the characters.

Well anyway, I need help with this plot. So far I've come up with...

Proz, an evil, ambitious Unown-human, after failing in an attempt to take over the Regions twice, has come up with a new idea. Knowing about Ash Ketchum, from Pallet Town in Kanto, and his success in almost every aspect of Pokemon, Proz decides he should learn the secret of this 16-year old kid through May, Ash's unsteady coordinator girlfriend. Starting a relationship with May, he begins to extract unusual secrets that could be used against Ash if ever revealed.

How can I add more action to this plot?
Heh, reposting.

And just like Hoshika said, unless you're using an existing Gym Leader, it will probably develop into one of the Trainer fics. About a guy who's striving to become a gym leader instead of a pokemon master.

[sk8rdratini]

Hay Shiney looser I like theidea about the elites from all reagons, I'd like to read that, but dont give up on your other stories, wair can I read finished stories? dose ne1 know?

[Orange_Flaaffy]

Hmm. It seems like it would melt down into a Trainer story instead of a Gym Leader story. Just find some way that the dude doesn't have to go on some journey to get badges. =P

Now, for my idea...

If I were to make a story based off of a comic, would it be better to make it similar to the style in the comic (wavering between comedic and deep) or the fantasy-story style (a story story)? The similar style would make more sense and be much more related to the comic, but wouldn't get a very good review or something, while the other style is going to grab people in but won't make much sense comic-to-story-wise.

Yeah, I rambled.
A journey fic is not a bad thing if you have an intresting writing style :)

[Volkner]

Well, I don't know if this is the right place but, I'm making a fanfic and I just wanted to get your opinion. In D/P in Canalave after you are champion there is a little boy who has horrible nightmares with Darkrai. His mother says other people have had that problem. My fanfic will tell their story and the hunt for Darkrai.

[Deathspector]

A journey fic is not a bad thing if you have an intresting writing style :)

You love saying that, don't you? :wink: But you're right. Journey/Trainer fics can be quite an interesting piece of fiction. Some of the best stories on this forum are Journey/Trainer fics (there is a difference between Journey and Trainer fics for those of you who don't know; the name tells you all you need to know). An Adventure Of A Lifetime, Now And Forever, and I forget the name, but it was one by Phoenix before he left...it was my favourite...

Well, I don't know if this is the right place but, I'm making a fanfic and I just wanted to get your opinion. In D/P in Canalave after you are champion there is a little boy who has horrible nightmares with Darkrai. His mother says other people have had that problem. My fanfic will tell their story and the hunt for Darkrai.

It's seems quite interesting, and you seem to have a good grasp of langauge as well (I feel really bad saying this, but there are quite a few people who write who don't know a first thing about grammar and sentence structures). If you keep in mind that not many people will want to read a story that follows the D/P storyline unless it's very quirky, and your characters need to have real personality, then I'm sure this'll become pretty good...

Deathspector

[Orange_Flaaffy]

You love saying that, don't you? :wink: But you're right. Journey/Trainer fics can be quite an interesting piece of fiction. Some of the best stories on this forum are Journey/Trainer fics (there is a difference between Journey and Trainer fics for those of you who don't know; the name tells you all you need to know). An Adventure Of A Lifetime, Now And Forever, and I forget the name, but it was one by Phoenix before he left...it was my favourite...
Deathspector
I love saying that becuase people love saying 'OMG whatever you do don't make it a journey\trainer fic:rolleyes:!' over and over and over...
As long as there is that misplaced idea I'll be there, ready to protect the good name of writing one if you have talent *holds glowing Mallet Of
Truth aloft in herioic way* *falls off her soapbox*

[NeonTrainer]

I need comments on my idea. Ok, I was thinking of a fan-fic in the pokemon world. No humans well one does turn into a pokemon but then Whiscash decides to hold a tournament to decide who will become King or rather ruler of the pokemon world. Many pokemon are chosen [Up to 100 or 200] but only 1 will win and become Pokemon King.

[Shiny Loser]

I need comments on my idea. Ok, I was thinking of a fan-fic in the pokemon world. No humans well one does turn into a pokemon but then Whiscash decides to hold a tournament to decide who will become King or rather ruler of the pokemon world. Many pokemon are chosen [Up to 100 or 200] but only 1 will win and become Pokemon King.
Why does Whiscash want a Pokemon King? Why does the human get turned into a Pokemon? Unless you use this idea without any missteps in logic with it, I don't think this would be a fic I would want to read.

You need more plot or else nobody can judge this fic, really.

Oh, by the way, what's the difference between a Journey and a Trainer fic?

[Mitsuzo-kun]

Not much really... >.>

I always wondered that!

[Orange_Flaaffy]

Why does Whiscash want a Pokemon King? Why does the human get turned into a Pokemon? Unless you use this idea without any missteps in logic with it, I don't think this would be a fic I would want to read.

You need more plot or else nobody can judge this fic, really.

Oh, by the way, what's the difference between a Journey and a Trainer fic?
A journey fic can be about any sort of journey in the pokemon world, a breeder, a contester, someone who catures pokemon for money. A trainer fic is about someone training pokemon , it does not mater how or for what reason:) Really both of them have so many ways they can be written that the meanings of both are only limited by the limits the writer thinks there are...
My fic is both a journey and a trainer fic, but I'm sure not many authors think of vampires when they see ether label ;)

[Darth Murkrow]

I just thought of an idea, and I figure I should get it down somewhere and get a few comments on it. This would be outside the continuity of Chronicles.

A trainer (hereafter James) that isn't exactly the greatest at being kind or thoughtful uses his underhand techniques and brute force to capture Raikou. James tries to train Raikou, but Raikou is torn between obeying his captor and following the role that Ho-Oh revived him for. Raikou becomes disobedient, trying to explain to James that what he's doing is wrong, but James doesn't stop working his Pokemon, Raikou included.

...And that's as far as I've gotten. :susp:

[WorkThoseStripes]

I thought of an idea, which I have written down to begin on after 'Seven Paths'. I think it may be a bit difficult to write and might require some research, but I like challenges so if it gets some god feedback then I'm going to go for it.

It's got a little hint of Romeo and Juliet, I'm going to try and stay away from that as much as possible, but I have to use it a bit or my fic won't work.

The story takes place hundreds of years ago, maybe our equivalent of the 1500s, the land of Heonn has no King or Queen and is split up in half by two familes, each wishing to gain control. There is, however, in the center of Hoenn a monnument where citizens from any part of Heonn may gather in peace. Rules state here though that you may not tell any of person which side you are from so there will be no arguments.
One day the heir of one sid and the heir of another meet up and they strike up a nice freidnship, no aware that they are meant to be enemies. Every time they meet it is at the monument and they discuss their views on the war and teach each other battle skills.
In one of the battles, in which they are to kill each other, they find out the true identities of each other and, instead of killing each other, they run away to escape the war. Soon they are found and brought back home and they have to work out how to stop the war and bring peace to Hoenn.

Comments and more ideas are appreciated thank you. (:

EDIT: Darth Murkrow: I do like the idea of your story. I think though, that there should be bit of a deeper plot, I'm not really sure how I can explain. Maybe James wishes he could let Raikou go, but he's being forced to keep control over him, maybe James is power-hungry and crazy, or maybe James is keeping Raikou for his own good, he just can't tell Raikou that.

[Shiny Loser]

A journey fic can be about any sort of journey in the pokemon world, a breeder, a contester, someone who catures pokemon for money. A trainer fic is about someone training pokemon , it does not mater how or for what reason:) Really both of them have so many ways they can be written that the meanings of both are only limited by the limits the writer thinks there are...
My fic is both a journey and a trainer fic, but I'm sure not many authors think of vampires when they see ether label ;)
Oh, get it. ^^

So a Trainer fic has to follow the plot of whichever game you're doing.

Hey, would anyone here be interested in a Wizarding fic? You know, like a loose sequel of Harry Potter? Since Rowling's not doing it anymore, I figured I should give it a try..

[Darth Murkrow]

A wizarding fic? I've tried a few of those, not in any way related to Harry Potter. Except that one parody I did. Sort of. Regardless, I would read it.

[Daneb]

Hey all.

So I'm thinking of getting into writing a fic, but I'm not sure if it would work or go anywhere.. at all.. so yeah..

It's set somewhere in the future, and Cyrus has succeeded in creating his new world. Dialga is locked up in chains atop Mt. Coronet, Team Galactic has power over everything, yada yada.. you get it.

So, as expected, this world basically screams Team Galactic > you, and after being evicted from his home for the fourth time in two years, the main character decides that it's time to put an end to it all.

So yeah, it's almost a journey fic, as he does go on a journey to defeat Cyrus, free Dialga, and make the world good again. He obviously has to catch pokemon so he can fight, and he ends up with other people helping him as he makes his way there.

So yeah.. that's the jist of it. Now the question is, would anyone read it? And if so, does anyone have any suggestions on how to possibly make it better?

[Mitsuzo-kun]

It sounds a little bit like a trainer fic, but not much. You've got it planned out well, but some might think it was dull.

Maybe you could make it humourous (sp?)... Funny trainer/journey fics always get me going!

[Daneb]

Yeah, I wanted to distance myself from the gym battling, but I guess it would almost be the same thing. The only major difference, I guess, would be the outcome when the main character defeats Cyrus.

I'm not really sure how I could make a fic about Team Galactic funny, and I never really thought about something like that, to be honest. Got any suggestions? Because my humour skills suck worse than my fic writing skills:oops:

[Mitsuzo-kun]

XD Yeah, um... Maybe have him travelling with someone? Make the one he travels with really weird, but funny weird... If you get me...?

I could do it if I was writing it, but I'm no good at explaining it, so... Sorry!

[Daneb]

XD Yeah, um... Maybe have him travelling with someone? Make the one he travels with really weird, but funny weird... If you get me...?

I could do it if I was writing it, but I'm no good at explaining it, so... Sorry!
Haha, alright thanks, I'll think about it. I might start thinking about starting it later or tomorrow.

[Sceptile Frost]

Hey all.

So I'm thinking of getting into writing a fic, but I'm not sure if it would work or go anywhere.. at all.. so yeah..

It's set somewhere in the future, and Cyrus has succeeded in creating his new world. Dialga is locked up in chains atop Mt. Coronet, Team Galactic has power over everything, yada yada.. you get it.

So, as expected, this world basically screams Team Galactic > you, and after being evicted from his home for the fourth time in two years, the main character decides that it's time to put an end to it all.

So yeah, it's almost a journey fic, as he does go on a journey to defeat Cyrus, free Dialga, and make the world good again. He obviously has to catch pokemon so he can fight, and he ends up with other people helping him as he makes his way there.

So yeah.. that's the jist of it. Now the question is, would anyone read it? And if so, does anyone have any suggestions on how to possibly make it better?

It's nice... but why does it have to be happy? Why can't he fail and be killed or mind-wiped (like 1984 by George Orwell). Not to say a dystopia fic is better, but they rarely ever show up in the fandom.

It sounds a little bit like a trainer fic, but not much. You've got it planned out well, but some might think it was dull.

Maybe you could make it humourous (sp?)... Funny trainer/journey fics always get me going!

Yeah, I wanted to distance myself from the gym battling, but I guess it would almost be the same thing. The only major difference, I guess, would be the outcome when the main character defeats Cyrus.

I'm not really sure how I could make a fic about Team Galactic funny, and I never really thought about something like that, to be honest. Got any suggestions? Because my humour skills suck worse than my fic writing skills:oops:

If your humor is bad (like me), then I'd advise staying away from making a full novel out of it and posting it until you have some experience.


XD Yeah, um... Maybe have him travelling with someone? Make the one he travels with really weird, but funny weird... If you get me...?

I could do it if I was writing it, but I'm no good at explaining it, so... Sorry!

Haha, alright thanks, I'll think about it. I might start thinking about starting it later or tomorrow.

So yeah... if you're going to go the way of comedy, best of luck. Try to look at stuff like Brian Powell and Flaming Ruby / antialiases and the Laughinstock contest on SPPf. Bay's written a few (Take Fifty Five and it's sequel, Simplicity) too.

Though I tell you a dystopia or something with a bad ending would be a nice change... It's all up to you.

[Daneb]

That's true.. I hadn't thought about the possibility of a failure as an ending.. and chances are I'm not going to do the comedy thing because I suck at it lol.

thanks guys.

[Shadowzard]

Since my last fic stunk I have an idea for another one. Here it is.

Years ago, before the the first pokemon was caught, a violent war started up between two clans of pokemon. It was not a foolish fight over food or land, but rather over beliefs. There was once legend about a mighty being named Arceus, it created all planets in the universe but only made one suitable for living, Earth, there he created the first pair of pokemon. He took the water from the nearby lake and then poured it into a two leaf that just had fallen, the only thing needed last was the gift of life. There, right on the spot, the legendary pokemon scratched himself, drawing blood, he mixed it with the water. The mixtures then glowed, they glowed like the sun. It took well over a year, but Arceus stayed on the small planet. When finally finished he took a look at what he created, a Gallade and Gardevoir, the very first beings other than himself. They both looked at him, and smiled. Many thousands of years later, a group of pokemon believed in a another legend, Mew. This led to years of arguements between the followers of the two different beliefs, and eventually one side declared war.

Sorry if it's too long or something, please rate!

[Sceptile Frost]

Since my last fic stunk I have an idea for another one. Here it is.

Years ago, before the the first pokemon was caught, a violent war started up between two clans of pokemon. It was not a foolish fight over food or land, but rather over beliefs. There was once legend about a mighty being named Arceus, it created all planets in the universe but only made one suitable for living, Earth, there he created the first pair of pokemon. He took the water from the nearby lake and then poured it into a two leaf that just had fallen, the only thing needed last was the gift of life. There, right on the spot, the legendary pokemon scratched himself, drawing blood, he mixed it with the water. The mixtures then glowed, they glowed like the sun. It took well over a year, but Arceus stayed on the small planet. When finally finished he took a look at what he created, a Gallade and Gardevoir, the very first beings other than himself. They both looked at him, and smiled. Many thousands of years later, a group of pokemon believed in a another legend, Mew. This led to years of arguements between the followers of the two different beliefs, and eventually one side declared war.

Sorry if it's too long or something, please rate!

That sounds a bit like a clone of the beginning of the Bible. Mostly because it's exactly the same, and also those arguments (thousands of years later) would equal the current Palestine conflict. Try not to copy history so closely.

What you could do though, is have Gallade and Gardevoir, and then instead of fighting thousands of years later over beliefs (seriously, you'd think one group would, in their beliefs, be more peaceful, and would immigrate away.), consider that there will also be fractures in each of the two groups - sects, if you will. (I.e. for Islam the Sunni, Shi'as, and probably some lesser nome sects) (the Jews had Zealots, Pharisees, Sadducees, Esseans). They wouldn't all say united. If you consider that Jews / Christians are the same, then there are thousands of sects / groups. So yeah... but try not to parrellel history. Please.

[Orange_Flaaffy]

That sounds a bit like a clone of the beginning of the Bible. Mostly because it's exactly the same, and also those arguments (thousands of years later) would equal the current Palestine conflict. Try not to copy history so closely.

What you could do though, is have Gallade and Gardevoir, and then instead of fighting thousands of years later over beliefs (seriously, you'd think one group would, in their beliefs, be more peaceful, and would immigrate away.), consider that there will also be fractures in each of the two groups - sects, if you will. (I.e. for Islam the Sunni, Shi'as, and probably some lesser nome sects) (the Jews had Zealots, Pharisees, Sadducees, Esseans). They wouldn't all say united. If you consider that Jews / Christians are the same, then there are thousands of sects / groups. So yeah... but try not to parrellel history. Please.
*lol* Saying 'don't copy history' in fiction is like saying 'don't use air'. Fiction is always in some way based on something real that happened, the first plays were based on the Bible :P.
Anyhow, really that idea could be good or bad if it was written certain ways :)

[Shadowzard]

That sounds a bit like a clone of the beginning of the Bible. Mostly because it's exactly the same, and also those arguments (thousands of years later) would equal the current Palestine conflict. Try not to copy history so closely.

What you could do though, is have Gallade and Gardevoir, and then instead of fighting thousands of years later over beliefs (seriously, you'd think one group would, in their beliefs, be more peaceful, and would immigrate away.), consider that there will also be fractures in each of the two groups - sects, if you will. (I.e. for Islam the Sunni, Shi'as, and probably some lesser nome sects) (the Jews had Zealots, Pharisees, Sadducees, Esseans). They wouldn't all say united. If you consider that Jews / Christians are the same, then there are thousands of sects / groups. So yeah... but try not to parrellel history. Please.

Ok got it, but honestly I just wrote anything I could think of, and I didn't copy anything. I don't know that much religions and that stuff, I just wanted a war between pokemon, and when Diamond and Pearl came out people were confused about who really was the ancestor of pokemon, so I based it on that.

[WorkThoseStripes]

I thought of an idea, which I have written down to begin on after 'Seven Paths'. I think it may be a bit difficult to write and might require some research, but I like challenges so if it gets some god feedback then I'm going to go for it.

It's got a little hint of Romeo and Juliet, I'm going to try and stay away from that as much as possible, but I have to use it a bit or my fic won't work.

The story takes place hundreds of years ago, maybe our equivalent of the 1500s, the land of Heonn has no King or Queen and is split up in half by two familes, each wishing to gain control. There is, however, in the center of Hoenn a monnument where citizens from any part of Heonn may gather in peace. Rules state here though that you may not tell any of person which side you are from so there will be no arguments.
One day the heir of one sid and the heir of another meet up and they strike up a nice freidnship, no aware that they are meant to be enemies. Every time they meet it is at the monument and they discuss their views on the war and teach each other battle skills.
In one of the battles, in which they are to kill each other, they find out the true identities of each other and, instead of killing each other, they run away to escape the war. Soon they are found and brought back home and they have to work out how to stop the war and bring peace to Hoenn.

Comments and more ideas are appreciated thank you. (:

[Deathspector]

I thought of an idea, which I have written down to begin on after 'Seven Paths'. I think it may be a bit difficult to write and might require some research, but I like challenges so if it gets some god feedback then I'm going to go for it.

It's got a little hint of Romeo and Juliet, I'm going to try and stay away from that as much as possible, but I have to use it a bit or my fic won't work.

The story takes place hundreds of years ago, maybe our equivalent of the 1500s, the land of Heonn has no King or Queen and is split up in half by two familes, each wishing to gain control. There is, however, in the center of Hoenn a monnument where citizens from any part of Heonn may gather in peace. Rules state here though that you may not tell any of person which side you are from so there will be no arguments.
One day the heir of one sid and the heir of another meet up and they strike up a nice freidnship, no aware that they are meant to be enemies. Every time they meet it is at the monument and they discuss their views on the war and teach each other battle skills.
In one of the battles, in which they are to kill each other, they find out the true identities of each other and, instead of killing each other, they run away to escape the war. Soon they are found and brought back home and they have to work out how to stop the war and bring peace to Hoenn.

Comments and more ideas are appreciated thank you. (:

I think this could go both ways.

It could become an insane Pokémon-esque version of Romeo and Juliet, or it could become a very good fiction. It all comes down to your skills as an author, and so far what I've read of yours is pretty good. But just remember that this is taking place in the 1500s or so. Many people write about medieval times, but then put in schooling for the majority, and equal rights and whatnot. It's not that I'm against any of those things, but bear in mind the time period.

Keep up the good work.

Deathspector

[Shiny Loser]

I've got a few ideas for my Wizarding fic, which takes place about six years after the Harry Potter saga.

The python Harry let loose with his hidden powers in the beginning of his story turned out to be an unregistered Animagus who had escaped her devastated home that happened to be next to Harry's original house (the one where Voldemort had killed Lily and James). Although the story of Harry's parents was well-known, another side of the story wasn't. The radiation of the spells that killed Lily and James was enough to cripple the girl's father, mother and sister mentally, and the only supposed 'sane' person from the event was the girl, Lacruz. An auto-didact for years, she taught herself the Imperius and Cruciatus curses in her unbearable Muggle foster family, and soon cursed the family as her servants. Determined to take revenge on any descendant of Voldemort, Lacruz vowed to find the person most relevant to the Dark Lord - the legendary wizard Harry Potter, who she believed was Voldemort's closest assistant. Tracking down Harry's child in Hogwarts, she follows his footsteps in a riveting journey..

[Loveydovey]

Hello hello!
I'm working (kind of...) on a Pokémon Fanfic based on Pokémon Ranger adventures. Pseudo-typical story of starting your journey. :D

Here's a rough draft on the obscure plot:

The sea lost all its color and life when the massive Oil Tanker in the Devon Corp. transportation ship scraped a random undersea cliff. The spilled oil spread as a growing shadow underneath the ship's falling carcass, then it began moving maliciously across the waves, a poisonous serpent claiming everything in its path. The captain, Magdalene O'Shea, was taken over by nerves and stress, wailing about, giving useless orders and frantically calling for help on the radio. The rest of the crew, in an act of mutiny, decidedly took all the escape boats out of the slowly sinking boat, leaving their captain behind with naught but her pokémon and an inescapable death, taking with them all the evidence of the crash. O'Shea tried desperately to find a way out as the ship sank, still calling out orders and barking at her Golduck to swim away and save himself. He wouldn't listen, concentrated on using his abilities to calm his trainer so that she could quietly and assertively escape before it was too late.
And it was.
As the captain turned a corner, her eyes widened as a surge of water exploded from a nearby window, letting in a disgusting ooze the color of night.
She and Golduck were completely covered by it and in its aftermath got trapped in a quicksand of sorts. The thick sludge accumulated itself in their nostrils, their eyes, their mouths and their bodies. It was tiresome to wipe away and impossible to swim on. The last cries of the captain were mute. Her body sulked and grew exhausted from the struggle. She looked at her dear Golduck, now a merged lump in the water. He wasn't moving. There was nothing Magda could do, her eyelids wanted to give up, just as her legs and arms until finally she collapsed and her blackened body grew motionless. This was the only peace that night would taste for a long time.
Outside, the crude liquid commenced the death sentence on every pokémon in the nearby shores and the deep waters. The sun was coming up, but it only shone ominous light. All the water nearby was covered in a horrifyingly showcase of oilly color and the many young and weak pokémon who fell to the toxic water first and never got out.

It all grew quiet, the stillness of death and the aftermath of destruction swallowed the once bright and blue seashore of the Pacifidlog sea. Until the ocean itself started to rumble and churn. Huge whirlpools swallowed up the remnants of the ship, massive waves crashed down on the surface toppling palm trees and pounding on cliffs. Deep below, the lethal pollutant had reached the gentle giant, who had been dreaming for aeons. It thrashed about and moaned as it was covered by the waste. In a burst of rage, it crumbled the shrine that was once the leviathan's home, and swam upwards until breaking off the surface and flying away.

[Sceptile Frost]

[I]The sea lost all its color and life when the massive Oil Tanker in the Devon Corp. transportation ship scraped a random undersea cliff.Questions about the following: a random undersea cliff? Random implies it either was created randomly it or it acts randomly.

The spilled oil spread as a growing shadow underneath the ship's falling carcass, then it began moving maliciously across the waves, a poisonous serpent claiming everything in its path. The captain, Magdalene O'Shea, was taken over by nerves and stress, wailing about, giving useless orders and frantically calling for help on the radio. The rest of the crew, in an act of mutiny, decidedly took all the escape boats out of the slowly sinking boat, leaving their captain behind with naught but her pokémon and an inescapable death, taking with them all the evidence of the crash. O'Shea tried desperately to find a way out as the ship sank, still calling out orders and barking at her Golduck to swim away and save himself. He wouldn't listen, concentrated on using his abilities to calm his trainer so that she could quietly and assertively escape before it was too late.

That's inhumane and unrealistic, in my opinion. First is that oil spills don't spread so far so fast. For example, the many Pacific ocean oil spills only spread so far, especially if they're on the eastern coast, when the average current is going that way for most of the world. Also, oil isn't an instantaneous death. Usually it just mutates the animals in the spill, possibly killing some. Please do research when you need information instead of making it up.

Also it's inhumane in that crews abandoned the captain. Crews are usually pretty loyal to their captains, or if it's a larger vessel are so far apart from their captain that they don't know anything bad (or good about him).

Also, why does the captain go insane? Stress doesn't usually merit insanity. Possibly if already he was on pain-medicating or anti-depressents, then maybe that would work. And then he could have thoughts of suicide (and possibly homicide) via a drug-induced hallucination, in which case abandoning ship would be meritable. (At least for most, I for certain would jump ship if the captain was going homicidal.)



And it was.
As the captain turned a corner, her eyes widened as a surge of water exploded from a nearby window, letting in a disgusting ooze the color of night.
She and Golduck were completely covered by it and in its aftermath got trapped in a quicksand of sorts. The thick sludge accumulated itself in their nostrils, their eyes, their mouths and their bodies. It was tiresome to wipe away and impossible to swim on. The last cries of the captain were mute. Her body sulked and grew exhausted from the struggle. She looked at her dear Golduck, now a merged lump in the water. He wasn't moving. There was nothing Magda could do, her eyelids wanted to give up, just as her legs and arms until finally she collapsed and her blackened body grew motionless. This was the only peace that night would taste for a long time. This is a good idea, as it is sinking (if oil is released), but remember that it takes many hours for a oil carrier to sink, especially nowadays. Also recall that radio systems are very good now, and in the pokemon world (they have pokeballs, which we don't even have a crude resembling tool of) we can only assume that it is a lot better.


Outside, the crude liquid commenced the death sentence on every pokémon in the nearby shores and the deep waters. The sun was coming up, but it only shone ominous light. All the water nearby was covered in a horrifyingly showcase of oilly color and the many young and weak pokémon who fell to the toxic water first and never got out. Why is the sun affected by an oil spill? I can see pokemon being dumb enough to go in at first, but after that when they see a few of their relatives fall in... Just think that if they are logical enough to issue attacks, they should be able to figure out that when their brother dies, they'd probably die doing the same thing.



It all grew quiet, the stillness of death and the aftermath of destruction swallowed the once bright and blue seashore of the Pacifidlog sea. Until the ocean itself started to rumble and churn. Huge whirlpools swallowed up the remnants of the ship, massive waves crashed down on the surface toppling palm trees and pounding on cliffs. Deep below, the lethal pollutant had reached the gentle giant, who had been dreaming for aeons. It thrashed about and moaned as it was covered by the waste. In a burst of rage, it crumbled the shrine that was once the leviathan's home, and swam upwards until breaking off the surface and flying away.

Oil spills don't generally go down, and they don't really invigorate the ocean to attack. But I guess if Kyrogue is awakened... it might work, but you will be stretching the readers imagination.

[Loveydovey]

Questions about the following: a random undersea cliff? Random implies it either was created randomly it or it acts randomly.

Yeah, regarding sudden landscape changes, it's a draft and I'll be elaborating on the setting a bit more once it gets to be a final draft.



That's inhumane and unrealistic, in my opinion. First is that oil spills don't spread so far so fast. For example, the many Pacific ocean oil spills only spread so far, especially if they're on the eastern coast, when the average current is going that way for most of the world. Also, oil isn't an instantaneous death. Usually it just mutates the animals in the spill, possibly killing some. Please do research when you need information instead of making it up.

It didn't spread in a particularly large area, sorry if I made it seem that way.

Exxon Valdez Oil Spill in 1989:
Thousands of seabirds, mammals, and fish died on the first day of the spill. Want the numbers?
250,000-500,000 seabirds
2,800-5,000 sea otters along with 12 river otters
300 harbour seals
250 bald eagles
22 orcas
aaaaand billions of Herring and Salmon eggs.
No research...pft.

Now, it may be cruel, but that's the point of the story. It wouldn't be able to spark feelings of pity or perseverance if it just killed a couple of wingulls. D:
I know pokémon have shown greater intelligence than animals, that's why only young and weak ones got caught in the sludge.


Also it's inhumane in that crews abandoned the captain. Crews are usually pretty loyal to their captains, or if it's a larger vessel are so far apart from their captain that they don't know anything bad (or good about him).

Commercial ships are proven to have the most incidents of mutiny of all. There aren't many cases, but it happens, still.
Also, the crew could be a bit more guilty than it seems. ;D Could they have been escaping a scene of a crime? I didn't even state the cause of the spill, so it is a viable reason. (Besides it being my original one.)

Also, why does the captain go insane? Stress doesn't usually merit insanity. Possibly if already he was on pain-medicating or anti-depressents, then maybe that would work. And then he could have thoughts of suicide (and possibly homicide) via a drug-induced hallucination, in which case abandoning ship would be meritable. (At least for most, I for certain would jump ship if the captain was going homicidal.)


Yeah, well, lunacy isn't taken literally most of the time when used as an adjective in situations like these...
She was a healthy woman, although not very experienced. Not knowing what to do in a situation does merit despair and a reasonable amount of stress. I didn't describe the Captain's background, so I'll give you that.



This is a good idea, as it is sinking (if oil is released), but remember that it takes many hours for a oil carrier to sink, especially nowadays. Also recall that radio systems are very good now, and in the pokemon world (they have pokeballs, which we don't even have a crude resembling tool of) we can only assume that it is a lot better.

Back to the crew thing, they played with the communications a bit. :D
Again, I'll give you that because it's simply not on the draft, so you wouldn't be able to know.

If a Navy cruiser close to a tanker's size can be sunk in 12 minutes with the help of bombs, a deep gash or an inner rupture of a considerable size could do it even quicker.

Why is the sun affected by an oil spill? I can see pokemon being dumb enough to go in at first, but after that when they see a few of their relatives fall in... Just think that if they are logical enough to issue attacks, they should be able to figure out that when their brother dies, they'd probably die doing the same thing.

It's not affected by the spill. There is such a thing as ambience and being the environment around something or someone, the object can be affected by it. Not necessarily in a physical way, I was just trying to describe how the day turned bleak with the loss of color and tropical look of the once crystalline water.
Weak and young ones.
Also, how do you know pokémon understand oil and it's effects on an organism? They probably don't, specially when the particular creature hasn't come into contact with even a regular boat.
I'll give you an example. In the middle of the ocean, on remote parts of it, seabirds haven't seen much of humans, they don't know we're dangerous (or some of us). The little avians come up close to you and are curious of who you are. D:


Oil spills don't generally go down, and they don't really invigorate the ocean to attack. But I guess if Kyrogue is awakened... it might work, but you will be stretching the readers imagination.

The oil itself doesn't, the toxins do.
Who said it was Kyogre? :D Yes, my mistakes have been leaving too many things hanging but, still, anyone can assume that an ¨attacking¨ ocean has a supernatural reason behind it.

[Palkiaperson]

I've got an idea for a fanfic that my mom says is really good.
Alright here's the idea,

In my story, pokemon do exist, just on a different planet far away from humans. The pokemon have never even heard of humans and the humans have never heard of pokemon. The pokemon on the planet go about normal lives the same as humans, driving cars, wearing clothes, going to work and paying taxes, just like the humans. See the pokemon think their not the only living creatures in the galaxy just like humans. The scientist's on the pokemon planet believe their not the only lifeforms in the galaxy and neither do the human scientists. The pokemon scientist's have devised a plan to get a Palkia(and a Palkia for a reason because it can control space) to search the galaxy for life on other planets and low and behold, the Palkia, discovers earth. But here's the thing, the humans don't know the pokemon scientist are coming up with a plan to send 3 pokemon to go to this new planet and live there for awhile to study this planet. The three paticular pokemon are best friends and their college students that the pokemon scientist think can acomplish the job of going to this new planet and studying it. But when the pokemon attend a HUMAN school, the three pokemon friends get torn apart from their friendship and go separate ways but are still in the same school they just stay away from each other. But when citizens report strange beams of light and some of the citizens think something's "reading their minds". The scared townsfolk don't know it's the pokemon studying them.

I want to know what you guys think of my idea. Cause my mom thought it had a chance.

[Shadowzard]

I got (another) idea! It's also about a Gallade and Gardevoir. Here it is.


He lay right beside his beloved, holding her lifeless body close to his own. But the war continued around them. The kingdom's guards fought more viciously, the death of their beautiful princess only further fueled their anger. The hero young knew that this was fate, that she was gone forever, but he kept by her side as the two groups met in the center of the battlefield.


I want it to be like a whole new kind of love story, with suprising plot twists. It's short because I don't want to know what happens myself!

[Sceptile Frost]

@Palkiaperson:

It sounds interesting (yeah for poke sf!), but you must remember that the pokemon must be quite different from humans. Think about, there are 400+ different species to have assumed sentience. That seems nearly impossible on a planet the size of earth, and also on any size planet that has yet been found with an earthlike atmosphere. Having a very diversified group will either create a) an extensive caste system (i.e. 'You're an Electabuzz, you work at a power planet creating power', 'you're an Alakazam, you teach at the schools' and so forth. b) a dominant group, probably of the strongest type combination, i.e. one that has few to no weaknesses, c) a few remaining species in that type dominance has made survival impossible (grass takes out water takes out fire takes out grass). But I highly doubt 400+ species would attain sentience all at once. More likely, there would be fewer species to actually be sentient, and they probably wouldn't resemble the pokemon we know, or the pokemon we know would resemble them and the non-sentient species would not. Either that, or different groups would have spread out from the same species, and possibly have been transported by an ancient 'god like' race, or have attained interstellar travel and then fallen back / had an ice age / similar mishaps.


@Shadowzard:

You didn't really give me much of an idea of what it is about, but I like the concept. You just need good plot / backstory, which I don't know if you have or not.

[Shadowzard]

@Palkiaperson:

It sounds interesting (yeah for poke sf!), but you must remember that the pokemon must be quite different from humans. Think about, there are 400+ different species to have assumed sentience. That seems nearly impossible on a planet the size of earth, and also on any size planet that has yet been found with an earthlike atmosphere. Having a very diversified group will either create a) an extensive caste system (i.e. 'You're an Electabuzz, you work at a power planet creating power', 'you're an Alakazam, you teach at the schools' and so forth. b) a dominant group, probably of the strongest type combination, i.e. one that has few to no weaknesses, c) a few remaining species in that type dominance has made survival impossible (grass takes out water takes out fire takes out grass). But I highly doubt 400+ species would attain sentience all at once. More likely, there would be fewer species to actually be sentient, and they probably wouldn't resemble the pokemon we know, or the pokemon we know would resemble them and the non-sentient species would not. Either that, or different groups would have spread out from the same species, and possibly have been transported by an ancient 'god like' race, or have attained interstellar travel and then fallen back / had an ice age / similar mishaps.


@Shadowzard:

You didn't really give me much of an idea of what it is about, but I like the concept. You just need good plot / backstory, which I don't know if you have or not.

Well I just wanted to give a slight peek, but here is the plot in a nutshell.

A young Gallade traveled to a kingdom that was continuosly attacked by creatures of the night. He then finds out that they have captured their princess, so he goes and saves her. But then all kinds of weird things and suprises happen. What will happen?

And just because it's another warrior story doesn't mean it will be predictable

[Realityxxx]

I have an idea.

A girl named Leafie goes to a Pokemon Training School in Johto, and one-day gets a pokemon. She will travel through the region of Johto. There are many twists and plots in this story. And Leafie has to defeat teams Thunder and Shadow, to prevent them from making the entire world out of balance.

[autism]

Too cliche. I'm pretty sure there a lot of "save the world from imbalance caused by two dolt teams" fics.

Anyway here's an idea for a character of a fiction. The idea of a fiction is gonna be based of a mixture of the p/d video game and pokemonX (recon dye) Note the idea of the character isn't mine. it's recons so i take no credit for the idea. somewhat comedic, somewhat pokemon, somewhat

A dumb-ass trainer named Par(prounounced Pear) moves in from hoenn to sinnoh. He gets his pokemon, saves his butt from an attack by a lv2 (insert random pkmn here) Gets pkmn used blah,blah,blah. Anyway later he has a buizel (haven't figured how he got the buizel yet) who is severely injured from a thug battle, he takes the buizel to the nearby pkmn center. Later that night two evil teams tries taking the pokemon in the center. They had a form of the Pokerus which spills onto, enters the body of and permanently infects the buizel making it stronger, a different color and having a new set of attacks. (which are the "rus' attacks) Anyway this is the adventure of Par. The reality-facing comical dumb-ass version of pkmn p/d. and the buizel can talk. Again i say not my idea whatsoever so don't criticize on the unoriginality please.

[autism]

Jack and whitney are two normal trainers who as they fight there first gym battle, learn of the FeTake. A strictly-female organization that wants to rule the country. They already taken over the Geno regions gyms and E4 positions. There are underground crimefighters who are currently working to take the FeTake down. I don't wanna spoil too much. But two girls in the fetake gyms are working undercover.

[Comexback]

Sudden Mewtwo fangirl-ness has struck me and I had to write something with Mewtwo in it. >> Anyway. *coughs and adjusts glasses* This is a weird idea that I came up with after starting to write a messed-up prologue - which became a first chapter after a lot of revision. I chose Latias as the first other Legendary he meets because of the fact that she is one of my favorites; I would've had him meet Mew, but that's for later. And I'm a Christian (if a not very devoted one), but the idea of reincarnation has always intrigued me; I decided to write a fanfic concerning it. ^^

I need a title... >> I was thinking something along the lines of "Rebirth" but with a little more added to it; "Rebirth" alone seems too simple or overused.

~~~

When Mewtwo dies, he doesn't know what to expect. In an odd space where he is blind and confused, pain coursing through him, he manages to sort through enough memories to piece together his life. He also finds out that there is one other with him; the stranger introduces herself as Latias, and tells him that they are both dead.

She finishes with, “That life is over; everything we did there doesn’t matter now. This place, this temporary blindness…it’s just to let us realize what happened: our lives ended. If you are ready, I’d like you to accompany me to the next.”

Both Legendaries find themselves able to see again - they are in lands unchanged, where life goes on despite the fact that they are dead. Making up new names for themselves, they walk on as human beings with hidden power. Latias - or Astyrian, as she is now called - is attempting to find her dead brother as Mewtwo is simply trying to figure out what is going on.

Fleeting rumors of a group called the Deep-Skyld course through the regions. They are trainers and Pokemon alike, highly talented in dark arts. Mewtwo is morbidly interested in this group, though Latias believes that they have something to do with an unusually large number of deaths - and a few of these deaths are other Legendaries.

The Pokemon world is thrown into partial turmoil. While some Legendaries still live, most of Johto is wiped out altogether. They pass into their next lives, walking the earth as human beings. While Mewtwo continues seeking the Deep-Skyld, he runs into some of these hidden creatures, Pokemon reborn, a few of which causing him to doubt everything he's known.

While the Legendaries connected through blood search for each other in desperation, the world begins to tremble. The Deep-Elm, the evil tree, starts to rise from the soil as the Deep-Skyld channel their powers into it. Though human beings continue to live their lives normally, ignoring rumors of evil magic and missing Legendaries, the Pokemon themselves understand that when the Deep-Elm wakes from its winter hibernation, the world will end.

But more than a few may want just that.
~~~

I want to know what I can do to make this story more interesting. I understand the "saving the world thing" is cliched, so I'll want some advice on how to avoid everything turning...predictable. >> I'm looking forward to writing this, and I'm really wanting to get back into creative writing for Pokemon again. ^^

I have a preview of it up, too: the prologue... ^^

[Realityxxx]

I have an idea. This fanfic will be about the Keys to the Kingdom series, written by Garth Nix. =D

It is one-hundred years after Arthur, Suzy, and Dame Primus have defeated Mister Monday, Grim Tuesday, Drowned Wendsday, Sir Thursday, Lady Friday, Supiror Saturday and Lord Sunday. Arthur has became Lord Of The House, and he has full control of the Gretoques. Noon, Dusk and Dawn are taking full action in their parts. The new Noon has been taking action in the sunlight, and the old Noon is now living in the darkness. However, Grim Tuesday and his Greotuques have revenge in mind...

Yesterday, Grim Tuesday was found planning something with his Greoques in his Treasure Tower. No-one was allowed to go near them. Now, all through the house, everyone knows what Grim Tuesday is planning-Except Arthur, Suzy and Dame Primus. No-one will tell the three people what is on- They are much too afraid. Now Arthur must Convince these people he is'nt mean, and he has to defeat Grim Tuesday and his Greotuqes once again.

[Sceptile Frost]

@Comexback: Interesting... does that mean that all humans are reincarnations of a legendary? And that the legendaries left are the powerful ones? Hm... I like the concept though, and it seems to work out, and I guess you're treating the legendaries as just super strong pokémon, which is a good way to tream them...

As for a title.... Reincarnation would work as welll...

[Comexback]

@Comexback: Interesting... does that mean that all humans are reincarnations of a legendary? And that the legendaries left are the powerful ones? Hm... I like the concept though, and it seems to work out, and I guess you're treating the legendaries as just super strong pokémon, which is a good way to tream them...

As for a title.... Reincarnation would work as welll...

Thank you so much for the comment. ^^

Anyway, what you said about all humans being reincarnations...hmm... I hadn't initially thought of that. It was going to be that Legendaries would be reincarnated as humans, and not everyone was a reincarnate, but who knows? I can toy around with this idea later in the story, maybe. ^^

I have a little while to think of the title. I'm going to wait until I have a few chapters done before I post anything up here. That might take a while concerning having band practice after school almost every day. xX

[DaRt]

I was thinking of an idea of a fanfic but it may sound dumb. It's about a trainer who goes on his pokemon journey. This is different from any other journey. In this one he becomes a Soul Reaper. Yes I'm going to base it off of Bleach since it is one of my favorite shows and Magna. They'll each have pokemon that will help them execcute the Dead Souls of Pokemon and Humans.

[Arbok conquerer]

It's me I was wondering if this is a good idea: A totally revamped adventuren of Ash and friends starting from the Battle Frontier. The character's won't be corny and they'll be heading into a new region.

[DaRt]

It's me I was wondering if this is a good idea: A totally revamped adventuren of Ash and friends starting from the Battle Frontier. The character's won't be corny and they'll be heading into a new region.

I think the new region thing might be a good idea but the Battle Frontier is a no go.

[HKim]

Hello everyone. Good to see this thread in use.

Anyway, I have come to realize that I don't have the time for PE2K that I used to have. Perhaps that is a part of life. Regardless, though, I still want to be a part of the community that has giving me so much and where I have found grand friendship.

To this end, I decided that instead of being as active in URPG and Roleplaying (two areas that attracted me to PE2K in the first place), I would focus my efforts on writing a bit of fan fiction. Mainly short stories.

I would release the short stories every so often (perhaps once a week). It is my hope that by doing so, I am still contributing to the community and being a part of the amazing place called PE2K.

Thoughts?

[Kenny_C.002]

Hello everyone. Good to see this thread in use.

Anyway, I have come to realize that I don't have the time for PE2K that I used to have. Perhaps that is a part of life. Regardless, though, I still want to be a part of the community that has giving me so much and where I have found grand friendship.

To this end, I decided that instead of being as active in URPG and Roleplaying (two areas that attracted me to PE2K in the first place), I would focus my efforts on writing a bit of fan fiction. Mainly short stories.

I would release the short stories every so often (perhaps once a week). It is my hope that by doing so, I am still contributing to the community and being a part of the amazing place called PE2K.

Thoughts?
Sure, go ahead and do that, Harry. :3

[Phantom Kat]

I was thinking of an idea of a fanfic but it may sound dumb. It's about a trainer who goes on his pokemon journey. This is different from any other journey. In this one he becomes a Soul Reaper. Yes I'm going to base it off of Bleach since it is one of my favorite shows and Magna. They'll each have pokemon that will help them execcute the Dead Souls of Pokemon and Humans.

IMO, that sounds like something I would definitely read. I've only see about a dozen Bleach episodes but I'm a fan and know how the Soul Reaping works.

If you added more of plot (maybe someone controlling the Dead Souls? Meh, just throwing an idea), this would turn out awesome. ;)

- Kat

[Shadowzard]

Can someone rate this, it's me (again:oops:)

It's about a boy who all of a sudden finds himself in another realm. The realm consist of only two types of people, those who choose the path of light who are called Lighten and those who choose the path of darkness called Darkus. But since the two are seperate only they exist, because everything that we have on our planet took both evil and light to create, so they have no mountains or seas. Even worse, the Lighten and Darkus are currently engaged in war. But why has war broken out? Why has the boy appeared? Many questions that will soon be answered.

Not Pokemon related, might be a comic insted of a written story.

[Mohini]

Um...okay, so I know I've already got a fic I'm struggling with, but there's this little idea bugging me so I thought I'd see what you guys thought. ^o^

I've already written a summary and two little sketch-chapters, but I'll just give you the general story.

Leila is a self-centered, selfish, superficial, anti-social twenty years old girl who owns a book store in Lilycove city in Hoenn. She is arrogant and intelligent, but has an uncanny ability to insult everyone she talks to. She lives her life alone, from day to day, avoiding calls from her mother, getting annoyed by everything which doesn't fit into her daily routine and most things that do.

One day two unusual things happen - an odd shipment and a little pokemon enter her life. The shipment proves to be a diary with empty pages, but when she opens it while the little pokemon is around she can see that there is an entry...with today's date! It gives her insight on some good and some bad things that would happen on that day and she can't settle down until she tries to prevent the bad things from happening. Not only that, but a new page appears with each passing day.

All this is happening during (and is closely related to) a huge music festival, the Jamfest, which takes place on Lilycove beach so there would be a lot of Hoenn pop culture revealed.

I hope that wasn't too long. So...anyone? :eh:

PS: Oh, of course, due to Leila's...unusual personality and her being forced to interact with many, many people, there would be a lot of my pathetic attempts at humour. ^o^

[Jaden0527]

Mohini, I think it's a good idea.
anyway...
I have a little idea of my own. My graphic novel idea for my most succesful, in real life story. It has attracted the minds of friends and unknown people alike. So let's see if you guys will enjoy it.

Vampire Hunters:
Raine Escraic Sienta, son of the mighty demon warrior Guild Esrasac Sienta, has finally been born. The humans thought this day would never come. He was trapped inside his mom stomach for 108 years. His mom was of course granted immortality from this spell placed on her. Though she didn't want it. All she wanted was for her son to be born, and live a normal life on Earth, instead of the Underworld like his father wanted. 108 years after the spell was placed upon her, she broke it, releasing her child who immeidately grew in to an old man. He was quickly named, and ran off to kill the person who had trapped him inside his mother's stomach.

He killed many humans along the way. His destiny was becoming a reality now. That was until, he did find the witch who trapped him. The witch pleaded for her life, stating that humans were actually good people(Wich he didn't think, he thought they were evil becuase of the spell.)Like his mother. Who was human, his father was half demon, half vampire. After experiencing flash backs to realize it was true, he spared the witch and decided to change his life around, and revive all that he had murdered. The only way to accomplish this was to reason with the Skeleton Council, Head of Hell. They rejected his request, and he then realized, he couldn't stop his murerous path yet. for he would have to destroy the Skeleton Council, take control over it, then revive all the humans.

(things about his father, the witch, and his mother will be revealed in the actual story)

Also I'm going to draw pictures of the characters, and new characters, and the main action scenes. I plan to make a whole series of this.

[Bryce]

Um...okay, so I know I've already got a fic I'm struggling with, but there's this little idea bugging me so I thought I'd see what you guys thought. ^o^

I've already written a summary and two little sketch-chapters, but I'll just give you the general story.

Leila is a self-centered, selfish, superficial, anti-social twenty years old girl who owns a book store in Lilycove city in Hoenn. She is arrogant and intelligent, but has an uncanny ability to insult everyone she talks to. She lives her life alone, from day to day, avoiding calls from her mother, getting annoyed by everything which doesn't fit into her daily routine and most things that do.

One day two unusual things happen - an odd shipment and a little pokemon enter her life. The shipment proves to be a diary with empty pages, but when she opens it while the little pokemon is around she can see that there is an entry...with today's date! It gives her insight on some good and some bad things that would happen on that day and she can't settle down until she tries to prevent the bad things from happening. Not only that, but a new page appears with each passing day.

All this is happening during (and is closely related to) a huge music festival, the Jamfest, which takes place on Lilycove beach so there would be a lot of Hoenn pop culture revealed.

I hope that wasn't too long. So...anyone? :eh:

PS: Oh, of course, due to Leila's...unusual personality and her being forced to interact with many, many people, there would be a lot of my pathetic attempts at humour. ^o^


oooohhhh.....
i like it!
it is kind of a step away from the usual action-packed fics that one usually sees on these boards..... i read some of your other fic and i think that you could pull this one off as well ^^
i say go for it, and if you do, you will know that you will always have at least 1 reader: ME! (you'll probably have a lot more though, you are pretty talented!)

i cant wait to find out what little poke it may be!!! an azurill maybe, or a pichu [nah too overrated] i would stay away from the starters (ex. Piplup) idk why!]
well looking forward to it! ^^

[Mohini]

Mohini, I think it's a good idea.

Thanks! :D I'll take a look at yours now...


anyway...
I have a little idea of my own. My graphic novel idea for my most succesful, in real life story. It has attracted the minds of friends and unknown people alike. So let's see if you guys will enjoy it.

Vampire Hunters:
Raine Escraic Sienta, son of the mighty demon warrior Guild Esrasac Sienta, has finally been born. The humans thought this day would never come. He was trapped inside his mom stomach for 108 years. His mom was of course granted immortality from this spell placed on her. Though she didn't want it. All she wanted was for her son to be born, and live a normal life on Earth, instead of the Underworld like his father wanted. 108 years after the spell was placed upon her, she broke it, releasing her child who immeidately grew in to an old man. He was quickly named, and ran off to kill the person who had trapped him inside his mother's stomach.

He killed many humans along the way. His destiny was becoming a reality now. That was until, he did find the witch who trapped him. The witch pleaded for her life, stating that humans were actually good people(Wich he didn't think, he thought they were evil becuase of the spell.)Like his mother. Who was human, his father was half demon, half vampire. After experiencing flash backs to realize it was true, he spared the witch and decided to change his life around, and revive all that he had murdered. The only way to accomplish this was to reason with the Skeleton Council, Head of Hell. They rejected his request, and he then realized, he couldn't stop his murerous path yet. for he would have to destroy the Skeleton Council, take control over it, then revive all the humans.

(things about his father, the witch, and his mother will be revealed in the actual story)

Also I'm going to draw pictures of the characters, and new characters, and the main action scenes. I plan to make a whole series of this.

Interesting. But, wait, when you say 'old' man do you mean like fake-teeth, gray-haired post-septuagenarian or do you mean a grown man? :eek: Because I'm finding it kinda hard to picture a little old guy running around with his cane and murderous intentions...oh, wait...no, I can imagine that. :biggrin: *snickers*

Oh, and you have some interesting personality options there. I mean, for your main character. Even though all grown up (or old???) he could still be as naive as a child? Unless he was somehow aware of what was going on outside his mother's womb?

Um...anyway, sounds good! If you write, I'll read! Deal? :biggrin:

oooohhhh.....
i like it!
it is kind of a step away from the usual action-packed fics that one usually sees on these boards..... i read some of your other fic and i think that you could pull this one off as well ^^
i say go for it, and if you do, you will know that you will always have at least 1 reader: ME! (you'll probably have a lot more though, you are pretty talented!)

Oh, thank you, that's so sweet! Btw, I read your fic, but I just couldn't find the time to comment. I have a bit more free time these few days, so expect a big review tomorrow. :biggrin:

i cant wait to find out what little poke it may be!!! an azurill maybe, or a pichu [nah too overrated] i would stay away from the starters (ex. Piplup) idk why!]
well looking forward to it! ^^

Heehee. ^o^ No, no, not starters! And it won't be her pokemon, but...well, you'll see. You might have to wait a bit, though. :eek:

EDIT:PS: Whooops! Just realised it's Saturday! :oops: I might not be here tomorrow, but if not then it's Monday for sure! :biggrin:

[Jaden0527]

Deal. I could've sworn I put grown man. He basically looks like a twenty year old. Then he stops aging because since the witch that cast the spell upon her wasn't broken by the witch, the spell had to go somewhere, so it went to Raine. Who stopped aging at age twenty-three, because that's when his mom stopped aging. Otherwise, he would be an old man running around with a cane.

[Bryce]

Oh, thank you, that's so sweet! Btw, I read your fic, but I just couldn't find the time to comment. I have a bit more free time these few days, so expect a big review tomorrow. :biggrin:

Heehee. ^o^ No, no, not starters! And it won't be her pokemon, but...well, you'll see. You might have to wait a bit, though. :eek:

EDIT:PS: Whooops! Just realised it's Saturday! :oops: I might not be here tomorrow, but if not then it's Monday for sure! :biggrin:

(sorry, meant to post this last night, but my comp. got messed up)

YAY! i get so nervous and excited at the promise of a review... but i love them!

your story gives me something to look forward to also ^^

[i may not update "Rifles & Riches" for a week or two, because i am focusing on a URPG story at the moment, so yeah.... you can still do the review though :wink:]

well..... i'm looking forward to Monday!

[Griff4815]

I'm not going to go into much detail since my fic is already up.

(There's much more to it than this, I just suck at synopsises) Its about a guy who has a history with a pokemon and, when the guy goes to get his first pokemon, they meet again. They go out on an adventure and he meets a girl and interesting stuff happens and MAN do I suck at previews. :oops:

Just read the first few chapters and see if it takes. :razz:

[Phantom Kat]

Okay, this is the next fic I'm going to do after Destiny's Tag is done (seriously, when I had more than one story in progress, it was Hell >>) so it won't be up for a long while.

First off, has anybody ever read a Pokemon Snap fic? I haven't and that's sad. So for my fic, it's going to be a Pokemon Snap comedy fic (because DT is going to get a lot more serious later on).

A young photographer by the name of Hensain and his pet Swablu, Sky, get an invatation from the esteemed Professor Oak to take part in the a photography contest. The mission: To photograph all the Pokemon they can find on the vast island in two weeks time. The winner will have his/her photographs be used for the entries of the latest PokeDex that will be used by starting trainers in all of teh regions. The competetion is tough, though. He makes a rival that wants nothing but to win and he always seems to have the baddest luck when he is taking his shots (disrupting Jigglypuff singing and being a part of Haunter's pranks).

Taking a step away from the aspiring trainer fics, I decided to follow the plot of one of my favorite games. Training isn't the only thing that happens in the Pokemon world after all. :rolleyes:

- Kat

[Jaden0527]

Believe it or not, I already have another idea. Though I'll probably work on Vampire Hunters more. Also, I didn't take any of this from Mohini's idea. It came to me when I was looking through Deep Born, even though I wasn't really reading it. To long for me.

Premises-

In 3006, Sinnoh was plagued by a five year war. This war trapped thousands of people in their homes, leaving them to hide. The army was able to evacuate most of the area in an elaborate plan, but, they were unable to save the students and teachers of May Norman Middle School. When the school was searched, the rooms looke untouched, though everyone knew that their were people inside. Evidence of people in the school, were suicide notes, notes to loved ones, and dna of course. Though no bodies were found. The only thing there was a diary from a girl named Maria Macaleb Norman.

This diary gave a description of what she did everyday. Every few pages, thier were messages with clues, and little pictures, but the dates on these pages were way out of date. They often went five years in to the future, or even thousands of years in the past. The diary was thought to be a joked and turned over to the family of the girl. The girls brother always remebered her babling on about seeing the future, but he thought it was just her over active imagination, now he realizes, it's way more than that. Now he has to connect and follow all the clues, in order to find his sister, and what ever she was babling about.

This has alot to do with pokemon actually becasue alot of this will have something to do with Ash, Misty, Brock, and the rest of them.

Answers to obvious questions: The war, who was fighting in it?
The government knwos, but won't tell the public. Most people don't know because they were fearing for their life in their houses for so long.

How long did this war last?
This war lasted only two months. The goverment says that once the people of Sinnoh were evacuated, the enemy left.

How do pokemon fit in to the story besides the characters?
There won't be many battles, but the pokemon will often be used to sniff out stuff. There will be some scenes where pokemon will attack humans. Pokemon have changed since the 2000s.

[Bryce]

Believe it or not, I already have another idea. Though I'll probably work on Vampire Hunters more. Also, I didn't take any of this from Mohini's idea. It came to me when I was looking through Deep Born, even though I wasn't really reading it. To long for me.

Premises-

In 3006, Sinnoh was plagued by a five year war. This war trapped thousands of people in their homes, leaving them to hide. The army was able to evacuate most of the area in an elaborate plan, but, they were unable to save the students and teachers of May Norman Middle School. When the school was searched, the rooms looke untouched, though everyone knew that their were people inside. Evidence of people in the school, were suicide notes, notes to loved ones, and dna of course. Though no bodies were found. The only thing there was a diary from a girl named Maria Macaleb Norman.

This diary gave a description of what she did everyday. Every few pages, thier were messages with clues, and little pictures, but the dates on these pages were way out of date. They often went five years in to the future, or even thousands of years in the past. The diary was thought to be a joked and turned over to the family of the girl. The girls brother always remebered her babling on about seeing the future, but he thought it was just her over active imagination, now he realizes, it's way more than that. Now he has to connect and follow all the clues, in order to find his sister, and what ever she was babling about.

This has alot to do with pokemon actually becasue alot of this will have something to do with Ash, Misty, Brock, and the rest of them.

Answers to obvious questions: The war, who was fighting in it?
The government knwos, but won't tell the public. Most people don't know because they were fearing for their life in their houses for so long.

How long did this war last?
This war lasted only two months. The goverment says that once the people of Sinnoh were evacuated, the enemy left.

How do pokemon fit in to the story besides the characters?
There won't be many battles, but the pokemon will often be used to sniff out stuff. There will be some scenes where pokemon will attack humans. Pokemon have changed since the 2000s.

now that sounds like something i would read! :wink:
(ugh, i say that alot, but hey, i am interested in alot of story ideas, though when i go to read them, they arent as good as i thought they would be.... dont let me down!)

I dont think that your story would be like Mohini's, the way she described things sounds like a completely different subject (hers is more lighthearted and humorous i think, and yours is dark and mysterious!) Plus, i started a new fic [Intertwining Eras] that i WILL get around to updating..... and that was about a diary as well, but it is more emotional and whatnot..... i started it like 1 1/2 months ago, and i will update soon people!

so you see, it all depends on what you put out, not just the concept of a diary :biggrin:

Back to the Story:
i like how you take a different approach than packing your story full of battles and make it centered completely around pokemon.... that was a nice touch....

i think the plot overall is fantastic! missing bodies, though suicide notes are found.... creepy :happy:

And a big government conspiracy to cover up a 2 month war that they say was 5 years long.... interesting

The ONLY problem i have w/ it is the inclusion of Ash, Misty etc.
i tend to get turned off by fics that are like runoffs of the tv series.... i like to influence people to create new and inventive characters, but hey, its your fic, do what you want with it....... :oops:

I cannot wait for this story to begin! i say go ahead.... but dont disappoint :wink:

MY CURRENT LIST OF THINGS TO READ:
#1- Phantomkat's URPG story about venturing into PE2K itself... sooo excited! (i'm included ^^

#2- Jaden0527's fic about gov conspiracy and missing ppl YAY!

#3- This was close..... practically a tie for 2nd (i have to see how good a writer he is) but Mohini's diary fic is DEFINITELY up here! very very close to being 2nd!

[Mohini]

Believe it or not, I already have another idea. Though I'll probably work on Vampire Hunters more. Also, I didn't take any of this from Mohini's idea. It came to me when I was looking through Deep Born, even though I wasn't really reading it. To long for me.

ZOMG!!11! U S2LE MAH IEDA IMM SO GONG 2 SUA UR KNIKERS OF!!1!1111!1!1!1!11!11!! OMG WTF

Heehe, come on, seriously? I don't own fics with diaries in them. :razz: Plus, BryceBoy10 is right, our fics are going to turn out totally different. Like, opposite different - heaven and earth different. No worries there. :wink::wink::wink:



In 3006, Sinnoh was plagued by a five year war. This war trapped thousands of people in their homes, leaving them to hide. The army was able to evacuate most of the area in an elaborate plan, but, they were unable to save the students and teachers of May Norman Middle School. When the school was searched, the rooms looke untouched, though everyone knew that their were people inside. Evidence of people in the school, were suicide notes, notes to loved ones, and dna of course. Though no bodies were found. The only thing there was a diary from a girl named Maria Macaleb Norman.

Maria will be May's descendant, I assume? (I figured it out from the last name...my ingeniousness astounds me sometimes :goofy:)


This has alot to do with pokemon actually becasue alot of this will have something to do with Ash, Misty, Brock, and the rest of them.

I kind of, sort of share Bryce's concern here, but it all depends on how you will introduce them into the story. After all, if we compare the characters from our fic and the characters from the show, which ones do you think belong in the pokemon world more? That's right. :oops: So, go for it, but caaaaarefully.

Answers to obvious questions: The war, who was fighting in it?
The government knwos, but won't tell the public. Most people don't know because they were fearing for their life in their houses for so long.

That may be a tad naive, I'd say - give the public some general idea. I mean, young men (and women?) would be recruited to fight in the war. I know no nation on this planet that would fight blindly just because someone told them 'fight' and nothing else. Even if they are lies, the people would always want reasons. :wink:


How do pokemon fit in to the story besides the characters?
There won't be many battles, but the pokemon will often be used to sniff out stuff. There will be some scenes where pokemon will attack humans. Pokemon have changed since the 2000s.

Okay, that's not bad. In those difficult times, I guess that people would have greater concerns than battling pokemon for sport. ^.^

[Jaden0527]

One little secret I'm going to give out right now is that, everyone thinks people were recruited for the army. In reality, know one was.


Although the people may be related to the real life characters of Pokemon, it won't really relate to what they did on the show, but how they influenced the war, because they did.

Pokemon aren't really cared for anymore. Since people get lazier and lazier by the decades, so people don't want to pokemon battle anymore. They're often shunned away, and if they don't go away, they get hit by the enraged human. This created their now vilolent and very territorial nature.

BryceBoy believes in me so much. I feel like I'm going to let him down. :neutral:

[Bryce]

One little secret I'm going to give out right now is that, everyone thinks people were recruited for the army. In reality, know one was.


Although the people may be related to the real life characters of Pokemon, it won't really relate to what they did on the show, but how they influenced the war, because they did.

Pokemon aren't really cared for anymore. Since people get lazier and lazier by the decades, so people don't want to pokemon battle anymore. They're often shunned away, and if they don't go away, they get hit by the enraged human. This created their now vilolent and very territorial nature.

BryceBoy believes in me so much. I feel like I'm going to let him down. :neutral:

aahhh... dont let me put too much pressure on you, i'm sure you'll do fine....

just one tip i have for you, reread your story and refine for grammar mistakes and stuff because just from this last post, i can point out many.... so just watch out for that :biggrin:
As long as you put some effort into it and persevere, i will be following along to aid you in any way possible! :wink:

[Mohini]

Jaden, you seem to be having difficulties with Homophones - the words that sound the same, but have different meanings. It's not a big deal, it's a common error for non-native English speakers. It just means you have to be extra careful because, if they are correctly spelled, they will NOT appear in your grammar check. I actually made a mistake like that in the latest chapter of my fic - I wrote 'debts' where I really wanted to use the word 'depths', but fortunately I have awesome readers who pointed it out for me. ^o^ You just have to be very mindful to check all the words you are not sure of.

Here are a few links that can help you:

Cambridge Advanced Learner's Dictionary Online (http://dictionary.cambridge.org/) One of the BEST dictionaries you can find online.

Dictionary of same-sounding words (http://www.business-words.com/dictionary/) Okay, so the name is a bit clumsy, but this is a tremendously useful little thing and it is closely connected to your specific problem.

Using English.com (http://www.usingenglish.com/dictionary.html) Finally, if all of the above fail you, I'm sure you will be able to find what you need here. I haven't been using it since I have the actual CALD with the CD which has an awesome Thesaurus included as a bonus, but I'm sure it's a great source.

Hope this helps! :biggrin:

[Bay]

@PhantomKat7: I actually LOVE that idea. Truth be told, I never played Pokemon Snap. :oops: However, I love fics that goes into other Pokemon professions besides Pokemon training. I had one fic that dealt with Pokemon fishermen and one that is going to be about ruin maniac. XD So yeah, cool that you will do a Pokemon photographer story. ^^

Sorry, that is the only idea I read so far in this thread. If time allows, will check out on some of the others. :oops:

[Phantom Kat]

@PhantomKat7: I actually LOVE that idea. Truth be told, I never played Pokemon Snap. :oops: However, I love fics that goes into other Pokemon professions besides Pokemon training. I had one fic that dealt with Pokemon fishermen and one that is going to be about ruin maniac. XD So yeah, cool that you will do a Pokemon photographer story. ^^

Sorry, that is the only idea I read so far in this thread. If time allows, will check out on some of the others. :oops:

Thanks, there's just way too many trainer fics but that's not the only thing that happens in the Pokemon world, it's economy would fail if that was true.

You haven't played Pokemon Snap? You're deprived. xD

- Kat

[Soda]

Something I wrote a chapter for like a year ago.

Anyways, I got intrested in something were all the humans have 'powers', also advanced technology.[Not a Lot]

So I thought, there would be one class in each state, in the United States,that's were it's just taking place, there are powers everywhere else to.

Well, students get their powers on the last days of school of sixth grade, and the one class, would have sort of 'elemental Powers' and it would only be half of the class, so it would stir up jealousy.

I have a few more notes on this, I want it to be a long term fan fic, going through Eric Kaydin's [Main Character] life through college.

Do you think it would work?

[Mohini]

Something I wrote a chapter for like a year ago.

Anyways, I got intrested in something were all the humans have 'powers', also advanced technology.[Not a Lot]

So I thought, there would be one class in each state, in the United States,that's were it's just taking place, there are powers everywhere else to.

Well, students get their powers on the last days of school of sixth grade, and the one class, would have sort of 'elemental Powers' and it would only be half of the class, so it would stir up jealousy.

I have a few more notes on this, I want it to be a long term fan fic, going through Eric Kaydin's [Main Character] life through college.

Do you think it would work?

Oh. My. GOD! :eek: I am writing the EXACT same thing! :eek: Well, not exact, but pretty close. In my Academy for humans with powers, everyone gets powers, but the jealousy is stirred up by the type and usefulness of the abilities and I've also added the powers of Body, Mind, Spirit, Life and Death to the basic four elemental powers, but the last two are really, REALLY, ultra rare! :biggrin:

But, anyway, it's not in English and it's gotten too long to translate now so I only have thumbs up for your idea! :biggrin: If you want, PM me for ideas (if you need any, that is. ^.^' )

[Chaos Rush]

I've recently had this idea of clarifying Groudon, Kyogre, and Rayquaza's purpose. I don't know how to put, but I'm trying to prevent it from making it into a journey fanfic. Of course, that seems kinda impossible to pull off. So far I've written the prologue which describes Rayquaza, Groudon, and Kyogre's resting places in that order. The Sky Pillar is a tower that reaches the heavens and is the origin of life/death(Cave of Origin/Mt. Pyre), Mt. Chimney was molded out by Groudon as its eternal resting place, and the Underwater Cavern was made by Kyogre as its eternal resting place, while both could have their exoskeletons awakened, Groudon & Kyogre can only be complete in their form if their souls are extracted from the Red & Blue Orbs. I'm trying to take Pokemon R/S/E and expand every little detail into something big, but I also don't want to make it a journey fic because of how long it could take, but we'll see. I might have to end up posting the first chapter as a journey fic.

[Deathspector]

I've recently had this idea of clarifying Groudon, Kyogre, and Rayquaza's purpose. I don't know how to put, but I'm trying to prevent it from making it into a journey fanfic. Of course, that seems kinda impossible to pull off. So far I've written the prologue which describes Rayquaza, Groudon, and Kyogre's resting places in that order. The Sky Pillar is a tower that reaches the heavens and is the origin of life/death(Cave of Origin/Mt. Pyre), Mt. Chimney was molded out by Groudon as its eternal resting place, and the Underwater Cavern was made by Kyogre as its eternal resting place, while both could have their exoskeletons awakened, Groudon & Kyogre can only be complete in their form if their souls are extracted from the Red & Blue Orbs. I'm trying to take Pokemon R/S/E and expand every little detail into something big, but I also don't want to make it a journey fic because of how long it could take, but we'll see. I might have to end up posting the first chapter as a journey fic.

It would be difficult to prevent it from being a journey fic IF you have child as your main character. But if you're determined not to let it become a journey fic, then you can always write it from the point of view of a Pokémon, or a member of Aqua/Magma. Just a ew suggestions

Deathspector

[Sceptile Frost]

I've recently had this idea of clarifying Groudon, Kyogre, and Rayquaza's purpose. I don't know how to put, but I'm trying to prevent it from making it into a journey fanfic. Of course, that seems kinda impossible to pull off. So far I've written the prologue which describes Rayquaza, Groudon, and Kyogre's resting places in that order. The Sky Pillar is a tower that reaches the heavens and is the origin of life/death(Cave of Origin/Mt. Pyre), Mt. Chimney was molded out by Groudon as its eternal resting place, and the Underwater Cavern was made by Kyogre as its eternal resting place, while both could have their exoskeletons awakened, Groudon & Kyogre can only be complete in their form if their souls are extracted from the Red & Blue Orbs. I'm trying to take Pokemon R/S/E and expand every little detail into something big, but I also don't want to make it a journey fic because of how long it could take, but we'll see. I might have to end up posting the first chapter as a journey fic.

You could have the mc be a member of the Elite Four or a team or some other organization...



Anyways, here's a fic I've started writing and I wish to see what you all think of it...

Set in the far future, humankind and Pokemondom have transversed the Milky Way galaxy, her sattelites, and presently the frontier of Andromedea has been opened to megalith corporations. A Class C Rangeri, Akira or Kieran, has just graduated from informal training under his sensei, Amikio. He is inducted into Operation Shatterhead, a Galactic Coalition project to strengthen Coalition hold over its citizens and member states. However, Kieran's ki-bond, a partner pokemon that Rangeri fight beside, Empoleon, is killed a few weeks into the Second Galactic War...

By the way, it's Space Opera and Space Fantasy and is inspired by Pokemon, Gundam, Star Wars, and Asimov's Foundation series.

[VP4L]

can i create a manga for my fan fic or does it have to be written?

[Kendo]

I think that a manga would go in the Fan Art boards. And yes, I have an idea, too:

I've been thinking about making a fic with Pokemon in a human-like society (not quite like Mystery Dungeon's setting: more like a city than a village), and every chapter would tell about a different Pokemon's story. I planned for there to be ten chapters or something, or twelve, and they'd probably all be humorous (if I can think of any jokes). Any opinions on this?

[Rage12]

This idea isn't all the way thought out and I don't know if I'm allowed to post it but this is the idea.

In 3045, Rodem Jenkins was elected president of the United States of America. To the country he looked like very nice, but his dreams were not at all like him. His dreams are simple though:Stay president until he dies, and rule the world.

Presidnet Jenkins was not very fond of Pokeon. He was somewhat afraid of them. He ordered for the military to force the pokemon to move to a remote island, hundreds of miles off the coast of the Sinnoh Region. This act outrage professors all throughout the region. They wanted to bring the case to the Supreme Court, but in order to convince the court to bring Pokemon back, the Pokemon would have to tell their point of views.

The professors formed and alliance known as the PPC, Pokemon Peace Corps, and dedicated their first yearsof work to create a machine that could translate human speech in to Pokemon speech, and Pokemon speech in to human speech. A year later, they accomplished this and snuck of to the Island know as, New Sin(president named it. reason for name will be explained later).

When the PPC got to New Sin, the team was ambushed my Digimon. About half of the team was murdered. The rest were left to die, but were eventually picked up by caring Pokemon. The remaining member remembered their machine and used it to chat with Pokemon. They were informed that the island was Digimon's teritory. The Digimon thought that Pokemon were taking over and challenged them, creating an all out war that the Pokemon were quickly losing. Unknown to it all, The PPC's and Pokemon's conversations were being tapped and heard by the governement. Minutes after the statement of the war, the radio wich the government used to eavesdrop was filled with screaming. The rest of the members were being murdered by the Pokemon. Though one member managed to escape.

When the last PPC member got back, there were already men ready to take him to the President for questioning. The President managed to retrieve the translator and test it on animals. The waves sent out to the animals transformed the pokemon into unstable pokemon human hybrids. The hybrids also carried parasites on them that could jump off the body when matured and infect random items. Even if the items aren't techincally living.

The pokemon hybrids decided to follow the trail that was left by the survivor of the PPP. The Digimon, worrying that the pokemon would come back again followed the hybrids, to ambush them after they took down their prey. The President feared that the pokemon had evovled and came back for revenge when they were spotted. He ordered for troops to protect him and destroy any Pokemon they see. The Digimon became outraged when another enemy started to take down theirs. They attacked the army and despite their efforts to destroy the digimon, the troop failed. Mainly becasue their weapons were ineffective.

By now the President had left and realized that the only way to defeat the pokemon he feared, was to go to war with them, on which ever regions's soil. This ment that every pokemon and digimon would have die, no matter how cute or how peaceful.

But first the president would have to make weapons that could kill digimon, wich they successfully did. Now the Digimon really see the humans as enemy and do not hesistate to go to war. The pokemon, being unstable and violent, also went into battle, destroying the Sinnoh Region. Now the war contiues, switching from region to region.

The story will switch point of views from a human solider and the last living PPC member, to an advanced pokemon hybrid(that is peaceful), to the shunned little girl and boy who have been infected, and to who ever else I decide. There will also be a digimon to.

It may not be suited for some people but, I think if I can shake my writing issues, this could be a good story. This will be full of death and despair so be warned.

[TrainerNick]

This is a new fan fic I'm doing for the ladies ;p

Oh-K this the story. A girl named Emily is gifted with the ability to understand pokemon languages. Her and her Pichu and a friend totodile named Toto must help save the world from the evil Team Darkness from casting the world into chaos. This story is loosely based and inspired by Chronicles of The Shards. My grlfriend insisted for me to write this story. So expect it to be a wel worked out story.

[akshay_123]

Is it a Pokémon fanfic or not ?
hi i m new here wanna be friends

[Dark Lightning]

This is a new fan fic I'm doing for the ladies ;p

Oh-K this the story. A girl named Emily is gifted with the ability to understand pokemon languages. Her and her Pichu and a friend totodile named Toto must help save the world from the evil Team Darkness from casting the world into chaos. This story is loosely based and inspired by Chronicles of The Shards. My grlfriend insisted for me to write this story. So expect it to be a wel worked out story.
Sounds good ^^

hi i m new here wanna be friends
Please don't spam.

[Alex the Charmander]

I recently had this idea of "Pein's Diary" a Diary-style fanfic, the writer being the Akatsuki Leader, Pein, where it goes through all the craziness of the Akatsuki life when they'renot off tormenting Naruto or capturing Bijuu.

Either that or I can go with the 20 years after Shippuden thing...

~Wildstorm

[KiutEspi]

Okay. I've been having ideas for a new fan fic.

Its about an espeon named Espi who has the unusual ability to glance into the future. One day she sees disaster befall Moltres City. She seeks the time traveler Celebi on a journey to travel back into time to help stop the pokemon world from being destroyed, but an evil team known as Team Eclipse try to stop her quest. Espi will face many challenged and legendary pokemon.

:3 do ya like it ? We'll ya bettar. :<

[Shuricel]

A recent idea I have had~

I know it's probably cliche', but I'd still like some opinions.

The Umbreon have always lived at an unreachable place, called by many The Edge of the World. It's this area that's shrouded in total darkness, mystery. Their culture has grown separated from others-names mean near nothing, a honor given only to the dead. In this eternal blindness, sounds mean anything-you are recognized only by tone.

The Espeon are a nomadic species, their sole goal to spread light to the lightless, and brighten the dim. When they reach the species that cares not for light, they hesitate. When they learn that this species beliefs are satanic to them, they are appalled. What could they do to help such demons - especially when there intervention only seems to make things worse?

What's to happen when these two creatures are locked in a silent chess match against eachother; As one does their holy duties, their ideals split the dark clan apart. When they receive light, their whole culture starts to tilt on the brink of destruction. One is blinded by light, while the others are forced to face the darkness: As two creatures are heading to the brink of war, what is the outcome?

[Shadowzard]

A recent idea I have had~

I know it's probably cliche', but I'd still like some opinions.

The Umbreon have always lived at an unreachable place, called by many The Edge of the World. It's this area that's shrouded in total darkness, mystery. Their culture has grown separated from others-names mean near nothing, a honor given only to the dead. In this eternal blindness, sounds mean anything-you are recognized only by tone.

The Espeon are a nomadic species, their sole goal to spread light to the lightless, and brighten the dim. When they reach the species that cares not for light, they hesitate. When they learn that this species beliefs are satanic to them, they are appalled. What could they do to help such demons - especially when there intervention only seems to make things worse?

What's to happen when these two creatures are locked in a silent chess match against eachother; As one does their holy duties, their ideals split the dark clan apart. When they receive light, their whole culture starts to tilt on the brink of destruction. One is blinded by light, while the others are forced to face the darkness: As two creatures are heading to the brink of war, what is the outcome?


That had to be one of the most epic sounding pokemon fanfics I have ever heard. I would love to read it. :happy:

[Shuricel]

Thanks for the feedback. ^^ I wanted to see if anyone was interested. I'll start writing tomorrow.

[Kendo]

I was thinking about making a really cool one-shot or three-chapter story, about how some guy in Sinnoh finds the GameShark and awakens the ultimate evil within it: Darkrai. Then the other legendaries try to stop him and such. I've already pretty much planned it out, and I've even got a prologue for it. So what do you guys think?

[Kumori Gem]

I was thinking about making a really cool one-shot or three-chapter story, about how some guy in Sinnoh finds the GameShark and awakens the ultimate evil within it: Darkrai. Then the other legendaries try to stop him and such. I've already pretty much planned it out, and I've even got a prologue for it. So what do you guys think?

Sounds pretty cool. You should write it if you've already planned it out.:happy:

[Hairspray Chick]

How about this? A trainer named Addidas from New Bark Town has to go find his dad, get all of the Pokemon Badges, and go through all of the towns and regions of Pokemon to find his dad or find if his dad is dead or not.
Here's an example:
".... Addidas hopped off the cliff, running after the trainer, the wind blowing in his face. "COME BACK HERE!!!! THAT'S THE PROFESSOR'S POKEMON!!!! YOU CAN'T JUST STEAL IT!!!!!!", shouted Addidas, very agitated. He dove for the trainer's legs, but the trainer swiftly jumped as if this were a daily habit. "You'll never catch me, stupid twirp!", shrieked the trainer, in a dark voice. Suddenly, Addidas felt blood in his mouth, and fainted. He awoke at the laboratory, very weary. "Addidas! What happened?", asked Professor Elm, in a quiet voice. "Here," said a voice that Addidas did not recognise ,"Let me talk to the boy.". As Addidas opened his eyes very slow paced, he saw a policeman next to him. "What was this trainers name who stole the Pokemon, and what did he do to you?", asked the officer. "His name..... he never told me.... but he had Red hair, a Black cloak, and only one Pokemon. He kicked me and jumped when I dove for his legs to catch him, and he knocked out some of my teeth I think.", said Addidas softly, still trying to regain his voice. Suddenly, everyone in the lab heard the window shatter. "It's- it's- him!", stumbled Addidas. "You again? Didn't even run to mummy for help?", said the trainer. "What's your name!!?!?!", screamed the officer, taking out his gun. "My name," said the trainer, pausing ,"is Kahn. And I will be the Pokemon master!". Suddenly, he darted twoards Addidas, with his Cyndaquil. All Addidas saw before he found himself fainting again was a blaze of fire...."

[Psychic Oats]

I was thinking of writing a fic about an illegal, underground battling ring. There are two requirements for entry: one, you may only use one Pokemon; and two, your Pokemon must be holding some type of Orb. The prizes for winning are money and enslaved Pokemon; both stolen, in most cases. The main character sees this as the most effective way to get the money to save his sick mother, and signs up. Soon after, however, she passes away. It's too late, though: her son has already become addicted to the thrill of the battle in the Orbtown Speakeasy, and has no intention of going back.

Still needs some molding, but this is the base premise.

[Kumori Gem]

I was thinking of writing a fic about an illegal, underground battling ring. There are two requirements for entry: one, you may only use one Pokemon; and two, your Pokemon must be holding some type of Orb. The prizes for winning are money and enslaved Pokemon; both stolen, in most cases. The main character sees this as the most effective way to get the money to save his sick mother, and signs up. Soon after, however, she passes away. It's too late, though: her son has already become addicted to the thrill of the battle in the Orbtown Speakeasy, and has no intention of going back.

Still needs some molding, but this is the base premise.

That seems really spooky and cool. I think you should give it a shot.

@Hairspray Chick- That story sounds awesome so far! Although it kind of gives me a sense of deja-vu. But you should write it. ^_^

[Arami]

Hey, I just have a quick question: Does it HAVE to be a fanfic? I have a bunch of stories on my computer that aren't fanfics (because I'm so adverse to them) and I was wondering if I could put them up here.

[Lone_Houndoom]

I have an idea for a fic that I'm REALLY not sure about. What it is, is basically a little adventure into the religion of the Pokemon world, featuring Mew. To put it in a nutshell, it's a one-shot that explains how the whole "Legendary Pokemon=Gods" thing works. My only problem is putting this in the form of a story, but I wanted to make sure it was a good premise before I actually put any sort of work into it.

[Aqua059]

Holy Mew...it's been ages since I've been on PE2K. Well, this thread gets my return post...

I have an idea for a fic that I'm REALLY not sure about. What it is, is basically a little adventure into the religion of the Pokemon world, featuring Mew. To put it in a nutshell, it's a one-shot that explains how the whole "Legendary Pokemon=Gods" thing works. My only problem is putting this in the form of a story, but I wanted to make sure it was a good premise before I actually put any sort of work into it.

I'd read it. Lots of people have done this, but the great thing about 'interpretations' is that they're nearly always original, even if the concept has been explored before (as opposed to New Trainer fics, which are almost NEVER original.) So yeah...go for it. I'd definitely read it.

My idea is a bit long...I've planned out the basics already, and I'm definitely going to write it, but I'd like opinions on it. I'm a sucker for feedback. ^^
~
The story is based on the various Pokemon video games I own (the main ones - no spin-offs, except for maybe Colosseum. Maybe.) It takes place right after the end of Pearl version and stars Kalia Pearl, the new Pokemon Champion. She's a skilled Trainer, but has some control issues and doesn't quite know how to relax. Luckily, her blond rival Lewis is there to keep her from overworking herself.

There are two main plotlines in the story, and they coincide near the end. The first pretty much follows the plot of post-game Pearl, with Kalia and her (rather bizarrely characterized) band of Pokemon investigating the strange events in Sinnoh; ghost swarms in old mansions? Unbreakable nightmares? Active volcanoes? What is this madness?!

The second follows Terry (the slightly effeminate hero of Ruby), Nathan (possible name for the quiet, stubborn male hero of FireRed), and Samantha (crazy, adventurous heroine of LeafGreen) on their quest to find Amber (tough-as-nails heroine of Emerald), the incredibly powerful Hoenn Champion who mysteriously disappeared after receiving a bizarre Pokemon in an anonymous trade. This plotline involves the generation gap between GSC and RSE, strange actions on the parts of the Legendaries, and glitches...lots and lots of glitches. Including MissingNo.

It's mainly an effort to make all of the Pokemon games match up on a sensical timeline, and incorporate them into each other. I've figured out the basic 'skeleton' of the plot - and some key events - but not the entire thing. Sorry if my ideas were too long, but I have a weird mind. :oops:

[Rage12]

After Sinnoh lost the war to Kanto, Sinnoh has been in a slump, and their economy has suffered. As a result, Sinnoh shut down all gyms, and got rid of their contests to save money. Sinnoh now rely on their huge supply of treasures in their mines and underground. Though they do have a lot of treasures, most regions don't care for them much, and only but them out of pity for the crumbling region. Besides all of this, criminal rates have sky rocketed to record highs, and it's now unsafe to live any where in Sinnoh. The region has fallen and no one seems to take an interest in them. It's up to the inhabitants to find their own way to make a living, no matter what they have to do.

With gyms shut down, most children don't even attempt to set out on a journey, considering they'd have to go to another region, and that costs money, and right now, money is sparse. Because of this, they have to sneak on boats to other regions to find jobs, or find jobs on their own land. Team Galaxy, with nothing to truly take over, had started their own business. That business being the illegal drug and Pokemon dealing. In other words, they sent drugs and powerful and rare Pokemon to those who want them for collections. This pays well, but there are a lot routes that the products need to travel through, and there are a lot of suspicious people who can stop the products from being sent. This means Team Galaxy won't get their money, and neither will the starving children who sign up for these jobs. For that reason, Team Galaxy sends people with the products, and give them weapons and sometimes Pokemon to use to kill or dispatch of anyone who gets in their way. Ever since then, Team Galaxy has been successful in getting their products to those who want them, and those who protect the products and deliver them successfully move up in rank.

Now Team Galaxy faces their toughest job yet. They must send a Golden Charizard, a baby Lugia, and twenty pounds of Dragonite Scales to a man in Kanto. The word of this has gotten throughout all the region, and now they're hulking up on security, and butting barricades and nets in the seas to prevent sea travel. This means that who ever is protecting the cargo must fend off multiple enemies in order to complete their journey. The road will be tough, and some may even be lost, but in order to get ahead in life, you must complete the transaction.
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I turned this into an rp but I also want a fan fic about my character. It would be Rated R and center around her troubles of getting the scales, which can be grounded up to make drugs, and the Pokemon to the man that they don't even know. All they have is the address. Plus the rp probably won't work out anyways.

[darkest dialga]

My idea: The story could be about a 10 year old chinese girl,May (born 14 years before the eclipse).She discovers a book full of mysterios secrets about lives of sacred dragons that once helped to create the world itself.All the dragons were common at this time and they new it was time to create humans to the world even if thier creation had only 3/4 of the planet to make.Unexpectedly,the humans tured thier back on the dragons,the emperors had them slayed and sold for good money.The green planet wasn't complete and has to before 1000 years later,there will be an eternal eclipse of darkness,missery and evil.May meets an Asian Lung (chinese dragon,the last of the dragon gods) and travels with Ahack (dragon) on a quest to finnish the job and restore peace,love and compassion.


NOTE: DO NOT COPY!!!

[Chillaxed09]

Hey all, I'm a bit new to the PE2K forums, but I've been on a couple of Pokemon forums in my day. Anyway, I started Pokemon Fan Fic on one of my past forums but I kind of let it die... and now I want to start it again. Hehe. So I saw this board and figured I'd post the basic story line and get a little feedback to see if anyone here would be interested in reading it. It was pretty popular on the old forum... but yeah. Here goes:

So the fic was called "I'm Sixteen Years Old And I've Only Just Now Started My Pokemon Journey." That pretty much is the premise, and throughout the story, other characters make fun of the main character (Aletris) and assume she's totally clueless about all things Pokemon. The reason behind the late start is overprotective parents, so overprotective in fact, that they hire a babysitter of sorts for Aletris to travel with in Hoenn. Only they never imagined who she would be paired up with, and it turns out that her travel companion is this kid named Seth, who is well-known and semi-famous (for what, I never really fully developed. I was thinking something along the lines of breaking up a Team Rocket crime ring or something... any suggestions?) but he doesn't let that on right away. Instead, he's just a total self-absorbed jerk towards Aletris, and thinks it really sucks that he has to haul her around. Aletris, being so sheltered and what not, has never heard of him, but can't help noticing that people treat Seth very oddly. When she finally does find out about his fame, it makes sense to her, but anyway... Because Seth is famous, and because he put an end to an evil plot of TR's, the Rockets have people watching him (they want to kidnap him and hold him for ransom/get revenge for foiling their scheme) throughout the story. After Seth and Aletris have a fight and decide to battle and Aletris actually puts up a good fight (remember how I said everyone just assumes she's a bimbo?) the Rockets get interested in her too. And leader of this branch of the Rockets has his niece working on this lead because he wants her to look good to the upper powers of the organization and yadda yadda... That's another side plot.

And that's as far as I got. They're going to travel all the way through Hoenn, with some little side stories here and there, and a few run-ins with the Rockets, and I have a general idea of how it'll end, which I'd rather not give away in case I do post the entire thing. ;D

So yeah... What do you all think? Will this story fit in here at PE2K? I think I'll give it a shot either way, but opinions are always nice.

Anything, feedback, comments, criticism, suggestions? I appreciate anything. ;D

-Chilly

[WorkThoseStripes]

I posted this in it's own thread, but I've quickly realized, though not quick enough, that it was probably meant to go in here.
Apologies.

A Warning Sign:

It's been a while since I posted here, save a few posts on the RolePlay section, and even longer since I was writing a FanFction of any kind. I've been reading over some that I wrote a while ago and I'm quite glad to say that I've improved, at least a little bit, and I've recently been inspired to start a new, maybe slightly more original, story, compared to my last.

Well, I can't go on babbling about that, so I'll tell oyu the basics of my idea, without giving too much away, while you people can give me feedback so I can improve, or scrap if it's bad, my little story I've got going on.

It's going to be about clones, though not exactly you're everyday science fiction clones, it's going to have a little bit more of a twist. There's an organizaition of some kind, I;m consdering calling them the Saint's, but I'd be more than happy for any suggestion on their name, who have 17 main members, call them the elite members if you want, who are all type specialized. Well, that's pretty simple and unoriginal so far, 17 members for the 17 types, it's all pretty normal about there.

Of course, this particular group has their eye on world domination, because that's just what evil groups do, but what they've done is gathered a group of scientists who have experimented on these 17 members and created clones of them, but not ordinary clones. What the scientists have also done to the clones is found a way of giving them the ability to use thei specialized type's powers. For example, the elite member who specializes in water Pokemon has a clone who has the ability to breathe under water, enhanced swimming abilities and what not. These 17 clones are the orignals and the story is set 16 years after they were cloned, so they are all 16 now. Since then, other clones have been made due to the sucess or the originals, but the story mainly focuses on a few of the original 17. The evil groups plans are to create an army of these super powered people to gain rule over the wrorld.

Why don't they use Pokemon in their army? Well, I'm actually a bit stuck on what reason there is not to use Pokemon, and I may just leave it out. However, if you can suggest anything, then that would also be great. I'm currently considerind that Pokemon are rebeling a lot more recently, and harder to control, a ban on catching Pokemon or Pokemon numbers are dropping. It's a hard one, that one.

The story is set mainly though one of the girl's claims who, one day, discovers a piece of paper with 34 names on, 17 on each side, the right column titled 'Watcher' and the name of her 'Wather' is the name of one of her closest friends. She slowly grows suspicious of everyone around her and it begins off as this girl trying to find out more about herself. Though, it eventaully will grow to be a much bigger story.

So, thoughts, ideas and suggestions will be greatly appreciated. I'm looking forward to doing some writing again now that I've got some spare time.
Thanks.

[Azurne]

Personally, the whole humans with superpowers, no matter what kind of human they are, has been done over and over again. You've got a bit of an interesting twist on it, with the whole clones thing going on.

But it has nothing to do with Pokemon, as you've stated yourself. If you can find some clever way to incorporate Pokemon, then I think it might turn out okay.

The whole world domination thing gets old too, so I'd think about some other goals also, just to spice things up.

[WorkThoseStripes]

I didn't state it had nothing to do with pokemon, did I? D:
It has a lot to do with Pokemon, other than the fact that they're there and stuff. :P

Yes, itneeds a bit of work done on it, which is kind of what I was hoping people could help me with here. :P


Thanks.

[LimeGreen]

I am thinking of a Fan-Fiction about a Kid and he finds a hurt Eevee in the woods and his Dad on a detective misson is kidnapped by some team of Pokemon Stealers(Thinking of a name)and Has to find his dad by finding clues all around Victory Island.

[Azurne]

I didn't state it had nothing to do with pokemon, did I? D:
It has a lot to do with Pokemon, other than the fact that they're there and stuff. :P

Yes, itneeds a bit of work done on it, which is kind of what I was hoping people could help me with here. :P


Thanks.


Why don't they use Pokemon in their army? Well, I'm actually a bit stuck on what reason there is not to use Pokemon, and I may just leave it out.


Shoot. I misread it, sorry. My bad. xD

Sadly, I wish I could help you. But it sounds a little out of my genre, with the whole clones thing. The only thing I might add if I were you is some draw-backs to the clones' powers. As of now it sounds a little one-sided. That, and it might make it more interesting to see what kind of side-effects you can come up with. :P



I am thinking of a Fan-Fiction about a Kid and he finds a hurt Eevee in the woods and his Dad on a detective misson is kidnapped by some team of Pokemon Stealers(Thinking of a name)and Has to find his dad by finding clues all around Victory Island.

I don't want to be the rain on your parade, but the Evee thing has been done already. So hasn't the human-finds-injured-Pokemon. The two together makes it kinda worse. >.>;

The father being kidnapped is good though. D:

[LimeGreen]

Shoot. I misread it, sorry. My bad. xD

Sadly, I wish I could help you. But it sounds a little out of my genre, with the whole clones thing. The only thing I might add if I were you is some draw-backs to the clones' powers. As of now it sounds a little one-sided. That, and it might make it more interesting to see what kind of side-effects you can come up with. :P





I don't want to be the rain on your parade, but the Evee thing has been done already. So hasn't the human-finds-injured-Pokemon. The two together makes it kinda worse. >.>;

The father being kidnapped is good though. D:

Has a bom hurting the Pokemon been done?

[Azurne]

Has a bom hurting the Pokemon been done?

You mean a bomb? Not that I know of. 'Tis a good idea.

[Aqua059]

I have an idea, and want to know if there's any interest out there for something like this.

A collection of oneshots that offer a glimpse into some aspect of a wild Pokemon's life. It wouldn't be just the normal "hunt, eat, survive" mentality...but also some looks into evolution in the wild, some of the special attributes of Pokemon, etc., etc. I had a few ideas for stories in the collection. One is about a Totodile hatchling who watches on as his littermates are each killed in some way or another (predator, starvation), and is eventually the only one left alive - kind of a story on the 'survival of the fittest' idea. Another one is about a Gyarados who lives in an underwater lake, and has spent so long in the darkness that he is blind. The stories are meant to be companions to my primary fic, My Name Is Fuega, but they don't have any of the same characters - just the same ideas and interpretations of the Pokemon world.

They'll be kinda morbid, but...yeah. Any reader interest out there?

[WorkThoseStripes]

Thanks Azurne, sounds like a good idea. I've revamped the story just a slight bit.

I decided that, there is still an evil team and they have been cloning these 17 people for many years. For example, the experiments happened about a 100 years ago (it's a more futuristic Pokemon story, but it's hard to do 'cause I'm not sure just exactly how futuristic Pokemon is now) so there were these 17 people. Not at all evil or anything, but were taken, when they were old, by the evil team and cloned and have been cloned so that there is a new version every 15 years, after deciding that it is best to start using the clones at the age of 15 and then replace them by the age of 30. Again, I might change the ages, I'm thinking on that one. They then use these clones to help with their...urr...evil schemes? Not only will there be this evil team to take down, but also the clones that they are replacing because, well nobody likes to be replaced.

I'm hoping that's a little better. O_O

I'm definately putting draw-backs to the clones powers. They won't exactly be able to use crazy Pokemon powers, which is why they will still have need for their Pokemon. For example, I think the water people will just be able to swim really well and breathe under water. Which, while not being super awesome compared to most super-power stories, is a good power restraint which gives room for Pokemon and is still something that would help an evil time do their evil things.

There will be other characters as well, besides the clones, and there will be small children, who are the clones to replace the ones now as well. I won't be using all of the clones and such, because I don't want a crazy amount of characters, some of them won't even appear, they may just be spoke about briefly.

[LimeGreen]

You mean a bomb? Not that I know of. 'Tis a good idea.

Yeah a bom goes off in the woods causing a baby Eevee to get hurt

[Azurne]

Thanks Azurne, sounds like a good idea. I've revamped the story just a slight bit.

I decided that, there is still an evil team and they have been cloning these 17 people for many years. For example, the experiments happened about a 100 years ago (it's a more futuristic Pokemon story, but it's hard to do 'cause I'm not sure just exactly how futuristic Pokemon is now) so there were these 17 people. Not at all evil or anything, but were taken, when they were old, by the evil team and cloned and have been cloned so that there is a new version every 15 years, after deciding that it is best to start using the clones at the age of 15 and then replace them by the age of 30. Again, I might change the ages, I'm thinking on that one. They then use these clones to help with their...urr...evil schemes? Not only will there be this evil team to take down, but also the clones that they are replacing because, well nobody likes to be replaced.

I'm hoping that's a little better. O_O

I'm definately putting draw-backs to the clones powers. They won't exactly be able to use crazy Pokemon powers, which is why they will still have need for their Pokemon. For example, I think the water people will just be able to swim really well and breathe under water. Which, while not being super awesome compared to most super-power stories, is a good power restraint which gives room for Pokemon and is still something that would help an evil time do their evil things.

There will be other characters as well, besides the clones, and there will be small children, who are the clones to replace the ones now as well. I won't be using all of the clones and such, because I don't want a crazy amount of characters, some of them won't even appear, they may just be spoke about briefly.


Muuuuuuch nicer. Sounds like something I'd like to read now.


Keep in mind the biological effects of being a clone. 1. The psychological effects of knowing you're a "carbon copy" of someone.

Two, the actual biological effects. Shortening of telomeres comes to mind. That's only if your scientists were idiots though, and forgot to check/correct them. (Which, I pray they're not. >.>; The anime "Gundam SEED" Comes to mind. << >>; )


@Aqua059:


Sounds like a Capital idea. :)

[Chaos Rush]

For a VERY LONG time, I've always wanted to write a Fanfic based on Pokemon R/S/E. But I never came to do it ;_;. I don't want people to think, "OMG THIS IS BORING, YOU JUST COPIED THE GAME NOTLOLZ." I could think of many ways to alter the plot of R/S/E, because personally I think its pretty bad but it could definitely be stretched and squished into something much better, and thats what I feel like I want to do. Of course, if I ever to get enough inspiration to do it, I would not go with the, "MAY MOVES FROM TRUCK. BRENDAN AND MAY FALL IN LOVE, LOLZ".

I'm thinking of this plotline:
The Hoenn region had recently had two eruptions, though they weren't overly severe, they had inspired two people to think of what would have happened if it was more severe. Mt. Chimney had a minor eruption, but no true damage was caused. Actually, the eruption had benefits. The eruption carved out a relatively large giant bowl...and then the hot springs were discovered.

The other eruption was at the very bottom of Sootopolis. The water around the Sootopolis crater reached down in water level, and Sootopolis's water rose by a few inches. This helped study the possibilities of homes that can be built underwater, and thus the "eruption" helped scientists decide how they would do that.


...and that's all I got. I know that its rather boring, but I'm trying to see how Team Aqua & Magma would fit in.

[erock98]

For a VERY LONG time, I've always wanted to write a Fanfic based on Pokemon R/S/E. But I never came to do it ;_;. I don't want people to think, "OMG THIS IS BORING, YOU JUST COPIED THE GAME NOTLOLZ." I could think of many ways to alter the plot of R/S/E, because personally I think its pretty bad but it could definitely be stretched and squished into something much better, and thats what I feel like I want to do. Of course, if I ever to get enough inspiration to do it, I would not go with the, "MAY MOVES FROM TRUCK. BRENDAN AND MAY FALL IN LOVE, LOLZ".

I'm thinking of this plotline:
The Hoenn region had recently had two eruptions, though they weren't overly severe, they had inspired two people to think of what would have happened if it was more severe. Mt. Chimney had a minor eruption, but no true damage was caused. Actually, the eruption had benefits. The eruption carved out a relatively large giant bowl...and then the hot springs were discovered.

The other eruption was at the very bottom of Sootopolis. The water around the Sootopolis crater reached down in water level, and Sootopolis's water rose by a few inches. This helped study the possibilities of homes that can be built underwater, and thus the "eruption" helped scientists decide how they would do that.


...and that's all I got. I know that its rather boring, but I'm trying to see how Team Aqua & Magma would fit in.
I think it would be pretty cool.As for team Magma and Aqua.
Maybe they could have been interuppting Kygore and Groudon(assuming they made the erruption).

[Kendo]

Last night, I was thinking about doing some RPG-ish story. In it, some guy travels through a small continent, doing jobs for people. Sounds boring, but I wanted it to be a comedy. There will be three classes: the Warriors, the Mages, and the Beasts, who are incredibly rare and need to have certain characteristics. For those of you who are saying, "This would be a much better RP than a fanfic," I wanted to do an RP AFTER the fanfic is done or has achieved some level of popularity.

Does it sound like a good idea? (If it doesn't, I'll probably start it anyway...)

[Chaos Rush]

Eh..I've thought a little more of my (possible) future Hoenn fic. So far I've written half of Entry 1, and I think I've already started something different than other journey fics: It starts off a school! YES, SCHOOL! I'll write a really short summary of it:

Brendan is failing his course at the Rustboro Trainer's School, and Ms. Roxanne refuses to let him graduate because of his poor work on the final exam (Whismur is NOT a legendary Pokemon...). Brendan starts daydreaming about his friends: Wally & May. Wally was his long time friend always there for him, and May was once his friend but Brendan got intimidated by larger boys following May. Brendan was asked to retake the test, and if he can achieve at least an A-, then his grade will rise from an F to a D, thus allowing Ms. Roxanne to pass him and graduate.

Also in Trainer School, they each start out with a "study" Pokemon. Brendan has a Seedot :P. I've already planned out Brendan, May, and Wally's Pokemon teams...I want to make sure the first entry (chapter) is perfect before releasing it here.

[Chillaxed09]

Eh..I've thought a little more of my (possible) future Hoenn fic. So far I've written half of Entry 1, and I think I've already started something different than other journey fics: It starts off a school! YES, SCHOOL! I'll write a really short summary of it:

Brendan is failing his course at the Rustboro Trainer's School, and Ms. Roxanne refuses to let him graduate because of his poor work on the final exam (Whismur is NOT a legendary Pokemon...). Brendan starts daydreaming about his friends: Wally & May. Wally was his long time friend always there for him, and May was once his friend but Brendan got intimidated by larger boys following May. Brendan was asked to retake the test, and if he can achieve at least an A-, then his grade will rise from an F to a D, thus allowing Ms. Roxanne to pass him and graduate.

Also in Trainer School, they each start out with a "study" Pokemon. Brendan has a Seedot :P. I've already planned out Brendan, May, and Wally's Pokemon teams...I want to make sure the first entry (chapter) is perfect before releasing it here.
I like that idea. <3 It's like something that was mentioned before, about taking a basic story and giving it a twist. In your case, you took the trainer school in Rustboro and went off that.

Sounds good, keep at it!

PS- Your last sentence gives me confidence in you. xD

[Chaos Rush]

Uh-oh, I just posted my (soon-to-possibly-die) Hoenn fic. And I don't think it was perfect either :surprise: ...

Anyways, I've altered May's tiny backstory a bit...even though its just a tiny detail.

[james_gotex]

I used to make fan fics but then get easily bored as I would usually use an idea over an over again.
I have recentley thought of a new Idea of my fan fic which contains a boy- as usual, but he is about to start his journey (usual and boring i know) when he gets robbed by team rocket and ends up becoming a member of the team.

I have always wandered what a story would be like from a member of team rocket, as they were a great team but fell drastically, In my story i plan to tell the uprising of Team Rocket and how they did it.

What are your peoples ideas/comments on my idea?

[Rage12]

I sort have an idea, but I don't know if I'm going to do it.

Basically, it's about Ivry. She's twenty something years old, and now works for the Sinnoh Police Force. They've recently found out that Sinnoh's presidents son has gone missing, As it turns out, his son has traveled to the unpopulated Johto Region to compete in illegal Pokemon races. Ivry, being one of the best, was sent to Johto to fish him out of the lifestyle. Ivry soon becomes addicted to racing, and looses sight of her mission. Eventually, she becomes so great at it that she never looses. The people who run the races quickly become furious as she is taking all their money. The leaders realize that they must get rid of her, but since she's addicted, they're going to have to kill her. Ivry realizes that she is going to be killed, and quits racing. The leaders don't care and isist on killing her. She realizes that she hasn't finished her mission, and must retrieve the President's son, and then leave the region. The leaders eventually catch on, and now, Ivry must track them down in order to save the President's son.

[james_gotex]

I sort have an idea, but I don't know if I'm going to do it.

Basically, it's about Ivry. She's twenty something years old, and now works for the Sinnoh Police Force. They've recently found out that Sinnoh's presidents son has gone missing, As it turns out, his son has traveled to the unpopulated Johto Region to compete in illegal Pokemon races. Ivry, being one of the best, was sent to Johto to fish him out of the lifestyle. Ivry soon becomes addicted to racing, and looses sight of her mission. Eventually, she becomes so great at it that she never looses. The people who run the races quickly become furious as she is taking all their money. The leaders realize that they must get rid of her, but since she's addicted, they're going to have to kill her. Ivry realizes that she is going to be killed, and quits racing. The leaders don't care and isist on killing her. She realizes that she hasn't finished her mission, and must retrieve the President's son, and then leave the region. The leaders eventually catch on, and now, Ivry must track them down in order to save the President's son.
I like your idea, mainly because she doesnt have to really rescue him at the start, but has her work cut out for her later, could be a good read

[Larvinator]

I sort have an idea, but I don't know if I'm going to do it.

Basically, it's about Ivry. She's twenty something years old, and now works for the Sinnoh Police Force. They've recently found out that Sinnoh's presidents son has gone missing, As it turns out, his son has traveled to the unpopulated Johto Region to compete in illegal Pokemon races. Ivry, being one of the best, was sent to Johto to fish him out of the lifestyle. Ivry soon becomes addicted to racing, and looses sight of her mission. Eventually, she becomes so great at it that she never looses. The people who run the races quickly become furious as she is taking all their money. The leaders realize that they must get rid of her, but since she's addicted, they're going to have to kill her. Ivry realizes that she is going to be killed, and quits racing. The leaders don't care and isist on killing her. She realizes that she hasn't finished her mission, and must retrieve the President's son, and then leave the region. The leaders eventually catch on, and now, Ivry must track them down in order to save the President's son.
I don't think I've ever seen a Pokemon story involving illegal racing; great kudos to you for originality! The only issue I have is with the leaders continuing their efforts to try and kill her even after she quits; it doesn't seem like they'd have much of a reason to keep going after her if she's quit...unless they're afraid she'll just start right back up again after she lays low. Hmm. A great idea overall. =D

Anyway, I have a non-Pokemon story idea about a world, with medieval technology, and almost exactly the same as our world was at that time. But the discovery of a strange, conjurable, malleable matter known as the Bloody Shadow for its black-and-red coloring is set to change the primitive technology of the world. However, needless paranoia over its sinister appearance and the fact that one can also summon intelligent creatures lead to the rise of a guild known as the Dawn Warriors. They easily pressure the monarchy into banning the strange substance.

But a cult formed soon afterwards. Originally founded to study the Bloody Shadow, the Bleeding Twilight quickly began to form a fanatical religion around it instead, whose disgusting practices included human sacrifice and immediate death to any who disagreed with their religion. A young woman, eighteen years old and with the name Azali, is part of this cult but has become more and more disgusted with it since two years ago; she received a "Living Shadow", one of the creatures made completely out of the Bloody Shadow, but in return for the blessing the cult sacrificed her mother. She finally leaves, seeking to divulge the Bleeding Twilight's whereabouts to the Dawn Warriors in the ultimate act of revenge. It seems a simple enough task, but nothing is ever simple...

[Rage12]

That sound interesting. I'd probably read it if you posted it, and I think you should. It sounds like it would be sort of violent, and if it's violent, I'll really read it.

Oh, and they keep chasing her because she's still in the region, and they think she's going to get back into racing after she changes her identity and such.

[Master_of_Munch]

Maybe it's already been done, but what does everyone think of a Halo fanfic? It would focus around Spartan-31, Adam, and Team Seercry. I don't have much more planning in than that, but it leaves a lot of openings, and I think me, or maybe someone else, could make something good out of it.

[shadow6567]

i have an idea for a fan fic:okay,this takes place in a world with four areas:the water,fire,ice,and forest regions.There are mythical creatures roaming the land (dragons,elfs).The technology is sorta like halo,lord of the rings,and star wars with magic (theres only a handful of people that can use it).Now there at war with these alien-like creatures from another deimension.When commander isamu (japenese name for warrior) has lost the final fort in the ice region and he is about to jump on a rescue ship when he remembers the Book of the Begining,a sacred artifact with power to destroy the world,is inside.He is about to go back when the last troop that survived the aliens sets off a bomb,forcing isamu to jump on,leaving the book to sink into the snow,waiting for someone to come and get it.

After that,it goes on to daniel who teams up with a girl elf from a tribe in the fire region

[Holumanto]

I have this idea for a PMD fan-fic but I'm not completely sure if it would be a hit, what do you think of this idea?:

In a world inhabitated only by Pokemon, destruction draws near. Evil doers and criminal Pokemon have been causing tragedy on the lands and something must be done about it. Chief Charles (Blaziken), has had trouble with these criminals but in his most recent injury he is unable to continue his duty so he gives the duty to his son Marcus (Combusken). His son, aided by the two officers Charles sent, must go find Jirachi and wish for the Hero told in the legends to come.

There is a legend that a human would be transformed into a human and would banish the darkness forever but the Hero hasn't shown yet so Marcus with the two officers must ascend Mt. Twilight to wish for the Hero to arrive. Some had tried to wish the darkness away but for some strange reason it wouldn't work. Will Marcus be able to reach Twilight's peak or will evil Pokemon stand in his way? Will this Hero told in the legends come and help banish the darkness? Read to find out...

[Kendo]

I have this idea for a PMD fan-fic but I'm not completely sure if it would be a hit, what do you think of this idea?:

In a world inhabitated only by Pokemon, destruction draws near. Evil doers and criminal Pokemon have been causing tragedy on the lands and something must be done about it. Chief Charles (Blaziken), has had trouble with these criminals but in his most recent injury he is unable to continue his duty so he gives the duty to his son Marcus (Combusken). His son, aided by the two officers Charles sent, must go find Jirachi and wish for the Hero told in the legends to come.

There is a legend that a human would be transformed into a human and would banish the darkness forever but the Hero hasn't shown yet so Marcus with the two officers must ascend Mt. Twilight to wish for the Hero to arrive. Some had tried to wish the darkness away but for some strange reason it wouldn't work. Will Marcus be able to reach Twilight's peak or will evil Pokemon stand in his way? Will this Hero told in the legends come and help banish the darkness? Read to find out...
Human transforms into POKEMON, you mean.

Sounds good, but also kind of short. Then agaiin, short isn't always a bad thing. ;3

[Holumanto]

Human transforms into POKEMON, you mean.

Sounds good, but also kind of short. Then agaiin, short isn't always a bad thing. ;3

Yeah it's a PMD story, but there will be an extremely long storyline concerning Marcus, Charles, the Hero and many more characters.

[ArkanaNiteJoker]

This is actually my first fan fic which started as a book I wrote for a contest in 8th grade(which was like 6 months ago).

Im just gonna list the specifics:

Characters:

Zane- 16 year old high school student. His whole life changed when he witnessed his parents death at the age of 6 on his hometown island of Destiny Island. He has a twin brother named Axl. Zane can call out a carbon colored sword by stating its name.
He also has an ability he can only use, which is to fuse his own sword with another specific sword to form the ultimate weapon(not it's name though).

Axl- 16 year old high school student like Zane. He is Zane's twin and is younger by 2 minutes. He likes studying instead of fighting unlike his brother. He too witnessed that same bloody scene. He has the same ability as Zane.

Sam- See Axl and Zane. He's Zane's closest friend. Sam never leaves Zane to fight alone unless requested. Sam has the same special ability as Zane.

Krystal- See Axl and Zane. She has some strange energy that makes Zane freak out. She resembles some one from Zane's dark past. Same ability as Zane.

Gin- 17 years old. He is the school's pervert. >.> He heads up the news paper club with Tsukune Aono.

Tsukune- 16 years old. Helps Gin with the news paper club. He gives Zane help full advice. He hangs out with Kurumu and Moka.

Moka- 16 years old. She's a vampire and she loves hanging out with Zane, Axl, and Tsukune. She has immense power but its locked away.

Kurumu- 16 years old. She's um... how can I say this without the mods getting all over me... uber sexy UPPER body. She's not to bright.

Zanex- Zane's evil side. He takes control of Zane at one point then breaks free into a body of his own.

Organization XIII- Also known as the Indie Tribe. They have a fourteenth member that has ties with Zane. They can give people the Indie Force, the power to take on the looks of that member and powers, in the form of a glowing insignia on the palm of that person.


Summary:

Zane gets tangled up with the Organization at the age of 14 and has to stop there evil plot to destroy the earth using the power of their Indie Spirit. But in all the chaos, a shady man controls them as he attempts to take destroy time and space as he attempts to kill Zane, Axl, and Sam. Zane loses control of Zanex and ends up doing he something he regrets.

I'm not gonna give away any more of the plot away as it's actually pretty good from what my high school English teachers told me at my awards ceremony.

[Grsspkmnmaster]

I have an idea for a non-pokemon related story. This is my first attempt to write a fan-fiction, so please, no flaming, but I do need a little help. I'm sorry if this sounds a lot like Spiderman, but I can't get any better... if someone could help me via PM?

Its about a kid who has a normal life. It is the year 2050, and technology qhas now made it posible to experiment with a form of liiquid metal that has organic properties. In non-tech jargon, this means that there is liquid metal that can think for itself. The kid takes a class tour to the labs where the metal is being worked with, on the day where two droplets have gained the emotion of courage and want to be out of the test tubes and want to get out of the lab. They hitch onto the kid for a ride, and in return, they give him control over them. They can turn into any simpe metal object (knives swords, rings, etc) and they give him the power where he can tell them what to form into by thought. However, the drawback is that the larger the object gets, the more brittle and liable it is to breaking, though this doesn't harm the droplets. From there, he discovers his power, and has to keep it a complete secret from the world in his high school years as he tries to go through life. No, no villains are going to jump out in Spandex, but he'll have to deal with bullies, crushes, sports, homework, etc. He only uses his powers when he's alone, and he doesn't know what to do with them.

[Dark Lightning]

I have an idea for a non-pokemon related story. This is my first attempt to write a fan-fiction, so please, no flaming, but I do need a little help. I'm sorry if this sounds a lot like Spiderman, but I can't get any better... if someone could help me via PM?

Its about a kid who has a normal life. It is the year 2050, and technology qhas now made it posible to experiment with a form of liiquid metal that has organic properties. In non-tech jargon, this means that there is liquid metal that can think for itself. The kid takes a class tour to the labs where the metal is being worked with, on the day where two droplets have gained the emotion of courage and want to be out of the test tubes and want to get out of the lab. They hitch onto the kid for a ride, and in return, they give him control over them. They can turn into any simpe metal object (knives swords, rings, etc) and they give him the power where he can tell them what to form into by thought. However, the drawback is that the larger the object gets, the more brittle and liable it is to breaking, though this doesn't harm the droplets. From there, he discovers his power, and has to keep it a complete secret from the world in his high school years as he tries to go through life. No, no villains are going to jump out in Spandex, but he'll have to deal with bullies, crushes, sports, homework, etc. He only uses his powers when he's alone, and he doesn't know what to do with them.
That actually sounds like a very nice idea. ^_^
I like it.

[Grsspkmnmaster]

That actually sounds like a very nice idea. ^_^
I like it.
really?

[Dark Lightning]

really?
Yeah, I'm attracted to the plot. Seriously.

[Scourge of Amaranth]

So. I am the cowriter of a lovely little in-progress piece my lovely author and I like to call 'Mors Vincit Omnia'.

This is, in the simplest of words, a Death Note fanfiction that was horribly mutilated by boredom combined with math class (never apply this conglomeration to an artistic, obsessed mind--the results always go... BOOM).

The basic idea: Light never picked up the Death Note (don't turn away from that there; it's not a random OC that subsequently meets and falls in love with L) Oh, no. It was Mikami that found it. He acted similarly to Light... but, as things usually go when dealing with the lesser intelligent, something went wrong. Horribly, laughably wrong. Mikami failed. The entire world as we know it was obliterated as a man revealed secrets better left unkept and a new being stepped in to fill Kira's shoes. An entire war began as the Second Kira erected a fortress in the Siberian snow and began assaulting various locations across the globe, stating that only those who followed and supported Kira would be allowed to live. To the smartest involved, something seems out of place--there is an unknown variable manipulating the facts.

The story starts four years after the Death Note was picked up by Mikami and will focus primarily on a young, uninspired soon-to-be-involuntarily-shipped-off-as-a soldier (our dearest Light, much changed by the war) who has nothing to prove. He has little to live for, nothing to die for, and no one to fight for. In addition, the decisions, mistakes, and interferences that led the world to this point will be revealed throughout.

There will be enough background to involve those who haven't read the original Death Note series....

Questions? Props? Pointers? Worries? I know the plot sounds rather lame and unoriginal as is, but, heh, that's because the plot looks lame and unoriginal (not to mention alot simpler :/) when it's not accompanied with all of the little important tidbits. I'd really like to know what people think when they come upon such a plot. It's still very much in the works, and it's nice to be able to have a little foresight in various aspects of writing....

~IGC t DM+

[newblue]

I've been planning a fic, and I finnally came up with an idea I like, but an idea is judged as good or bad by the readers, not the writer.

Kyogre is the 'King of the Sea', and Manaphy is the 'Prince of the Sea'. If Kyogre dies, Manaphy becomes 'King of the Sea'. If Manaphy dies, or takes over Kyogre's position, Phione takes Manaphy's position. So, after discovering this, the remnants of Team Aqua formulated a plan to give the powers assossiated to the 'King of the Sea' to Phione, and take advantage of its inexperience with humans to control it like a puppet, while giving it the illusion of free will.

So, the main character has to make Phione believe that they're really the bad guys, and save it from their clutches.

If the second part, sounds pretty vague, thats because I still need to find a compelling reason to make him want to save Phione, to motivate him enough to feel he needs to save Phione. Yeah, it does have a few plot holes, like Team Aqua having the power, and being willing to kill both Manaphy and Kyogre.

Is my idea good, original, overused, or bad? Or a combination? Oh, and thanks in advance for any and all help you can give me!

[Aqua059]

I have this idea for a PMD fan-fic but I'm not completely sure if it would be a hit, what do you think of this idea?:

In a world inhabitated only by Pokemon, destruction draws near. Evil doers and criminal Pokemon have been causing tragedy on the lands and something must be done about it. Chief Charles (Blaziken), has had trouble with these criminals but in his most recent injury he is unable to continue his duty so he gives the duty to his son Marcus (Combusken). His son, aided by the two officers Charles sent, must go find Jirachi and wish for the Hero told in the legends to come.

There is a legend that a human would be transformed into a human and would banish the darkness forever but the Hero hasn't shown yet so Marcus with the two officers must ascend Mt. Twilight to wish for the Hero to arrive. Some had tried to wish the darkness away but for some strange reason it wouldn't work. Will Marcus be able to reach Twilight's peak or will evil Pokemon stand in his way? Will this Hero told in the legends come and help banish the darkness? Read to find out...

Points for originality. I don't think I've ever seen a multi-chaptered PMD fic that doesn't center on the human-turned-Pokemon. Go for it, and PM me when you do - I'll gladly review it.

I've been planning a fic, and I finnally came up with an idea I like, but an idea is judged as good or bad by the readers, not the writer.

Kyogre is the 'King of the Sea', and Manaphy is the 'Prince of the Sea'. If Kyogre dies, Manaphy becomes 'King of the Sea'. If Manaphy dies, or takes over Kyogre's position, Phione takes Manaphy's position. So, after discovering this, the remnants of Team Aqua formulated a plan to give the powers assossiated to the 'King of the Sea' to Phione, and take advantage of its inexperience with humans to control it like a puppet, while giving it the illusion of free will.

So, the main character has to make Phione believe that they're really the bad guys, and save it from their clutches.

If the second part, sounds pretty vague, thats because I still need to find a compelling reason to make him want to save Phione, to motivate him enough to feel he needs to save Phione. Yeah, it does have a few plot holes, like Team Aqua having the power, and being willing to kill both Manaphy and Kyogre.

Is my idea good, original, overused, or bad? Or a combination? Oh, and thanks in advance for any and all help you can give me!

Original. Definitely original. You can get around the plotholes with some good, old-fashioned intricacy...invent loopholes, like Manaphy taking the position if Kyogre goes into hibernation. I'll review, if you'd like...

Heck, I'll review anyone's new fic. Just wing me a PM when you do so.

So I has an idea as well. See, I have this author-verse humorfic, with my online self (Aqua) and her Delta Species muses, as well as some other authors' characters. In a flash of inspiration, I decided to turn the totally not-serious collection of crazy oneshots into a slightly-more-serious series about Aqua and her posse...but there's a catch.

See, Aqua lives in a world based on the TCG.

Some of the ideas reek of Digimon Tamers (it might reek of Yu-Gi-Oh! too, but I can't be sure), but I swear to Arceus I was attempting to be original while designing it.

In this world, something called Energy exists in all objects, but is more concentrated in some areas than others. Pokemon are created when animals absorb Energy into their bodies and are assimilated by it, becoming elemental. An invention called an enconn captures and stores Pokemon and Energy, as well as other Energy-charged objects and programs that alter Energy on the battlefield.

Aqua's father is a scientist working for a company called TrainerPro that produces enconns and enconn plug-ins. When he discovers a mutational Energy type called Holon Energy, the first thing TrainerPro does is tell him to find a beta-tester for it. Aqua is given a prototype enconn and a Delta Species Growlithe puppy (the end result of one of her father's Holon Energy experiments) and sent out on a journey. The plot moves on from there, eventually gaining a villian and such.

So...thoughts?

[Luu]

Non-Pokémon Plot
First attempt at actually continuing a story that I originally started playing the game it’s based off of. True, I have already gotten to the third page on my notepad with it. I colour coded it too for my ease (and the fact I don’t always remember who is talking when. The story takes place three years after the original events of Final Fantasy X and one year after the events of Final Fantasy X-2. (If you didn’t get a required amount at the end, and did not know Tidus comes back, then stop reading because he is in it.)


A young girl, notably known in the story as being Cres (although it is not her real name), just so happened to be a Summoner before Lady Yuna had become one herself. She was a mere ten year old at the time, with a few Guardians; Anmíng, Isaac and Oscar. Once she found out the truth behind Yevon, Zanarkand and the Final Aeon, (by this time, both her male Guardians had died trying to protect her) Cres decided not to go on with her Pilgrimage and flee to the Al Bhed Home at the time. It was lucky that Anmíng was an Al Bhed, one who lied to the temples (luls, will be explained when I actually get to the part) to be Guardian of Cres. After Lady Yuna brought the Eternal Calm, and the Fayth awoke, Cres disappeared as did Tidus.

Now with the Fayth dreaming once again, a return of Yu Yevon’s shield, Sin, is about to awaken. With Cres appearing on the Besaid Island after an absurd dream from the Fayth in her time, will Cres be able to muster up the courage to re-do a disturbing Pilgrimage with an old Guardian and some new ones?


Features appearances of Yuna, Rikku, Paine, Tidus, Wakka, Lulu, Vidina (Go get episode complete in X-2 in Besaid Island) etc.


Characters (so far that are planned)

Cres. Thirteen.
Ex-Summoner from three years ago.
Already in story.


Anmíng. Nineteen.
Al Bhed who is devoted to take care of Cres.
Not in story yet.


Bjin. ???
Request for a friend. She wanted to create a male version of a Viera (unfortunately, I got stuck with it).
Comes from Ivalice, quite a mysterious guy who agrees to be Cres’s guardian when she was in Djose.
Go to FF12 for details on the fact there are no males, but my friend > me. My friend > Final Fantasy.
Not in story yet.


I know the plot is a bit "woooo muddled" but I'm tired. >__<

It's easier NOT to have a plot for it, because so far, I'm not even sticking with the Sin return, lol.

[chosen_one1]

I've already started working on this idea- 2 ex-members of Team Rocket hunt down Giovanni and tell him Team Rocket is reforming. The plan- find the scientists at Silph Co respnsible for the creation of Porygon and forcing them to create Team Rocket a pokemon of their own. This is a good idea, right? It is amazingly action packed.

[Gravity]

I have one; the story of a female Night Elf Demon Hunter as she hunts down and destroys those who murdered her family, onto to discover dark secrets kept for ages.

[Giratina]

The Idea:

Three Pokemon (This isn't PMD, but it looks like it in the beginning.) are on a hunt for the fantastic and legendary Dimension Key, said to unlock fantastic treasures beyond any of their wildest dreams. When they think - or, at least two of them - they have finally found it, the 'leader' of the group - an anthro Persian - struts up to the 'Key' and grabs it, despite the most knowledgeable of the three - a Magneton named Helio - repeatedly telling her that it's not what they're looking for.

It's not.

As it turns out, the 'Key' was in reality the Galaxy Key, an item said to transport the wielder and anyone near it to the universe it was thinking of when they touched it. Since neither of the other two Pokemon, the Persian and a Raichu, were thinking of any others at the moment, it was Helio who's mind was read and determined the three Pokemon friends' destination:

The Human world.

When they arrive, the Magneton seems to be a lot more familiar then he was back in their home dimension...

Well? What do you think?

[AipomnFriends]

i wanna write a Pokemon adventure and romance fic on a touchy subject in today's world

THIS IS THE PLOT

it will be an adventure that split up a couple that were in love but now become rivals on the ones request

What happens is that there is a gay couple haven't figured out names yet but it will be two guys

They are 18 and the ones boyfriends is made by his parents to break-up and start a Pokemon journey and leaves his boyfriend

well the other boyfriends decides to start his own Pokemon journey to get his boyfriend who left without explain why he left back

The ones boyfriends parents are against gay people those are the ones that made the one Boy start a journey

And so far i think it could be a very sad but exciting story with new love connections and adventures

Can I get feed back before I start writing

[Trainer17]

Well, this is my first ever attempt at writing a Non-Pokemon Story, so bear with me :oops:

Based on many quest solving, mind cracking puzzle adventure books. Some of the puzzles and stuffs I found there was really a big headache, but when I saw the answer, I was like, Lol! Good Game x3

What's it about?
It's based on Crime-Solving/Thriller/Mind-Cracking kind of a Fic. Why, you too can take part in some of the puzzles the hero faces in the Adventure! Just a normal detective venturing around the world solving crimes and so forth, but with some fun stuff to do here and there.

Plot :
-Still Working-

So any comments? :o

[invalid]

I was thinking of writing an OT fic that is different from the standard noob stories.

First off, the main character catches his Pokemon himself, then he struggles to control it, and when he gets on his journey, he faces starvation, winter weather, and the other things a 10 year old kid would face in out world if he was all alone in the world.

Would anyone read it?

[Lusankya]

Depends on how you write it, but sounds like something new. Harsh is good.

[invalid]

Depends on how you write it, but sounds like something new. Harsh is good.

I figure life is harsh, why should my character's be any different?

But do you think it will be read?

[Lusankya]

Without knowing how you write, I can't say. Fanfics can be very hit or miss.