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kitten_Gal
02-21-2007, 12:12 AM
Rules
1.No sick or wrong stuff in the song
2.no cusing in the song
3.It has to be your own song


Lets start

Crazy dream

(verse 1)
You see me by the river side
I look up at you
You look in my eyes
I'm not my self
(chorus)
Things can go crazy
But don't get dazed
It's just a dream
Without meaning
(verse2)
I tell you whats wrong
You looked at me in shock
I nod and hug you
you hug me back
(chorus)
Things can go crazy
But don't get dazed
It's just a dream
Without meaning
(verse 3)
I'll follow my dream
Get out and live
It's a dream
Every one follows there own...
(Ending)
Don't go Crazy...
Things are daszy...
It's...Just...A...Crazy...Dream

Anala
02-21-2007, 12:24 AM
Rules
1.No sick or wrong stuff in the song
2.no cusing in the song
3.It has to be your own song


Lets start

Crazy dream

(verse 1)
You see me by the river side
I look up at you
You look in my eyes
I'm not my self
(chorus)
Things can go crazy
But don't get dazed
It's just a dream
Without meaning
(verse2)
I tell you whats wrong
You looked at me in shock
I nod and hug you
you hug me back
(chorus)
Things can go crazy
But don't get dazed
It's just a dream
Without meaning
(verse 3)
I'll follow my dream
Get out and live
It's a dream
Every one follows there own...
(Ending)
Don't go Crazy...
Things are daszy...
It's...Just...A...Crazy...Dream
Ooohh! Your song is so good! Here's mine:

(Verse 1)
I walk dowm the road,
There's nothing I can do,
I tried to stop it from happening,
But I can't live without you.
(Chorus)
Why'd ya have to go and hurt yourself?
I can't be alone.
Please come soon.
Please come back home.
(Verse 2)
You were always there to help,
I wish you were here,
I want you beside me,
So you can dry my tears.
(Chorus)
Why'd ya have to go and hurt yourself?
I can't be alone.
Please come soon.
Please come back home.
(Ending)
Please.... Come.... Back.... Home.

kitten_Gal
02-23-2007, 11:33 PM
Ooohh! Your song is so good! Here's mine:

(Verse 1)
I walk dowm the road,
There's nothing I can do,
I tried to stop it from happening,
But I can't live without you.
(Chorus)
Why'd ya have to go and hurt yourself?
I can't be alone.
Please come soon.
Please come back home.
(Verse 2)
You were always there to help,
I wish you were here,
I want you beside me,
So you can dry my tears.
(Chorus)
Why'd ya have to go and hurt yourself?
I can't be alone.
Please come soon.
Please come back home.
(Ending)
Please.... Come.... Back.... Home.

Very good

Miracle kiss
(verse 1)
I'm a different girl in her own world
The boy I love is hidden in my heart
I can't tell this felling
It hurt to think about
(Chorus)
A kiss from you would be a miracle come ture
A kiss from you would lighten my heart
A kiss that would make me smile
A kiss that make my heart sing
(verse 2)
I am so sad without you
Im lost in my love
I need to tell you to destory my hurt
I tell my love
(Chorus)
A kiss from you would be a miracle come ture
A kiss from you would lighten my heart
A kiss that would make me smile
A kiss that make my heart sing
(Verse 3)
I lean in eyes sparkaling
You lean in love showing
Our lips touch
It a kiss for sure
(Chorus)
A kiss from you would be a miracle come ture
A kiss from you would lighten my heart
A kiss that would make me smile
A kiss that make my heart sing
(ending)
A kiss that...Will...Change my life forever