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03-04-2004, 02:12 AM
Life is an unexplored territory,
--------For mysteries lie in doubt,
For there is much to be seen.

For the clouds lie ahead, waiting,
---------Waiting for someone to stumble,
Waiting to show the darkness that had been,
---------Or will be.

Yet the Sun lies ahead, wanting,
---------Wanting for it to show its light,
Wanting for its chance to shine, and be seen.
---------And chance one will have, to see
---------Its brightness.

Life is exploring,
---------Finding the way, trying not to be trampled.
Yet there may be smog that clouds the gene,
---------Or there may be a sea
---------Of happiness.
Nothing is sure, the unexplored territory.


Untitled Poem I made many years ago...

03-07-2004, 05:47 AM
Beautiful poem, gives people an angelic heavenly feeling.

03-17-2004, 09:22 AM
:angel: I'd give it 2000/10!!!! :angel: A beautiful poem.

11-30-2007, 12:06 AM
Well it's really good and stuff and... yeah... :razz:

02-10-2008, 01:53 AM
marvelous marvelous youll become a star

Tyler Birch
02-28-2008, 02:15 AM
They all said it ^^

it's a great poem hopefully you have more like it

Kei Ochima
03-28-2008, 12:59 AM
i really like the poem.

03-28-2008, 01:10 AM
i really like the poem.

Lol, this was revived like 3 times. ^_________________^


Neo Emolga
03-28-2008, 05:39 AM
If the last post is over a month old, don't revive it.