rate my sprites

[pichudude]

http://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/mew_pichu_fusion.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/black_kyogre.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/mew_pokeball.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/umbreon_pokeball.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/abra.png Please rate them so i know how im doing.

[Anorexic Snorlax]

http://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/mew_pichu_fusion.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/black_kyogre.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/mew_pokeball.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/umbreon_pokeball.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/abra.png Please rate them so i know how im doing.

Wrong section, but those are...pretty good. • •;;

[Lord Voldemort]

http://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/mew_pichu_fusion.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/black_kyogre.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/mew_pokeball.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/umbreon_pokeball.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/abra.png Please rate them so i know how im doing.

Apart from the kyogre recolor, which is either too dark to see te shading, or has no shading, those are good.

[pichudude]

it was one that i made for someone and thats how they wanted it. P.S. which section should this be in?

[Dynamik]

Sprite Board...right?

[pichudude]

i was looking and thats what i think i should have put this in. :redface:

[Azumao]

http://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/mew_pichu_fusion.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/black_kyogre.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/mew_pokeball.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/umbreon_pokeball.pnghttp://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/abra.png Please rate them so i know how im doing.

Like someone said earlier, the Kyogre is too dark with no shading. That, and there are still brown spots on the Abra recolor. :/ Good for a beginner, though. At least you're not using default paint colors. :P

[pichudude]

the kyogre is how someone wanted it. they wanted it pitch black on top with a red "R" on it some where. By the way in not really a beginner. Ive been doing this for a while. Heres another one:http://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/carizard_raquaza.png (im not being mean ok)

[Chewy]

The Pichu/Mew fusion's ears are not placed properly; they don't look right. The kyogre recolor has no shading. Other than that, you're pretty good.

Oh, and you didn't adjust the outlines on the Rayquaza recolor. You need to improve on recolors.

[pichudude]

Like someone said earlier, the Kyogre is too dark with no shading. That, and there are still brown spots on the Abra recolor. :/ Good for a beginner, though. At least you're not using default paint colors. :P

the kyogre is soposed to be like that.

[Azumao]

the kyogre is how someone wanted it. they wanted it pitch black on top with a red "R" on it some where. By the way in not really a beginner. Ive been doing this for a while. Heres another one:http://www.maj.com/gallery/the1/spriting/carizard_raquaza.png (im not being mean ok)

The outline is still green. What is it with people and recoloring outlines?

*BTW, just out of my own curiousity, how long have you beens spriting? :] *

[pichudude]

well im sort of a beginner but ive been spriting for about 2 weeks. i can do lots of thing. P.S. is ok to double post here?

[Azumao]

well im sort of a beginner but ive been spriting for about 2 weeks. i can do lots of thing. P.S. is ok to double post here?

Two weeks isn't a long time. Lol.

No, you shouldn't double post. Although you wouldn't be now, since I responded to you. :/

[pichudude]

ok. there my best. i have others but i dont want to put them up.

[Lord Voldemort]

ok. there my best. i have others but i dont want to put them up.

You should also use proper grammar, but becuase you're not using a whole bunch of 0's and alternating between capitals and lower case, its not that big of a deal. Just try to capitalize the beginning of your sentences and the I's. Also get the right their/there/they're.

And its most of the posts like these that I mess up like three times on grammar. I just got into the habit of using "grammar" instead of "grammer", and it is quite embarassing when I say "You should use good grammer."

[Elmo's Heaven!!]

You should also use proper grammar, but becuase you're not using a whole bunch of 0's and alternating between capitals and lower case, its not that big of a deal. Just try to capitalize the beginning of your sentences and the I's. Also get the right their/there/they're.

And its most of the posts like these that I mess up like three times on grammar. I just got into the habit of using "grammar" instead of "grammer", and it is quite embarassing when I say "You should use good grammer."
Yeah, then you get flamed for spelling grammar wrong. Never happened to me though.

[pichudude]

Ok. I will use correct grammer.

[Elmo's Heaven!!]

Ok. I will use correct grammer.
Grammar.


Anyways, there is no shading on the Kyogre, as you have been told, multiple times.

[pichudude]

Ok. I will use correct grammar. Is this a little better?

[pichudude]

Grammar.


Anyways, there is no shading on the Kyogre, as you have been told, multiple times.

For the 1,000,000 time it's supposed to be like that. That is how someone wanted it on a different forum that gave me a dumb ban for absolutly no reason. I'm so sorry for double posting.

[Elmo's Heaven!!]

For the 1,000,000 time it's supposed to be like that. That is how someone wanted it on a different forum that gave me a dumb ban for absolutly no reason. I'm so sorry for double posting.
Use the edit button...


Anyways, the Kyogre just doesn't look "natural" as most of us would say. Uh, that was the reason why you got banned?

[Iridium]

They are good for a beginner. Improve on your recolours and there should be atleast some shading on the kyogre recolour even if someone wanted it pitch black. Shading looks good.

[Larvinator]

Will you guys quit nailing her for the Kyogre when it's already been said 1000 times? Yeesh.
Also, grammar is nothing to make entire posts about in a sprite gallery, mew159 and EH.

[Calypso]

You should also use proper grammar, but becuase you're not using a whole bunch of 0's and alternating between capitals and lower case, its not that big of a deal. Just try to capitalize the beginning of your sentences and the I's. Also get the right their/there/they're.

And its most of the posts like these that I mess up like three times on grammar. I just got into the habit of using "grammar" instead of "grammer", and it is quite embarassing when I say "You should use good grammer."

What was the actual point in that post? You can't just tell someone to use proper grammar in their art gallery. Also, Mr.I'mSoPerfectAtGrammar, you spelt because wrong xDDD

Lol, that felt good ;P

Anyways on topic, I really like that blue abra, just work on the brown outline, it would've been better with a darker shade of blue. Other than that but, these are pretty good. Well done ^_^

[pichudude]

Thanks.