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Wario
03-24-2007, 04:24 PM
Yes, I'm making an action/adventure comic. Not comedy. Of course, there will be an occasional joke now and then.

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsbanner.png


“Welcome, trainers, to the greatest adventure of your life! The Sevii Islands Challenge!”

Plot
This comic follows a never before told story of the Sevii islands, the Sevii Islands Challenge. In this comic, our main character, Red, explores the Sevii islands as a part of a pokemon survival tournament. The winner of the contest will receive an unimaginable prize, not even known to the sponsors! Red, sponsored by pokemon expert Bill, encounters many new friends, foes, and challenges, as he attempts to win the ultimate prize.

Characters

Red
The main character of our story. He beat the elite four with ease, but seems to be having a hard time with the Sevii islands.

Bill
Not only a pokemon expert, but Red’s sponsor. He will often call Red up to give him advice.

Lostelle
Red offers to find a girl who has been missing for days. After he rescues her from the evil spirits, she joins his team and helps him to succeed.

Lorelei
Red and Lostelle find that team rocket leftovers are operating in the Sevii Islands. When they track down a team rocket squad, Lorelei of the elite 4 offers to help for a short period of time.

There are many grammar errors/typos. I'll go back and fix those later.

The Comics

Cover (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandscover.png)

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Series 1 (1 Island and Beyond)

Issue 1 (The Journey Begins)- Released 3-24-07
(Page 1) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissueonepgone.png), (Page 2) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissueonepgtwo.png)

Issue 2 (An Unexpected Challenge)- Released 3-24-07
(Page 1) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuetwopgone.png), (Page 2) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuetwopgtwo.png), (Page 3) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuetwopgthree-1.png)

Issue 3 (The Tri Pass) - Released 3-25-07
(Page 1) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuethreepgone.png), (Page 2) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuethreepgtwo.png),(Page 3) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuethreepgthree.png)

Issue 4 (The First Foe!)- Released 3-27-07
(Page 1) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuefourpgone.png), (Page 2) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuefourpgtwo.png), (Page 3) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuefourpgthree.png)


Series 2 (The Island of Kin)

Issue 5 (Inside the Nest)- Released 3-29-07
(Page 1) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuefivepgone.png), (Page 2) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuefivepgtwo.png)

Issue 6 (Pizza!)- Released 3-30-07
(Page 1) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuesixpgone.png), (Page 2) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuesixpgtwo.png), (Page 3) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuesixpgthree.png)

Issue 7 (A Lost Daughter)- Released 4-1-07
(Page 1) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuesevpgone-1.png), (Page 2) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissuesevpgtwo.png)

Issue 8 (The Titan of Thunder)- Released 4-6-07
(Page 1) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissueeightpgone-1.png),(Page 2) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissueeightpgtwo.png), (Page 3) (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsissueeightpgthree.png)

Movie 1 (The Maze of Thunder)

Promotional Cover (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/seviiislandsmoviecover.png)

Specials

Character Poll Series 1 (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/characterpoll.png)- Results to be tallied soon

Character Bio- Red (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/redbio.png)- Released 4-1-07

FAQ Session 1 (http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j135/tokyoking466/faq.png)- Released 4-6-07

Wario
03-24-2007, 04:26 PM
-Guest Stars will no longer be accepted-

Dark Pikachu EX
03-24-2007, 05:30 PM
Not bad. I like the idea of using the mystery dungeon Pokemon but shouldn't you make it so they start in the seven islands or something like that?

Wario
03-24-2007, 05:35 PM
nope, not at all. The first issue is like a prologue, so everyone knows why he's there.

Thanks for the comment.

Dark Pikachu EX
03-24-2007, 05:36 PM
nope, not at all. The first issue is like a prologue, so everyone knows why he's there.

Thanks for the comment.

Oh I see now!

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-24-2007, 05:41 PM
This is good. Is this supposed to be comedy though like Pokemon X?

Wario
03-24-2007, 05:43 PM
I've never read pokemon X, so I wouldn't know.

As long as the pokemon X plot isn't about a survival tournament that takes you on a scenic trip through volcanos, islands, and mystic shrines, I'd say no.

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-24-2007, 05:49 PM
Well this is Pokemon X... http://pokemonx.comicgenesis.com/d/20030602.html

Anyways, nice comic. I hope green stays on the comic.

Wario
03-24-2007, 06:01 PM
wow, pokemon x is great :P

Anyways, it won't be anything like that.

Also, Green does return, near the end of the third series (sorry)

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-24-2007, 06:08 PM
Okay, that's fine. Pokemon X is funny. I read it all. Right now he is at Wattson's Gym.

Wario
03-24-2007, 06:22 PM
wow, and the comics been going on since 2003? Very impressive!

Anyways, I'm thinking of putting up the next issue today (since it is the first day) What are your thoughts on this?

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-24-2007, 06:28 PM
Yeah.

And off topic: I started reading Pokemon X a few days ago.

Soda
03-24-2007, 06:32 PM
Man how do you find the scenes for this?I've always wanted to do something like this but I can't find the right images,it's super cewl though I'll be reading more of it!

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-24-2007, 06:34 PM
I thinks he gets them from the spriters-resource.com

Wario
03-24-2007, 06:35 PM
sure, I'll try to have issue 2 uploaded and ready in a few moments.

@AipomBoy: Thanks so much for the comment. All of my sprites are from www.spriters-resource.com .

Tombi
03-24-2007, 06:35 PM
Ooooh, can I guest star?

I love guest starring xD

Cool comic so far, Gama! *rocks along to Metallica*

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-24-2007, 06:37 PM
I wanna guess start too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

Soda
03-24-2007, 06:38 PM
I thinks he gets them from the spriters-resource.com

Wow I'll try to make one!Anyways can't wait to here more from this comic!

Wario
03-24-2007, 06:43 PM
Yes, you all can. Just fill out this form (I'm also limiting guest stars to one per issue, except in double battle situations)

Name:
Description:
what your character does: (plot wise)

Edit: AipomBoy, I wish you luck with your comic!

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-24-2007, 06:51 PM
Name: Ryan
Description: He is a breeder who cares for his Roselia and Vulpix. He beat the elite 4 and headed for the sevii islands.
what your character does: He is too in the tournament and he makes it to the semi-finals and loses to Red.

Wario
03-24-2007, 06:56 PM
just one thing; there is no semifinals. It's only "the first one to the finish wins". But of course, they half to beat a crapload of trainers and stuff along the way.

Ryan can be in the final four remaining trainers, however.

Tombi
03-24-2007, 06:56 PM
Name: Tombi
Description: A trainer who defeated the elite four with her eeveeloution team. Se then headed for the Sevii islands as everywhere else got boring.
what your character does: I don't really feel comfortable filling this in... it's your comic, Gamabunta, so you should select the plot. ^^

Wario
03-24-2007, 07:02 PM
Since you have an eevee team, I guess it would be okay to put you in five island? (I can't tell you the exact details now, but it fits your team perfectly)

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-24-2007, 07:02 PM
Okay whatever Gama, choose what happens to Ryan.

Wario
03-24-2007, 07:08 PM
photobucket sucks xD

My comps being slow (as usual), but I should have the issue up in an hour or less.

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-24-2007, 07:27 PM
I hope the next part is up soon.

PaxPalkia
03-24-2007, 07:35 PM
I think this is completely cool. . I am going to start one of my own and post it, I am going to make it a 10 page story about a Trainer, spent on trying to catch a CERTAIN pokemon. . hehehe

Wario
03-24-2007, 07:38 PM
Lol, I've inspired two people in one day! Good luck PaPa!

Anyways, Issue Two is Up! You can check the front page for issue two.

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-24-2007, 07:42 PM
That's cool. I like the line, "You beat Green?"

Wario
03-24-2007, 07:47 PM
I hoped that someone would catch on to the Gama thing :P

Tombi
03-24-2007, 07:56 PM
Great so far Gama. The five island thing is fine =P

PaxPalkia
03-24-2007, 08:02 PM
:biggrin: OoOoOoO I would like to guest star!


Name: Papa
Description:Um, what do you want for this? Use Gary's sprite, and also I have these Pokemon:Tamanta, Quilava, Salamence, and Luxray!
what your character does: (plot wise) Randomly challeneges Trainers that are walking about.:biggrin:

Wario
03-24-2007, 08:06 PM
sorry, but you can't guest star.

For one, (if you read the comic) you'd know that only three pokemon are allowed per trainer.
Also, Gary is going to be in the comic, so you can't use that sprite.
Only pokemon from Kanto/Jhoto may be used
and finally, you need to have more of a plot significance.

Wario
03-24-2007, 08:26 PM
Yes, I realize I'm double posting.

I've realized that If I want to keep this alive, I'm going to need a banner. So, I'm introducing a little contest.

If anyone would like to enter, all they have to do is make a banner for the Sevii Islands. The winning entry will recieve 1 Guest star who makes it into the final four!

Ketchup
03-24-2007, 08:57 PM
Hm, I like the concept.

Only one question. When posting a Guest-Star, would you mind if I offered my own Overworld Sprite to be used, or no?

Tombi
03-24-2007, 08:58 PM
Oooh, I'll enter.

Off topic : @Minion : I remember ages ago you asked me to make them overworlds in my shop... I did, but you never collected them... ;__;

Anorexic Snorlax
03-24-2007, 09:04 PM
Ooo...Nce comic. I like the plot and such. Good job. :D

Well, here's my quickedy-split banner.
http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/430/seviiislandsii7.png
I know, a little sloppy, but I think it looks kinda good.

Wario
03-24-2007, 09:09 PM
Hm, I like the concept.

Only one question. When posting a Guest-Star, would you mind if I offered my own Overworld Sprite to be used, or no?
sure, any custom overworlds are allowed.

Ooo...Nce comic. I like the plot and such. Good job. :D

Well, here's my quickedy-split banner.
http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/430/seviiislandsii7.png
I know, a little sloppy, but I think it looks kinda good.

cool, it's sexy

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-24-2007, 09:11 PM
:eek: Ooo...Nce comic. I like the plot and such. Good job. :D

Well, here's my quickedy-split banner.
http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/430/seviiislandsii7.png
I know, a little sloppy, but I think it looks kinda good.

Wow. I can't explain it in words. :eek:

pakman555
03-24-2007, 09:11 PM
I would like to guest star! (I hope this fits into the story)

Name: Blue
Description: A member of team rocket. He tries to capture pokemon from promising trainers.
what your character does: Try's to capture Red's pokemon by defeating him in a pokemon battle with his Blastoise, Garadose and Starmy. But, he loses.

Edit:
Here's a banner for it!
http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/5499/banner1mv3.png

Anorexic Snorlax
03-24-2007, 09:15 PM
I can't believe all you guys think my banner is good...*has low self-esteem*

@Pakman: Gama isn't accepting guest stars yet.

Wario
03-24-2007, 09:16 PM
well, I accepted a few, but that's it for now. So for now, guest star closed!

Ketchup
03-24-2007, 09:26 PM
Ack, my Overworlds are almost done. =(

Don't close yet. =/

Wario
03-24-2007, 09:27 PM
It's okay, you were the last person I'm accepting for now. You just made it :wink:

Ketchup
03-24-2007, 09:33 PM
Yay.

Anyway.

I began designing a Sprite as soon as I you mentioned accepting Guest-Stars. Only thing, I never expected the sprite to turn out quite like this. It was originally supposed to be a bit different, until I realized the potential it had.

So, behold.

Click Here (http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/7804/friezahf1.png)

Oh, and it's not finished yet, I lied. The Sprites are only the Front poses, but the back/side poses will come soon enough. =P

Name: Frieza
Description: After his debut in the infamous manga of Dragonball Z, Frieza has decided to take a new turn, and attempt to conquer the world of Gamabuta's Comic. However, his arrogance and lack of self-control will probably get him kicked out of the Tournament or possibly in the fast-moving currents that surround the Sevii-Islands.
Significance: Being the kind who likes to cause Havoc and general mayhem, Frieza enters this tournament specifically to seek out the mysterious prize, which he hopes is immortality(The same one that he failed to get in the DBZ series, might I add.) or at least something to reconstruct his tail.

Ultimately though, his plans come to a dead halt at the whim of Gamabunta, and he is casted away into the Pit of Lost Pixels in shame.

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Eh, well, that's all I got. It's not my fault my inspiration led me to create Frieza, and you just happen to start a Comic. =/

Wario
03-24-2007, 09:36 PM
that's really, really good, but it's supposed to be a serious comic :susp:

I'm not too big of a fan of crossovers, either. I mean, at the least, it should be human.

Ketchup
03-24-2007, 09:44 PM
It was meant to, but that's ironically what happens when you design a bald man, have the color scheme for your latest Kisame sprite design infront of you, and some random NPC in a purple shirt next to the Kisame color scheme. =/

Lucarichi
03-24-2007, 09:59 PM
nice comic. i wish i could guest star. my character is always running into strangeness and randomness and her pkmn r nutjobsO_o.
also, it would really increase ur readers. every1 loves funnyness^^.
plz can i guest star? O_o pwease?

Wario
03-24-2007, 10:04 PM
no. as I said about 5 times, NO MORE GUEST STARS.

Besides, no offense, I already have 1 character who is extremely goofy, 1 genious, 1 sarcastic, 1 nervous, and 1 brave (only 1 of them has been introduced so far).

pakman555
03-24-2007, 10:07 PM
Am I being guest starred???

Wario
03-24-2007, 10:08 PM
Oh. My. God.

Can't you read? Only guest stars that came before you will be accepted. You guys are why there will never, ever, be guest stars again in my comic

Anorexic Snorlax
03-24-2007, 10:09 PM
Am I being guest starred???

I'm saving your breath, Gama. No, as Gama said, Minion is the last guest star...right?

EDIT: Never ever, Gama? *Cries behind a corner*

pakman555
03-24-2007, 10:10 PM
Yeah, but I posted before him, so i'm not sure...

Wario
03-24-2007, 10:10 PM
Anorexic, I praise you. Thank you so much.

Anorexic Snorlax
03-24-2007, 10:13 PM
Yeah, but I posted before him, so i'm not sure...

Go check and I will laugh at your wrongness.

@Gama: Why thank you, your niceness.

Dreemira
03-24-2007, 10:19 PM
Heh, I've read all of the comic so far, and I'm loving it!:biggrin:

Great work, I hope to see more. Why do you get so many comments on yours though? 0_o (her comic thread has only has 2 pages)

Wario
03-24-2007, 10:36 PM
probably because I'm a n00b magnet xD J/K

I don't see why you aren't getting too many replies. I look up to you :tongue:

Ketchup
03-24-2007, 10:39 PM
I was hoping to finish these Overworlds before dinner, but I've only managed to complete the Front/Back poses.

Here is the updated Sheet.

Click Here (http://img470.imageshack.us/my.php?image=friezask2.png)

I'll get to the Side poses after I eat.

Wario
03-24-2007, 11:19 PM
I was hoping to finish these Overworlds before dinner, but I've only managed to complete the Front/Back poses.

Here is the updated Sheet.

Click Here (http://img470.imageshack.us/my.php?image=friezask2.png)

I'll get to the Side poses after I eat.

I thought I said that you weren't going to be a guest star.

Ketchup
03-24-2007, 11:49 PM
You did? O_o

I thought that was some sort of I-don't-like-it-but-fine.

Lucarichi
03-25-2007, 12:10 AM
awwwww.... oh well. i just started a comic in the fan fiction place cuz it's really fan fic anyway.*shouts* HEY, EVERYONE WHO DIDN'T GET TO GUEST STAR IN THIS CAN STAR IN MY COMIC!!!!!^^ there ya go, gama. now no one will ask 2 be in ur comic and annoy u.:oops: *hopes she didn't do anything bad:silenced: *

Wario
03-25-2007, 12:43 AM
youre not supposed to advertise your comic in my thread.

Lucarichi
03-25-2007, 12:52 AM
oh.....srry....:sad: it's just that u were getting annoyed with all the ppl asking 2 b in ur comic so i thought it would b a good idea 2 let them b in mine.:sad:

Dreemira
03-25-2007, 01:02 AM
oh.....srry....:sad: it's just that u were getting annoyed with all the ppl asking 2 b in ur comic so i thought it would b a good idea 2 let them b in mine.:sad:

That doesn't mean you can come into anothers comic and say what you said. Its like saying 'My comics better than yours! Everyone come and join mine!'

At least thats what I think...>>

Insert Name Here
03-25-2007, 01:20 AM
Dreemira is right. And Gamabunta, nice comic. I like it a lot.

Lucarichi
03-25-2007, 01:49 AM
WHAT!!!!??? im not saying that!!!! i was just asking if the ppl who didn't get 2 join this comic wanted 2 join mine! and mine isn't better!!! IT'S SUCKISH!!!!! IT HASN'T EVEN BEEN STARTED!!!!!i just wanted someone 2 post cause i don't want it 2 be one of those comic that slowly go 2 the back and r forgotton :sad:

Insert Name Here
03-25-2007, 01:54 AM
Okay, but please no advertising. I think that Gamabunta might get angry.

Sorry for mini-modding.

Wario
03-25-2007, 11:14 AM
Okay, but please no advertising. I think that Gamabunta might get angry.

Sorry for mini-modding.

No, it's fine really. To see a new member like that being so mature is really rare.

Shadow Eevee
03-25-2007, 06:10 PM
Ooh, nice comic! I'm not going to ask to be a guest star, and I like the style.

Wario
03-26-2007, 12:23 AM
Issue 3 is up! Check the front page for the comic.

Also, starting in issue 4, we get battling in almost every other episode. Red's journey starts then!

ps. Yes, Chapter 3 is rather suckish. At least all of the intros are done.

Insert Name Here
03-26-2007, 01:59 AM
Chapter 3 was nice. I hope it would be funny, but its still good.

pikaphlosion
03-26-2007, 02:04 AM
comics are the best i have seen today:happy:

Wario
03-26-2007, 02:07 AM
lol, thanks.

PS. I also have an extremely interactive Sevii Island event coming up (it has to do with Lostelle)

pikaphlosion
03-26-2007, 02:09 AM
cant wait

Soda
03-26-2007, 04:38 AM
cant wait

Wow these are intresting and I can't wait for more.

BTW 4 Word rule post 4 words:dazed: that didn't even specify what your wating for:hungry: !

Wario
03-26-2007, 10:51 PM
yeah, please.

Anyways, I'm going to do issue 4 now. Expect:

The first battle
new enemies
A few black panels :tongue:

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-26-2007, 11:40 PM
Hmmmm....do you have to put credit for the person from spriters-resource.com?

Wario
03-26-2007, 11:43 PM
the sheets I got says no credit needed.

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-27-2007, 12:19 AM
Oh, okay. But I thought it did.

This is what I have:

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q256/andrewghoul/Alex.gif

It says use credit.

Wario
03-27-2007, 12:30 AM
thats not the sheet I'm using :p

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-27-2007, 12:32 AM
Oh sorry for spamming, annoying, and being off topic.

Wario
03-27-2007, 12:34 AM
It's okay. Just try not to in teh future (yes, I spelled it teh on purpose).

Anyways, I'm about a fourth done with issue 4. Expect its release tommorow.

pokerufan7
03-27-2007, 12:47 AM
The comic is good and i hope you are planning when your done to put everything on one page. But it is just an idea.:biggrin:

Wario
03-27-2007, 12:52 AM
No, because it would take much longer for certain computers to load, and then you would have to go through the trouble of maximizing the image, and photobucket wouldn't even host the sizes of some issues.

pokerufan7
03-27-2007, 12:53 AM
:happy: mm.k. but the comics are still good

Wario
03-27-2007, 01:42 AM
thanks.

Anyways, after series 1 is over, I'm going to put up a character poll (pm or post votes here) But you can't vote yet, or at least until after issue 5!

pokerufan7
03-27-2007, 02:20 AM
who are you going to vote for:sleepy:

Wario
03-27-2007, 02:23 AM
I can't, but I know who I would vote for (Biker Brother Aquos, who is revealed in chapter 4)

pokerufan7
03-27-2007, 02:29 AM
ok. i cant say until 5 coms out. more characters:biggrin:

Wario
03-27-2007, 02:36 AM
I'll keep the banner contest open for a few more days. I've already made one just in case.

pokerufan7
03-27-2007, 02:39 AM
:neutral: eh. i wonder who will be #1

Wario
03-27-2007, 09:00 PM
I put up a temporary banner for now, but it will be replaced soon (banner by me)

pokerufan7
03-27-2007, 09:02 PM
:surp: ok. Im happy with everything about the forum

Anorexic Snorlax
03-27-2007, 09:17 PM
I put up a temporary banner for now, but it will be replaced soon (banner by me)

Oh, I really like it, Gama. :D Oh, and I like the third issue. *Is slow on reading comics*

Wario
03-27-2007, 09:29 PM
okay, issue 4 is up, concluding series 1.

Series 2 covers Red's adventures through the second and third island, and his friendship with Lostelle.

the character poll will be up very soon.

Ketchup
03-27-2007, 09:40 PM
I like, I like.

Except, it needs less Bikers, more Frieza. >_>

Wario
03-27-2007, 10:33 PM
the character poll is now open. Be sure to post your votes here! (no write in ballots :P)

pokerufan7
03-27-2007, 10:50 PM
blue haired biker guy

Ketchup
03-27-2007, 10:52 PM
the character poll is now open. Be sure to post your votes here! (no write in ballots :P)
The Purple-haired Biker, because he is the incarnation of Frieza as a human.

Or maybe you just used Bill's shirt to recolor the hair. I haven't quite figured it out yet.

Wario
03-27-2007, 11:01 PM
well, It could really go either way. There's some really cool plot connected to him though :)

pokerufan7
03-27-2007, 11:04 PM
hmm. i wonder what

Wario
03-28-2007, 12:08 AM
well, nothing to do with team rocket. However, you might want to think along the lines of a fr/lg character's return.:wink:

Wario
03-28-2007, 12:40 AM
Guys, I need your input on this:

How much time should Red spend in two island?

pokerufan7
03-28-2007, 12:54 AM
2 issues maybe :happy:

PaxPalkia
03-28-2007, 01:10 AM
I couldn't help but notice that you have alot of spelling errors in your comic. . just to let you know.:biggrin:

PaxPalkia
03-28-2007, 01:19 AM
Pax, you did in yours too. As long as the point is clear, it is good

Gama, personally i like your comic

Sorry, mine has no spelling errors, maybe it has typos that I didn't because I type too fast. . . I wasn't trying to be rude, Just informing, his comics are good, but I find it rude how he just decided to come into my comic and say that he hopes it doesn't turn out into a rip off like his, so fine, I won't do my comic. . enjoy.

Wario
03-28-2007, 01:39 AM
guys, stop arguing ;P

Yeah, there are a lot of typos and stuff (like how I write is instead of us a couple of times) but I plan on going back later and fixing them.

Wario
03-28-2007, 02:17 AM
Guys, please get back on the topic of my comic.

Try to delete those spammy posts too.

Anyways, Lostelle, Blue, and the return of Green are coming up!

Xtra
03-28-2007, 02:24 AM
So Lostelle is the Tuber. Gotcha.

Wario
03-28-2007, 02:24 AM
that's her new outfit anyways.

When we first see her, she's dressed normally.

Xtra
03-28-2007, 02:27 AM
Did you sprite that Bill by yourself?

Wario
03-28-2007, 02:28 AM
nope, its an official sprite.

pokerufan7
03-28-2007, 02:34 AM
so about how many chapters for #2 again

Wario
03-28-2007, 02:38 AM
as many as it takes :P

I really have no idea.

Wario
03-28-2007, 11:38 PM
alright, I'll be opening ONE slot for guest star. The first one to post their form will get it.

pokerufan7
03-28-2007, 11:44 PM
cHARACTER:Orange
Gender:boy
Type:proffsor

Wario
03-28-2007, 11:59 PM
no, and you didn't fill out the form either.

pokerufan7
03-29-2007, 12:02 AM
dont worry. im kidding. really. i dont want to be in your comic:biggrin:

Shadow Eevee
03-29-2007, 12:17 AM
I vote Lorelei! I liked issue 4.

Wario
03-29-2007, 12:51 AM
thanks for voting.

Would you like to guest star, Shadow?

Alex the Charmander
03-29-2007, 01:02 AM
I like your comic.

Name: Naiya
Description: sprite of the aroma lady should be used, just with a black dress and yellow skirt. she acts happy go lucky and calls almost every pokemon cute(except groudon)
what your character does: Likes challenging people to battle with her umbreon.

(where did you get the mystery dungeon sprites?)

Wario
03-29-2007, 07:33 PM
okay, accepted!

MD sprites are from the spriter's resource

and the fist issue of series 2 will be out soon (it doesn't really have anything to do with Red, either)

Wario
03-29-2007, 08:39 PM
Issue 5 UP!

Well, it was a short, two-pager. However, it provides an interesting lead-in for the rest of the series.

Anorexic Snorlax
03-29-2007, 08:42 PM
Issue 5 UP!

Well, it was a short, two-pager. However, it provides an interesting lead-in for the rest of the series.
Ooo...mysterious. I can't wait to see what happens!
By the by, I vote for the blue haired biker.

Wario
03-29-2007, 08:49 PM
well, I already have up to series 4 planned (big team rocket battle!)

Wario
03-29-2007, 10:59 PM
Now, its time to reveal my interactive activity.

First, before we begin, please choose either Red's side, or team rocket's side (If anyone plays neopets, this'll be sort of like a war)

Alex the Charmander
03-29-2007, 11:20 PM
I'd choose red's side...

considering the fact Naiya would go out of her way to start a fight with him.

Shadow Eevee
03-30-2007, 12:06 AM
thanks for voting.

Would you like to guest star, Shadow?
Sure , why not.
Now, its time to reveal my interactive activity.

First, before we begin, please choose either Red's side, or team rocket's side (If anyone plays neopets, this'll be sort of like a war)

Red's side! Definitly.

Anorexic Snorlax
03-30-2007, 12:17 AM
Now, its time to reveal my interactive activity.

First, before we begin, please choose either Red's side, or team rocket's side (If anyone plays neopets, this'll be sort of like a war)

I want to be evil! :D Team Rocket's Rocket for me.

Kayla
03-30-2007, 12:20 AM
Nice comic!

First, before we begin, please choose either Red's side, or team rocket's side (If anyone plays neopets, this'll be sort of like a war)

I'll go with TR.

Negative Zone
03-30-2007, 12:20 AM
I want to be evil! :D Team Rocket's Rocket for me.

I've been reading the comic but never replying. I love it! And Team Rocket as well!

Wario
03-30-2007, 01:50 AM
Okay, I got you all down!

Just for reference, the events of the activity will decide the fate of the comic :wink:

pokerufan7
03-30-2007, 01:59 AM
i like the main character. He is really strong

RawrIsMyMiddleName
03-30-2007, 01:59 AM
Put one vote for the Fr/Lg female hero (forgot name) on the poll!

Wario
03-30-2007, 02:00 AM
okay! I'll tally up the votes this Saturday.

Wario
03-30-2007, 08:17 PM
Issue 6 UP!

If you don't understand the pizza joke, read the pokemon pages (by thunderos)

pokerufan7
03-30-2007, 08:20 PM
Haha..... You Did That On Purpose. Did You Get Thunderousiss Pramission

Wario
03-30-2007, 08:22 PM
yeah, we're friends anyways. I just thought it would be funny to do a small crossover like that.

smallz2011
03-30-2007, 08:27 PM
hey i love your comic how long have you been making it? well i started making my own please tell me waht you think link is in my siggy its kind of stupid but i like it and i like the pizza joke lol funny

Wario
03-30-2007, 08:30 PM
I've been making it for a couple of weeks now.

Your comics are good, they should be longer.

Shadow Eevee
03-30-2007, 08:32 PM
yeah, we're friends anyways. I just thought it would be funny to do a small crossover like that.
Lol. That was funny. Love the comic!

Fire Pkmn Master
03-30-2007, 08:35 PM
Wow I really love this comic. It has a great plot. Good job on this man. Really.

Wario
03-30-2007, 08:36 PM
Thanks!

I've always though of you as a Simon Cowell type of person, hard to impress.

smallz2011
03-30-2007, 08:38 PM
I've been making it for a couple of weeks now.

Your comics are good, they should be longer.

i know but its hard for me to make them longer i dont know what to do next in my comic but i might start over and make one of pokemon mystery dungeon this one is too hard i know they should be longer and i know i skip around but i dont know how to do other stuf like that

Fire Pkmn Master
03-30-2007, 08:42 PM
Thanks!

I've always though of you as a Simon Cowell type of person, hard to impress.

Who me. O____O Oh no no no. XDD

Wario
03-30-2007, 08:43 PM
well, if you wish to start over htat is your choice. But there are already so many md comics out there.

Fire Pkmn Master
03-30-2007, 08:46 PM
I wanted to make a Comic but I wouldnt always have time. Especially for the upcoming weeks.
It'd be funny if you had Thunderos's girl character show up or something in one issue.

Wario
03-30-2007, 08:50 PM
you mean the main girl, or the pink-haired one?

Shadow Eevee
03-30-2007, 09:07 PM
Thanks!

I've always though of you as a Simon Cowell type of person, hard to impress.

Funny, I always though you as a Simon Cowell.

smallz2011
03-30-2007, 09:07 PM
well, if you wish to start over htat is your choice. But there are already so many md comics out there.

i know but i cant think of any more to do or what to do my comic about if you have any hints or tips please tell me

Wario
04-01-2007, 01:40 PM
Issue 7 Up!

After the daugther is rescued, Rocket will be ready to unleash their plot!

Wario
04-01-2007, 03:04 PM
Eeek, quadrupal post!

But they all have a purpose, so it's okay.

I added a Red character bio with some little known facts- check it out if you're bored.

Azumao
04-01-2007, 07:22 PM
Hey, Gama, very nice comic. ;D Of course, you'll never rival me. :cool:

Just kidding.

Wario
04-01-2007, 07:25 PM
maybe if you started doing hat thieves again :rolleyes:

Azumao
04-01-2007, 07:33 PM
Hey, shut up! *runs away*

Wario
04-01-2007, 09:43 PM
*laughs and points*

Issue 8/9 (I forget) is almost done.

Anorexic Snorlax
04-01-2007, 09:56 PM
Hey, shut up! *runs away*

Well you don't do them anymore...and you kinda mocked me/HaxxorN00b.

@Gama: Cool. I'll be sure to read them. :D

Wario
04-01-2007, 10:34 PM
Yay, my fans are back!

Shadow Eevee
04-01-2007, 11:15 PM
Yay, my fans are back!

I'm not a fan. I'm a friend. *Feels like lower class.*

Anorexic Snorlax
04-01-2007, 11:17 PM
Yay, my fans are back!

I'm a fan, eh? *Chuckles* I'm in a Kimono Girl's hand! *Bursts out laughing at the pointless joke* Oh my, I really have to do shorter actions.

Anyways, why did we have to do that team thing? *Shrugs*

Fire Pkmn Master
04-02-2007, 12:00 AM
Woot new issue....It was pretty good and its getting to the good part to.

Wario
04-02-2007, 07:23 PM
the team thing is reserved for the upcoming MOVIE. Yup, a movie. So far, the script lasts about 10 pages, although it will probably be much longer.

Anorexic Snorlax
04-05-2007, 02:28 AM
Thread...must...live! This is just a simple refresh.

So...there's going to be a MOVIE?

Alex the Charmander
04-05-2007, 02:39 AM
yeah, movie eh? sounds cool enough.

Wario
04-06-2007, 11:41 AM
yes, but this new issue is takin forever to do.

With Spring break, expect a lot of issues at random times.

Wario
04-06-2007, 05:19 PM
Issue 8 Up!

In the next few issues, expect:

A confrontation with the biker bros.
An elaborate plot 3 years in the making
Infiltration of a team rocket HQ
The missing daughter found!

Wario
04-06-2007, 10:15 PM
New mini-contest!

For the movie, a brand new pokemon will be starring. It is your chance to design a mystery dungeon sprite for it!

The winning entry will appear in the movie as the main pokemon!

Fire Pkmn Master
04-06-2007, 10:27 PM
Issue 8 Was pretty good. Cant wait for the movie.

Wario
04-06-2007, 10:30 PM
I've also got a few surprises in the movie based on which side you chose (you can still choose or change sides until Sunday)

put up a FAQ session (under the specials category). All questions were just jokes (except for 1)

Wario
04-07-2007, 03:23 PM
teh bump...

Wario
04-07-2007, 06:37 PM
I put up a promotional cover for the movie. Don't look too hard, but theres some great forshadowing (no pun intended)

The movie is now in progress, and I'm already on the 4th page :)

Fire Pkmn Master
04-07-2007, 07:00 PM
Woot cant wait to see it man. The cover looks pretty good.

Ketchup
04-07-2007, 07:03 PM
I might be seeing things but those shadows in the Cover look alot like Giovanni and Green.

Wario
04-07-2007, 07:04 PM
let's just say your eyesights 20/20

Tombi
04-07-2007, 07:08 PM
Hey Gama, any idea when the comic with me Quest Starring will be up?

Now I've said that, I bet it's already been put up and I just haven't seen it xD

Wario
04-07-2007, 07:10 PM
You're in luck! You will guest star almost immediately after the movie!

Wario
04-07-2007, 07:33 PM
Now it's everyone's turn to participate in the activity!

In the movie, Red will be facing both Anorexic Snorlax and Kayla. You may now vote for which side you wish to win. The outcome will affect the movie, and votes will be open for a few hours.

Anorexic Snorlax
04-07-2007, 10:08 PM
Mwa-freaking-ha. Red shall die. Mwa ha. Join the laughter, Kayla. Mwa ha.

Wario
04-08-2007, 11:28 AM
since you were teh only vote...

sigh, anor and kayla win.

Tombi
04-08-2007, 12:52 PM
You're in luck! You will guest star almost immediately after the movie!
Yay!

..

That's all I gotta say xD Great comic, Gamabunta.

Wario
04-09-2007, 11:49 AM
The movie is coming along great, and I think most people here have at least a minor part in it. It should be released soon.

Blaziken Knight
04-09-2007, 12:19 PM
hey.... my names bill, i dont like gary, besides i'd rather help ash

Wario
04-09-2007, 12:21 PM
what the heck are you talking about?

Blaziken Knight
04-09-2007, 02:14 PM
what the heck are you talking about?

on the first page, the first post, it says Bill Duh!

Tombi
04-09-2007, 02:33 PM
wtf?

Can't wait till the movie ;P

Calypso
04-09-2007, 02:44 PM
Lawl. Okai. *Backs off*

Yer, can't wait to see the movie ^^

Wario
04-09-2007, 06:33 PM
on the first page, the first post, it says Bill Duh!

I know. I wrote it :P

Wario
04-10-2007, 11:19 AM
Kay, just so you know, Wario is the same person as Gamabunta :P

Calypso
04-10-2007, 12:57 PM
Kay, just so you know, Wario is the same person as Gamabunta :P

Lawl :O You got a name change ;P. I though it was some poster when I was browsing the Sprite Art Board X_X

Wario
04-11-2007, 11:29 AM
I spent 20 minutes trying to log in under "Gamabunta" today :tongue:

Calypso
04-11-2007, 03:45 PM
I spent 20 minutes trying to log in under "Gamabunta" today :tongue:

Lawl xDD, I done that everytime I logged in for like two days, when I got my name change =PP

Can't wait for the next issue. I'm lovin' the Team Rocket Storyline :D

Tombi
04-11-2007, 04:01 PM
I spent 20 minutes trying to log in under "Gamabunta" today :tongue:
LOL! NOOB! xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

*sighs happily* I'm always automatically signed in, suuuuuuu...

Lawl, when I signed in at school and I had my massively long username, everyone used to stare, because I type really fast. ;P I have massive password too, so they're like.

'O_____________O [censored] hell, you type fast'

Or

'Why is your password so flippin' long?!'

<__< Security, my puny genin friends.