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PokemonFan280
03-29-2007, 09:59 PM
I hope you like this!


My character:
Name:Cameron
Gender:Male
Age:10
Info:A kid with a humorus personality, with a reputation of being the best pokemon trainer ever. However, when an ancient prophecy comes true, he gets caught up in a legend he thought would never come true.

Lord Khajmer
03-29-2007, 10:26 PM
I hope you like this!


My character:
Name:Cameron
Gender:Male
Age:10
Info:A kid with a humorus personality, with a reputation of being the best pokemon trainer ever. However, when an ancient prophecy comes true, he gets caught up in a legend he thought would never come true.
Um, may I ask what the plot is? And the rules? I appreciate your enthusiasm, it's always great to see new RPers around here, but you really should have a plotline in order to do something, and it also helps to have rules, and a sign-up template. Overall, it does help in the longer. Oh, and if anyoe gets on your case about this *coughlorcoughdzancoughgoosecough* sorry for that little coughing fit, anyway, you just let me know.

LordZangoose
03-29-2007, 10:30 PM
Um, may I ask what the plot is? And the rules? I appreciate your enthusiasm, it's always great to see new RPers around here, but you really should have a plotline in order to do something, and it also helps to have rules, and a sign-up template. Overall, it does help in the longer. Oh, and if anyoe gets on your case about this *coughlorcoughdzancoughgoosecough* sorry for that little coughing fit, anyway, you just let me know.

You know what, I'm not even going to critiscize this. Quite frankly Nate, I've done nothing to you and you frequently go on tangents about my reviews, which I have spoken about with TT, who says she also feels I can review harshly as long it contains useful information, which you just happen to miss seeing every time. You can't just say I hope you enjiy this and then provide a sign-up for yourself and expect us to know what to do.

Lord Khajmer
03-29-2007, 10:45 PM
You know what, I'm not even going to critiscize this. Quite frankly Nate, I've done nothing to you and you frequently go on tangents about my reviews, which I have spoken about with TT, who says she also feels I can review harshly as long it contains useful information, which you just happen to miss seeing every time. You can't just say I hope you enjiy this and then provide a sign-up for yourself and expect us to know what to do.
If I've told you once, I've told you a million times, if you try to force people to get better by being mean, it's a psychological fact that people respond better to positive reinforcement than negative. Just because you're allowed to do something doesn't mean you should. I mean, if they legalized murder then would you kill someone?

PokemonFan280
03-29-2007, 11:05 PM
Rules:No overpowered characters/pokemon
No god modding
And finally, don`t make fun of anyone.
Storyline:Its just a normal day, when suddenly, an ancient prophecy is fullfilled and the god of darkness is released into the world. However, another legend says that that a band of heroes will slay the god of darkness.

And Thats the story!

Lord Khajmer
03-30-2007, 12:32 AM
Rules:No overpowered characters/pokemon
No god modding
And finally, don`t make fun of anyone.
Storyline:Its just a normal day, when suddenly, an ancient prophecy is fullfilled and the god of darkness is released into the world. However, another legend says that that a band of heroes will slay the god of darkness.

And Thats the story!
Um, I'm sorry, I'm reallyu not this =mean but WHAT THE HECK KIND OF PLOT IS THAT!? Okay, I'm better now. Look, a good plot needs to be descriptive. I want to know more about this prophecy. What does it say? What is our role in it? What is the name of this God of Darkness? It needs some beefing up. A good RP plot should probably have at least a couple paragraphs. I'll tell you what, I'm working on an RP plot right now, I'll send you a copy of what I have so far via PM.