Super Smash Brothers the Fan Fic viewers place: POST COMMENTS HERE!

[Light Manaphy]

Since I'm not getting any comments on my fan fic, post your replies, comments, flame, spam, critisizm, or whatever else here. Yes, my fan fic is on Super Smash Bros and as I am typing this, more are being made. I am working really hard and am happy to bring more and more write ups! Anyways, here's the thread to view the fan fic. The parts are all in one post, just to let you know. More are to be done in a different post in the same thread.


parts 1 & 2 (www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1002147&postcount=1) part 3 (www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1004767&postcount=2) part 4
(www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1007342&postcount=5) part 5 (www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1071700&postcount=8)
enjoy and comment. I don't care what the comment is, just comment xD.

[Shiny Loser]

Lols, it's not a bad idea. Not bad... but you could space it out a little so it's easier on the eyes.

[Light Manaphy]

Lols, it's not a bad idea. Not bad... but you could space it out a little so it's easier on the eyes.

thank you for the comment =D

I guess I could make the script look better. It might take time, though. I just want something that everyone likes, but I may space between lines so it's easier.

anyways, did you think it was funny? if not, it's ok.

[Shiny Loser]

the first ep was funny, the others were okay

[Light Manaphy]

Part 5 is here! AND IT'S WEIRD!

part 5 (www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showpost.php?p=1071700&postcount=8)

comment and rate