pokemon sinnoh rpg

[overdrivepink]

welcome to the land of sinnoh! palkia and dialga are fighting again and it is up to you to save sinnoh. you can compete in gym battles or contests!here is how to sign up.

name:first name or nick name
age:(10-13)
starter:starters can only be picked once
apperence:
personality:
history:
legend:
competition:

rules:
no saying your the best
you only catch one legend.

starter pokemon:
chimchar:jayrod 123
turtwig:vampyro
piplup:taken by me overdrivepink
torchic:
treeko:
mudkip:
cyndaquil:
chikorita:
tododile:
charmander:
bulbasaur:
squrtile:

legends:
articuno:
moltress:
zapdos:
raikkou:
entei:
suicune:
lugia:
ho-oh
celebi:vampyro
regirock:
registeel:
regiice:
latias:
latios:
kyogre:
groudon:
rayquaza:
jirachi:
uxie:
mesprite:
azelf:
dialga:jayrod
palkia:taken by me overdrivepink
heatran:
regigigas:
giratina:
cresselia:
phione:
manaphy
darkrai:
shaymin:

my sign-up
name:shane
gender:female
age:10
starter:piplup
apperance:blue dress shirt, pink vest with a blue pokeball symbol,blue short skirt,pink boots,black hat with blue and pink pokeball symbol,black gloves with the finger tips cut out,and black hair down to her shoulders.
history:dad is in the military,mom was a grand vestival winner.
legend:palkia
competition:pokemon league

[LordZangoose]

See, the entire URPG is for battling, coordinating, and training. Plus, you didn't really put a plot, just welcome to Sinnoh. Good grammar and spelling may also help your cause.

EDIT: this is in the wrong section as well. You should have put this under sign-ups.

[overdrivepink]

your goal is to tame the legends and catch them. your goal is to also complete the pokedex, and when you choose your competeion you have to beat gyms or contest.

[LordZangoose]

So all this is is the URPG with legends thrown in.

[overdrivepink]

basically

[LordZangoose]

First thing, four word rule. Second thing, I'm going to see if this could be locked.

[Larvinator]

basically
:P In that case, no. Try and make a good plot, one that will catch the readers attention. "well, you try and fill the pokedex and catch legends" isn't interesting at all.

[Vampyro]

name:Earthlion- Nickname
gender: male
age:13
starter: Turtwig
apperance: Green t-shirt with a picture of a tree on it. Brown pants with multiple pockets. a green visor tilted to the side. a green bag to hold his stuff. he has a brown belt and a brown arm band.
history:not much known
legend: Celebi

[jayrod 123]

name:Jerrod
age:11
starter:Chimchar
apperence:Black shirt with blaziken pic,baggy blue jeans and grey hat
personality:cool,smart
history:not much is known
legend:Dialga
competition:pokemon leage

[Orochimaru-Sama]

*grumbles*You should at least make it so two people can have a Sinnoh starter....I'd join then..

[overdrivepink]

I may let people catch starters on the journey.

[Dog of Hellsing]

No no no no NO!!! You do NOT say that this is "basically" a rip-off of the URPG, which Jack and the other Mods have worked hard on for God knows how long.

Not only that, but as was already said, there's hardly any plot. "Complete the PokeDex" is waaaay too open-ended to be a good RP, even by throwing in the twist of "Parukia and Diagura are battling." Sorry, but it's unoriginal, it's short, and you yourself said it's pretty much a copy of something that's definitely had more effort put into it.

*Thread closed.