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Faust
04-06-2007, 08:36 PM
Okay. I've tried my hand at a sprite comic. The fith issue is currently in development, and I'm posting up Issues 1 - 4 in different threads. It appeared to eb doing well when I posted in on another site. And I take all forms of criticism, and assitance. Any ideas for the plot, or requests for appearing characters will be considered. And what appears in the next time column doesn't actually happen. They're simply jokes I couldn't squeeze in. And the colour of the text applies to the character speakibng. e.g. Mario has Red Text, Luigi has Green and Samus has yellow. If you're confused just try to find which character has most in common with the kind of text I use. I'll post up all text colours and which characters use them if people keep whining.

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/TheBigIssue.jpg


Next Time...


http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/NextTimepanel1.jpghttp://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/NexttimePanel2.jpg


Posting issue two... Comment on this if you must...

PaxPalkia
04-06-2007, 08:38 PM
Okay. I've tried my hand at a sprite comic. The fith issue is currently in development, and I'm posting up Issues 1 - 4 in different threads. It appeared to eb doing well when I posted in on another site. And I take all forms of criticism, and assitance. Any ideas for the plot, or requests for appearing characters will be considered. And what appears in the next time column doesn't actually happen. They're simply jokes I couldn't squeeze in. And the colour of the text applies to the character speakibng. e.g. Mario has Red Text, Luigi has Green and Samus has yellow. If you're confused just try to find which character has most in common with the kind of text I use. I'll post up all text colours and which characters use them if people keep whining.

P.S. My username was Balto on the site I first posted this on, so I may change it to Faust If I'm bored some day... or care.


http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/IntroPanel1.jpghttp://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/IntroPanel2.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/IntroPanel3.jpghttp://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/IntroPanel4.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/Intropanel5.jpghttp://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/IntroPanel6.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/IntroPanel7.jpghttp://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/IntroPanel8.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/IntroPanel9.jpghttp://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/Kirbyintropanel.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/LinkIntroPanel.jpghttp://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/SamusIntroPanel2.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/SamusIntroPanel1.jpghttp://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/SonicIntroPanel.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/FoxIntroPanel.jpghttp://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/WarioBros.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/WarioBros-1.jpghttp://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/TitlePanel1.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/TitlePanel2.jpghttp://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/TitlePanel3.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/TitlePanel4.jpg


Next Time...


http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/NextTimepanel1.jpghttp://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d22/Dantess4/NexttimePanel2.jpg


Posting issue two... Comment on this if you must...
This isn't the right place for this. . there are no pokemon related things in this. .

Hoshika
04-06-2007, 08:39 PM
Ayeayeaye... a mess of a comic.

Firstly, you should save it as one big picture, not lots of small ones. It looks weird like that.

Second, Don't use eye-burning fonts, like Comic Sans MS Bold.

Third, Try not to make their outlines disappear, and save them as .png.

Fourth, how did Samus lose her underwear in there? O_o

@PaxPalkia: Art Boards aren't only for Pokémon stuff. Pokémon isn't the only game out there.

Pikablu Pie
04-06-2007, 08:42 PM
This isn't the right place for this. . there are no pokemon related things in this. .

Mixed: Sprite Art For both Pokemon and non-Pokemon related sprite art.

Uh, go read that, Papa. 8U But, though it's a bit, well, sloppy, I chuckled a few times. You have very good humor. :D Also, as Hoshika said, make it all one picture, or the frames get spewn all over the place. Oh, another thing I noticed. Work on the color of the text, so it doesn't either be too bright, or hard to read because of the background.

PaxPalkia
04-06-2007, 08:45 PM
Uh, go read that, Papa. 8U But, though it's a bit, well, sloppy, I chuckled a few times. You have very good humor. :D Also, as Hoshika said, make it all one picture, or the frames get spewn all over the place.
This board is for Pokemon related art though. . . . . . . . I wasn't aware that you could post other stuff in your own thread that has nothing to do with Pokemon:oops:

Faust
04-06-2007, 08:48 PM
Thanks for the tips guys. I'll edit it when I'm done fixing the over 4 comics I've made...

Faust
04-07-2007, 11:54 AM
Agh! Why's it so small? I didn't make it that small! It should fill the page with it's spritey glory?!