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BeserkerFury
04-09-2007, 01:10 AM
I'm am writing my first fic on this forum,its about a young boy,Roran,and his friend,Jenny.
In this story,its depicts how Pokemon could have been created and how they could destroy everything.This uses the theory of pokemon coming from space.To save everything they must get the Jewel of Creation.The rest I'm still working on.
Also if anyone could scratch sprites for this it would be a big help.If you would like to make a scratch for it pm me and I'll tell you how to make it look.
Pokemon:The days of Creation,The Begining.
This starts out as any other day for Roran and his friend,Jenny.But as they are about to find out new things will take over there world.
Now let the journey begin.
Hey,Roran,whats up?",asks Jenny.Nothing much,you?"Nope,hey did you hear about the meteor about to hit the ocean near Magneos?",said Jenny.Yeah,we should check it out,they said there are weird things moving around on it,something abou this will be the beginnig of the end.Jenny gasps.But I've been having weird dreams Jenny,dreams of creatures,creatures of war,battles,and friends to one person inpaticular."Really now,"Jenny says nervously."Oh,when you get home tell your mom I said hi,"Jenny says in a odd,excited voice.Heres my stop,I'll tell mom you said hi Jenny."Ok then,see ya tomorrow,"
I know it needs to be re-done some,but I'll do that later.

Hoshika
04-09-2007, 01:31 AM
Hmm. The preview you showed us... is it the beginning of the story? An intro really shouldn't be that quick to go to the plot.

And were you reading Eragon/Eldest lately...? Or is it a coincidence?

Oh, by the way, is this a comedy?

BeserkerFury
04-09-2007, 01:40 AM
Thats just part of the intro,I cant find the first part so I posted this,and yes I have read Eragon and Eldest.And the comedy part,it will have some comedy,but when I'm done it should be %95.99 seriousness.