Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Palkia Mission!

[overdrivepink]

You are a human who one day wakes up as a Pokémon. The Pokémon there in there town called Watergate Village have been suffering by the evil Pokémon Palkia. He has sent out two bad guy teams. The Sharks and The Birds the sharks love the water and there leader is a sharpedo, and the two companions 2 carvannah they think the water will drown the earth and air so it is filled with water. the birds like the air and there leader is starptor, swellow, and staravia they belive that the ocean will dry out so it's just land and air. They are trying to destroy the water gate village will you be able to stop them or will Palkia's natural disasters take over the world.


name:
age:
species:
personality:
history:( if you were a human you don't do this because you can't remeber alot)
other things we should know about her:
good or bad:

rules:
no bunnying
no god modning
no cursing
no mega romance

HERE IS MINE

name: Rose
age: 14
species: Shinx
personality: kind and has tons of courage. You usally find her drawing or reading scary stories. She likes making friends and does not back down from a challenge.
history: none
other things we should know about her: none
good or bad: good


map here are some main places ill tell you the names in til I find a way to make a map:
Watergate village- where you live-first misson
wearow city- where you find the post office and buying friend areas
pietin town-bank and move fusor
chikopilis city- 3rd mission
onix cave-mission 5
lightning rocks-mission 2
milshaka city-dojo-mission 4
palkia's cavern-the final mission 6

[LordZangoose]

So all this is is PMD with Palkia and a new team name thrown in? Plenty of people have done this before, and much better if I might add, just with slight variations. It also helps to put sign-ups in the sign-up section.

[sin-of-greed]

Oh and Overdrivepink, you need to be a little more descriptive of the role play, like more details pictures of characters, landscape etc. and heck even making up new pokémon but for that you should draw them and upload the pics so everyone can see them. Also be original it's a lot cooler when you have everything set up and it is original.

[overdrivepink]

ok I was busy at the moment im going to add that.

[sin-of-greed]

Also add a LOT more detail to the history of the RP as in maybe who are these teams say the Sharks for example who is in that team what do they mainly do and such also add more detail on how things happened and why they happened that would be very good for the RP. You agree LordZangoose?

[overdrivepink]

ok I told who the teams are.

[LordZangoose]

I agree somewhat. However, adding too much detail takes away creative freedom.

[overdrivepink]

ok if you don't like it very well can you tell me what I need to fix?

[sin-of-greed]

I agree somewhat. However, adding too much detail takes away creative freedom.

Yeah but it was just lacking in detail so it needed a lot. ^^;

[overdrivepink]

will any one join now?