Experiment 52: Human 1

[RocketMeowth]

I know I have my PMD story to worry about and no, I'm not gonna stop writing it. I've got WAY too much planned out for it.

But this idea just struck me and I'm really urged to write it out. But I want your views on it first before I do anything.

Plot
It's about a Pokemon who is captured by Team Genetic, a team that specializes in genetically altering Pokemon. This Pokemon is then mutated into a human by a special device and becomes Team Genetic's "toy". After a month, this Pokemon is sick of being put through tests and escapes one night.

It then gets entangled with two trainers who are going off to get their first Pokemon from Professor Rowan in Sandgem Town. This Pokemon then gets a Pokemon of its own and begins its own journey.

Of course Team Genetic is after it and the pokemon faces many difficult challenges when it comes to keeping its true identity a secret from its own Pokemon.

Main Character(s):
Henry (story revolves around him)
Krystal
Zack

Evil Characters:
Team Genetic (completely made up by me)
Hammond
Natasha

Basically that's all I have. Like I said, this idea JUST hit me and I'm still developing it. But so far, what do you guys think? I would like to know so I don't waste time writing a fic that cats won't read since it would be a journey fic with a very large twist.

=^^= Nya

[Neo Pikachu]

Now that... is definitely something great for a plot. Also, the title is perfect for it, now that you mention it.

I'm looking forward to it, since you've been doing an awesome job already with your previous work.

[Orange_Flaaffy]

Hmm..This plot is actually in danger of falling into one of the least loved Mary-Sue-isms of pokemorphic (you character would be called a morph, with Team Genetic being their maker) fic: The pokemorph gets its own pokemon and goes training it as if it were a normal human with no one noticing and everyone allowing it to do so -plot :P.
See the pokemorphic mary sue test here to see all of the overused plot elements of such a fic:) (http://www.fanfiction.net/fr/25541/26909/1785443/1/)
Normally this type of overused plot works in the human becomes more pokemonish way but it can also apply the other way :P.
It has been done to death, and normally overlooks the animalistic side of both pokemon-like human and human like pokemon, making it to where even is the pokemon\human was a pure pokemon it would not change their character or the way they act at all :P

[RocketMeowth]

I've put thought into that. And this idea actually came to me a few hours after posting. I was just too lazy to actually put it up.

Okay, so Henry who is the Pokemorph has a device around his neck. That device is connected to his internal organs, keeping them from failing (I'm still figuring out how so nya). This device CAN'T be taken off or it would probably result in Henry's death. This device also acts as a tracker.

And there will be times where his Pokemon find out that he's a morph and they'll actually rebel against him because of it. I might have people figure out as well since Henry, even though he looks like an average every day human, will sometimes speak Pokemon instead of the human tongue.

I'm still going to work on this to try and make it as original as possible. Any help would be very much appreciated.

=^^= Nya

[Orange_Flaaffy]

Hmm..Well, there has to be something besides the fact that he speaks pokemon that makes him a pokemon at heart IMHO :). Of course, I am the type that likes to see pokemon as animals rather than little humans with fur :). If the pokemon pov of something is as human as the normal human pov the plot could just as well star a OC who is human with a thingie around their neck to keep them alive ;).

[RocketMeowth]

I'm working on his character. Hopefully I can get this to work. If not then I'll put this in failed attempts.