Eiyoko
04-29-2007, 09:12 PM
Just an idea I had. It's probably not a GOOD idea, but I feel the need to get it out somewhere. I'm kinda new to this fandom...(*is nervous*) Here goes.
I haven't decided on a name for the main character, so I'm just going to call him John for now. (I'd like a name out of the norm, but still something a normal kid would have for a name.)
I haven't even decided on a good name for the story, either. ^^;
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John never really liked Luxray that much. In fact, he hated them with a passion, and claimed he had the right to. One day, he heads out for the nearby woods in hopes of finding some peace after an argument with his father. He sees a nearby Shinx whom is apparently lost. Seeing his chance to extract revenge, he prepares to do his dark deed. That's when he is attacked by a supposedly wild SHINY Luxray and flees home after a long, futile battle that almost kills him. He had his chance to slay the enemy and he failed; it was too fast, too strong. He does not come out unscathed: he was bitten by the Luxray at one point, and feels incredibly drowsy. He goes right to bed.
The next morning, John wakes up to a startling realization: he has been transformed into a shinx as punishment for attempting to harm an innocent pokemon. The only way the punishment will end? It's of no matter.
John races about the house frantically trying to find his father, but he is nowhere to be found. In fact, his father's normally orderly room is a mess. Moreover, the window is shattered.
It's evident that someone has kidnapped his father, a slightly-well-known scientist. John's journey to save his father begins...but can he survive long enough to learn of his own miscomings and break the curse?
I haven't decided on a name for the main character, so I'm just going to call him John for now. (I'd like a name out of the norm, but still something a normal kid would have for a name.)
I haven't even decided on a good name for the story, either. ^^;
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John never really liked Luxray that much. In fact, he hated them with a passion, and claimed he had the right to. One day, he heads out for the nearby woods in hopes of finding some peace after an argument with his father. He sees a nearby Shinx whom is apparently lost. Seeing his chance to extract revenge, he prepares to do his dark deed. That's when he is attacked by a supposedly wild SHINY Luxray and flees home after a long, futile battle that almost kills him. He had his chance to slay the enemy and he failed; it was too fast, too strong. He does not come out unscathed: he was bitten by the Luxray at one point, and feels incredibly drowsy. He goes right to bed.
The next morning, John wakes up to a startling realization: he has been transformed into a shinx as punishment for attempting to harm an innocent pokemon. The only way the punishment will end? It's of no matter.
John races about the house frantically trying to find his father, but he is nowhere to be found. In fact, his father's normally orderly room is a mess. Moreover, the window is shattered.
It's evident that someone has kidnapped his father, a slightly-well-known scientist. John's journey to save his father begins...but can he survive long enough to learn of his own miscomings and break the curse?