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The Harris
05-02-2007, 03:08 PM
this is my very own comic for PMD and Overworld sprites, this will be a great comic BUT i would just like to ask any of you to post some custom PMD sprites to make this more different to others

COVER (http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/6116/coverqt1.png)
Issue 1 (http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/1200/76482379mk0.png)
Issue 2 (http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2797/41735364uc8.png)
Issue 3 (http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/8619/16341111eb1.png)
Issue 4 (http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/4516/52671484gi3.png)
Issue 5 (http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/5601/52536686re8.png)
Issue 6 (http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/6083/53873921cm7.png)
Issue 7 (http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/8976/58923207ou3.png)
Issue 8 (http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/5096/95761012ec4.png)
Issue 9 (http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/4162/36960497ox3.png)
Issue 10 (http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/4751/10lf6.png)
Issue 11 (http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/5287/11wq3.png)
Issue 12 (http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/909/12jn5.png)
Issue 13 (http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/7462/13xg5.png)
Issue 14 (http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/5298/14cq7.png)


If you want to be in the comic fill out this simple form:

Name:
Pokemon: (can include custom PMD sprites)
Overworld:
House Sprite: (old? new? you decide)
What Do They Do?:



Bios:
The Harris (http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/525/bio1wb6.png)
Omega (http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/2452/bio3cz4.png)
Weldenheart (http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/9803/bio2zs6.png)
Mom (http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/474/bio4ys7.png)
Prof. Birch (http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/8089/bio5qy6.png)
Aipo (http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/2226/bio6zk4.png)
Lillian (http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/7231/bio7op8.png)
Micheal (http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/5226/bio9fo9.png)
Gym Leader 1: Flaze (http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/5319/bio8oz7.png)
Machop (http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/4869/bio10qd9.png)
Caterpie (http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/7308/bio11gq8.png)
Wartortle (http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8204/bio12sk7.png)
Evil Beedril (http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/1855/bio13gl9.png)
Lucairio (http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/8346/bio14sp7.png)
Lickly (http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/9159/bio15ot0.png)
Gym Leader 2: Leafaze (http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/728/bio16qi3.png)

Credits:
Me: Making custom PMD sprite + Making the comic
Spriters Resource: normal sprites
RM: The plakia sprite on cover

The Harris
05-02-2007, 04:17 PM
Issue 1 Is Up

The Harris
05-02-2007, 04:47 PM
Issue 2 Is Up

Tombi
05-02-2007, 04:59 PM
The scratch of Palkia was created by RM. You need to give credit.

There are some typo's, and everywhere doesn't need a capital letter, but otherwise, good job. ^^

EDIT: If he's 26, why does he still live with his mum with no Pokemon yet? <_<

The Harris
05-02-2007, 05:09 PM
The scratch of Palkia was created by RM. You need to give credit.

There are some typo's, and everywhere doesn't need a capital letter, but otherwise, good job. ^^

EDIT: If he's 26, why does he still live with his mum with no Pokemon yet? <_<


uhm i did give credit

also im 26 and the character is me so its better + i live with my mum

Tombi
05-02-2007, 05:10 PM
Where did you give credit?

You're 26?!

Geez...

The Harris
05-02-2007, 05:11 PM
Where did you give credit?

You're 26?!

Geez...

hidden slightly so it doesnt mess the comic up (first letter of each issue)

yes im 26

Tombi
05-02-2007, 05:14 PM
It's not allowed to be hidden. That's the point. If people can't see it they'll report you...

Sorry, but you don't really type like a 26 year old...

The Harris
05-02-2007, 05:26 PM
It's not allowed to be hidden. That's the point. If people can't see it they'll report you...

Sorry, but you don't really type like a 26 year old...

1) ok ill give credit on the first post but whats their name?
2) yes im 26 get over it

Tombi
05-02-2007, 05:33 PM
Just put RM. People know who you're talking about, as they're a G-Mod...

The Harris
05-02-2007, 05:37 PM
Just put RM. People know who you're talking about, as they're a G-Mod...

ok done it, thanks for telling me, i wouldn't want to get in trouble

The Harris
05-02-2007, 06:29 PM
Issue 3 Is Up

Tombi
05-02-2007, 06:31 PM
Machop? Since when was Machop a starter?

The Harris
05-02-2007, 06:53 PM
Machop? Since when was Machop a starter?

made up idea of mine

anyway Issue 4 Is Up

Calypso
05-02-2007, 07:05 PM
No offence, but this is a little unrealistic!

I mean, the mum is meant to be 52, but when you look at the Character Bio's she looks about 30, maybe even younger! Also, the same with "Omega". 16!?!
Wth, he should be the one who is 52, based on the sprite D:

And, the 26 year old trainer. It's usually a ten year old kid! I think he can looks after himself in the wild, at that age :S

Machop as a starter?

Otherwise, good start, can't wait for the next issue ;D

Tombi
05-02-2007, 07:08 PM
No offence, but this is a little unrealistic!

I mean, the mum is meant to be 52, but when you look at the Character Bio's she looks about 30, maybe even younger! Also, the same with "Omega". 16!?!
Wth, he should be the one who is 52, based on the sprite D:

And, the 26 year old trainer. It's usually a ten year old kid! I think he can looks after himself in the wild, at that age :S

Machop as a starter?

Otherwise, good start, can't wait for the next issue ;D
Lol, 'otherwise' xDDDDDDDDD

I love your criticism, you always smush them down into the dirt and then say something like,

'Good work. Can't wait for the next issue ;P'

XDDD

It is a little unrealistic though... but I'd like to see how this turns out ^^

The Harris
05-02-2007, 07:08 PM
Issue 5 Is Up

Tombi
05-02-2007, 07:09 PM
No it's not... I can't see it...

The Harris
05-02-2007, 07:10 PM
No it's not... I can't see it...

it is im not lying :eh: it just take about 5 second after i post its up till its up i need to link it :goofy:

Calypso
05-02-2007, 07:14 PM
Lol, 'otherwise' xDDDDDDDDD

I love your criticism, you always smush them down into the dirt and then say something like,

'Good work. Can't wait for the next issue ;P'

XDDD

It is a little unrealistic though... but I'd like to see how this turns out ^^

Yar, lawl! Just so that it doesn't sound too harsh! ;P
Me = Bad Mood = Snidey English Teacher = Snidey English homework that eats up all your free time >.<

New issue?

Already?

Maybe slow down and take your time! Results = Much Better

;PP

Anastasia-R
05-02-2007, 07:15 PM
Why is the mom so...I don't want rude,but she look like...below 40. Not 56! O_o

The Harris
05-02-2007, 07:16 PM
Yar, lawl! Just so that it doesn't sound too harsh! ;P
Me = Bad Mood = Snidey English Teacher = Snidey English homework that eats up all your free time >.<

New issue?

Already?

Maybe slow down and take your time! Results = Much Better

;PP

are you saying slowing down makes them better? i cant i need to do them when my ideas are fresh, also your earlier post said it isnt realistic well think about the one with the cow in it does that seem realistic :eh:

Why is the mom so...I don't want rude,but she look like...below 40. Not 56! O_o

i couldnt find an old person sprite to match the overworld

Ness
05-02-2007, 07:18 PM
uhm i did give credit

also im 26 and the character is me so its better + i live with my mum

Ahaha, you aren't 26 The Harris. You are 13 :tongue:.

Yea there are a few details which aren't believable but as a whole it's a decent job... especially if it is your first comic.

The Harris
05-02-2007, 07:20 PM
Ahaha, you aren't 26 The Harris. You are 13 :tongue:.

Yea there are a few details which aren't believable but as a whole it's a decent job... especially if it is your first comic.

i am 26 what makes you think im 13 :eh:



P.S im working on issue 6 tomorrow

Ness
05-02-2007, 07:22 PM
i am 26 what makes you think im 13 :eh:

According to your Deviantart profile, you are 13. I have no reason not to believe it since it also says: 'Current Residence: Saffron Walden...'.

Calypso
05-02-2007, 07:24 PM
are you saying slowing down makes them better? i cant i need to do them when my ideas are fresh, also your earlier post said it isnt realistic well think about the one with the cow in it does that seem realistic :eh:

i couldnt find an old person sprite to match the overworld

Eh?

Mine and Tombi's comic is meant to be like that! It's comedy!

Even so, it still follows the original plot and storyline, so yes, I would say it is realistic, just a cow in it ;PP

PS: Why didn't you change the overworld then? >.<

Tombi
05-02-2007, 07:26 PM
*LE GASP*

The MooMoo Adventures is a comic that is meant to be funny. At least we don't have a ten year old that's meant to be 26 that's really 13...

Pokeboy sarab
05-03-2007, 08:49 AM
According to your Deviantart profile, you are 13. I have no reason not to believe it since it also says: 'Current Residence: Saffron Walden...'.
You caught him now. Anyway I find this comic too cliche. And also the sprites and the ages do not match.

Amaterasu
05-03-2007, 11:09 AM
*LE GASP*

The MooMoo Adventures is a comic that is meant to be funny. At least we don't have a ten year old that's meant to be 26 that's really 13...


So which age is it, huh? xDDD

The Harris
05-03-2007, 04:22 PM
*LE GASP*

The MooMoo Adventures is a comic that is meant to be funny. At least we don't have a ten year old that's meant to be 26 that's really 13...

ok lets explain ok! im 26 i dont get what 13 and 10 have to do with it but im 26 and its based on me traveling to pokeworld from earth at 26 as by then i have money for spaceship

Ness
05-03-2007, 04:30 PM
The Harris you ARE 13, not 26. Anybody can see that if they go to deviantart.

Plus, it is more embarrassing for you if you are 26 and live with your mom than being 13 :rolleyes:.

Tombi
05-03-2007, 04:33 PM
A spaceship? Wtf? I’m very confused…

The Harris
05-03-2007, 04:38 PM
A spaceship? Wtf? I’m very confused…

ok i just visited pokeworld thats why im not going to make the character 10 or 13

The Harris you ARE 13, not 26. Anybody can see that if they go to deviantart.

Plus, it is more embarrassing for you if you are 26 and live with your mom than being 13 :rolleyes:.

ok to be honest i uhm... lied :sad: i lied to deviantART about my age :sad:

Pokeboy sarab
05-03-2007, 04:42 PM
ok i just visited pokeworld thats why im not going to make the character 10 or 13



ok to be honest i uhm... lied :sad: i lied to deviantART about my age :sad:
Oh stop faking, you type like a 13 year old and you act like a 13 year old. And you are a 13 year old.

Ness
05-03-2007, 04:43 PM
ok to be honest i uhm... lied :sad: i lied to deviantART about my age :sad:

No '26 year-old' would say that they are 13 :rolleyes:. It is far more likely for a 13 year old to claim he/she is 26. There is nothing wrong with being 13 at all. Right now you are acting like you are 8 (actually I'm a gymnastics coach and most of my 8 year old students show more maturity than you are now.)

The Harris
05-03-2007, 04:45 PM
No '26 year-old' would say that they are 13 :rolleyes:. It is far more likely for a 13 year old to claim he/she is 26.

i said i was 13 because i had bad art :sad: i didnt want to be taken the mikey out of

Calypso
05-03-2007, 04:59 PM
Uhh, whats wrong with being thirteen?

I'm thirteen, Tombi's thirteen!

There's no need to lie X_X

The Harris
05-03-2007, 05:00 PM
Uhh, whats wrong with being thirteen?

I'm thirteen, Tombi's thirteen!

There's no need to lie X_X

i lied about being 13 as i had bad art on DevaintART and saying im 26 will make me get taken the mick out of

Tombi
05-03-2007, 05:09 PM
Who gives a damn if you can't draw <__<

Thirteen is a wicked age. Enjoy it.

Pokeboy sarab
05-03-2007, 05:13 PM
Who gives a damn if you can't draw <__<

Thirteen is a wicked age. Enjoy it.
I have far left that age....I am 14 and a half now.

The Harris
05-03-2007, 07:12 PM
Who gives a damn if you can't draw <__<

Thirteen is a wicked age. Enjoy it.

im 26 honest, anyway stop spamming now this is a comic

The Harris
05-04-2007, 03:42 PM
Issue 6 Is Up

Tombi
05-04-2007, 03:52 PM
To be really honest, your spelling, grammar and disregard for rules are not like a 26 year old.

Compare yourself with Neo Pikachu. He's 25. See the difference?

Um, year. You're thirteen.

Now to look at the latest issue.

The Harris
05-04-2007, 04:31 PM
To be really honest, your spelling, grammar and disregard for rules are not like a 26 year old.

Compare yourself with Neo Pikachu. He's 25. See the difference?

Um, year. You're thirteen.

Now to look at the latest issue.

stop spamming about me beeing 13 i am not thats the end of it ok

The Harris
05-04-2007, 04:40 PM
Issue 7 Is Up

Tombi
05-04-2007, 04:54 PM
1) If Machop fainted, you'd return to the Pokemon Center.
2) It was suddenly revived in Issue 6.
3) Your Machop is level five. It can't know Guillotine Chop yet.
5) Dad?
6) Caterpie can't use Stun Spore.
7) Or Razor Leaf.
8) Ultra Dive? What the heck is that?

Calypso
05-04-2007, 05:10 PM
1) If Machop fainted, you'd return to the Pokemon Center.
2) It was suddenly revived in Issue 6.
3) Your Machop is level five. It can't know Guillotine Chop yet.
5) Dad?
6) Caterpie can't use Stun Spore.
7) Or Razor Leaf.
8) Ultra Dive? What the heck is that?

Lawl, the 8 point's of wisdom xDDD

Yar, but what Tombi said, this comic has issue's! It moves waayy too fast!

Also, I doubt the first gym leader would have pokemon as strong as that X_X

Tombi
05-04-2007, 05:17 PM
Exactly, oh moomoo-buddy.

Seriously, I'm still thinking of what to put in the next issue of Mine and Calypso's comic, and even then the issue's take days. Not minutes. x____X'

Ness
05-04-2007, 05:18 PM
The Harris, your comic ranges from the bizarre to the inane. I strongly suggest that you spend some more time working on the storyline and characters. Right now it is all over the place. Aesthetically speaking it is fine however.

Also I don't think that four frames should be considered an issue but rather a page, especially if your 'issue' stops mid-scene. Look at Tombi and Calypso's Comic (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=34716), their issues have over six times the content as yours.

To summarize, I don't think that your comic is horrible; it has potential. It just needs some substantial revisions to be taken seriously.

EDIT: Oh I completely forgot about this before but you are 13 or at least not 26. In some previous posts (I am not giving links) you talked about what is happening at school which means that you are NOT 26.

Tombi
05-04-2007, 05:29 PM
HA! PROOF!

Thanks for linking to the comic, Ness. ;P

Can I say one thing to Harris without being flamed?

Okay.

Owned.

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Your comic has potential, as Ness said, but it isn't outstanding. You need to put more thought into at (and revise basic attacks...)

The Harris
05-04-2007, 05:45 PM
1) If Machop fainted, you'd return to the Pokemon Center.
2) It was suddenly revived in Issue 6.
3) Your Machop is level five. It can't know Guillotine Chop yet.
5) Dad?
6) Caterpie can't use Stun Spore.
7) Or Razor Leaf.
8) Ultra Dive? What the heck is that?

1) i dont bother with boring bits i like the exitement
2) i dont bother with boring bits i like the exitement
3) WHAT!?! GILLOTINE CHOP IS REAL? I THOUGHT I MADE IT UP FOR MY COMIC?
5) what dad? also you forgot 4
6) its a comic its not meant to make sense
7) i repeat its a comic its not meant to make sense
8) I MADE IT UP LIKE GILLOTINE CHOP



P.S everyone can someone use the form because i want a new trainer and i cant be bothered to keep thinking up name (im not good at it)

Tombi
05-04-2007, 05:51 PM
1) Boring bits count. Also, if you're skilled enough, you can make boring bits interesting.
2) Boring bits count. Also, if you're skilled enough, you can make boring bits interesting.
3) There some move that begins with Guillotine.. something like chop...
5) Some sort of kid runs in to the gym yelling 'Dad'. I forgot four? Oh yeah xDDD
6) Yes it is. <____<
7) I repeat, yes it is.
8) MADE UP MOVES SUCK.

Fire Pkmn Master
05-04-2007, 05:52 PM
Comics are supposed to make sense if anyone's going to read it and comment back on it.
They'll say that there are parts where things dont make sense and you'll see why people are saying that. I think you should just fix all this up and start fresh because your comics arent as good. Keep trying but you have a lot to fix and think about.

Pervival_Cox
05-04-2007, 05:57 PM
Comics are supposed to make sense if anyone's going to read it and comment back on it.
They'll say that there are parts where things dont make sense and you'll see why people are saying that. I think you should just fix all this up and start fresh because your comics arent as good. Keep trying but you have a lot to fix and think about.

I agree, though to be completely honest I don’t find ANY of the comics on this site remotely interesting. XD They all seem very… puerile.

But, yeah, at least they make sense. This one… needs a bit of plot development.

I say take some time to come up with a plot before making comics, and make sure they show a bit more fluidity to them or no one is really going to read. :/

While I don’t agree with how some of these other members are telling you such things, I do agree with the general idea behind their words. The comic needs work, and should take more time.

The Harris
05-04-2007, 06:07 PM
Issue 8 Is Up

P.S i could find a badge to use but i would have put it on the bottom after he spoke but i couldnt find a badge :(

Ness
05-04-2007, 07:16 PM
Still on the age topic:....

Click here. (http://www.freewebs.com/harris2007/harrisprofile.htm)

Ummm 13? Are you sure you still are 26 :silenced:?

Calypso
05-04-2007, 07:21 PM
Still on the age topic:....

Click here. (http://www.freewebs.com/harris2007/harrisprofile.htm)

Ummm 13? Are you sure you still are 26 :silenced:?

Lawl! Hah! I guess that proves it then ;PP

The Harris
05-05-2007, 09:21 AM
Still on the age topic:....

Click here. (http://www.freewebs.com/harris2007/harrisprofile.htm)

Ummm 13? Are you sure you still are 26 :silenced:?

yes i lied becaue i like simpsons and its for kids

P.S when i make some more issues it will change! machop and all the other pokemon of the harris adventure alone with no trainer can you wait? itll be exiting

The Harris
05-05-2007, 10:07 AM
Issue 9 Is Up

Ness
05-05-2007, 10:28 PM
yes i lied becaue i like simpsons and its for kids

P.S when i make some more issues it will change! machop and all the other pokemon of the harris adventure alone with no trainer can you wait? itll be exiting

Three things:

- You're '26' and are part of a POKEMON forum. You have strangely selective issues that you are shy about if you are ashamed of liking The Simpsons.

- If you were anywhere near the age of 26 then you'd know that liking The Simpsons at that age is nothing to be ashamed of. It was that generation that grew up with The Simpsons.

- It says that you're school is SWCHS (http://profiles.members.freewebs.com/Profile/search.jsp?query=SWCHS&field=school). If I click on that link it is apparent that it is a Highschool.

...not to mention that there is a blatant maturity gap between you and any other real 26-year old.

RawrIsMyMiddleName
05-05-2007, 11:32 PM
Three things:

- You're '26' and are part of a POKEMON forum. You have strangely selective issues that you are shy about if you are ashamed of liking The Simpsons.

- If you were anywhere near the age of 26 then you'd know that liking The Simpsons at that age is nothing to be ashamed of. It was that generation that grew up with The Simpsons.

- It says that you're school is SWCHS (http://profiles.members.freewebs.com/Profile/search.jsp?query=SWCHS&field=school). If I click on that link it is apparent that it is a Highschool.

...not to mention that there is a blatant maturity gap between you and any other real 26-year old.

Yay! Good proof! Go Ness! Anyways, this comic needs working. The ages don't fit, and it doesn't seem realistic. More proof, you say you are a student on freewebs.

The Harris
05-06-2007, 08:07 AM
Yay! Good proof! Go Ness! Anyways, this comic needs working. The ages don't fit, and it doesn't seem realistic. More proof, you say you are a student on freewebs.

just shut up this is a comic not a place to talk to me about my age *cough* 26 *cough*

The Harris
05-06-2007, 08:25 AM
Issue 10 Is Up

Ness
05-06-2007, 07:31 PM
just shut up this is a comic not a place to talk to me about my age *cough* 26 *cough*

Rather harsh, and more importantly rather late if you actually didn't want people talking about your age. You just don't want anyone to talk about it now because you can't lie your way out of it. If you really didn't want it to span 5 pages then you should have never indulged us in the first place. In fact you still haven't dropped it so expect to be further flamed.

Back on topic however, this comic cannot be taken seriously the way it is now. I am going to offer some constructive criticism which I highly encourage you to take in.

Firstly, the comic moves way too fast. Too much happens at once. When you introduce new characters or subplots as fast as you are it is hard to follow as a reader. Slow it down, you can make even mundane events interesting if you put enough time into it. Also make sure that if you do introduce a new character that you follow up on him/her/it and not just make him dissappear the next issue. Right now you are averaging almost a new character per issue. Keep the ones you have right now and work with them for awhile.

The plot needs to be reworked. It is at the point of being laughable not because it's funny but rather because it is way too all over the place (and don't say you planned that because it is clearly unintentional). Think carefully about what you want to happen far in advance before you make an issue. Revising is the key. Don't use your first rough idea. Work on it and refine it until you have something that is interesting and can be followed. After you have a solid storyline written down then break it down into pieces and make those pieces an issue. You can add the smaller details in here (you can and should make them interesting to the reader).

Overall my impression of your comic is you have a bunch of things in you imagination that you think are 'sweet' or 'awesome' and you want to put them all in all at once. To me, the reader, I just think 'so what?' You haven't made much of an effort to get the reader involved in the story and if you continue to do this then you will be laughed at and/or flamed. Use other people's advice, they are giving it to you so you can better your comic.

mailmanmonkey
05-06-2007, 08:05 PM
Ness is right you make it a bit to quickly you make somethings in only 20 minutes and there doesnt seem to be a plot every thing just suddenly happens and then something completly different happerns in the next issue or 2.

Couldnt you draw it out first or something like that because the text is a bit lame! other comic writers take 40 minutes to maybe a day making a perfect issue which people love and beg for more!

P.S. Are you sure your not 13 cause you really act like a 13 yr old :oops: and whats so bad about likeing the simpsons its awsome!!!

Tombi
05-06-2007, 08:09 PM
Ness is right you make it a bit to quickly you make somethings in only 20 minutes and there doesnt seem to be a plot every thing just suddenly happens and then something completly different happerns in the next issue or 2.

Couldnt you draw it out first or something like that because the text is a bit lame! other comic writers take 40 minutes to maybe a day making a perfect issue which people love and beg for more!

P.S. Are you sure your not 13 cause you really act like a 13 yr old :oops: and whats so bad about likeing the simpsons its awsome!!!
Exactly.

Now, if you really want this spamming to end, Harris, just admit you're thirteen. You're not twenty six. Anyone with a brain stem can tell that by your abnormal spelling and grammer skills (which is below the standard of a thirteen year old) that you are not a twenty six year old. I mean, as I said before, look at Neo Pikachu.

I myself am thirteen. And I don't go around saying I'm twenty six. Who wants to be twenty six?! Bleh. x__X'

So, you're cornered with proof and should now admit it, and we'll leave this thread alone.

Azumao
05-06-2007, 08:36 PM
1) About the completely irrelevant age issue, click here (http://www.freewebs.com/harris2007/harrisprofile.htm). His Freewebs site, his profile, his real age. (13)

2) Comic-wise, typos...and it slightly bores me.

RawrIsMyMiddleName
05-06-2007, 08:46 PM
Exactly.

Now, if you really want this spamming to end, Harris, just admit you're thirteen. You're not twenty six. Anyone with a brain stem can tell that by your abnormal spelling and grammer skills (which is below the standard of a thirteen year old) that you are not a twenty six year old. I mean, as I said before, look at Neo Pikachu.

I myself am thirteen. And I don't go around saying I'm twenty six. Who wants to be twenty six?! Bleh. x__X'

So, you're cornered with proof and should now admit it, and we'll leave this thread alone.


Yay Tombi. She has a point.

Azumao
05-06-2007, 08:49 PM
Yay Tombi. He has a point.

She has a point. Lol.

Her post, my link...two pieces of evidence. Besides, a 26 year old wouldn't be so egotistical about a Pokemon comic...now can we please tell the truth and move on?

The Harris
05-06-2007, 09:08 PM
She has a point. Lol.

Her post, my link...two pieces of evidence. Besides, a 26 year old wouldn't be so egotistical about a Pokemon comic...now can we please tell the truth and move on?

i dont care what you think im 26 get over it you little kids

Calypso
05-06-2007, 09:10 PM
Yay Tombi. She has a point.

:O Tombi's a she

Why would I be paired up with another boy! Eww!

And why does everyone call me a she and Tombi a he! We should switch! It could still work xDD

... Random outburst X_X''

{//3dit:} @Harris: Hahah, you're calling us little kid's! We're not the one's hiding our true age! Plus, even if you are "26" we still act more muture than you. I mean look at your grammar. It's just...wrong

The Harris
05-06-2007, 09:11 PM
:O Tombi's a she

Why would I be paired up with another boy! Eww!

And why does everyone call me a she and Tombi a he! We should switch! It could still work xDD

... Random outburst X_X''

change usernames then they will call you the right things

RawrIsMyMiddleName
05-06-2007, 09:15 PM
change usernames then they will call you the right things

Calypso's right. You have bad grammar.

You need to capatalize and put periods.

Calypso
05-06-2007, 09:15 PM
i dont care what you think im 26 get over it you little kids

As I said in the Edited part, that you seemed to ignore:

"Hahah, you're calling us little kid's! We're not the one's hiding our true age! Plus, even if you are "26" we still act more muture than you. I mean look at your grammar. It's just...wrong"

@Noan: Yup ;PP

The Harris
05-06-2007, 09:17 PM
Calypso's right. You have bad grammar.

You need to capatalize and put periods.

is this an english lesson? NO! ITS A FORUM YOU CAN TYPE LIKE THIS: joo is pwned, IF YOU WANT TO GRAMMER AND SPELLING DONT MATTER!

YOU SEE THIS IS WHY I SAID IM 13 BECUASE I LIKE POKEMON AND I CANT DO GRAMMER BUT STILL THIS ISNT WHERE GRAMMER MATTERS

Calypso
05-06-2007, 09:20 PM
Again, you ignored my post >.<;;

Plus, it's "Grammar" not "Grammer" ;PP

'Kay, I'll stop now D:

The Harris
05-06-2007, 09:22 PM
Again, you ignored my post >.<;;

Plus, it's "Grammar" not "Grammer" ;PP

'Kay, I'll stop now D:

leave me alone you little kids

also if i was a kid this would be internet bullying

Ness
05-06-2007, 09:49 PM
is this an english lesson? NO! ITS A FORUM YOU CAN TYPE LIKE THIS: joo is pwned, IF YOU WANT TO GRAMMER AND SPELLING DONT MATTER!

YOU SEE THIS IS WHY I SAID IM 13 BECUASE I LIKE POKEMON AND I CANT DO GRAMMER BUT STILL THIS ISNT WHERE GRAMMER MATTERS

You are 100% wrong on this point. Period. Forums have rules. You can say what you want at home but on here there are Mods who can ban you. Even if you are not breaking any rules, it is still at your own expense. If you are 26 and self-concious about watching The Simpsons then you should be especially concerned about looking like a n00b on the forum. Let me do you a favour, read this:

READ FIRST: Forum Guide (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=28)

Since I am in a relatively good mood I'll also highlight this taken directly from the thread:

Spelling and Grammar is Critical! – Try to spell as best as you can and use the best grammar possible. Make sure your words are spelled correctly, that you use proper punctuation and you capitalize the first name of proper nouns and the first letter of each sentence. Yes, this is how people at PE2K want things done, we don’t want a forum filled with posts that look like they were grabbed from an AIM or another instant messenger chat.

Heck, type your post in MSWord if you need to or it’s very long. If most of your sentences have at least more than one spelling or grammar error, it’s going to look bad against you. Correct this quickly, because this is the real determinant that most senior members are going to use to determine if you’re going to take this forum seriously, or if you’re just here to do whatever you want, no matter how bad it is…

I can not stress enough how having good spelling and grammar skills is important for this forum…

Azumao
05-06-2007, 09:56 PM
I will make one final post in this thread, which is turning into a flame war, then I will PM a mod.

It doesn't matter how old someone is, but it does matter what kind of attitude they have. The Harris is being rude, but it is as a reaction to our rudeness. If he didn't have a history of lying/breaking the rules, I might sympathize for him. But instead, I will just say that either he is 13 and a terrible lier, or he is 26 and has some major problems.

I'll report this now.

The Harris
05-06-2007, 10:07 PM
I will make one final post in this thread, which is turning into a flame war, then I will PM a mod.

It doesn't matter how old someone is, but it does matter what kind of attitude they have. The Harris is being rude, but it is as a reaction to our rudeness. If he didn't have a history of lying/breaking the rules, I might sympathize for him. But instead, I will just say that either he is 13 and a terrible lier, or he is 26 and has some major problems.

I'll report this now.

good points lets all calm down and stop spamming my thread

Neo Emolga
05-06-2007, 10:48 PM
Okay, guys, the flames and such need to stop here. Harris, it really wouldn't hurt to be a little more polite and considerate. A lot of your comments are pretty disrespectful, and if you give people trouble, you're going to get trouble in return.

And Harris, you're obviously not 26. Lying about stuff is only going to get you into a further mess. Trust me, I almost never lie, and it has helped immensely.

The Harris
05-07-2007, 11:27 AM
Okay, guys, the flames and such need to stop here. Harris, it really wouldn't hurt to be a little more polite and considerate. A lot of your comments are pretty disrespectful, and if you give people trouble, you're going to get trouble in return.

And Harris, you're obviously not 26. Lying about stuff is only going to get you into a further mess. Trust me, I almost never lie, and it has helped immensely.

thanks for calming us down ^_^ anyway back to the comic about me *cough* 26 year old *cough*

Ness
05-07-2007, 08:29 PM
thanks for calming us down ^_^ anyway back to the comic about me *cough* 26 year old *cough*

Heh, OOOKAY Harris, you're 26, my bad :rolleyes:.

Anyways I think it's kind of funny how you managed to turn the comic from a mainstream Pokemon game to PMD....

The Harris
05-07-2007, 08:37 PM
Heh, OOOKAY Harris, you're 26, my bad :rolleyes:.

Anyways I think it's kind of funny how you managed to turn the comic from a mainstream Pokemon game to PMD....

i just thought itll be fun then i can have me going everywhere collecting pokemon and fight my old team

The Harris
05-08-2007, 03:17 PM
Issue 11 Is Up

Pokeboy sarab
05-08-2007, 03:27 PM
He is 13, his site says so.
About the comic, I must say you are rushing this a bit too much. And because of that the story is getting messed up. The quantity might be increasing, but the quality is decreasing.

The Harris
05-08-2007, 03:33 PM
Issue 12 Is Up

Pokeboy sarab
05-08-2007, 03:45 PM
Issue 12 Is Up
Well that issue was so ridiculous, he reaches the gym way too fast. Its like you don't spend enough time on each comic.
And since you didn't claim you were 26, you arre 13.

Ness
05-08-2007, 03:52 PM
Issue 11 has.... issues.

Let me list a few things that I think are plain absurd:

-Where did Lucario go?
-How did the main character get the new Pokemon so fast?
-Why is your main character fighting and REcatching his own Pokemon he left for 5 minutes?
-Arbok says "CHARBOK" not "ARBOK" :rolleyes::tongue:.

These are questions you should be asking yourself and answer before you make an issue; the reader should not be left wondering what happened.

Anyways I did laugh when Caterpie was pwnt by the Arbok.

The Harris
05-08-2007, 04:06 PM
Issue 13 Is Up

Issue 11 has.... issues.

Let me list a few things that I think are plain absurd:

-Where did Lucario go?
-How did the main character get the new Pokemon so fast?
-Why is your main character fighting and REcatching his own Pokemon he left for 5 minutes?
-Arbok says "CHARBOK" not "ARBOK" :rolleyes::tongue:.

These are questions you should be asking yourself and answer before you make an issue; the reader should not be left wondering what happened.

Anyways I did laugh when Caterpie was pwnt by the Arbok.

1) he just vanished he is amazing
2) i skipped time as them just walking about and talking about random stuff is just too boring and would take 10 issues so it was a few days for him to get pokemon
3) i skipped time as them just walking about and talking about random stuff is just too boring and would take 10 issues so it was a few days for him to get pokemon he really wants them for his second gym
4) oops CHARBOK just imagine CHARBOK

Ness
05-08-2007, 04:15 PM
2) i skipped time as them just walking about and talking about random stuff is just too boring and would take 10 issues so it was a few days for him to get pokemon
3) i skipped time as them just walking about and talking about random stuff is just too boring and would take 10 issues so it was a few days for him to get pokemon he really wants them for his second gym


Okay if this is a case then I'd recommend in the future making a frame that tells you that a lengthy time period has elapsed.

The Harris
05-08-2007, 04:27 PM
Okay if this is a case then I'd recommend in the future making a frame that tells you that a lengthy time period has elapsed.

good point

Azumao
05-08-2007, 10:10 PM
He is 13, his site says so.

And since you didn't claim you were 26, you arre 13.

Dude, stop trying to start the flaming back up. Just get over it and talk about the comic.

Ness is right, the time lapses get confusing. Honestly, it doesn't make much since to me. It has way to little detail, and the main character is too strong. He beat the first trainer in, like, two seconds. Plus, rock beating grass that easily is unrealistic. Also, the gym leader getting lost in the forest? He's a gym leader, he is supposed to be above the level of getting lost in a forest. I'm just saying...

Derrick Gryphon
05-08-2007, 11:34 PM
Well......

This is an interesting comic. Also an interesting thread.

Anyway, I'll try not to be too harsh. Why is it everyone insists on making a comic based around "their" character and have them go on an adventure to get all the badges? At least put some reasoning behind it. Like, his sister is dying from a disease and needs money, or something like that. Also, I find the issues to be too short with very little happening. The dialog is like something from one of the old games. The attacks look quite odd. Might I suggest that you take some time, develop a story, and stick to one medium. (The RPGs or Pokemon Ranger sprites, but not both.)

I understand that thinking of ideas is tough (I'm working on an a real, paper comic about Sin City) but try and find something that can be used as a plot device.

Azumao
05-08-2007, 11:56 PM
There you go, find an interesting plot line. Like the popular web-comic, Pokechow. I think badges are mentioned, like, twice the whole time. It's a great comic.

Heck, my comic is about freaking hats. Think of something original.

The Harris
05-09-2007, 02:55 PM
i will try to spend more time but theres a limit to the legnth i can just sit there and think or i will get bored

The Harris
05-16-2007, 05:46 PM
issue 14 is up