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Ness
05-06-2007, 10:29 PM
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By Ness

Here is my stab at a comic. The story follows main character Taylor's adventure in the Pokemon world. The humour will be a little darker than many of the other comics you might read on this board. Could be better... could be worse, you can be the judge. Click on the thumbnails to read the pages. There will be several pages to a chapter.

COVER
http://i12.tinypic.com/52vedly.jpg (http://i16.tinypic.com/4y0mk5h.jpg)
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CHAPTER 1 - The Beginning

http://i12.tinypic.com/4miki13.jpg (http://i11.tinypic.com/4pvlphh.jpg) http://i15.tinypic.com/644i5wm.jpg
(http://i18.tinypic.com/4xm8hnl.jpg) http://i12.tinypic.com/6gb3h8j.jpg (http://i10.tinypic.com/62z9lzn.jpg)

GUEST APPEARANCES
Feel free to apply for a part. I cannot promise that you'll get in but I will try my best but I won't compromise the plot. Just fill out this form and post on this thread and I will PM you to confirm that you are on a list:

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CHARACTER NAME: (any vulgar names will result in you being ignored... for now at least)
CHARACTER SPRITE: (feel free to choose anything - doesn't have to be a Pokemon sprite, as long as you post a link to the sheet anything is game)
PERSONALITY: (briefly describe what you want your character to act like - I may or may not use this)
EXTRA: (anything other elements you might want)

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LINKING

If you create link of this thread on your comic's thread then I will do the same. Just PM me or post on this thread if you wish to participate. Unlike appearances in the comic, I can guarantee that I will fulfil this.


Use this thread to comment on the comic. Please feel welcome to offer any criticism or praise where fit. I am open to any advice any of you might have.

Ness
05-06-2007, 10:30 PM
COMING SOON

Coro (NOAN)
More information coming soon!

Ness
05-06-2007, 10:30 PM
Another reserved post. Will update this.

RawrIsMyMiddleName
05-06-2007, 10:31 PM
Yayz! Ness makes a comic that will go all the way.

CHARACTER NAME: Coro
CHARACTER SPRITE: You pick.
PERSONALITY: He acts stupid.
EXTRA: (anything other elements you might want)

The Harris
05-06-2007, 10:32 PM
not keen on this one sorry no offence

Ness
05-06-2007, 10:34 PM
not keen on this one sorry no offence

None taken. This comic probably won't appeal to most people.

RawrIsMyMiddleName
05-06-2007, 10:35 PM
None taken. This comic probably won't appeal to most people.

It appeals to me!

Ness
05-06-2007, 10:40 PM
It appeals to me!

I'm glad :biggrin:. If nothing else it will be easy on the eyes :rolleyes:.

Ness
05-07-2007, 01:33 AM
Page 2 is up. Meh. They'll get better as time goes on.

Bloody TC
05-07-2007, 01:38 AM
Awesome comic, keep it up.

Azumao
05-07-2007, 01:53 AM
It's a unique way to do the comic, but I like it. Funny, too. Can't wait to see more. ^^;

Ness
05-07-2007, 03:34 AM
It's a unique way to do the comic, but I like it. Funny, too. Can't wait to see more. ^^;

Glad you like it :biggrin:. It should get a lot more funny as the story progresses.

Anyways Page 3 is up. Content-wise it is the most dense of the first 3. You can probably tell that I'm playing around with the format. But yea, only a few of you will truly understand this page but I think it should be funny to anyone anyways, though very, VERY bizarre.... :rolleyes:

Azumao
05-07-2007, 03:40 AM
Glad you like it :biggrin:. It should get a lot more funny as the story progresses.

Anyways Page 3 is up. Content-wise it is the most dense of the first 3. You can probably tell that I'm playing around with the format. But yea, only a few of you will truly understand this page but I think it should be funny to anyone anyways, though very, VERY bizarre.... :rolleyes:

xDDDD

I love it!

Anorexic Snorlax
05-07-2007, 03:42 AM
I'm loving the comics, Ness! ^.^ So original...
I could give you some custom G/S/C overworlds, if you want. They're revamped! *Taunts*

RawrIsMyMiddleName
05-07-2007, 04:02 AM
I'm loving the comics, Ness! ^.^ So original...
I could give you some custom G/S/C overworlds, if you want. They're revamped! *Taunts*
Could you PM them to me? I want 'em. Anyway, I like the third part.

mailmanmonkey
05-07-2007, 09:46 AM
I dont know why but I like it when people use old sprites with knew sprites:biggrin:
Anyway just to add... GIVE ME MORE COMICS!

sir_Aaron
05-07-2007, 04:16 PM
CHARACTER NAME: Jex
CHARACTER SPRITE: R/S/E male trainer
PERSONALITY: Sarcastic,funny,and nice(when he wants to...)
EXTRA: He has a pysduck walking beside him

Ness
05-07-2007, 05:27 PM
I'm loving the comics, Ness! ^.^ So original...
I could give you some custom G/S/C overworlds, if you want. They're revamped! *Taunts*

Hmmm... I was thinking of using revamped sprites for the second chapter. I'll PM you when I'm ready :smile:.

Anyways thanks a lot for the support guys :biggrin:!

Pokeboy sarab
05-07-2007, 06:34 PM
Ness, thats was really nice. I totally loved the humour especially the pika dying part.

Skyler Kuhn
05-07-2007, 06:50 PM
the sprites are a little big, but the formate that you made is pretty good, it gets old when people use the 4square thing to make sprite comics! my comics suck, but also use a simular formate. keep it up
(why is my underwaer sticky?!?) lol

Anorexic Snorlax
05-07-2007, 11:43 PM
Hmmm... I was thinking of using revamped sprites for the second chapter. I'll PM you when I'm ready :smile:.

Anyways thanks a lot for the support guys :biggrin:!

Okay, I'll be sure to do so. ((Does that make sense?))

Jewel_the_Eevee
05-09-2007, 08:45 PM
I really like the 3rd comic better than the first and second.