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Absolman
05-22-2007, 12:38 PM
there are many crews in Rockport. Among these are Snake Eyes, Black Light, and the Warriors. These biggest crew, however, is Stacked Deck. you must take them out and control the city.
Tuners, Muscles, and Exotics! These are the cars to choose from. Tuners master in handling. Muscles are all about acceleration. and Exotics are Speed Demons. all have their strengths and weakness'.

Rules:
1-normal site rules
2-the three cars to choose from at the beggining are
Muscle- 1967 Chevrolet Camaro SS
Exotic- Alfa Romeo Brera
Tuners- Mazda RX-8

Name:
appearance (5 sentences)
Crew:
Car:
Vinyl Description:
Car Class (Tuner, Exotic, or Muscle):
Crew members:
Crew logo:

and im not putting in a history because it doesn't really matter.


mine

Name: Bulrock
Appearance: Bulrock is 5'8 and is kinda skinny. he has dark black hair that comes down to his chin and brown eyes. he wears black under armor and a cape. He wears slightly tight black pants. he has black VANS shoes.
Crew: Bloodreign
Car: Mazda RX-8
Vinyl: a ninja throwing a shuriken
Car Class: Tuner
Crew members:
Crew logo: a dagger stained in blood, slanted to the right.

Neo Emolga
05-22-2007, 04:42 PM
You barely changed this since your last RP (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=39161).

Please read this guide (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=13613). At the moment, your RP has no real plot to it, all we know about the setting is the name "Rockport," and there's nothing to suggest the people participating are even involved with the story. How will the RPers be involved with whatever you have planned? You need to answer that question. Also, is this about racing, car manufacturing, or something else? And how would such an activity lead to control over Rockport?

This is why you really need to elaborate on the RP background, or you're going to find yourself with people who won't be able to RP their roles correctly (if at all), and/or you may find another RPer doing something you definitely didn't intend to happen, but it did because you didn't detail the plot behind the situation.

So please, fix it with that advice in mind.

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