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Treeky111
06-08-2007, 11:05 AM
Ghosts... is about a house who and many families who are atracted to it but get killed in it and no one knows what is happening.

narrator: one day a family is atracted to a house on the outskirts of town. late did they know that the devil was living in it. As the daughter walked into the house she felt a sudden sense of hatred and death. she asked her mom if she was feeling the same thing but when the mom turned around her pupils had taken over her entire eyes. She Was Possessed! The daughter screamed and ran into the basement. She heard a snorting sound and imediantly felt very sick. The mom and dad took her to the hospital. there in the hospital she died... when the mom and dad got home they cried themselves to death.

Lonsie
06-08-2007, 01:27 PM
Not bad, but this is more of a fanfiction, not a roleplay, so it should go to the fanfiction section.

Also, LZ, Nate, stay away from this one, I've got it. :)

Lord Fedora
06-08-2007, 02:05 PM
Not bad, but this is more of a fanfiction, not a roleplay, so it should go to the fanfiction section.

Also, LZ, Nate, stay away from this one, I've got it. :)
Whatever. You're cute cuddly bear avvy says it all.