Please rate my Umi Deck!

[LolJolteonMaster]

I think my Umi Deck STINKS! WHAT DO YOU THINK I SHOULD DO? My cards are:

Monster Cards:
DEEPSEA WARRIOR X 1
FLYING PENGUIN X 1
MARYOKUTAI X 1
AQUA SPIRIT X 1
PENGUIN SOLDIER X 1
PENGUIN KNIGHT X 1
SOULEATER X 1
MISAIRUZAME X 1
MAGICIAN OF FAITH X 1
ROOT WATER X 1
WALL OF ILLUSION X 1
CURE MERMAID X 1
WATER OMOTICS X 1
ENCHANTING MERMAID X 1
HIGH TIDE GYOJIN X 1
BONEHEIMER X 1
TURTLE BIRD X 1
7 COLORED FISH X 1
GREAT WHITE X 1

Magic Cards:
SCROLL OF BEWITCHMENT X 1
UMI X 1
DE-SPELL X 2
GIANT TRUNADE X 1
FISSURE X 2
BLOCK ATTACK X 1
CARD SHUFFLE X 1
OOKAZI X 1
CARD DESTRUCTION X 1
MONSTER REBORN X 1
DARK HOLE X 1
DIAN KETO THE CURE MASTER X 1
CHANGE OF HEART X 1

Trap Cards:
FAKE TRAP X 1
REVERSE TRAP X 2
TORNADO WALL X 1
WABOKU X 1
BOTTOMLESS SHIFTING SAND X 1
FORCED REQUISITION X 1
MYSTIC PROBE X 1

Well? How is it?

[Pidgeot79]

I'm not going to explain every single aspect of a Umi based deck,but I will say some of the most useful info.

A deck based around a certain Attribute or Type doesn't mean every single monster has to be that Attribute or Type.For example just because Root Water gets a boost from Umi doesn't mean its going to get a spot in your deck it's ATK would become 1100.A monster with a stronger ATK then 1100 would be a better decision even if it doesn't get a boost from Umi.Also instead of Umi try A Legendary Ocean.

A Legendary Ocean
Type:Spell/Field
This card's name is treated as "Umi". Downgrade all WATER monsters in both player's hands and on the field by 1 Level. Increases the ATK and DEF of all WATER monsters by 200 points.

With Legendary Ocean cards like Levia-Dragon - Daedalus,Suijin,and The Legendary Fisherman (can be used with Umi or A Legendary Ocean) should be added.

[LolJolteonMaster]

Nya.....I know it stinks......Me just don't have other good cards. I have no money. *takes away child's play money* Ha! Now I have money!

[Barret]

It's an okay deck, so I give it a 5! ^.^

[ShiningSuicune]

That's a great deck,if you are a beginner,you need alot added,i will not go into every aspect of what needs to be done,but alot is needed.