Redlark
06-24-2007, 09:37 AM
So I have a FanFic in the forum that I sort of like and some other people sort of like:
And as the Wind Blows: Epidemic in Hoenn (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=16498) [PG-13 For Overal Intensity]
It's an action-horror/thriller, but don't let the genre fool you. Hopefully this Fic turns into a good story most can enjoy. Also, its rated PG-13, so I already give fair warning not to go into the story with a light stomach. I try very hard to keep profanity to a minimum, if there is any at all in some chapters; but the "overall intensity" really is intense. I've recieved comments that the gore is a little bit heavy and the action is well written. But whatev', I'm ramblin'.
I want to hear what you, the reader, thinks. Here's some good topic questions:
- Is the story good? What makes it good? What makes it entertaining?
- Is the story bad? What makes it bad?
- Is it too fast? Is it too slow?
- Is it actually scary or thrilling?
- Who's your favorite character?
- Where would you like to see the plot go?
- Are there cliffhangers? What do you think is going to happen? What would like to see happen?
- Does the story add up? Are there conflicts within the plot?
- Are the characters believable?
- Etc.
Hopefully this thread will help me have better insigh on my story.
I'm vaclempt*... Now discuss.
And as the Wind Blows: Epidemic in Hoenn (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=16498) [PG-13 For Overal Intensity]
It's an action-horror/thriller, but don't let the genre fool you. Hopefully this Fic turns into a good story most can enjoy. Also, its rated PG-13, so I already give fair warning not to go into the story with a light stomach. I try very hard to keep profanity to a minimum, if there is any at all in some chapters; but the "overall intensity" really is intense. I've recieved comments that the gore is a little bit heavy and the action is well written. But whatev', I'm ramblin'.
I want to hear what you, the reader, thinks. Here's some good topic questions:
- Is the story good? What makes it good? What makes it entertaining?
- Is the story bad? What makes it bad?
- Is it too fast? Is it too slow?
- Is it actually scary or thrilling?
- Who's your favorite character?
- Where would you like to see the plot go?
- Are there cliffhangers? What do you think is going to happen? What would like to see happen?
- Does the story add up? Are there conflicts within the plot?
- Are the characters believable?
- Etc.
Hopefully this thread will help me have better insigh on my story.
I'm vaclempt*... Now discuss.