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Squirtle,Totodile,Mudkip
11-22-2004, 08:17 PM
You heard, magikarp. But you know, Magikarp are hard to write about. So please don't judge it too harshly.

Chapter 1

At first, the light was blinding. But soon readjusting to the outside light, Bartholemeu started down the mountainous ledge he was on.
Bartholemeu just had a narrow escape with a Pokemon called Gastly inside a cave near Olivine city. His head had almost been detached, and his heart was still thumping racing. Ironically, this was the very Pokemon he meant to catch.
Bartholemeu clambered over rocks and boulders, slowly making his way down the cliff. He could see Tentacool drifting on the foamy waves, below the sheer cliff he overlooked.
After half an hour of scrambling over ledges, outcroppings and boulders, Bartholemeu could see Olivine city, a deep green speck on the edge of the ocean.
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^ I had pressed the enter key before I was done. the rest of chapter 1 must be edited in once I am done with it. Sorry for any inconvenience.