View Full Version : Kinnosuke's adventure (COMIC)

Frozen Torchic
07-22-2007, 07:31 AM
I've started a new comic. Hopefully no one will rant about this one...So yeah. I tried making it funnier.

Chapter 1: http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/6215/dpnpcsyn8.png Splash Attack!

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Fire Pkmn Master
07-22-2007, 07:37 AM
Well it made no sense and theres no story or plot behind it.

Frozen Torchic
07-22-2007, 07:42 AM
So I should end it now?

Fire Pkmn Master
07-22-2007, 07:45 AM
No thats not what Im saying.:oops:You just need to fix it up a bit is all.

Frozen Torchic
07-22-2007, 07:47 AM
Ah. Okay. Any ideas, then?

Fire Pkmn Master
07-22-2007, 07:50 AM
Well depends on how you want your comic to turn out.
Like starting off from a certain city in a specific region and trying to become the best trainer or something, by getting all badges and such. Or make it so that there's a problem with your character or another character later on and your character has to find a way to stop that person. xD