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Treeky111
07-24-2007, 01:35 PM
Hopefully you'll love my FIRST 8 Fakemon. Here they are:


http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z50/Treeky111/zezezeALL.jpg

Cogi276
07-24-2007, 01:42 PM
Hopefully you'll love my FIRST 8 Fakemon. Here they are:


http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z50/Treeky111/zezezeALL.jpg

1st: Honesty they arnt that good. The info looks better than they do.
2ndly: There is only 7 not 8
3rd and last: this isnt where your supost to post it. You are supost to post it in general sprites showcase.

Calypso
07-24-2007, 01:50 PM
Where to start?

Well for one, they aren't even sprites. There way too big and lack shading. You used default paint colours. The outlines are choppy. On half of them, I don't even understand their concepts. The names are bland ._.

Need I go on?

Cogi: He's allowed to make a Gallerly displaying his work, it doesn't neccesarly need to go in the GSS..

DratiniLover
07-24-2007, 01:52 PM
1st: Honesty they arnt that good. The info looks better than they do.
2ndly: There is only 7 not 8
3rd and last: this isnt where your supost to post it. You are supost to post it in general sprites showcase.

This is a gallery, so his sprites don't need to be posted in the GSS, if he has this gallery. ;P

They're ok for your first 8 fakemon, but you've put no shading into them, and their outlines are rough. The outlines of a sprite a supposed to look like so:

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/7420/exampleuf6.png (http://imageshack.us)

Drawing your sprite with the correct outline will make the sprite look a lot neater. It is also easier to make your own colour palette, starting from light shades to dark shades. Here is an example of a colour pallete, but with one colour.

http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/5333/shadingyk3.png (http://imageshack.us)

I hope these tips help you to improve your fakemon.
^_^

jedite1000
07-24-2007, 02:21 PM
yes agreed, those are good for normal drawings but they have to be smaller and shaded

i made u a quick scratch to show u what one of urs should roughly look like, now its preety rough cause i done it quick, if u want to scratch sprites it will take longer, so never rush ur sprites
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/488/pikqb6.png

ZERO-X
07-24-2007, 02:54 PM
They are... horrible! Sprites are not that big! You need to find more colors and shade the sprites! Thats all I think!

~ZERO~

Cogi276
07-24-2007, 02:56 PM
They are... horrible! Sprites are not that big! You need to find more colors and shade the sprites! Thats all I think!

~ZERO~

Yeah Zero my freind you pretty much summed it up

~Cogi~

Azumao
07-24-2007, 03:05 PM
You may crit, but don't be so harsh. >> That was directed at you, ZERO-X, since you helped him improve in no way whatsoever.

Treeky, I'd say listen to DratiniLover and Calypso. :]

Tombi
07-24-2007, 03:09 PM
Ouch. oO

These aren't classed as sprites. These are classed as Paint drawings...

magentaman
07-24-2007, 03:40 PM
Ouch. oO

These aren't classed as sprites. These are classed as Paint drawings...
he never said they were sprites, just that they were fakemon

Calypso
07-24-2007, 03:43 PM
he never said they were sprites, just that they were fakemon

Well, hence it being in the sprite board >.>''

Tombi
07-24-2007, 04:03 PM
XD

Normally, when things are in the sprite board, they're sprites...

Where would this go? Graphic? oO

No, Fan Art, I think...