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luis411100
08-02-2007, 01:59 AM
Hi people Im a newcomer in comic making and ill post my first issue for this new comic and people can reserve spots for the comic and here is the list



Issues: 5 done


Part 1:The Start Of Some Thing New (http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/3263/myfirstcomic1mc0.png)

http://Part 2:The First BATTLE,The first capture (http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/3883/myfirstcomic2up0.png)

Part 3:Team Genetic (http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/2277/myfirstcomic3bq0.png)

Part 4:The Golden Charizard (http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/659/myfirstcomic4dt3.png)

Part 5:The Waters Of Petalburg (http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/2923/myfirstcomic5gm8.png)





friends needed :1

Rivals needed :only 3
gym leaders needed:7

Elite four needed :4

Team Genetic:cam

Champ:Cogi in future issues

Fill this to reserve a spot for the comic


Name:
username:
stattus (rival friend gym leader or part of the elite 4 or champ):
pokemon(only first poke no evos exept picachu):
sprites(overworld and trainersprite backsprite only if you wana be friend)

Cogi276
08-02-2007, 02:02 AM
Name: Cogi Kurosaki
username: Cogi276
stattus (rival friend gym leader or part of the elite 4 or champ): Can I be freind and when you get to the elite four I be the champ like that one freindly girl in D/P if not the just friend
pokemon(only first poke no evos exept picachu): Torchic
sprites(overworld and trainersprite backsprite only if you wana be friend): http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u172/cogi276/IchigoSprite.png

~Cogi~

da ink
08-02-2007, 02:06 AM
Name: Inaki

username: da ink

stattus (rival friend gym leader or part of the elite 4 or champ): Friend

pokemon(only first poke no evos exept picachu): Treeko

sprites(overworld and trainersprite backsprite only if you wana be friend) http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa151/inaki8/Trunks1.png

luis411100
08-02-2007, 03:20 AM
ok first issue is now posted

and your both in

da ink
08-02-2007, 03:24 AM
Nice new issue it's good

luis411100
08-02-2007, 03:25 AM
Nice new issue it's good
ty im not varry good in my eyes but thanx anyway

Cogi276
08-02-2007, 04:09 AM
ty im not varry good in my eyes but thanx anyway

What about the idea for me to also be champ?

~Cogi~

Xtra
08-02-2007, 04:13 AM
May I suggest you spell Hoenn, ....Hoenn? And maybe try getting a smaller font, and not abbreviating. Makes it more proffesional.

luis411100
08-02-2007, 04:28 AM
What about the idea for me to also be champ?

~Cogi~


ill think about it ok I got an idea after we beat the 2nd gym you left the group andmeet agin different times in some issues and at the ned you will be the pokemonleag champ like it


May I suggest you spell Hoenn, ....Hoenn? And maybe try getting a smaller font, and not abbreviating. Makes it more proffesional.

ill try

Cogi276
08-02-2007, 04:59 AM
ill think about it ok I got an idea after we beat the 2nd gym you left the group andmeet agin different times in some issues and at the ned you will be the pokemonleag champ like it

I like that idea

~Cogi~

luis411100
08-02-2007, 06:09 AM
ty and I have a new comic issue

Cogi276
08-02-2007, 06:12 AM
ty and I have a new comic issue

Pretty good issue but there are some major spelling errors.

~Cogi~

Galactic Spriter
08-02-2007, 12:43 PM
Mom's invisible. :susp: Ghost of mom will haunt you

luis411100
08-02-2007, 05:25 PM
Mom's invisible. :susp: Ghost of mom will haunt you

Dam i forgot to put the mom sprite dam im an idiot gona put it now


Pretty good issue but there are some major spelling errors.

~Cogi~

yea i noticed that miself

luis411100
08-03-2007, 12:54 AM
ok this time i out the mom that i forgot to put in the first issue

luis411100
08-03-2007, 04:00 AM
next issue almost done*and nobody cares*

Cogi276
08-03-2007, 04:13 AM
next issue almost done*and nobody cares*

I care I think the comic is good!

~Cogi~

luis411100
08-03-2007, 04:16 AM
I care I think the comic is good!

~Cogi~
thanx oh so you know in this issue the gang will fight the villans team genetic

Cogi276
08-03-2007, 04:23 AM
thanx oh so you know in this issue the gang will fight the villans team genetic

Thats pretty cool.

~Cogi~

luis411100
08-03-2007, 04:39 AM
issue number 3 done enyoy

Cogi276
08-03-2007, 04:43 AM
issue number 3 done enyoy

Pretty good but we are missing in the last 2 pannels.

~Cogi~

luis411100
08-03-2007, 04:45 AM
Pretty good but we are missing in the last 2 pannels.

~Cogi~
ahh ill put emm now

luis411100
08-03-2007, 04:54 AM
done its fixed

Cogi276
08-03-2007, 04:56 AM
done its fixed

Now its good.

~Cogi~

luis411100
08-03-2007, 05:02 AM
Now its good.

~Cogi~
ty dude

luis411100
08-03-2007, 05:20 AM
hey guys if you wanan soport this comic put this userbar in your sigs
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/4425/userbarformycomicxp3.png (http://imageshack.us)

luis411100
08-03-2007, 02:52 PM
comming soon issue number four The Golden Charizard

camds
08-03-2007, 03:27 PM
Hey Why Dont I join, Im pretty Famouse Everywhere ^^


Name:Cam
username:Camds
stattus:I want to either Be The Champ, Or Team Genetic Leader.
pokemon:(Well I would Say Kabutops, But I guess it will have to be Kabuto :( ) Umbreon, Joliton, Camerupt, Psyduck, Wailord.
sprites:http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k224/CAMDS/CamID-1.png
Nickname:The Fossil Master!

~Cam

luis411100
08-04-2007, 05:12 AM
Hey Why Dont I join, Im pretty Famouse Everywhere ^^


Name:Cam
username:Camds
stattus:I want to either Be The Champ, Or Team Genetic Leader.
pokemon:(Well I would Say Kabutops, But I guess it will have to be Kabuto :( ) Umbreon, Joliton, Camerupt, Psyduck, Wailord.
sprites:http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k224/CAMDS/CamID-1.png
Nickname:The Fossil Master!

~Cam
k u are in you will come in in a few issues k

lilJT
08-04-2007, 05:17 AM
k u are in you will come in in a few issues k

i told myself i would stop being in comics but i'll be in this one

name: jason
username: lilJT
pokemon: elekid, growlithe, horsea, larvitar
status: evil leader(if cam took that then rival)
sprites:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb83/JasTM/JT2.png

luis411100
08-04-2007, 05:23 AM
i told myself i would stop being in comics but i'll be in this one

name: jason
username: lilJT
pokemon: elekid, growlithe, horsea, larvitar
status: evil leader(if cam took that then rival)
sprites:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb83/JasTM/JT2.png
k you the new rival and cam is the evil leader of team genetics

camds
08-04-2007, 11:35 AM
k you the new rival and cam is the evil leader of team genetics

Hooray, MWAHAHAAHAHAHAHA, I LOVE BIENG LEADER OF EVIL ORGANISATIONS!

~Cam

lilJT
08-04-2007, 03:49 PM
since when have you been an evil leader, atleast i have experience

iChaos
08-04-2007, 06:36 PM
Name:TJ
Username:Chaos_Dude
Status:Friend
Pokemon:Eevee
Sprites:
http://i17.tinypic.com/53jk1gn

http://i12.tinypic.com/61k55qa
Chaos_Dude Out

camds
08-04-2007, 07:38 PM
since when have you been an evil leader, atleast i have experience

Firstly, I have More experiance, I have been evil in nearly everything.

Name:TJ
Username:Chaos_Dude
Status:Friend
Pokemon:Eevee
Sprites:







Chaos_Dude Out

To be In a comic you must have your overoworld walking left, right, Up and Down, And
Him standing Left, Right, North, South too.

~Cam

luis411100
08-05-2007, 02:15 AM
wow page tree and hes right chaos give me it in left right and up and your in as friend


sorry for not posting a new issue for some time now ill get roght on it ill have 2 more issues soon:happy:

luis411100
08-05-2007, 05:40 AM
Issue 4 In In the his house

luis411100
08-05-2007, 06:01 AM
and*no one cares about the new issue*

camds
08-05-2007, 11:45 AM
2 things:

1.You Triple posted.

2.Nice New Comic!

~Cam

lilJT
08-05-2007, 06:02 PM
and*no one cares about the new issue*

it's not that no one cares it's just that no one posted, happens to me all the time

luis411100
08-06-2007, 01:21 AM
it's not that no one cares it's just that no one posted, happens to me all the time
ha ha ha Ty Jt And l

ike the destruction cam?

iChaos
08-06-2007, 01:20 PM
ha ha ha Ty Jt And l

ike the destruction cam?
Darnit I get him Left

Electric27
08-06-2007, 01:52 PM
can i get in this?
sprites:http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb269/lacrosseking12/credit.png
name: the jay
pokemon absol, manetric, and pidgeot
personality angry
rival please

luis411100
08-07-2007, 01:05 AM
sure you in Electric27 you will be in issue number 9 k?

jedite1000
08-07-2007, 02:35 AM
cool comic

i made this guy for a future pokemon hack idea(not happeing just an idea)
Name: cranford
username: jedite1000
stattus gym leader 3 water type
pokemon on sprite sheet
spriteshttp://img187.imageshack.us/img187/8272/cranfordfl9.png

luis411100
08-07-2007, 02:37 AM
cool comic

i made this guy for a future pokemon hack idea(not happeing just an idea)
Name: cranford
username: jedite1000
stattus gym leader 3 water type
pokemon on sprite sheet
spriteshttp://img187.imageshack.us/img187/8272/cranfordfl9.png
cool but since its the first gym change the second pokemon to a weaker water type and your in k?

jedite1000
08-07-2007, 02:47 AM
hmm ok..lets see....................................
ummmmm...
watever gyrados lol

luis411100
08-07-2007, 02:50 AM
try again

jedite1000
08-07-2007, 02:55 AM
try again
well im out of ideas pick one for me :)

luis411100
08-07-2007, 02:56 AM
k your second poke is staryou ?

jedite1000
08-07-2007, 02:58 AM
k your second poke is staryou ?
yeh thats cool

luis411100
08-07-2007, 03:06 AM
k you will be in by the next issue k?

luis411100
08-07-2007, 05:48 AM
issue number 5 in in the his house

jedite1000
08-07-2007, 06:15 AM
cool update.....yay cranford :)

camds
08-07-2007, 11:45 AM
What Happened to me, I suddenly Dissapeared?

And luis411100, Issue 21 of my comic is out just Incase Ya Wanted to know.

~Cam

luis411100
08-07-2007, 04:56 PM
he he sorry for that camds but the issues must go on so ok this is and explication of what happend after issue 4


After The giant flamethrower you whent away and some guys pissed his pants whent away

Treeky111
08-08-2007, 01:21 PM
can i be the leader of an evil team bent on taking over the world?

Name: Terrance
username: Treeky111
status: Rival
pokemon: Riolu and Starly
sprites: http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e13/redragon753/Overworld%20Sprites/Rival_Overworld.jpg http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/rstrainer29.png

luis411100
08-08-2007, 01:50 PM
got one already so chouse a diferent type

da ink
08-08-2007, 02:07 PM
Nice new issue but can you please stop spelling my name Anaki it's Inaki

luis411100
08-08-2007, 02:16 PM
k sorry:tongue::tongue: for that and ty:surp::surp:

luis411100
08-09-2007, 12:53 AM
hey people I still need mor elite genetic grunts to continue the comic

camds
08-11-2007, 09:52 AM
Just Make your own ones up.

~Cam

iChaos
08-11-2007, 12:44 PM
ok this time i out the mom that i forgot to put in the first issue
Can I join in this Luis
Name:TJ
Username:Chaos_Dude
Status:A Good ol' Friend
Pokemon:Eevee Nickname Eve also Keeps her out of Pokeball
Sprites:
http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/4736/untitledja0.png
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/1360/untitledjk3.png

camds
08-11-2007, 12:50 PM
Can I join in this Luis
Name:TJ
Username:Chaos_Dude
Status:A Good ol' Friend
Pokemon:Eevee Nickname Eve also Keeps her out of Pokeball
Sprites:
http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/4736/untitledja0.png
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/1360/untitledjk3.png

It would Help If you provided the eevee sprites, not all of us know
where to get em from(But I do, TSR)

~Cam

iChaos
08-11-2007, 12:52 PM
It would Help If you provided the eevee sprites, not all of us know
where to get em from(But I do, TSR)

~Cam
I don't know either Cam I can't find one i've been asking everyone no anwsered

camds
08-11-2007, 03:10 PM
I don't know either Cam I can't find one i've been asking everyone no anwsered
Yeah, There Impossible to find:sad:.

~Cam

luis411100
08-11-2007, 04:04 PM
ok Chaos_Dude your in ill put you in a a future issue k not sure what issue

camds
08-11-2007, 06:58 PM
ok Chaos_Dude your in ill put you in a a future issue k not sure what issue

I found eevee sprites!!!!:biggrin:

~Cam

luis411100
08-11-2007, 07:00 PM
cool can you edit his overworld and put a white eevee neext to them

camds
08-11-2007, 07:05 PM
cool can you edit his overworld and put a white eevee neext to them

A white Eevee?

Those Will take some time to edit.

~Cam

luis411100
08-11-2007, 07:19 PM
can you do me this favor if possible plz make it

iChaos
08-11-2007, 07:28 PM
can you do me this favor if possible plz make it
Yeah Plz and could you giveme the code I need it for my VPP

camds
08-12-2007, 10:34 AM
Lol, I cant upload it cause its too big:crackup:.

~Cam

Realityxxx
08-12-2007, 12:14 PM
Name: Silver
username: KittenGirl2000
stattus (rival friend gym leader or part of the elite 4 or champ): Friend
pokemon(only first poke no evos exept picachu): Snover
sprites:http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintendo/pokemon/pkmnrse/display.php?file=http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintendo/pokemon/pkmnrse/may.gif

Drew_pkmn
08-12-2007, 12:51 PM
Can I be elite four :

Name : Kieran Dragon or Electric MASTER
Sprites:http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x184/Pkmn_Mster/RILEY.png
Pokemon : (Dragon)Flygon , Salamence , Garchomp , Dragonite , Dragonair . (Electric) Magnezon . Ampharos . Raichu .Luxray . Univolt >> http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x184/Pkmn_Mster/ElectricUnicorn2.gif . Electrivire.

Credit to me for the idea of Univolt Credit to Calypso For the sprite .

luis411100
08-14-2007, 02:25 AM
iiiiiiimmmm back

Drew_pkmn:you shall be the 1st elite

and KittenGirl2000:your in but you will have to be a temperary friend