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Realityxxx
08-04-2007, 12:19 PM
*Note: If you need approval for a gallery, sorry, i did'nt know.
KittenGirl's sprite gallery!
Yeah, a gallery to display my work. How original :P.

RULES:
*You are not to critizize me.
*You are not to request. However, Sprites are allowed on special events like my birthday, Easter, U&E's Birthday, christmas.ETC.

My Spriting!
http://i19.tinypic.com/54477a1.png
One of my best sprites. Just created today!
http://i18.tinypic.com/4keelwi
I hate my Sepigrovive.
http://i9.tinypic.com/4unzrko.png
Ohhh! How cute!
http://i18.tinypic.com/6fq0bw8.png
A horrible recolour.

~Falcon~
08-04-2007, 06:25 PM
The pokemorph thing looks ok, but your recolors and fusions need /a lot/ of work. Try reading some tutorials. Also, please crop your finally sprite so it doesn't stretch the page

Realityxxx
08-05-2007, 12:34 PM
I know, my dumb sister did that while i was at school.

Galactic Spriter
08-05-2007, 01:26 PM
I know, my dumb sister did that while i was at school.
The last sprite...... i don't think it deserves to be here.

RawrIsMyMiddleName
08-06-2007, 07:57 PM
Kittengirl, these are good since I've seen you put much effort in it, but it probably needs more work. These aren't very great, and your best, the PokeMorph, is still bad. Try working on these some more, and read some guides at Gotta Sprite 'Em All.

Pikablu Pie
08-06-2007, 08:33 PM
*Note: If you need approval for a gallery, sorry, i did'nt know.
KittenGirl's sprite gallery!
Yeah, a gallery to display my work. How original :P.

RULES:
*You are not to critizize me.
*You are not to request. However, Sprites are allowed on special events like my birthday, Easter, U&E's Birthday, christmas.ETC.

My Spriting!
http://i19.tinypic.com/54477a1.png
One of my best sprites. Just created today!
http://i18.tinypic.com/4keelwi
I hate my Sepigrovive.
http://i9.tinypic.com/4unzrko.png
Ohhh! How cute!
http://i18.tinypic.com/6fq0bw8.png
A horrible recolour.


The Pokemorph looks OK, but the tails should be attatched better in my opinion. Same with the ears. Also, the girl's hair should be recolored or editted so her ears don't look copy-pasted.

The fusion... Oh, my. This is all just copy-pasting. The parts don't flow at all, there's no recoloring, just "ooh, I'll crop off this and stick it on Grovyle!" The only thing that's done even decently is the claws, and even ten they need work.

The first recolor... Never. Ever. Use default paint colours, even if someone threatens to kill you. The second of the two has no shading whatsoever. The first has too dramatic of shading. Most of the outline is either uncolored or missing. There are right angles all over, mainly on the second of the pair.

The second recolor... Better then the first, but not by much. The blue stripes are different hues. I can barely notice the difference of colour on the yellow, even though I'm zoomed in 600%. The outline needs recoloring, and again, never use dafault paint colors.

By the way, not letting critisism on your sprites is bad. You won't get any better if you don't let people help notice your mistakes. Atleast you can use PNG. That's very important.

Nitro
08-06-2007, 08:49 PM
Your best, the Pokemorph, isn't actually that good. Try reattaching the tails. The fusion is scary and your recolors could use a bit of improving. Try reading some tutorials and listen to the other poster's advice.

Realityxxx
08-07-2007, 08:21 AM
Nitrodown, you don't have to be so mean. THESE ARE MY FIRST SPRITES. REPEAT. THESE ARE MY FIRST SPRITES. Nitrodown, you only joined in june. I've been here since April. RESPECT YOUR ELDERS!

jedite1000
08-07-2007, 09:18 AM
atleast these are better than MY first sprites, at the start i didnt even know what png was
jpeg gah hate it

anyway it does need improving, i reckon u should recolor using existing pokemon colors until u are ready to recolor without using other pokemon colors. or u can stick to using their colors..it works

the pokemorph is the best one u have, nothing really wrong i can point out

so goodluck with ur spriting skills :)

RawrIsMyMiddleName
08-07-2007, 08:00 PM
Nitrodown, you don't have to be so mean. THESE ARE MY FIRST SPRITES. REPEAT. THESE ARE MY FIRST SPRITES. Nitrodown, you only joined in june. I've been here since April. RESPECT YOUR ELDERS!

Elders? I see you disrespect a lot of people "elder" than you. And by the way, if you actually want to be such a great spriter, you got to learn how to take critism. I mean, I've said to Pikablue that at least one of her sprites aren't the greatest, and she could take it. You have to learn if you want to be a good spriter.

Galactic Spriter
08-07-2007, 08:08 PM
Nitrodown, you don't have to be so mean. THESE ARE MY FIRST SPRITES. REPEAT. THESE ARE MY FIRST SPRITES. Nitrodown, you only joined in june. I've been here since April. RESPECT YOUR ELDERS!
Why does it matter who joined first? Nitrodown is still right.

Pikablu Pie
08-07-2007, 08:18 PM
Why does it matter who joined first? Nitrodown is still right.

Age means nothing here. Besides, Nitrodown wasn't even being cruel in any way. He was just telling you how to improve.

-Pichu Boy-
08-07-2007, 08:46 PM
Kittengirl, criticism helps you get better, without it you'll just keep on making the same quality of sprites over and over. It wouldn't matter if they were your first sprites, your last sprites, heck, even your millionth sprite. You're gonna get criticised.

Plus, you're only 12 (like me). I think quite alot of people are older than you here (seriously, you'll be suprised at how many there is)

Anyway, back to your sprites.

You're Pokemorph is quite good, but it does look copy/paste-ish. Try blending the parts in.

Your fusion... I'm sorry, that's just random parts cluttered onto a Grovyle's body. Again, try blending in the parts.

Your recolours... and I'm sorry about saying this but... they're terrible. As somebody above me pointed out, NEVER USE PAINT DEFAULT COLOURS! They are horrid when put together, and the only time you should use them is if you are makign soemthing that you are probably not gonna show any one else... actually, you shouldn't even use them then!

To make your own colours, click 'Colours' up at the top, then 'Custom Colours', I think it is. Another way is to double click on of the default colours. Then, once the colour panel's popped up, click 'Define custom colours'. Et voila! You can create your own colours!

jabpoké
08-12-2007, 09:53 AM
Nitrodown wasn't being 100% harsh, we all need to improve. I can't even make a sprite, so your much better than me, Kittengirl!