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DratiniLover
08-10-2007, 06:21 PM
Hello all, and welcome to this comic thread. Please, by all means, apply to be a character in my comic. One person knew that I was doing a comic, so his character will be introduced in issue 2 or 3. If you can think of a better name for my comic, PM me, or tell me here. Comments and constructive critism would be nice.

No more positions are open. PM me if you really want to be in my comic, and make sure you tell me why, your reason has to be good. ;P Although, as I make more issues, I may allow people to apply once again.

Form: - Use this if you want to be part of the comic.

Name:
Sprites:
Overworld:
Personality:
Pokemon:
Position:

Note: I did not make the hoenn map. I got it from Google Images. ;P



http://i19.tinypic.com/6bel1mx

Issue 1 - Beginning of May's Adventure (http://i15.tinypic.com/4m2fbxw)

DratiniLover
08-10-2007, 06:22 PM
Characters

Electric27's Character:
http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb269/lacrosseking12/jacobleesstuff-2.png

ZERO-X's Character:
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8358/maxec8.png

Galactic Grunt's Character:
http://i18.tinypic.com/4zaa3p2

Zane's Character:
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z298/julio_fernandez/Rocketsheet.png

Magnetaman's Character:
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x194/magentaman_2007/overs.png

Drew_Pkmn's Character:
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x184/Pkmn_Mster/RILEY.png

Camd's Character:
Character (http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k224/CAMDS/CamID-2.png)

Da ink's Character:
http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa151/inaki8/Me-1.png

DratiniLover
08-10-2007, 06:23 PM
*Reserved for extra space*

ZERO-X
08-10-2007, 06:25 PM
Name: Max
Sprites:http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8358/maxec8.png
Personality:Likes to do lots of stragedys against his opponents!
Pokemon: Torchic
Position: Friend

DratiniLover
08-10-2007, 06:31 PM
I've added you to the second post.

Electric27
08-10-2007, 06:32 PM
Name:Jay
Sprites:http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb269/lacrosseking12/jacobleesstuff-2.png http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb269/lacrosseking12/untitled2.png
Overworld:above
Personality: fun adventurous
Pokemon:geodude lapras bayleef sparrow growlithe and electibuzz pleaz have them all evolve full
Position: friend

Galactic Spriter
08-10-2007, 06:52 PM
Name:Jay
Sprites:http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb269/lacrosseking12/jacobleesstuff-2.png http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb269/lacrosseking12/untitled2.png
Overworld:above
Personality: fun adventurous
Pokemon:geodude lapras bayleef sparrow growlithe and electibuzz pleaz have them all evolve full
Position: friend
http://i18.tinypic.com/4zaa3p2
Name: Unknown, but everyone calls him Alien Dude.
Personality: Friendly but if you make him angry he'll threaten to shoot you with his mechanical ray gun
Pokemon: Ghaslty (note: do not evolve to gengar, keep as haunter)
Position: Friend

Zane
08-10-2007, 07:01 PM
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z298/julio_fernandez/Rocketsheet.png
Name: Rocket Leigha and Rocket Sid
Personality: Leigha: Smart, yet stuck up. Sid: Forgetful but a great battler.
Pokemon: Leigha: Gorebyss, Snubbull, and Igglybuff! Sid: Huntail, Houndour, and Magby!
Positions: Main Rockets! (not the bosses but main rockets!)

magentaman
08-10-2007, 07:11 PM
ooh can i join?

Name: Ryan
Sprites: http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x194/magentaman_2007/overs.png just ignore the beach ones
Personality: Smart, Helpful and Sarcastic at times
Pokemon: Quilava, Poliwag (to poliwrath not toed), Eevee(to umbreon, shiny if possibe), Dratini, Ralts (female), Elekid
Position: Rival/Mentor (teaches the hero things, the helpful kind of rival)

Drew_pkmn
08-10-2007, 07:12 PM
Name:Riley
Sprites:http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x184/Pkmn_Mster/RILEY.png
Overworld:^^^
Personality:Will always stick up for jis friends or HATES TO LOSE
Pokemon:Flygon . Altaria and Shelgon
Position: Friend or rilval

DratiniLover
08-10-2007, 07:13 PM
Ok! You are all accepted.

Electric27
08-10-2007, 07:15 PM
ooh can i join?

Name:Lucy
Sprites: Just getting them
Personality: Smart, Helpful and Sarcastic at times
Pokemon: Poliwhirl,
Position: Rival/Mentor (teaches the hero things, the helpful kind of rival)

where are your sprites and overworlds dratini come on

DratiniLover
08-10-2007, 07:19 PM
where are your sprites and overworlds dratini come on

Overworlds? I used the custom May sprites, but should I post them anyway?

Galactic Spriter
08-10-2007, 07:21 PM
Overworlds? I used the custom May sprites, but should I post them anyway?
Every Sprite of mine are made by me besides the overworlds. that was made from some dude at Dratini lover's shop

DratiniLover
08-10-2007, 07:24 PM
Every Sprite of mine are made by me besides the overworlds. that was made from some dude at Dratini lover's shop

Your overworlds were made by Ali The Dark One. =P

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 07:25 PM
Hello all, and welcome to this comic thread. Please, by all means, apply to be a character in my comic. One person knew that I was doing a comic, so his character will be introduced in issue 2 or 3. If you can think of a better name for my comic, PM me, or tell me here. Comments and constructive critism would be nice.

Form: - Use this if you want to be part of the comic.

Name:
Sprites:
Overworld:
Personality:
Pokemon:
Position:

Note: I did not make the hoenn map. I got it from Google Images. ;P



http://i19.tinypic.com/6bel1mx

Issue 1 - Beginning of May's Adventure (http://i15.tinypic.com/4m2fbxw)

The comic is alright, just try to make the image more clear next time please.

Galactic Spriter
08-10-2007, 07:26 PM
The comic is alright, just try to make the image more clear next time please.
Please don't quote the first post.
Speedhost, you did change your ways right?

DratiniLover
08-10-2007, 07:33 PM
The comic is alright, just try to make the image more clear next time please.

The comic is clear, didn't you zoom in? =P

Electric27
08-10-2007, 07:35 PM
Please don't quote the first post.
Speedhost, you did change your ways right?

i think he did

DratiniLover
08-10-2007, 07:36 PM
i think he did

It's clear when you zoom in, the only way I can see that it isn't clear is if you don't zoom in.

Electric27
08-10-2007, 07:48 PM
It's clear when you zoom in, the only way I can see that it isn't clear is if you don't zoom in.

yeah it is clear when you zoom

DratiniLover
08-10-2007, 08:35 PM
I will start issue 2 as soon as I can.

Electric27
08-10-2007, 10:22 PM
great it will be awesome

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 10:33 PM
Please don't quote the first post.
Speedhost, you did change your ways right?
YEAH

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 10:34 PM
It's clear when you zoom in, the only way I can see that it isn't clear is if you don't zoom in.
I ZOOM IN, IT IS UNCLEAR

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 10:34 PM
I ZOOM IN, IT IS UNCLEAR
SOZ, NO MY MISTAKE

Fire Pkmn Master
08-10-2007, 10:35 PM
Dont Triple post and please have more than 4 words in your post.

Dratini Lover the issue was ok.

.::F.P.M::.

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 10:35 PM
I will start issue 2 as soon as I can.
PLZ PUT ME IN ISSUE 2 OR 3 AS MAYS FRIEND
NAME:SPEEDHOST101(SH101)
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/7361/temptc2sh4.jpg
SORRY, I DON'T HAVE ANY OVERWORLDS, TRY TO MENTION ME
I HAVE THE FOLLOWING POKEMON (ALSO SHOWN IN THE TRAINER CARD, IN MY SIG)
JOLTEON,RAYQUAZA,DIALGA,SWAMPERT,EMPOLION, AND MININ

Electric27
08-10-2007, 10:38 PM
PLZ PUT ME IN ISSUE 2 OR 3 AS MAYS FRIEND
NAME:SPEEDHOST101(SH101)
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/7361/temptc2sh4.jpg

sorry sh101 you need overworld a better sprite save as a png there are broken parts in your spriteand delete your triple post

Fire Pkmn Master
08-10-2007, 10:38 PM
PLZ PUT ME IN ISSUE 2 OR 3 AS MAYS FRIEND
NAME:SPEEDHOST101(SH101)
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/7361/temptc2sh4.jpg

She wont be able to put you in the comic. You dont have all the overworld sprites, you saved your images as Jpg which is really bad. Save it as Png. ALWAYS. And you basically just copied and pasted Brendan's head onto another body which looks bad. You have to get better sprites and overworlds.

.::F.P.M::.

Electric27
08-10-2007, 10:40 PM
and delete your triple posts

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 10:48 PM
and delete your triple posts
I HAVE IT NOW..
NAME:SPEEDHOST101(SH101)
PART IN THE STORY:MAY'S FRIEND
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/8569/temptc2af8.jpg

Fire Pkmn Master
08-10-2007, 10:50 PM
She still wont be able to use the Backsprite or trainer sprite. The Overworld sprites look like there saved as Jpg to. You need to save as P.N.G!!! Once again DELETE YOUR TRIPLE POST!!!!



.::F.P.M::.

Electric27
08-10-2007, 10:51 PM
okay i am tired of this delete those posts now

jedite1000
08-10-2007, 10:56 PM
speed host the reason why u should save it as png is so the picture looks better and will b able to go in the comic..look what happens if it goes in a comic
http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/420/uglyuz6.png

anyway dratinilover are u having any gym leaders? if not i have to make more sprites :)

DratiniLover
08-11-2007, 09:42 AM
speed host the reason why u should save it as png is so the picture looks better and will b able to go in the comic..look what happens if it goes in a comic
http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/420/uglyuz6.png

anyway dratinilover are u having any gym leaders? if not i have to make more sprites :)

I wasn't thinking about putting in gym leaders, but I can consider it. So I suppose you can make a gym leader.

Sh101, please can you delete your triple post?

camds
08-11-2007, 10:12 AM
Name:Cam
Sprites:http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k224/CAMDS/CamID-2.png
Personality:Smart, But Stuborn.
Position:Fossil Master.

~Cam

DratiniLover
08-11-2007, 11:34 AM
Ok, I've added you!

Electric27
08-11-2007, 03:38 PM
can't wait for the next one

da ink
08-12-2007, 02:19 AM
Shokay i shall join! cause it looks good

Name: Inaki
Sprites: http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa151/inaki8/Me-1.png
Overworld:up there

Personality: Loyal to he's friends good to he's pokemon loves to battle

Pokemon: Grovile, Quilava, Croconaw, Scizor, Jolteon, Pupitar (Can all my poke evolve to max)

Position: Friend

DratiniLover
08-12-2007, 03:47 PM
I've added you to the list.

Electric27
08-14-2007, 11:07 PM
is the new issue coming out soon and can my character be named jake