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speedhost101
08-10-2007, 09:54 PM
Issue #1:
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/9652/temptc1ev5.png

Fire Pkmn Master
08-10-2007, 10:07 PM
Um yea this is bad.

You dont have a story behind it and doesnt look good at all. Just a bunch of things mashed together and makes no sense.

.::F.P.M::.

Electric27
08-10-2007, 10:08 PM
un fortunatly it is the truth read some comics to see what other comics are like

Galactic Spriter
08-10-2007, 10:09 PM
Um yea this is bad.

You dont have a story behind it and doesnt look good at all. Just a bunch of things mashed together and makes no sense.

.::F.P.M::.
Uh yeah.... you should look at other comics like mine to improve your comic skills

No offense but even my first issue is better: http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/7715/comicissue1xb3.png

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 10:28 PM
Uh yeah.... you should look at other comics like mine to improve your comic skills

No offense but even my first issue is better: http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/7715/comicissue1xb3.png
#1 actually mine is better than ur 1st one
#2 mine is kinda crap, coz i don't play the game to make mine, but as your ultimate adventure thing says, the secound one starts it properly
p.s. this does have a story.And i will not give spoilers
p.p.s at least i interact in new ways such as ads and pokedex info

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 10:31 PM
Next Issue Out 2morrow !!!

Fire Pkmn Master
08-10-2007, 10:33 PM
I wouldnt bother with Issue to. Id fix up Issue 1 if you want anyone to really like to come here and really comment on your comic. Which still doesnt make sense or have a story behind. -__-

.::F.P.M::.

Frozen Torchic
08-10-2007, 10:34 PM
Next Issue Out 2morrow !!!

Actually, Galactic Grunt's is better, becuase he actually used real backgrounds, and I could read it okay. Your sentence's and panels are scattered all over the page.

jedite1000
08-10-2007, 10:41 PM
wow a jolteon at 400hp? what a chansey wannabe -_-

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 10:50 PM
wow a jolteon at 400hp? what a chansey wannabe -_-
actually,i'ts possible seeming the jolteons at its highest state and lv., considering 400hp is the max u can hav

Fire Pkmn Master
08-10-2007, 10:53 PM
Still this is really bad. And really stupid to have A Jolteon to have 400 HP out of nowhere and then you see a wild Piplup. @____@
This whole issue is just jumbled up.

.::F.P.M::.

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 10:55 PM
Still this is really bad. And really stupid to have A Jolteon to have 400 HP out of nowhere and then you see a wild Piplup. @____@
This whole issue is just jumbled up.

.::F.P.M::.
Actually what happened was, I just came out of a boat frome hoen to sinnoh, and have just finished my homework, when a piplup comes out of sea to attack me, my jolteon (which used to be my first pokemon, eevee years ago) is highly experienced (we have been everywhere) we acidently nearly kill the piplup.

lilJT
08-10-2007, 10:58 PM
even if you are gonna start using real backgrounds, they haven't made any for sinnoh except the first town

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 10:59 PM
even if you are gonna start using real backgrounds, they haven't made any for sinnoh except the first town
IF YOU GUYS THINK I'M SO CRAP, CHECK OUT THIS GUY.. http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=49853

jedite1000
08-10-2007, 11:00 PM
Actually what happened was, I just came out of a boat frome hoen to sinnoh, and have just finished my homework, when a piplup comes out of sea to attack me, my jolteon (which used to be my first pokemon, eevee years ago) is highly experienced (we have been everywhere) we acidently nearly kill the piplup.
u should of probbably added that part to ur comic

anyway i think the max is blissey 600hp..im not sure its been a long time when i had a blissey

IF YOU GUYS THINK I'M SO CRAP, CHECK OUT THIS GUY.. http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/foru...ad.php?t=49853
yes his first issue didnt look that great but he did improove, probbably by people telling him what was wrong with it

Electric27
08-10-2007, 11:01 PM
how dare you ink is one of the best

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 11:01 PM
u should of probbably added that part to ur comic

anyway i think the max is blissey 600hp..im not sure its been a long time when i had a blissey
NO, I'M SURE THE MAX A PKMN CAN HAVE IS 4OOHP

TheEvilDookie
08-10-2007, 11:01 PM
IF YOU GUYS THINK I'M SO CRAP, CHECK OUT THIS GUY.. http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=49853
actually, ive seen some of his comics and theyre definitely better than yours

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 11:03 PM
actually, ive seen some of his comics and theyre definitely better than yours
WHAT KIND OF KRAZY AVATAR IS THATIM SRY, LOL XD LOL XD I LOKKAD AT IT AND STARTED LAUGHING IT OUT (LITERALLY) IS THAT BURGER REAL ??

Fire Pkmn Master
08-10-2007, 11:03 PM
Actually what happened was, I just came out of a boat frome hoen to sinnoh, and have just finished my homework, when a piplup comes out of sea to attack me, my jolteon (which used to be my first pokemon, eevee years ago) is highly experienced (we have been everywhere) we acidently nearly kill the piplup.
Well how is anyone supposed to know that. We can read minds or think that you started out with an eevee. You dont have a story so that we know what the comic is going to be a bout.

IF YOU GUYS THINK I'M SO CRAP, CHECK OUT THIS GUY.. http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=49853

Dont you dare say that Inks comic is crap. He has a story, a plot he knows what he's doing, he has his own style for HIS comic by scratching some things out himself which real comic makers do. Yours is crap ok. You saved as Jpg, you dont have a story behind it and you just put things together.

.::F.P.M::.

lilJT
08-10-2007, 11:03 PM
IF YOU GUYS THINK I'M SO CRAP, CHECK OUT THIS GUY.. http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=49853

what are you talking about? his is way better than yours

at least it has an understandable line. the only bad thing is that he can't spell

jedite1000
08-10-2007, 11:04 PM
OMG big sandwich sorry :)

anyway if u just listen to what people are saying u will get better at making comics but if u ignore it...well then.....

Galactic Spriter
08-10-2007, 11:05 PM
OMG big sandwich sorry :)

anyway if u just listen to what people are saying u will get better at making comics but if u ignore it...well then.....
This isn't going to end up like this morning again is it?

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 11:06 PM
what are you talking about? his is way better than yours

at least it has an understandable line. the only bad thing is that he can't spell
LISTEN U IDIOTS, AM I SOME SORTA NED FLANDERS, HAVING TO TELL YOU EVERYTHING, ITS MY WAY OF AMKING A STRAIGHT ON SURPRISING COMIC, AT THE START YOU ONLY KNEW WHAT YOU NEEDED TO, DON'T SAY I SUCK JUS' COZ OTHERS TELL THEIR WHOLE LIFE STORY

Electric27
08-10-2007, 11:06 PM
ya ink is still one of the best he always will be and take another look at yours don't compare yourself to others t ochange the subject i know that trick it never works

Guys this is turning into what happened this morning if you guys have any dignity or integrety you will leave i am

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 11:07 PM
This isn't going to end up like this morning again is it?
LETS NOT TALK ABOUT THE ROCKET MEOWTH INCIDENT PLZ

Galactic Spriter
08-10-2007, 11:07 PM
LISTEN U IDIOTS, AM I SOME SORTA NED FLANDERS, HAVING TO TELL YOU EVERYTHING, ITS MY WAY OF AMKING A STRAIGHT ON SURPRISING COMIC, AT THE START YOU ONLY KNEW WHAT YOU NEEDED TO, DON'T SAY I SUCK JUS' COZ OTHERS TELL THEIR WHOLE LIFE STORY
Speedhost, calm down. If you do, we could teach you a thing or two about comics.

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 11:08 PM
ya ink is still one of the best he always will be and take another look at yours don't compare yourself to others t ochange the subject i know that trick it never works
I BETTER GO, I LIVE IN GMT AND ITS LIKE 7 PAST O AM LOL NO JOKES !! I AM A KID SEE..

speedhost101
08-10-2007, 11:09 PM
Speedhost, calm down. If you do, we could teach you a thing or two about comics.
PLZ TEACH ME (I CANT USE REAL BACKGROUNDS, I DONT HAVE POKEMON GAMES)

jedite1000
08-10-2007, 11:09 PM
sigh dont call them idiots they did try to help u at the start of the posts but u just wouldnt listen and started dissing

one word

spriters rescourses...ok 2 words

Fire Pkmn Master
08-10-2007, 11:10 PM
LISTEN U IDIOTS, AM I SOME SORTA NED FLANDERS, HAVING TO TELL YOU EVERYTHING, ITS MY WAY OF AMKING A STRAIGHT ON SURPRISING COMIC, AT THE START YOU ONLY KNEW WHAT YOU NEEDED TO, DON'T SAY I SUCK JUS' COZ OTHERS TELL THEIR WHOLE LIFE STORY

Flame all you like. Its not going to make you look any better.
Well your way isnt good at all. Nobody here really tells the whole life story. They start there comics from where they live or somewhere where they dont even know. I have a comic we I come back home but dont show my whole life story that it went here and there and got my pokemon.
Your way sucks because you still do not have a story or a description for what this comic will be about. Come back when you have a realy comic issue. And never compare your comics to anyone because you have the worst.


.::F.P.M::.

lilJT
08-10-2007, 11:12 PM
Flame all you like. Its not going to make you look any better.
Well your way isnt good at all. Nobody here really tells the whole life story. They start there comics from where they live or somewhere where they dont even know. I have a comic we I come back home but dont show my whole life story that it went here and there and got my pokemon.
Your way sucks because you still do not have a story or a description for what this comic will be about. Come back when you have a realy comic issue. And never compare your comics to anyone because you have the worst.


.::F.P.M::.

yes, i just told you that they don't have d/p backgrounds, then you accused me of saying your comics were crap

btw: if a mod sees this it might get locked

jedite1000
08-10-2007, 11:13 PM
yes, i just told you that they don't have d/p backgrounds, then you accused me of saying your comics were crap
acually they have twinleaf town...sorry i will get out of ur way now ;)

Galactic Spriter
08-10-2007, 11:13 PM
sigh dont call them idiots they did try to help u at the start of the posts but u just wouldnt listen and started dissing

one word

spriters rescourses...ok 2 words
Here are your two best friends

Spriters Resource and Pe2ks Resource Click (http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintendo/pokemon/)Click (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites.html)

They have all the tools you need for comic making

iChaos
08-11-2007, 12:43 AM
Here are your two best friends

Spriters Resource and Pe2ks Resource Click (http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintendo/pokemon/)Click (http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites.html)

They have all the tools you need for comic making
I Kinda Like The Comic but I wish I knew how to make a Comic

Galactic Spriter
08-11-2007, 12:44 AM
I Kinda Like The Comic but I wish I knew how to make a Comic
I will teach you how to make a comic? Should i make a tut for you?

iChaos
08-11-2007, 12:49 AM
I will teach you how to make a comic? Should i make a tut for you?
Sure whats tut

Galactic Spriter
08-11-2007, 12:50 AM
Sure whats tut
Short for tutorial. Do you want it?

iChaos
08-11-2007, 12:52 AM
Short for tutorial. Do you want it?
Yes I would love that

Galactic Spriter
08-11-2007, 12:55 AM
Yes I would love that
Alright hold on. I will make the tut

iChaos
08-11-2007, 12:59 AM
Alright hold on. I will make the tut
Where will it be

Galactic Spriter
08-11-2007, 01:15 AM
Where will it be
Heres the tut:

http://i12.tinypic.com/4mts2dw

lilJT
08-11-2007, 01:21 AM
Heres the tut:

http://i12.tinypic.com/4mts2dw

shouldn't you pm that instead of putting it on someone else's thread

Galactic Spriter
08-11-2007, 01:24 AM
shouldn't you pm that instead of putting it on someone else's thread
Its for everyone including speedhost since he needs to improve

Cybergear88
08-11-2007, 01:51 AM
well, thats positive thinking. i like that. FPM, calm down. there is only room to improve. he is ametuer and has probably never done this before. i think he will get good at it sooner or later. he's a noob. i was a noob once and so was everyone else here. eventually, people get better at stuff. so stop sayin' he sucks.

jedite1000
08-11-2007, 01:57 AM
well, thats positive thinking. i like that. FPM, calm down. there is only room to improve. he is ametuer and has probably never done this before. i think he will get good at it sooner or later. he's a noob. i was a noob once and so was everyone else here. eventually, people get better at stuff. so stop sayin' he sucks.
yes but speed started yelling and stuff when people were trying to help

Cybergear88
08-11-2007, 02:00 AM
i know. FPM was the first to put him down though. he really like smashed him on the ground about how he sucked. poor guy.

lilJT
08-11-2007, 03:24 AM
i know. FPM was the first to put him down though. he really like smashed him on the ground about how he sucked. poor guy.

you have a point but, he did accuse me of saying his is crap, then he tried to drag ink down with him

Fire Pkmn Master
08-11-2007, 05:50 AM
Wait is he calling me a n00b or that other guy. o___O
I was really trying to help him but that guy didnt want to listen to me and then brings Ink's comic in. I was really mad at the fact that he did that and thats why I went off a bit.

Nevermind about teh n00b thing.
.::F.P.M::.

Cogi276
08-11-2007, 06:05 AM
Wait is he calling me a n00b or that other guy. o___O
I was really trying to help him but that guy didnt want to listen to me and then brings Ink's comic in. I was really mad at the fact that he did that and thats why I went off a bit.

Nevermind about teh n00b thing.
.::F.P.M::.



Listen the thing is his comci sucks *Bleep* and nothing he does or says will make it any better. he needs to listen to our crituqes and try to improve. If eh dosn't it just shows how stuck up he is.

BTW 2 things, DONT USE ALL CAPS FOR GODS SAKE MY EYES GOD DAMN IT! Secondly don't compare youself to any comcs at all! A one panel comic with a badly drawn character and a background would better mainly cause it has an overworld and a background in it at all.

~Cogi~

politoed123
08-11-2007, 06:31 AM
OMFG A Mod should *Bleep* Lock this! I hate it when noobs make the worst possible thing and then compare it to others! Yours is worst then all of the ones u said suck! Just face it dont DO COMICS! Leave it to better people!

Cogi276
08-11-2007, 06:33 AM
OMFG A Mod should *Bleep* Lock this! I hate it when noobs make the worst possible thing and then compare it to others! Yours is worst then all of the ones u said suck! Just face it dont DO COMICS! Leave it to better people!

I completly agree. This board also has flames on it mainly from the guy who made the comic.

~Cogi~

politoed123
08-11-2007, 06:37 AM
I completly agree. This board also has flames on it mainly from the guy who made the comic.

~Cogi~

Omg he should get temp banned to or a mod should make a rule like no comparing bad sprites or comics becaus epeople says your SUCKS! :P

Cogi276
08-11-2007, 06:43 AM
Omg he should get temp banned to or a mod should make a rule like no comparing bad sprites or comics becaus epeople says your SUCKS! :P

I agree thats a really good idea.

~Cogi~

politoed123
08-11-2007, 06:44 AM
I agree thats a really good idea.

~Cogi~

We should pm a Sprite mod or make a thread with a potition with that new rule request :D

jedite1000
08-11-2007, 09:27 AM
hmmm u probbably shouldnt go that far. maybe just give speed some time to relax and try to let him make a better comic

but speed if u planning to continue ur comic u need to listed to the critiques or u wont improove..trust me i was once like u and i didnt listen to anybody when i made my older comics but then i thought back and said maybe they are right so i decided to make my comic better, and apparently my latest comic is the best out of my older ones

camds
08-11-2007, 10:25 AM
Dude, You cant honestly Even say that is a comic.

1.It has No storyboard
2.Its Set Out really Badly.
3.The Sprites Suck cause they Bmp.
4.The Comic Is wierd.
5.DONT ENVOLVE DA INK IN THIS, HE IS BETTER THEN YOU WILL EVA BE!

~Cam

pinky pull
08-11-2007, 11:09 AM
The comic is OK and it's only the start so it will get better!!

pinky pull

speedhost101
08-11-2007, 12:29 PM
Tanks for the resources, you guys are a great help.Next issue up this evening !!!

speedhost101
08-11-2007, 12:31 PM
Short for tutorial. Do you want it?Tahnks 4 da tut.

speedhost101
08-11-2007, 12:39 PM
Heres the tut:

http://i12.tinypic.com/4mts2dw
Man, they only have one d/p background.

Frozen Torchic
08-11-2007, 12:44 PM
Man, they only have one d/p background.

Don't triple post. WORD

pinky pull
08-11-2007, 06:49 PM
Hi i just wanted to say that I think the next comics going to be way better!!

:) Have a nice day!!

pinky pull

speedhost101
08-11-2007, 06:52 PM
Urm.. I could get a comic up 2dy, it'd be crap coz i can't go on after, or u get it 2morrow, and it rocks ??
p.s. if it looks like pinky pull is me, she's not, she has a tc that looks like mine coz' she's my sis and she likes my one.

speedhost101
08-11-2007, 07:33 PM
#2
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/536/temptc3mp1.jpg

speedhost101
08-11-2007, 07:34 PM
way infwaygo !!

pinky pull
08-11-2007, 07:51 PM
Urm.. I could get a comic up 2dy, it'd be crap coz i can't go on after, or u get it 2morrow, and it rocks ??
p.s. if it looks like pinky pull is me, she's not, she has a tc that looks like mine coz' she's my sis and she likes my one.

Yes speedhost101 I am your sister and I thought you didn't want anyone to know we were brothers and sister and i didn't say that I liked or copied your trainer card!!

Your sister

pinky pull

Electric27
08-11-2007, 08:13 PM
speedhost it is better but no offense to you or pinky pull but pinky yo bro got a bad rep round her

Wario
08-11-2007, 08:55 PM
we call them sprite comics because they're made solely of sprites, and they're formatted like comics. Yours...isn't

speedhost101
08-12-2007, 05:52 PM
we call them sprite comics because they're made solely of sprites, and they're formatted like comics. Yours...isn't
that is b'coz i didn't have the resources unbtill mid episode 2 !!

RawrIsMyMiddleName
08-12-2007, 06:46 PM
Guys, saying his comic is bad and it's not worth it to keep on going, just don't tell him that. I'd rather you just tell him to just improve, and he'll probably be fine.

And speedhost, showing other people's comics, and saying they're worse, is a wrong thing to do. Okay, Ink does have a kind of bad, but it is also a very good one, considering he works very hard in making his perfect. Oh, and please don't post more than one. Now, with that said: Please Do Not Double Post!

Azumao
08-13-2007, 12:26 AM
Speedhost, don't double, triple, or quadruple post. If you have something to add, use the edit button at the bottom right hand corner of the post.
Don't flame or make multiple threads for the same thing, one thread is enough.

*Locked