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pikahero2
08-18-2007, 12:31 AM
Ok so the main storyline is people are gettin abducted by shadow lugia soon kip and friends travel to his lair in hoenn and try to stop him....

issue 1 is up
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/2078/kiphoeenadventuresmk4.png (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-08-17

issue 2 yay yay:
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1871/issue2part1eo5.png (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-08-18

issue 3:yay yay its up!
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/1/3issuear3.png (http://imageshack.us)
Shot at 2007-08-19
and im sorry for the mess up uv #3 plz dont tell me kk
form to join:
name in comic:
sprites:(supply or link)
pokemon to be:
friend,foe,random,helper shadow lugia(note if ur shadow lugia then u dont appear for until the 10th issue:
Xtra:

pikahero2
08-18-2007, 12:32 AM
reserved for credits and i will repost it from image shack ok

Galactic Spriter
08-18-2007, 12:33 AM
Ok so the main storyline is people are gettin abducted by shadow lugia soon kip and friends travel to his lair in hoenn and try to stop him....

issue 1 is up

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z200/phoohero2/COMIC/kiphoeenadventures.png



form to join:
name in comic:
sprites:(supply or link)
pokemon to be:
friend,foe,random,helper shadow lugia(note if ur shadow lugia then u dont appear for until the 10th issue:
Xtra:
Text is Way too small i cannot see it


G a l a c t i c G r u n t

Anastasia-R
08-18-2007, 12:33 AM
It's hard to read it. And it's pretty small. >.<
---Anastasia.R

pikahero2
08-18-2007, 12:37 AM
yes i know i tryed with one of my sprites and theyre small too so i did it on imageshack to make sure

pikahero2
08-18-2007, 12:38 AM
sorry for double post but its better now what do u guys think

Anastasia-R
08-18-2007, 12:44 AM
You know what's odd? My mudkip in my comic is named: Kip. and so is yours! o_o

pikahero2
08-18-2007, 12:58 AM
in what comic? and could u link this http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z200/phoohero2/COMIC/USABAR.png

to the url of my comic plz i dont know how
and i didnt know your mudkips names was kip ok

da ink
08-18-2007, 01:03 AM
kool

form to join:
name in comic: Inaki
sprites:(supply or link): http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa151/inaki8/TeamFlame.png can Hoondoom follow me around please
pokemon to be: Cyndaquil can homdoom be my body guard please
friend,foe,random,helper shadow lugia(note if ur shadow lugia then u dont appear for until the 10th issue: Friend
Xtra: Can homdoom be like my body guard and follow me around if so he's name is Butler

pikahero2
08-18-2007, 01:07 AM
ok accpeted and about hounddoom hes only ur bodygaurd when your like on a mission or in a place where u can get attacked ok
next issue 2moro its 4am im tired gudnite

cacatua
08-18-2007, 01:13 AM
where can we get the sprites?

Eeveelutions
08-18-2007, 01:17 AM
form to join:
name in comic: Sabrina the Ninetales, Alex the Raichu, and Carla the Slowbro
sprites:http://www.iaza.com/work/070818C/NinetalesMDSpriteSheet99301.png
http://www.iaza.com/work/070818C/RaichuMDSpriteSheet98983.png
http://www.iaza.com/work/070818C/SlowbroMDSpriteSheet31001.png
pokemon to be: Ninetales (Sabrina) Raichu (Alex) and Slowbro (Carla)
friend,foe,random,helper shadow lugia(note if ur shadow lugia then u dont appear for until the 10th issue: Friends
Xtra: Since there are no Rescue teams in this comic, can these 3 be one? Team Go-Getters? And they're all Female.

~Eevee

~Falcon~
08-18-2007, 01:58 AM
The text boxes are a little strange, try not to make the words go outside of them, it just looks messy

Wingull
08-18-2007, 04:36 AM
where can we get the sprites?

Right Here! (http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintendo/pokemon/pkmndung/), give
credit though!

Form to Join:
Name in Comic: Bruce the Butterfree
Sprite: http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/2531/abuttefreecg5.png (http://imageshack.us)
Ripped by Jackster
Pokemon to be: Butterfree (Bruce)
friend,foe,random,helper shadow lugia(note if ur shadow lugia then u dont appear for until the 10th issue: Friend
Xtra: Nope

Cool Comic. :biggrin:

pikahero2
08-18-2007, 12:40 PM
ok all in im gonna have to make this issue longer because of the amount of people
in it ok and i know about the text bubbles im gonna try fix em ok issue 2 comin up

magentaman
08-18-2007, 02:47 PM
it was hard to figure out what order the characters were speaking in.made it difficult to read

Cogi276
08-18-2007, 02:53 PM
Im sorry to say this but this is one of the few comcis I won't be in. I would be embarrased to be in this.

~Cogi~

da ink
08-18-2007, 07:55 PM
ok accpeted and about hounddoom hes only ur bodygaurd when your like on a mission or in a place where u can get attacked ok
next issue 2moro its 4am im tired gudnite

ok thanks:biggrin:

word word

pikahero2
08-18-2007, 10:30 PM
whats wrong with it????????
I know about the text boxes but ive seen other comics with the same problem and Knowone said anything about it

Pikablu Pie
08-18-2007, 10:42 PM
This mkes no sense. I only skimped, but in one episode Kip apparently is exploring town square, next episode he and about 5 other Pokemon are doing somehting I don't know. Also, straighten up your speech. For example, you should say:

"So sleepy... Gotta rest... *snore*"

Instead of:

"so sleepy gotta go.... (snores)"

pikahero2
08-18-2007, 10:52 PM
Well i was tryin to say "so sleepy gotta go asleep"
but instead i said that

cacatua
08-18-2007, 10:55 PM
form to join:
name in comic:Kazoo
sprites:(supply or link) http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4667/rhydoncomicgk4.png
pokemon to be: Rhydon
friend,foe,random,helper shadow lugia(note if ur shadow lugia then u dont appear for until the 10th issue: Foe
Xtra:
__________________

Wingull
08-18-2007, 11:00 PM
Im sorry to say this but this is one of the few comcis I won't be in. I would be embarrased to be in this.

~Cogi~

I know it can be a little puzzling to read, but there is no need to be so pesky about it. I like the comic, it's fun and amusing.

pikahero2
08-18-2007, 11:01 PM
ok accepted and whos your partner out of that list? because i might start on issue 3 now or might start on it 2morro im not sure

cacatua
08-18-2007, 11:04 PM
no partner, edited for u to be easier
oh yes and give kiki a rare candy please

Edit: dont listen to them, i hate comics where you are a trainer, i love being a pokemon in PMD and so in a comic

pikahero2
08-18-2007, 11:11 PM
ok thnx Im gonna start on 3 now
and see what happens

cacatua
08-18-2007, 11:16 PM
ok thanks, there arent many foes rigth?

pikahero2
08-19-2007, 12:03 AM
No not really so i need a foe and in the next comic u start out good then reveal ur workin 4 shadow lugia so then we become foes but im half finished so far

cacatua
08-19-2007, 12:04 AM
good good, betrayal,i like that

pikahero2
08-19-2007, 12:31 AM
i see ur a spider pig fan
me too

da ink
08-19-2007, 02:29 AM
Lol very good issue very good

cacatua
08-19-2007, 03:16 AM
i see ur a spider pig fan
me too

its real name is plopper AKA spiderpig AKA Harry plopper

pikahero2
08-19-2007, 03:23 PM
ye hes the best that gives me an idea 4 the comic anyway the lerics

spider pig,spider pig does whatever a spiderpig does
can he swing from a web no he cant hes a pig lookout hes a spiderpig

ZERO-X
08-19-2007, 04:09 PM
Can I join? If so then heres my form:

name in comic: XD
sprites:http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/2159/untitledhb4.png
pokemon to be: Shadow Lugia
So can I be XD?

Pikablu Pie
08-19-2007, 04:13 PM
Can I join? If so then heres my form:

name in comic: XD
sprites:http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/2159/untitledhb4.png
pokemon to be: Shadow Lugia
So can I be XD?

Shadow Lugia is purple, not black.

pikahero2
08-19-2007, 09:33 PM
accepted im starting issue 3 over again lol

ZERO-X
08-19-2007, 10:09 PM
Shadow Lugia is purple, not black.
Shadow Lugia is black. If you see the box you will find him black.

accepted im starting issue 3 over again lol
Im not critinking but it would be a great idea if you put intermissions that are about Lugia kidnapping the pokemon. Oh and thanks for putting me to the comic!

Pikablu Pie
08-19-2007, 10:12 PM
Shadow Lugia is black. If you see the box you will find him black.

http://img.shopping.com/cctool/PrdImg/images/pr/177X150/00/01/97/a6/df/26715871.JPG

That's not black. Besides, Shadow Lugia needs more shading. Right now the shading is pityful.

pikahero2
08-19-2007, 10:19 PM
Ok lets not fight and its close enought right to me it looks the same and thats why im redoing issue 3 so i can put like a pokenews thingy with your sprite abductin people

ZERO-X
08-19-2007, 10:28 PM
Ok lets not fight and its close enought right to me it looks the same and thats why im redoing issue 3 so i can put like a pokenews thingy with your sprite abductin people

OK! Thanks!

da ink
08-19-2007, 11:25 PM
ah if we had to say what team were fro can me and Butler be from team Crater

pikahero2
08-19-2007, 11:35 PM
team crater eh??
well thats ok but we all form to one team anyone got a name 4 it (you will be credited)
if you have a name 4 it plz tell me as im startin the next issue

cacatua
08-20-2007, 01:44 AM
i hope kazzo is in the next issue

da ink
08-20-2007, 02:55 AM
Awsome new issue man it's awsome!

pikahero2
08-20-2007, 01:57 PM
sorry cactua i had u in issue 3 but when i redone it i 4got to put u in!
sorry your in issue 4

Dragon01
08-20-2007, 04:29 PM
I like this, you said you need rivals so heres two:

name in comic: Zard and Zane
sprites:
Zard-http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/2831/zardzj1.png (http://imageshack.us)
Zane-http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/5263/zaneos3.png (http://imageshack.us)
pokemon to be:shadow lugia's 'right hand men'.
Xtra: Zard is the leader of the two.

And a goody ^^
name in comic:Char
sprites:http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/8062/charid0.png (http://imageshack.us)
pokemon to be: friend + helper
Xtra: Easilly scared, baby brother to Zard and Zane

Pikablu Pie
08-20-2007, 05:30 PM
The chatspeak makes me sick. Write properly. People do care. And don't switch scenes so quickly with no explanation or anything. FIrst it's in the PMD world, then it's in the Ranger world, then in Hoenn, then back in the Ranger world again. Pick one and stick with it.

pikahero2
08-20-2007, 09:47 PM
ok lemme explain something

ever see my comic TITLE!!
look at it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you wudnt say that to camds comic wud u? no didnt tink so
sorry if i sound mean but im trying to make a good comic


and accepted i like the idea

cacatua
08-23-2007, 01:24 AM
erm..will this comic continue?