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Frozen Torchic
08-24-2007, 03:36 AM
I'll actually try and update more on this one. If anyone whines about me quitting my old comic, I'm done with the forum. I hate that.

Issue 1: http://i11.tinypic.com/4q8g004.png
Issue 2: http://i11.tinypic.com/4udjaxk.png

Guest Stars:

Name:
Pokemon:
Sprites:
Personality:
Friend, Enemy, or Rival:

Cybergear88
08-24-2007, 03:40 AM
well, that was random. but funny!

The Jr Trainer
08-24-2007, 03:40 AM
I'm just saying, don't use smilies in comics. It looks odd

Frozen Torchic
08-24-2007, 03:42 AM
I'm just saying, don't use smilies in comics. It looks odd

Alright. Its been awhile since I last made a comic.

Shadowzard
08-24-2007, 04:06 AM
Nice... weird for a first issue but still funny. Good work.

Frozen Torchic
08-24-2007, 04:13 AM
I was in a hurry while making it. I had had like 5 minutes.

-Pichu Boy-
08-24-2007, 08:53 AM
Don't rush comics. If you only had 5 minutes, then leave it and do it another time. If you rush it it makes it look bad.

And yes, as said before, don't use smilies in a comic.

Other than that, good first issue. :happy:

Galactic Spriter
08-24-2007, 01:05 PM
HEY! NEVER MAKE FUN/SAY ANYTHING ABOUT HAUNTER.

Galactic Grunt

Pikablu Pie
08-24-2007, 03:23 PM
HEY! NEVER MAKE FUN/SAY ANYTHING ABOUT HAUNTER.

Galactic Grunt

Dude, calm down. I've seen people put Minun down all the time, but I don't yell at them. Making your text size 7 only makes it look less serious.

Nice first issue, but I agree with Magickid. Take as long as you want another time, rather then making it quickly.

Bigpinkloser9
08-24-2007, 04:46 PM
Cool Comics! Can I be A guest star?
Name: Brandon
Pokemon: Mudkip
Sprites: Yayness! (http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k172/pinkidiot3/flygon-16.png)Tell me if you need the portraits.
Personality: A bit annoying and dumb (lol)
Friend, Enemy, or Rival: Friend (lol)

RET412
08-24-2007, 07:39 PM
Can i be a guest star as well?

Name:Rachel
Pokemon:Skitty
Sprites:http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x47/Flygon770/skitty.png
Persanality: Nice, smart,cute, and funny.
Position:Friend

Cogi276
08-24-2007, 08:08 PM
Dude, calm down. I've seen people put Minun down all the time, but I don't yell at them. Making your text size 7 only makes it look less serious.

Nice first issue, but I agree with Magickid. Take as long as you want another time, rather then making it quickly.

WHO PUT MINUM DOWN I SHALL DESTOY THEM!

Name: Cogi (Plusle) & Megas (Minum)
Pokemon: Plusle & Minum
Sprites: http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u172/cogi276/PMD%20Sprites/Plusleminumspritesheet.png
Personality: Good, nice freindly helpful, playful. (Kinda like the Pichu borthers if you ever saw their Mini movie)
Friend, Enemy, or Rival: FREIND! YAYZ!

Frozen Torchic
08-24-2007, 08:49 PM
Hooray! All of you may be in.

Cogi276
08-24-2007, 09:15 PM
Hooray! All of you may be in.

YAY! Pyre whens the next issue? (I was gonna complain then I saw the warning that you were gonna shut this one down. I JUST LIKED IT SO MUCH!) Also I edited thier personality.

~Cogi~

Frozen Torchic
08-24-2007, 09:24 PM
YAY! Pyre whens the next issue? (I was gonna complain then I saw the warning that you were gonna shut this one down. I JUST LIKED IT SO MUCH!) Also I edited thier personality.

~Cogi~

Issue 2 is finished.

RET412
08-24-2007, 09:33 PM
Issue 2 is finished.

am i gonna be in it a bit more in teh next issue?

Cogi276
08-24-2007, 09:34 PM
Issue 2 is finished.

Mabey they are a little bit to much like the Pichu bros. XDDDDD Always playfull thoguh!

~Cogi~

Frozen Torchic
08-24-2007, 09:35 PM
am i gonna be in it a bit more in teh next issue?

Yes. Your one of the characters that stays in the comic.

RET412
08-24-2007, 09:36 PM
Yes. Your one of the characters that stays in the comic.

oh thanks. I cant wait.

Cogi276
08-24-2007, 09:37 PM
What about me?

~Cogi~

Frozen Torchic
08-24-2007, 09:38 PM
What about me?

~Cogi~

Yes, Cogi. Plusle and Minun count as 1 character, and they both stay.

Cogi276
08-24-2007, 09:41 PM
Yes, Cogi. Plusle and Minun count as 1 character, and they both stay.

Cool! Thats awsome! Most people are like. "Sorry you can only have 1"

~Cogi~

da ink
08-24-2007, 09:42 PM
Name: Inaki, and Butler
Pokemon: Cyndaquil, and Hondoom
Sprites:http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa151/inaki8/TeamFlame.png
Personality: Inaki: Nice really playfull loves to get in trouble, Butler: Very protective to Inaki has been he's body guard since Inaki was a baby
Friend, Enemy, or Rival: Friend

Frozen Torchic
08-24-2007, 10:02 PM
Name: Inaki, and Butler
Pokemon: Cyndaquil, and Hondoom
Sprites:http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa151/inaki8/TeamFlame.png
Personality: Inaki: Nice really playfull loves to get in trouble, Butler: Very protective to Inaki has been he's body guard since Inaki was a baby
Friend, Enemy, or Rival: Friend

You are accepted, Da Ink.

pikahero2
08-25-2007, 05:22 PM
This is a cool comic I might join But I have to see when photobucket.com comes back and I dont want to Give you a bad sprite sheet $_$

Frozen Torchic
08-25-2007, 11:29 PM
http://i18.tinypic.com/6fg1d1c.png Issue three. The others I'll put in the next issue.

Claona
08-25-2007, 11:50 PM
This is a hilarious comic, keep up the good work!

Bigpinkloser9
08-25-2007, 11:53 PM
Lol the last two were very funny.
I cant wait to see more!!!Silly doughnut!:biggrin:

Realityxxx
08-26-2007, 04:57 AM
Name: Flare
Pokemon: Charmander
Sprites: http://i12.tinypic.com/4xw9nyr.png
Personality: Flare is very proctective of her friends. She will try to fight in anyway possible. She is very caring.
Friend, Enemy, or Rival: Friend.

luis411100
08-26-2007, 06:02 AM
may i join'

Name:Leon
PokemonArcanine
Sprites:http://i110.photobucket.com/albums/n88/luis411100/arcaninemd.png
Personality:hate averyone exept fire type poemon always pissed off very easely by the way oh and he is this way couse he dousent kniow his family or anything about his past
Friend, Enemy, or Rival: Friend.enemy
__________________

Frozen Torchic
08-26-2007, 04:23 PM
All accepted. I'm working on issue 4 right now.

Cogi276
08-26-2007, 06:11 PM
All accepted. I'm working on issue 4 right now.

YAY ISSUE 4 MY DARK DAYS OF DEPRESSION ARE OVER!!!!! (Except for the wedding where I was the ringbear and danced with pretty girls.)

~Cogi~

Frozen Torchic
08-26-2007, 08:11 PM
Issue 4:
http://i15.tinypic.com/4yte1de.png

I like the way I did this one. ^^

RET412
08-26-2007, 08:28 PM
ok why am i barely in the comic, even though i signed up second.

Frozen Torchic
08-26-2007, 08:30 PM
You'll talk more in the next issue.

RET412
08-27-2007, 08:03 PM
Bump!word word word

Cogi276
08-27-2007, 08:13 PM
Issue 4:
http://i15.tinypic.com/4yte1de.png

I like the way I did this one. ^^

LOL YAY Well I did promise to roast him last ep

~Cogi~

Frozen Torchic
08-30-2007, 12:43 AM
Issue 5: http://i6.tinypic.com/4vouz6e.png NOTE: Nobody, and I mean NOBODY, ask where Brandon went! He ran away during the battle, and yes, he is still in! I said that just to shut you up! *points to specific person*

Galactic Spriter
08-30-2007, 12:47 AM
If i were you i would turn the pokemon black and white to match the background

Galactic Grunt

Frozen Torchic
08-30-2007, 12:49 AM
If i were you i would turn the pokemon black and white to match the background

Galactic Grunt

In whic panel? The last one?

da ink
08-30-2007, 12:50 AM
really nice finaly a new issue:biggrin:
but i just realized this... i dont say anything in the whole comic

Frozen Torchic
08-30-2007, 01:14 AM
really nice finaly a new issue:biggrin:
but i just realized this... i dont say anything in the whole comic

I was going to make Inaki and Butler say Flamethrower, but I didn't have enough room to make them talk after I made Cogi and Megas talk.

Shadow Eevee
08-30-2007, 01:31 AM
Bump!word word word
1. That is completely spam. Bumping is bad, and just saying word word word makes it even worse.
2. Please, for the love of God, direct link your issues.
3. Put all your issues in the first page, so that way people won't be looking through the whole thread to find one issue.
4. Smilies in comics, suck.
I know I might be blunt, but I'm right. If you follow these rules, you'll be better.

Galactic Spriter
08-30-2007, 01:39 AM
1. That is completely spam. Bumping is bad, and just saying word word word makes it even worse.
2. This thread has been revived. If you did it 2 days before, you'd be safe.
3. Please, for the love of God, direct link your issues.
4. Put all your issues in the first page, so that way people won't be looking through the whole thread to find one issue.
6. Smilies in comics, suck.
I know I might be blunt, but I'm right. If you follow these rules, you'll be better.
1. I hate it when people say word word.
2. ?
3. I direct link mine
4. I do that too.
5. Learn how to count.
6. I don't do that.

Galactic Grunt

Shadow Eevee
08-30-2007, 01:42 AM
1. I hate it when people say word word.
2. ?
3. I direct link mine
4. I do that too.
5. Learn how to count.
6. I don't do that.

Galactic Grunt

5. It's called a typo. Just one tiny one. you get on my case. But when someone else spells a whole thing wrong, you don't care.
6. Never mind about the second one.


P.S. It's not even your comic, and I wasn't talking about you. Sorry about the revival problem.

Frozen Torchic
08-30-2007, 01:46 AM
1. That is completely spam. Bumping is bad, and just saying word word word makes it even worse.
2. Please, for the love of God, direct link your issues.
3. Put all your issues in the first page, so that way people won't be looking through the whole thread to find one issue.
4. Smilies in comics, suck.
I know I might be blunt, but I'm right. If you follow these rules, you'll be better.

I havent used smilies since the first issue. Duh.

Shadow Eevee
08-30-2007, 01:49 AM
I havent used smilies since the first issue. Duh.

I know. I'm just saying as a reference. Also, don't rush on them.

Frozen Torchic
08-30-2007, 01:50 AM
I know. I'm just saying as a reference. Also, don't rush on them.

Again, I only rushed the first issue. The others took me forever.

Shadow Eevee
08-30-2007, 02:02 AM
Again, I only rushed the first issue. The others took me forever.

Could you atleast direct link the issues like I said eariler?

Frozen Torchic
08-30-2007, 02:13 AM
Could you atleast direct link the issues like I said eariler?

Whwn I make a new one. Doing them all would take way to long.

Shadow Eevee
08-30-2007, 02:16 AM
Whwn I make a new one. Doing them all would take way to long.

You do know direct linking is like this (http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/8306/retattaxt7.png)? It doesn't take long and if it is long to you, atleast it's worth it.

Frozen Torchic
09-01-2007, 01:57 AM
I dunno how to direct link...But a new issue is coming.

Galactic Spriter
09-04-2007, 04:26 PM
I dunno how to direct link...But a new issue is coming.
Could i be in it SPrites:

http://i1.tinypic.com/623i88y.png

The form soon

Name: Shadow
Pokemon: Haunter
Sprites: Go up
Personality: Any pokemon who goes against him will be dragged into shadow.
Friend, Enemy, or Rival: Friend!

Galactic Grunt