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WorkThoseStripes
08-29-2007, 11:21 AM
Awakening - WorkThoseStripes and Hazmat
Italics - spirit point of view. Spirit played by WorkThoseStripes only.
My body is no more. I am but a spirit travelling this empty world. I cannot feel or touch, for there is no body for me to use. I will never go hungry and even if I did I could not die for it. I am not living, but I am not dead. I can hear, but I cannot speak unless I force myself into the mind of others.
I've been searching ever since I could for life, but everyone's gone. Where are the people walking about in the cities and where are the people I love? Everyone's gone, but they cannot be dead for there are no corpses left behind. Where are they?
This sickness has spread across the world, taking everyone with it. I escaped, but became this instead. I don't even know if I am real.
What am I?
I travel through a city I have recently come across, all hope gone of finding anyone, but still it give sme something to pass this time. Will I be here forever? I cannot stop being what I am, I am destined to be alone all time. I must find someone.
I slowly drift into the hospital and that is where I see the coma patients. I know they are in a coma because it says so on the door. They all look so peaceful, so alive. They are breathing, they are not dead.
I split myself up and force myself into each other their minds. I need to wake them up! Only they can solve what has happened to this world. It's supposed to be almost impossible to wake someone from a state such as this, but I must try!
"You have to wake up! Everyone's counting on you, the world is counting on you. I can help you, but you must wake up! Please, save them!"
MikaelO
08-29-2007, 11:52 AM
OOC: Yay! First to post LOL
“Where am I?”, I asked to myself, looking at the surroundings.
Maybe this is the most common question, people ask to themselves, in first place, when they wake up in a different environment, and don’t remember of what they had done to be ‘placed’ there.
I realised that I was in an empty place. An empty and dark place, that I never was before.
“What is this place?”, I asked again to myself, looking again at my surroundings, trying to find some exit.
I didn’t found anything! It was just the emptiness, the darkness and me.
I started to run towards somewhere, but I just find more emptiness and more darkness.
“Help!”, I cried out loud, making some echo, “Somebody help me, please!”
I felt on my knees and started to cry. I was alone and helpless, but that soon would end.
As I started to cry, I heard a voice.
“You have to wake up! Everyone's counting on you, the world is counting on you. I can help you, but you must wake up! Please, save them!”, the voice said.
I began to feel astonished. I was there, once again, alone, and I was hearing strange voices.
Then I saw something: a bright white light was shining in front of me.
“You have to wake up! Everyone's counting on you, the world is counting on you. I can help you, but you must wake up! Please, save them!”, the voice said again.
I started to run towards the light, but when I reached it, I felt asleep.
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When I woke up, I was in a hospital room. My head hurt and my heart was beating so fast, that I thought I was about to die. I tried to sit down in the hospital bed. Indeed I did it, but my legs were somehow semi-paralyzed.
”What’s happening to me?”, I asked, “First I’m in an empty and dark place and then I woke up in a hospital bed?
I took a look at my surroundings. Everything was painted white, and there were more people sleeping in other beds. At the bottom of my bed I saw something familiar…
“My shorts!”, I cried out loud, reaching and grabbing them.
I looked again at the surroundings, but once again, I didn’t know where I was, neither why I was there…
ID Saraibre Ryu
08-29-2007, 12:54 PM
OOC: Second! I had read and understood that I was in, so if not I'll delete this if need be.
IC:"You have to wake up! Everyone's counting on you, the world is counting on you. I can help you, but you must wake up! Please, save them!"
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I slowly awakened to the blinding light of the hospital room, wondering what had happened, and why I was in a hospital. I slowly and steadily got up, putting my hand on my head feeling as if I had been hit by a truck. There was a voice I heard right before waking up. I thought it might have just been me, but it wasn't my own voice.
"Whatever that was, it was weird." I said to myself. "But...it must mean something."
I looked down at the end of my bed and saw all my clothes and my bag. The curtains were closed around me so I started to change into my clothes. But there was something wrong wth my left hand. It wouldn't grasp and hold anything for more than a second, no metter how hard I tried.
"What is this? Why is this happening to my hand?" I asked in frustration.
It was covered in a thin wrapping of bandages, but my fingers were free and I knew it wasn't the problem. It took me twice as long to change into my clothes. Opening the curtains a bit more, I looked around, seeing other people asleep in beds similar to mine with there belongings also at the end tables of their beds. Everyone was sleeping so soundly it began to scare me. Taking another examination of the room, I couldn't find anything unusual about it yet.
"My shorts!"
I turned at the sound of the exclamation, knowing I wasn't the only one up anymore. Taking a few steps forward I decided to see if I could speak louder than a whisper.
"Hello?" I called out. "Is anyone there?"
MikaelO
08-29-2007, 01:30 PM
I change my actual clothes: the hospital clothes, for my own clothes: my shorts. When I changed clothes I felt the cold air, from the hospital room.
"I've only this swimming shorts...", I said to myself, "It's not a big surprise, if I'm feeling cold..."
I opened the curtains that were surrounding my bed and I heard someone whispering.
"Hello? Is anyone there?", a girl's voice called.
I was not sure if it was better to response, because it could be that weird voice again. I opened the curtain a little more, just to find a girl.
"Who are you?", I asked, whispering, "Where am I? Why am I here?"
I couldn't stop asking soo much questions. I was definetly desperate to find out, why was I in a hospital bed, with hospital clothes...
WorkThoseStripes
08-29-2007, 01:49 PM
Ahhh big mistake guys, I've put this in the wrong board. It shouldn't be in the Pokemon thread. I'm deadly sorry, I had only just woken up when I did it. ):
I'm gonna repost in the right board, if you could all just copy your replies into there.
Again sorry.
I feel like a n00b. D:
ID Saraibre Ryu
08-29-2007, 01:50 PM
OOC: Just ask it to be moved by a mod.
I walked around, looking into various halls and beds until I found a guy in swimming gear. It was very contradictory to what I was wearing, as I was wearing a full set of clothes plus my bag and he was wearing barely anything.
"Well, you're obviously right there, why you're here is the same question we're all going to be asking when we wake up, and I'm Shoku." I answered.
At least I wasn't the only one up now. Though, I wouldn't mind if I was as I liked being by myself. I liked being by myself alot, almost being away from the world I found comforting. I was hoping this other guy had other clothes, or he would stick out like a sore thumb once everyone else was dressed.
"Anyway, who are you?" I asked.
After this, I was going to find out what was so wrong with my hand that I couldn't use it like my other one. It hadn't happened before, but it was happening now and I was getting anxious though I hid it really well.
MikaelO
08-29-2007, 01:52 PM
OOC: Huahahahaha! We're all N00bs... I didn't realised it to... I'm to used at this board!
*goes copy the posts*
Hazmat
08-30-2007, 11:45 AM
OH GOODNESS.
I didn't notice this!
I kept looking in the right thread, but couldn't find it!
So i started it for myself.
ACK. I'm soooo sorry.
You guys can just copy your posts to the new one, and that'd be fine.
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