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Lelouch vi Britannia
09-01-2007, 03:07 AM
Hi, Welcome to my first PDP/PRSE/PMD comic series (lol)

Intro-
As a beginning trainer there are still several mysteries left, a new trainer John partners up with a pikachu to free the world of the shadow pokemon...even by becoming a pokemon himself.

About the spelling errors...i will get on that...and i hav to edit the first 2 issues...srry for the problems....

(this starts on issue 2)*ether pokemon or human*
Name in comic :
Age in comic:
Sprites: (you provide)
xtra?
Friend, Rival, Team Chaos-

Lets start the comic

Issue 1- ( i know its long!) *Intro*
http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee212/33-19-1/comicslide1-6.png
http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee212/33-19-1/comicslide7-12.png

Issue 2 *NEEDS NAME*
http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee212/33-19-1/13-18.png
http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee212/33-19-1/19-22.png

Issue 3- *Wonders of Twilight town*
http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee212/33-19-1/23-26.png

Issue 4- *Hide and seek*

NEED!
3 Team Chaos ppl
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Friend-da ink, KittenGirl2000
rival-Fire Pkmn Master
Chaos-

da ink
09-01-2007, 03:11 AM
way better name than wat i came up with ill join ill have my forum soon

Lelouch vi Britannia
09-01-2007, 03:12 AM
way better name than wat i came up with ill join ill have my forum soon

yea...i thought of that as i was putting in the Intro

da ink
09-01-2007, 03:24 AM
here ya go
Name in comic : Inaki
Age in comic: 12
Sprites: (you provide) http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa151/inaki8/Me-1.png
xtra? nope
Friend, Rival, Team Chaos- Friend

Lelouch vi Britannia
09-01-2007, 03:25 AM
here ya go
Name in comic : Inaki
Age in comic: 12
Sprites: (you provide) http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa151/inaki8/Me-1.png
xtra? nope
Friend, Rival, Team Chaos- Friend

kk u should be in the 2nd issue then...wow...lol

da ink
09-01-2007, 04:28 AM
Woot nice issue i congratulate you

Lelouch vi Britannia
09-01-2007, 04:33 AM
Woot nice issue i congratulate you

tyvm!
wow..this is fun! lol
im starting on the 3rd issue

Fire Pkmn Master
09-01-2007, 04:43 AM
I guess Ill be a rival.
I hope you know that you spelled Bulbasaur wrong.
EDIT:http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d128/blaze_228/PokemonOverworldTrainerandBacksprit.png

.::F.P.M::.

Lelouch vi Britannia
09-01-2007, 04:53 AM
I guess Ill be a rival.
I hope you know that you spelled Bulbasaur wrong.
EDIT:http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d128/blaze_228/PokemonOverworldTrainerandBacksprit.png

.::F.P.M::.



oops...whatever..i will change it l8er

kk

Realityxxx
09-01-2007, 10:11 AM
Name in comic: Lucy
Age in comic: 12
Sprites: http://i10.tinypic.com/6bnzwgx.png
xtra?: N/A
Friend, Rival, Team Chaos- Friend

~Falcon~
09-01-2007, 02:21 PM
The plot seems really cliche. Its a mix between the games, animie, and other comics. Also, there are a few misspelled words, you really need to check over that