Hydros
02-22-2005, 02:08 AM
Ready For Grading!
Continuation of Mystery of Frier
Mystery Revealed
Part One
Chickorita popped out of the Pokeball Jac threw. A red aura fumed out the ball and revealed a Chickorita. The catch was unsuccessful. The Chickorita was angry, like a Whismur throwing a tantrum. The Chickorita ran from Ariel’s small porch and back in to the gloomy fall covered woods. The trees were different colors, and Pokemon flourished there. Jac looked into the woods. He felt so worthless and down inside. His head bent low as he walked toward Ariel. He looked up and saw her small pretty face glowing in the moonlight. She also walked toward Jac. They both walked toward each other as they accepted defeat from their sad emotions. Jac reached his hand out toward Ariel and said.
“I’m sorry for everything. Both of our Pokemon are pretty tired.”
Ariel nodded in agreement. She walked toward Jac once more.
“Frier used to be a big tourist site …, unfortunately many tourist were careless about the national Pokemon reserve, I remember it like yesterday… … … …”, said Ariel.
“Mommy, said young Ariel, the tourists are going into the national reserve! They might go into the ancient ruins.”
“They won’t dear, said Ariel’s mother, why don’t you go make sure honey.”
Young Ariel ran to the Nation Reserve. She was so excited to be helping out. Her long life dream was to be a Pokemon ranger. She walked up to block the path to the ruins. She looked at the beautiful terrain and all the Pokemon. The Aipoms hanging on the trees like playful monkeys. She turned and saw a swift four legged Pokemon. She had never seen one like it before. The Pokemon walked pass her and headed toward the ruins. She closely followed. Ariel walked closer to the ruins, the national reserve soon transformed into a bare and very bland desert. There were no trees and no pokemon in sight. She turned around to see her comfy reserve but there was nothing… The pokemon walked closer.
“All you have been shown is an illusion.”, said the Pokemon, “You have been fooled by the minds of wealthy and greedy humans. You, young girl can change this and show the truth to Frier…”
“That’s why Pokemon have been disappearing, they all were illusions…, figments of our imagination!”, said Ariel.
“So you did all of this, its your fault people have been fleeing.” stated Jac.
Ariel nodded. Jac looked at his pokeball remembering how injured Piloswine was. He threw his pokeball to the ground. Piloswine appeared and a seconds notice. Jac opened his pack and sprayed Piloswine with a potion. Piloswine nudged Jac with joy. Jac patted Piloswine on the head. Piloswine fell right asleep. Ariel grabbed Spinarak and lied he down on a fluffy bed. Ariel looked over Jac and saw that he fell asleep. She walked to the phone and explains to Jac grandmother that he’d be staying over. She walked to her bed and murmured to herself.
The next morning brought an unusual happiness to the environment. The sun was bright and hanging from the sky like a cocoon on a forest tree. The clouds floated and moved swiftly across the sky. Jac woke up yawning. He pulled the sheets off off of his head, and sat up pushing his legs off the couch. Once he was awake he walked to Ariel’s room to find her snoring loudly. Jac laughed and walked to the kitchen. Jac saw Ariel’s mother making tea. Good thing she and her husband went to dinner last night.
“Would you like some tea”, she said, “This is really a nice area”
“Sure”, Jac said as he picked up his cup of tea. Piloswine trudged out of its domain. Ariel’s mother walked upstairs to her room. Jac walked back to Ariel’s room. She was wide awake. There was no sign of drowsiness in her complexion.
“Your awake…, what’s on your mind?” asked Jac.
I was just wondering what that Pokemon meant when he said you have to show freir the truth, and why no one else saw the vast bare desert. Why people only saw the disappearing illusions,” she said, “It’s kind of funny that my mind is dwelling on this after 2 years.”
Both children laughed, though it was a serious matter. Spinarak crawled out from under Ariel’s sheets. I looked tired.
“I must still be tired”, said Ariel.
She recalled Spinarak to its pokeball, and set it on her nightstand. She opens the drawer and took a pen and a sheet of paper. She wrote a list of things she need to do. The blue ink appeared on a golden thin piece of paper. As she wrote Jac saw a pink pokeball with red hearts. It looked old and had specs of dust all over it.
“What’s in the pokeball?” asked Jac.
“My grandmother’s Pokemon… Its locked I can’t find the key.” She answered.
Jac eyed the pokeball. His mind was taken off of it when Ariel said, “Maybe we should visit Pryce?”
“First I should go home.” said Jac.
Jac walked back to the couch gathered all of his things and recalled Piloswine who was sitting watching television. On his way out the house he stumbled on a long twig. And fell to his face. His grandmother was on the step as usual and laughing at him, she almost fell off. Chansey was trying her hardest to calm her down.
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Continuation of Mystery of Frier
Mystery Revealed
Part One
Chickorita popped out of the Pokeball Jac threw. A red aura fumed out the ball and revealed a Chickorita. The catch was unsuccessful. The Chickorita was angry, like a Whismur throwing a tantrum. The Chickorita ran from Ariel’s small porch and back in to the gloomy fall covered woods. The trees were different colors, and Pokemon flourished there. Jac looked into the woods. He felt so worthless and down inside. His head bent low as he walked toward Ariel. He looked up and saw her small pretty face glowing in the moonlight. She also walked toward Jac. They both walked toward each other as they accepted defeat from their sad emotions. Jac reached his hand out toward Ariel and said.
“I’m sorry for everything. Both of our Pokemon are pretty tired.”
Ariel nodded in agreement. She walked toward Jac once more.
“Frier used to be a big tourist site …, unfortunately many tourist were careless about the national Pokemon reserve, I remember it like yesterday… … … …”, said Ariel.
“Mommy, said young Ariel, the tourists are going into the national reserve! They might go into the ancient ruins.”
“They won’t dear, said Ariel’s mother, why don’t you go make sure honey.”
Young Ariel ran to the Nation Reserve. She was so excited to be helping out. Her long life dream was to be a Pokemon ranger. She walked up to block the path to the ruins. She looked at the beautiful terrain and all the Pokemon. The Aipoms hanging on the trees like playful monkeys. She turned and saw a swift four legged Pokemon. She had never seen one like it before. The Pokemon walked pass her and headed toward the ruins. She closely followed. Ariel walked closer to the ruins, the national reserve soon transformed into a bare and very bland desert. There were no trees and no pokemon in sight. She turned around to see her comfy reserve but there was nothing… The pokemon walked closer.
“All you have been shown is an illusion.”, said the Pokemon, “You have been fooled by the minds of wealthy and greedy humans. You, young girl can change this and show the truth to Frier…”
“That’s why Pokemon have been disappearing, they all were illusions…, figments of our imagination!”, said Ariel.
“So you did all of this, its your fault people have been fleeing.” stated Jac.
Ariel nodded. Jac looked at his pokeball remembering how injured Piloswine was. He threw his pokeball to the ground. Piloswine appeared and a seconds notice. Jac opened his pack and sprayed Piloswine with a potion. Piloswine nudged Jac with joy. Jac patted Piloswine on the head. Piloswine fell right asleep. Ariel grabbed Spinarak and lied he down on a fluffy bed. Ariel looked over Jac and saw that he fell asleep. She walked to the phone and explains to Jac grandmother that he’d be staying over. She walked to her bed and murmured to herself.
The next morning brought an unusual happiness to the environment. The sun was bright and hanging from the sky like a cocoon on a forest tree. The clouds floated and moved swiftly across the sky. Jac woke up yawning. He pulled the sheets off off of his head, and sat up pushing his legs off the couch. Once he was awake he walked to Ariel’s room to find her snoring loudly. Jac laughed and walked to the kitchen. Jac saw Ariel’s mother making tea. Good thing she and her husband went to dinner last night.
“Would you like some tea”, she said, “This is really a nice area”
“Sure”, Jac said as he picked up his cup of tea. Piloswine trudged out of its domain. Ariel’s mother walked upstairs to her room. Jac walked back to Ariel’s room. She was wide awake. There was no sign of drowsiness in her complexion.
“Your awake…, what’s on your mind?” asked Jac.
I was just wondering what that Pokemon meant when he said you have to show freir the truth, and why no one else saw the vast bare desert. Why people only saw the disappearing illusions,” she said, “It’s kind of funny that my mind is dwelling on this after 2 years.”
Both children laughed, though it was a serious matter. Spinarak crawled out from under Ariel’s sheets. I looked tired.
“I must still be tired”, said Ariel.
She recalled Spinarak to its pokeball, and set it on her nightstand. She opens the drawer and took a pen and a sheet of paper. She wrote a list of things she need to do. The blue ink appeared on a golden thin piece of paper. As she wrote Jac saw a pink pokeball with red hearts. It looked old and had specs of dust all over it.
“What’s in the pokeball?” asked Jac.
“My grandmother’s Pokemon… Its locked I can’t find the key.” She answered.
Jac eyed the pokeball. His mind was taken off of it when Ariel said, “Maybe we should visit Pryce?”
“First I should go home.” said Jac.
Jac walked back to the couch gathered all of his things and recalled Piloswine who was sitting watching television. On his way out the house he stumbled on a long twig. And fell to his face. His grandmother was on the step as usual and laughing at him, she almost fell off. Chansey was trying her hardest to calm her down.
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