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09-10-2007, 03:40 PM
Ok so Here I will put my sprite I need A lot of crit Not too harsh though But I would really Like people to focus On my Fakemon This Gallery will be Updated every few hours Or so
Here I go!
A Pokemon Kinda Like turtwig
More coming Soon
09-10-2007, 03:43 PM
09-10-2007, 04:47 PM
The problem with your fakemon is that you've drawn the outline zig-zag. Here's an example of what a bad and good outline is.
You can also see where you've copied and pasted the plant from Turtwig on one of your fakemon because the shading is different if you compare them. Also, you've used pixel shading when you should have used whole shading, pixel shading is used for shading big parts of a fakemon, pokemon, or pixel art.
You need to improve the outline on your eggs, but apart from that, they're fine.
The recolours are fine.
The same goes for re-elements.
I can't comment on the other sprites as I can't see them. I will comment on the other ones once they show up.
Will edit later. ;P
09-10-2007, 07:22 PM
Ok thanks Im still working On them
09-10-2007, 08:35 PM
Fakemon- They're too big, and as Dratini Lovr said, fix the outlines. Their poses look far from official. Shading is good, but you need to change the colors.
Eggs- The tail has to go.
Recolors- You need to work on the borders and shading.
Retypes- It's not really changed, because all you've done is recolor and add flames. Be creative.
09-10-2007, 08:39 PM
Yes Thank You for the Critisicm Im losing My touch But I just really Like that Eevee for some reason
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